IS IT LOVE?.....DO I LOVE HIM? (AR Short Story)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi evry1 this is a short story i thought of and I am writing like this for thefirst time ever. Plz read and comment/criticise.




We see a classroom and at a table is a cute 9 year old girl who is trying to kick the boy sitting near her under the table because that's what her friends have told her to do. The boy who is the same age as the girl puts his legs on the girl's chair giving her a cheeky smile.
Bring bring '' just then the alarm goes off n we see a pretty girl who is 23 years old in her bed getting up and closing her alarm clock and the girl is Ridhima Gupta.
She gets her diary from under her pillow and starts writing in it "Dear diary I had the same dream again 2dai '.. It happened when I was small why do I still remember it? Why do I dream about it? Why do I remember him? Where is he? Will I ever meet him? IS IT LOVE?.....DO I LOVE HIM?"
Just then Anjali shouted, "Ridz get ready quick it's our first day of our internship today we can't b late you know na Pa told us Dr Keerti hate late comers." Hearing this Ridhima quickly hid her diary and shouted back, "give me 10 mins Di and I'll be ready."
Both sisters had their breakfast and went to Sanjeevani. Anjali bumped into an old friend and started chatting while Ridhima walked into the locker room and put her things in her locker. She turned around and just then a handsome guy walks in and their eyes meet '.. Ridhima forgot to breath all she could think is that it's him! Its Armaan ' Armaan Mallik! Oh no she thought, does he remember me kicking him?
Armaan gave her that same cheeky smile and with a flirty voice said, "Hi Ridhima won't you kick me today I really missed it!" Hearing this Ridhima lowered her eyes and was blushing. Armaan put his finger under her chin and lifted her face and looked into her eyes and said "I need to tell you something that I've felt for years." Ridhima's heart was racing. Armaan took hold of her hands and said "Ridhima I love you, always have and always will!!!" Hearing this Ridhima hugged him really tight and said "I love you too Armaan, I love you too!!!"
THE END
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww that was so sweet u shud write more
i really liked it.
luv sonia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx alot 4 ur comments really appreciate it 😊

to da rest of u if u hate it u can say it i wnt mind

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
its realy gud but u know what u shud have done
u shud have made it mush longer n warked more on their romance relation ship then the confetion
but its realy gud loved it
thnxs
luv
nruti
Edited by arluver15 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx Nruti 4 all ur comments ........ i had ths in ma mind so i wrote it but posted it wif difficulty as for sum reason sum buttons like quote n new topic r not workin 4 me n ma computer is playin up so had 2 make it really short 😛 thanx again 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyy.....that was such a sweet story!!!! u shuld write more!! <333
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hehe aww very cute! they fell in love at the age of 9 when she kicked him! and years later they still recognize each other! nice story dear!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx alot evr1 4da eva so sweet encouragin words

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Posted: 17 years ago
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aawwwwwww its so cute

childhood love

hey dear u shud try to continue it

very nice

chandni

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Posted: 17 years ago
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glad u liked it thanx 4 da lovely comments

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