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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys, thanks for all the comments

Here is next part so enjoy.
G: Uday bhai.
U: Don't call me bhai

G: Sorry
U: It's ok
G: I need your...
U: G can u plz meet me later at the around 5 at the park?
G: But listen to me...
U: Thanks ok I will see you later. Uday leaves yes Samrad job is done.Yes! Ladies here I come.
G thinking. Oh no what do I do know I can't wait till five to speak to Uday bhai. I need to find Samrad soon.
Sammy riding his bike carelessly and aimlessly.
He stops at the park he told Uday to send Gunjun to. Thinking to himself why am I even here, she is probably having a good time with Maynak discussing something stupid like books. 😭😭
Gunjun finds Dia.
D: Hey babes you ok?
G: Umm'yeah umm' dia is it ok if I can use ur phone I just want to call home to make sure Nupur is ok?
D: Of course babes. Dia gives her the phone
G: At least I can call Samrad and find out where he is. She calls him.
Samrad thinks its Dia calling so he doesn't answer and switches off his phone.
D: Babes you ok?
G: Umm.. yeah its just Nupur isn't answering her phone. I think I am going to go home and check up on her.
D: Ok babes how are u going to get home?
G: Taxi, I will be fine. She leaves
Maynak is thinking about Nupur and wondering why she isn't in school I will find out from Gunjun whats wrong. Actually why should I mean she lied to me about the project, I can't believe she would take credit for some elses work.
Gunjun thinking oh no now how do I find Samrad. She leaves college and calls a taxi but none of them are stopping. Maynak also leaves to going home. When he sees Gunjun
G: Taxi.
M: Gunjun where are you going?
G: Oh' umm' home di isn't feeling well and I am really worried about her.
M: Oh its ok I will go you can stay here and complete your day at college.
G: No it's ok I will go.
M gives her a look saying I will go.
Gunjun is about to argue back with him when she sees Samrad coming back into college.
G: Ok fine go but maek sure she is ok and let me know how she is when you get back,
M nods yes and shouts for a taxi. Unfortunetaly Samrad sees them talking again.
Gunjun runs back into college hoping to find Sammy.

Gunjun starts looking for Samrad.
She sees him flirting with some other girl.
G: umm' Samrad can I please talk to you?
S ignores her.
G: Samrad
S: Excuse me but can't you see I am in the middle of an important conversation Chashmish.
G: Samrad it's re'
S walks off with the girl
Gunjun wondering what's wrong with him earlier today all he wanted me to do was talk to him.
S why is she talking to me this morning all she wanted to do was avoid me. Oh well why do I care.

Mayank arrives at Nupur's house.
M rings the door bell; Nupur wonders who has come at this time. She is opens the door and is shocked to see Mayank there.
N: Mayank??
M: Hi, look I am not here because I have forgiven you I am only here because Gunjun asked me to come and check if you are ok.
N: Look Mayank I am really sorry, I didn't mean to credit for Gunjun di's work it's just when I was going to tell you the truth Gunjun told me not to because I had started to work on the project by myself and I have worked really hard.
M: Look I don't care, you seem better so I am going back Gunjun must be worried. Bye
N: Mayank'Plz listen to me.
He leaves. Nupur really upset. Mayank thinking to himself I don't know why but I feel like I should forgive her and she has worked really hard on this project.
Gunjun lost in her thoughts I really need to talk to Samrad.
M: Gunjun
G startled: Hi Mayank. Hows di??
M: She is better than before.
G: Ok thanks for going home and checking on her.
M: No, problem I just went to see if my project is ok.
G: Mayank I am sorry I made di lie to you. She is really working hard on this project and she really is sorry.
M: Look Gunjun, its water under the bridge. But just don't tell Nupur I need some peace for some days.
G laughs: Ok but you have forgiven her?
M: yes but I will tell her myself when she is feeling better and is back in college and the project is complete.
G: Ok thanks
M smiles: But Gunjun I have noticed you seem troubled.
G: No it's nothing.
M: You can tell me and I will see if I can help u.
G: It's just I need to talk to Samrad and he is ignoring me.
M: Do you mind if I know why?
G explains everything to him. Mayank lost in deep thought.

