// DOTM: Vivaah's Storyline? Make it bett

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I am here to post the DOTM(Discussion of the Month) This week in our DOTM...we will discuss about Vivaah's Storyline TILL noww!!
Our Forum is getting very Inactive Day by Day! And that's because of a poor storyline!! I dont know why the creatives of the show are not doing anything!!😭
Soooo....Lettzzzz make some predictions..andd also predict.. the storyline of Vivaahhhhhh!!
Whatttt can the directors or the creatives of Vivaah...can do..to make the storyline.. MORE better.....
Shouldd they focus more on Taaj?
Introduce a NEW character?
In my opinion..they should focus more on Taaj...and bring more cute & romantic sceness..between them..so the audience...will be more happy!
We will discuss this for a MONTH!!
Next DOTM will be posted on Dec 5, 08...but if our forum gets active by then...then will post early!!😉
We need more discussions from our members!!

Start Discussing Vivaahians!!

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Edited by *Ayesha007* - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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acc to me its high time they focus on taaj as they have been sidelined a little tooooooooo much
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Posted: 16 years ago
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most of the people watch this show coz of taaj......so I think focusing more on them would be good.......and a new character at this point should be only tanya's ex bf...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I want some cute TAAJ moments. it's the only thing worthwile in the in show (for me)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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1. Break Raghav Sujata! Totally. No reason to elope or wait! Just break it off. Give Sujata a new guy. Someone who looks nice but still older than Rajdeep and Raj. Give Sujata a new edge. Something we haven't seen before. If the show is about 4 daughters then 4 daughters need to be somehow ont he same level. No one is interested in Sujata right now. Make her move to a new city to forget everything or give her a new job where she ends up having cute disagreement with her boss. He can give her life a new meaning. Raghav can pine. Trivedi can suffer seeing his son suffer.
2. Get Rajdeep's secret out or move on with it. I believe in suspense but the way they are unraveling things it's not exciting at all. Bring back the girl. Or make Rajdeep have some sort of accident where he wants the girl back, he doesn't remember trishna. We have seen a happy trishna she was likable, we have seen a cold trishna and most of us hated her, now we are seeing a weeping trishna it is definitely not working. When a good character weeps you want audinece to weep with you. That is not happening here. So I say let Rajdeep lose his memory where he forget Trishna. Now let Nupur and Trish work together to fix him. That way we can connect with trish at some level and you can drag this story as long as you like!!
3. Take of the thousand bangles the girls wear. We get it! they are new bahus. But we have seen them be new bahus for 4 months now. It's getting old. I would appreciate if they stopped putting so much gloss on. Yuck looks so made up! trishna needs to go on a darker lipstick and no eyeshadows. Tanya can work with eyeliner again no gloss. She has that simplicity people like about her. She doesn't need that much makeup. Because people will like her even without makeup. For nupur we get it! you are rich. Then get better blouses for you Saree. Yuck! Stop wearing armbands too!
4. Raj needs something to do. I know soap heroes usually have no job except yelling at heroines and not believe them when they speak the truth. But lets see what he does. If he is home let me see him work through files. Enough standing infront of the mirror.
5. For Taaj...really it has gotten to a point where you can't salvage it! You really can't. We can't go back on having awkward moments and see them slowly fall in love. They passed it. This is what can happen Raj can do something very bad that breaks Tanya. I would say get carried way and get close to trish but that would hurt Rajdeep. Taaj can be fixed after a incident like that but the brother relation Rajdeep and Raj share can't be salvaged. So let Raj do something or say something anything where he ends up hurting Tanya. Then let Tanya get hurt. Have a miscarriage because of Raj where she can't forgive him or anything. Then Raj can start earning her love and in the way fall in love himself. I would say bring in a new guy for Tanya but it won't make sense. Tanya doesn't go outside to work neither will it suit her character. I would rather not see her have an affair with a doctor, so that leaves no place for a new guy to enter her life.
6. Bring back comedy! The situations are too dark for main characters but Mausa and Mausi will do just fine. We love their couple. There is more to it than we see. It's clear Mausi is a ditz and Mausa is witty. Mausi always complains he says she is not good enough. Let us see more. Maybe a bedroom fight. Mausi can beat up mausa with a pillow. or mausi can cry while mausa tries to make her feel better!
7. What happened to sanjana? bring her back. In the future Sanjana and Mansha can go after the same nice hot guy! the classic rich girl Vs poor girl always works. It will create fine conflict! What happen to the T's? will they be good bhabis and sipport nand or will they support their sister. What about the R's will they support their loving playful sister or will they go with their sweet mansha who is like a sister and favorite choti saali!!
8. STOP with all the fakeness. Some sort of fakeness makes the show more appealiing. Such as zooming in twice or thrice in a shocking scene. Going black and white when it's major. But zooming and and making those horrendous noises when simple things such as a picture fell is absolutely unnecessary. Not only those but also other fakeness. Like trishna adding candles to her room that day?? it was daylight?? what were the candles for???
