Rajveers Dil aur Dimak!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well guys Iam feeling a bit bored and want to present a scenario-----------
Well let us start with Diwali night.- Raj has has his bath and is sitting on his bed in deep thoughts. He has FBs of eyelock scenes of Kranthi on that day on two occasions i.e window and lamp. He rubs his fingers on the hand which Kranthi touched and touches the hand to his cheek. Then as a jerk he removes it and thinks witin himself "What is this happening to me. I know she has come to take revenge on me and her only aim is to destroy my home. Why am I getting disturbed with her thoghts. I should hate her(mind it guys he doest say I hate her) " He tries to be angry and again keeps that serious face ( Guys we know he is too good to look in that mood) and tries to take a book and concentrate on it. Just then Kranthi comes out of the bathroom in a night dress( Guys imagine her once in a plain night gown flying ) with hair dripping. With the door sound he looks and is dumbstruck seeing her that way. She looks at him and there is eye lock scene as usual with Lala la BG song.
Kranthi takes her eyes off and truns the other way and she feels odd in the night dress. Normally she avoids wearing night dress and never lets her gungat fall and ensures she finishes her bath before Rajveer comes to the bed room. But today after the crackers and all she wanted to take fesh bath and assumed Raj will sleep by then. She puts a bold face and goes to the mirror to dry her hair. Rajveer gets back to his book but his heart beat is increasing and adrelain is pumping up. He cannot avoid looking at her from sideways and he says "Drier is in the drawer. U too can use it."
She silently opens the drawer and dries her hair and clips her hair.
SHe wants to take the pillow and blanket and comes near the bed and watches his hand holding the book. she can clearly see the burnt portion. She slowly goes out of the room and Rajveer takes a deep sigh and closes the book and lies back to sleep.
Kranthi enters the room with burnol(She should have applied then only but she phoo phood ) and she walks towards the bed. She wants to give burnol to Rajveer but he is laready in his dream world. She silently takes the cream on her hand and slowly applies on his hand. He suddenly wakes up and turns this side and in that sudden moment she trips and falls on him. Her clip comes out and her hair has fallen totally over his face. She is on his chest. Sweet aroma of her hair and soft touch of hers make him so romantic that he slowly takes the hair out of his face and looks deeply into Kranthi's eyes and says " Beautiful hair" She is about to get up but her hand is below him and so he pulls her over him turns around and takes her hand out and leaves her suddenly. This is not what Kranthi has expected who was engrossed in the embrace of Rajveer and Rajveer gives a naughty smile and she gets up hurriedly.
She is shivering and with her hair flying and she is not in a position to retort agaisnt his remark about her hair.
It is RAjveer who comes back to his senses first and wonders why he has complimented and thinks he should never let his feelings open or else she will utilise them agaisnt him. So he keeps a cumming face and tells her " Dekho Kranthi tum Kitna bhi Kranthikari ho Mujhe harane tumari bas ki kaam nahi."
She leaves angrily with pillow and blanket without answering s she is more angry on herself for what is happening to her..
Rajveer smiles and sleeps on the other side.......
Howzatt.
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ranjnanarang thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I can imagine the scenerio it would be really great to see the things unfold like this.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh my God Sarala that was just brilliantšŸ‘...Why don't u continue it like a FF now😳...would love to see such a beautiful scene in the show too😳..just imagine Kranti with her open hair falling all over on Rajveer's face and Rajveer trying to resist her beauty and fragrencešŸ˜..the thought itself is giving me goosebumps now😳...
So beautifully writtenšŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ˜³...I m so happy to see the kind of talent we hv in this MRD parivaaršŸ‘šŸ˜³..
In fact I just wrote one small scenario which can happen today in your other post...posting it here as well😳
Today when Kranti goes near the red box,Raj sees those crackers kept over it and so he jumps over Kranti to stop her from reaching near the box😳;Both falls down on the floor and starts rolling😳😳...Rolling stops and both stare at each other with lalalla going on in background😳...Kranti is over Raj's body and he is tightly holding onto her waist😳😳...Kranti asks him to leave so that she can get up on which Raj says I m sorry and leaves her😳...Kranti tries to get up but she sees that she has twisted her ankle badlyšŸ˜‰šŸ˜›;So after getting up she again trips and falls into Rajveer's arms who was just trying to get up from the floor as wellšŸ˜†...Raj sees that she has injured her ankle and so without asking her anything,just picks her up in his arms😳;Kranti shouts "What r u doing Rajveer...leave me"😔 on which Raj says "Just shut up"😳;Raj and Kranti gets into another eye locking moment when Raj is taking her to their room in his arm😳;Raj then rests her on the bed and sits besides her😳;He then takes her foot and keeps it on his Lap😳;He then starts carassing her foot till the pain goes away and both feel the passion for each other😳;Raj's touch sends shivers down her spine while Raj starts feeling attracted towards Kranti even more😳;In the end Kranti tells him "Now its not paining and I m fine"šŸ˜‰ on which Raj very lovingly asks her "R u sure"😳;Both of them give a faint smile to each other and rest will tell u lateršŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I am being treated to such lovely scenerios by all of you thanks a lot.

Have thought of something myself
So the scene is the extension of the pathaka fiasco.
Kranti is walking to wards the crackers and suddenly raj with his brother comes there to pick up the basket to which Kranti observes that there is a burning cracker in there. She suddenly freezes and shouts Raj (not Rajveer) and runs towards him and pushes the basket aside and it falls on the floor, with a loud bang and suddenly kranti out of reaction shouts and holds raj asking him tum theek to ho na.
Raj is not able to react and seeing Kranti worried for him he gets further shocked. He then takes her face in his hands and tells her that I am alright. Trying to comfirt her and assure her of his safety.
Suddenly Kranti realises that she is too close to him. she frees herself form him and goes running to their room. Where she realises that her hand is also burned as one of the cracker which fell on the floor had hit her hand, which she didn't realise cos she was worried about raj's safety.
Raj comes to the room to see if she is ok and she is struggleing with the wound. Raj suddenly reapperas with some Ice in his hands, and starts applying it on krantis wound. She keeps looking at him. After a while he askes as to how is she feeling. She is suddenly woken out of her dream and says that she is alright. He then gets up and keeps looking at her for a while before walking out of the room.
He goes to his family and inofrms them that she is ok.
AT night once they are getting ready to sleep he sees her struggeling with her bed. So he tell her that he will do the needful and ur kudi realising that there is love's labor lost here tells him that she will manage. But then he tells her "aap ka our mera jhagda ek taraf hai, aur larne ke liye aap kamzor nahi per sakti, hai na. Pulls her aside and makes her bed and tucks her in.
I know I am not a very good writer, but I hope will improvel with time.
Till then thanks for tolerating my writings.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh my god................................,
believe me its amazing.
so romantic
jyoti and sarala you both are awesome.
it is just great yaar.
plz carry on.
and jo plz add it in FF.
its just lovely.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i was very close in guessing the scenerio. Kranti and not Raj did the saving bit. She burned her hands as well. And then he got worried. And finally offered to make her bed too. I am sure next time he will tuck her in.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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YEah the serial is going our way
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Posted: 16 years ago
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you ff people can become a very good director and writers.
believe me.
and ranjna your guess is working huhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice all of u....i wish these were implemented in the serial

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