Samrad and Benji walk past and Samrad again sees Gunjun and Mayank together again. Samrad walks off really annoyed and Benji is wondering whats up with him.

To be continued... ... ...
Will Gunjun get to speak to Samrad and will Mayank be help or a hinderence??
This is a long update because I will not be able to update again until Tuesday cause I haev to go to work and out so i am busy all weekend so this will have to last you the weekend and on Monday the new episodes of MJHT are starting 👏 Yipee!!! Enjoy this update and have a great weekend!!!
Nikita😉
Edited by nikita_88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Hey really nice FF, continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys sorry for the really long wait but I have been so busy. But I have got all my university offers!! I am so happy!!!!!!
Here's the next part so enjoy.
Mayank explains to Gunjun what to do.
G: Are you sure this is going to work?
M: Trust me I have known Samrad for a long time and he will have to listen to you.
G: Ok fine thank you so much... i blamed him for some else's fault.
M: Good luck and let me know how it went.
G smiles and leaves.
Uday finds Samrad
U: Samrad, i have done your job Gunjun will be at the park at 5.
S: Who cares. I am not going anyway
At the same time Gunjun comes and Samrad ignores her and Gunjun acts like she hasn't noticed him.
G: Uday Bhai.
G: Gunjun don't call me bhai
U: Sorry... Listen I can't meet you at the park, sorry.
S thinking: Why not?
Uday looks at her puzzled
G: It's cause my problem has been sovled but thanks for offering to help.
U: But...but
Gunjun leeaves.
U: Samrad but what about my date??
S: I don't know but what was her problem?
U: I don't know I didn't find out.
S leaves from there.
Back at Home
G: Hi di are you ok?
N: Yeah (but looks really upset.)
G: I am sorry i sent Mayank over but he insisted that he wanted to come and check up on you.
N: Yeah like he cares, i feel so bad Gunjun because I hurt his feelings without meaning to and it was before i even knew him.
G: Don't worry he will understand soon enough.
N smiles weakly.
Gunjun sees the time.
G: Di I have to go out i have some work to do?
Nupur nods she hasn't heard what Gunjun has said.
Gunjun is about to leave when dia notices her.
D: Gunjun babes where are you going so late at night?
G: Umm... just for a walk
D seems like there is something suspisious but leaves Gunjun and goes to her room.
G goes and gets into a Auto. Dia sees this and thinks why did Gunjun lie to me.
Gunjun goes to a couple of shops and takes the gifts to Samrad house but gets the watchman to take one in at a time
Samrad is recieving these gifts and seems really confused as to who is sending him gifts at such a late time at night.
G comes with the last gift, Samrad is really shocked.
S: Chasmish tum?
G just looks at him.
S: Why are you sending me gifts?
G: I am sorry. I found the truth out about Dia today and have been trying to talk to you all day but you kept ignoring me, then Mayank gave me this idea.
S: Oh, I am sorry as well. It's the first time a girl has got me a gift (Gunjun smiles) Shall we go on a date now??
G speechless.
S: Only joking chasmish. Friends??
They shake hands.
Then they talk for a bit.
G: I have to go. Di will be worried and i have been gone for a long time.
S: Please stay.
G: No i have to go.
S: Ok fine I will drop and don't worry it will be by car.
G: Ok fine.
They leave and they have a ordinary journey.
G: Stop here, I don't want Dia to see us together.
S: Don't worry, know one will know. I have a plan tom get back at Dia.
G: No leave it.
S: Don't worry you aren't included all you have to do is act like you haven't forgiven me.
G: Ok fine. Bye I will walk from here.
G starts to walk but Samrad follows her with the car till her gate. She waves and leaves. However Dia see's her wave.
To be continued...
