FF: Kadhal Vendaam, Kalyaanam Vendaam!

271043 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#1

Vendaam 1

Anjali walked into the cabin slowly, she never thought it would be this difficult. Her thoughts were contaminated by the past, the past which she fought to forget. She looked around the empty room and hoped that it would remain empty.

Arun managed to get in time for the function. He could barely identify anyone, hence hoped that someone would identify him, maybe his mother.

Meghna listened carefully to the argument outside. She wasn't that type. But she had to listen, the argument was about her and the saree she was wearing.

Gautham opened the cabin door, He, too, walked in slowly.

Anjali complained, but she also admitted that it was for the better. Her dad remained quiet.

Meghna could feel the anger building up inside her. She wanted to storm out of the room, but her life was at stake.

Thodarum!

Coming soon - Meghna decides to walk out.. another meeting in the cabin.. Arun wants to know the unknown face..

Comments/Suggestions Welcome!

Edited by ~*Thamizhan*~ - 16 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

11

Views

1.6k

Users

7

Frequent Posters

Aahaana thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 16 years ago
#2

rendom vendamna...appa enna than venum...?😆

Nice title Sri...nice intro with the 4 characters😊
Vani19 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#3

Title konjam different ah irukke...

A good introduction Sri. keep going...
sankadevi30 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#4
cool sri will comment soon
_Manpreet_ thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 16 years ago
#5

Naan mothalla read pannura neerom, i thought your title was "kadhalum veenam Kathirikaayum veenaam"nnu 😆😆😆

But title romba pramaatham...very unique indeed!
A very good intro buddy 👍🏼....keept it up. Looking forward to the next chapter
kadhambari thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#6
aiyyayo samiyaar story'a shri???????title'ai paarthuttu ketaen.....starting nalla irukkey!!
sankadevi30 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#7
wonderful start sri👏
netra_rama thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#8
Thats a good start sri ... continue ....
271043 thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#9

Thanks for the encouraging comments!😃

Vendaam 2
Arun finally managed to find his mother, she was loosely observing the argument held by similar aged women. He knew that his mother wouldn't join in such argument. She wasn't that type, and he liked her for being that way. Then he waited for his mother to notice his arrival.

"You've done your part and the rest is down to me," Anjali answered, getting ready to leave the dining area. "Anjali, this is all my fault," he replied softly. "Dad, just stop blaming yourself and have some rest."

Gautham returned home late. His mother enquired him about Anjali and wanted to know if there was any improvement. Gautham quickly replied, "I was late.. very late."

Suddenly silence fell across the room, Meghna realised that the argument outside had ended, but what was the result? She concentrated hard to think about all possible outcomes of the argument, but she was disturbed by the sound of nearing footsteps.

Arun watched all of them walk towards the bride's changing room. He thought this was his chance to speak to his mother, but then someone tapped him on his shoulder.

"Dad, don't forget to take your tablets," Anjali reminded her dad. "Phone me and remind me. I have a very short term memory," her dad replied. "I wouldn't waste my credit on you," she answered with a bit of laughter.

Thodarum!

Comments/Suggestions Welcome!
Next update - coming Sunday!😉
sankadevi30 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#10
i cud figure out there is some prob

nalla eluthurae sri cud not guess wat

keep it coming👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".