This is all for now. I will update the rest later on this week if possible. I think there will be one or two more parts. Then that will be the end. Hope you enjoy it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice going nikita hopw to see ur part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys, Thanks for the comments here is the next part. Hope you enjoy it.
Dia doesn't see the car but is thinking who is Gunjun waving to. i wonder who she went to see. D: Gunjun babes that was a long walk. G: Walk?!?! (Confused forgot whatr she had said cause had such a fun time with Samrad!LOL) Oh it was nice.
D: Who was at the gate with you?
G: A friend (Smiling in her mind)
D: Ok what friend?
G: Mayank.
D:MAYANK!
G: Yeah he is helping me out with a project of mine.
Dia leaves confused, I will have to find out from Mayank whether Gunjun was with him or not especially after what he done to Nupur.
Gunjun thank god but turns around and sees Nupur who walks off upset.
G: Di listen to me
Nupur ignores her.
G: Di
N: What! Why are you even talking to him?
G: Well i just went to sort out you rproblem to get him to forgive you and then it was late so he said he will drop me off home.
N: You're the best Gunjun di. What did he say?
G: Umm... he didn't say much.
N smiles happily
Gunjun oh no i need to talk to Mayank before Di or Dia gets to him tommorow.
The next day.
Samrad bumps into Mayank
S: Sorry dude.
M: Its ok.
S: Thanks for your ehlp yesterday
M: What help?
S: Gunjun
M: Oh well it wasn't for you it was for her
S: Make whatever excuse you want thanx man.
He hugs Mayank.
M: Its fine. Got to go I am getting late for class.
Gunjun, Nupur and Dia are all looking for Mayank. Gunjun is really worried, i hope get to him before di or dia do. Nupur and Dia see Mayank.
Nupur and Dia: Mayank
M turns around and sees them both coming upto him. A bit shocked.
On the other hand Gunjun bumps into Samrad
G: Have you seen Mayank?
S: Wow no hi, no hello...
G: Have you seen Mayank?
S: He went this way a minute a go.
G leaves ASAP
S: Gunjun what's wrong?
Gunjun ignores him and sees Mayank with Dia and Nupur. Gunjun panics.
M(mutters to himself): What side did the sun rise from today?
N: What did you say?
M: Nothing
D: Where were you last night?
M: At home.
D: Who were you with last night?
Samrad confused by this but realise what has happened.
M a bit confused but he sees Gunjun running that way as she is about to slip: Gunjun (and goes to help.)
D: Really?
M: Huh?
D: You were with Gunjun last night?
G: Yes Dia, I told you yesterday when I got home.
M just smiles: Can I talk to you?
G nods
M: Excuse us.
G: I am so sorry.
M: Ok do you want to tell me what is going on?
Gunjun explains it all to Mayank.
M: Why didn't you tell Nupur the truth?
G: It was easier not to.
M: Ok fine but let me know in advance next time.
Gunjun gives him a Sarsatic smile.
Samrad talking with Benji to let him know his plan for revenge against Dia.
B: Your get revenge from your candy??
S: For what she did and its nothing major.
B: Ok fine.
To be continued....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaheerdin15

i thing when gunjan knows about samarat bet she will get angry and she will avoid him and she will not listen any thing of samarat and samarat will feel guilty and try to conveince her that he doesnt want to hurt her but gunjan doesnt want to talk or listen anything of sammy and dia will talk advantage of this moment

may be u dont like my ff but i hink this will happen i mean somthing like this
kiran.

well, to be honest i like the both versions the traditional she's all tht trend and ofcourse the gutsy confi way. but i think this is gonna happen i mean the one i m quotin cus tho in the course of time gunjan will become confident (as dark stated) in my opinion ofcourse but this is gonna take time. cus she is still gonna be so sweet and innocent one to even dream fo somethn so selfish and heartless can be done by some1 and specially by samrat (when she is in such a mental state ...fallin for him i mean)

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