9. Biggest of all the show has been dragging so much stop showing pointless scene. try to establish something with each scene. Don;t just throw in a scene for no reason. More than half of the show is taken up by ponitless flashbacks. What is the point???? usually nothing. I am not saying don't have flashbacks, but stop overdoing it!!!!!
Edited by Perfangel5655 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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well I was also thinking that it doesnt have to be tanya's ex bf...he can be just a good friend and raj can take it serious...and can get jealous....but they have ruined taaj's romance to an extent where the only way would be to seperate them and then bring them together...I mean something that will bring passion in their love..........maybe rajdeep would get to know about raj(coz he found out the pic or nupur will find out and will blame trish and raj falsley...and tanya would think her sister still loves raj)
and rajdeep will be mad trish and send her divorce notice or divorce her...... trish would be broken.....and kul would have a heart attack😆.....tanya willbe distressed coz of this and would know that the only person who can bring happiness in trish's life is raj......by that time tanya has a college friend who loved her but didnt tell her but tanya doesnt know it..she just wants to take his help......coz of her family and trish's happiness tanya can tell raj that she loves someone else..(there they can bring new entry) and then raj would be madly in love by that time and he would get hurt badly.....tanya will pretend to get closer to this guy and raj would get more hurt and then later the whole family will be against tanya ......and would support yuv and tanya would ask for divorce....but would be very broken and would get sick ...but the guy with her only knew her husband is cheating on her he didnt know tanya is sacrificing her love for her sister...and the day yuv will be divorcing tanya the guy can stop him and tell him about tanya......yuv will get mad at first and would come to tanya and ask her..she is selfish only thinking about her happiness , her family's happiness and what about him.....she is not the one to decide those things for him.....and can say that he loves her and doesnt care if she does or not coz she cant stop him and can say some harsh things to tanya...and tanya would be broken and confess her love and would tell him that she thought he is the only person who can keep trish happy...and raj would say that what about him ...for him his happiness starts and ends with tanya.......and she is the only true love in his life.......😆and some how rajdeep would come back and see trishna's situation..and would bring her back.... I dont care about them... I like shalini and all I care is shalini...😆
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Kanhiya can come back....and will reveal tanya's truth and nupur would get to know about it.(only that this is not yuvi's baby)...and she would be mad at raj for not telling him and would tell him to divorce tanya..and would ask tanya to leave that house and would tell raj that he has to decide if he wants his mother or his wife....raj would go with tanya...but then nupur would say something like you wont see my face ever...or something that she wont have any contact with him afterwards.....tanya wouldnt want raj to do that for her so she would ask him to stay with his mom ..in that house........and leave her if he would leave that house for her she would break her promise and would commit suicide or something striking"raj app ko meri zindagi ki kasam"..please dont follow me....and by that time nupur has already insulted kohli's that your daughter had an affair and she was cheating on my son.....and this is not her son's baby.....mr;kohli would be angry ...(tanya wont go home...and trish would call her mom....coz tanya told everyone if they would follow her she would give her life)kul will bring tanya home)or tanya would be at the door and mr';kohli is still angry and got faint........and would tell kul that tanya wont go with yuvi now....even if he asks or comes here.she cant see him...yuvi will be broken and trish would comfort him .......and would tell him that she will bring tanya back......but Mr.kohli is stubborn...trish comes .with yuvi....or just yuvi comes at first....mr.kohli insults him and sends him back.....he looks at tanya...and tanya tells him that she wont go with him and Mr.kohli would say that he would never send his daughter with him....and raj would say that she is his wife....and he has full right to do that and tanya would tell him(painfully)she doesnt want to live with him....yuvi would call her at times but she wont pick up the phone....she would be broken too.....and then trish would come and talk to tanya......or kanhiya will do something to her and yuv would save her and then he can tell her that he cant live without her..........you can add more.......😆
well when raj saves tanya from kanhiya....Mr.kohli already was getting threats from kanhiya and even proposal for tanya.....but when mr;kohli found out that raj saved tanya from him and kanhiya kidnapped tanya ...raj's truth would be out that it wasnt him who blamed tanya about the baby...but kanhiya raped tanya...coz kanhiya would say something in anger..that he will come back to get his baby.........and then mr;kohli would be broken.........after knowing the truth.......and would repect raj even more.......
for sujata/raghav... I wish rajdeep has a cousin who would love sujata....I want him to look older than sujata or atleast her age....(also she needs to change her hairstyle)...the guy should send proposal to sujata through rajdeep or trishna.....ok I want this guy to be an extrovert, stubborn but still nice and be carzy after her....so he can really insist on marrying sujata....and then kul would persuade sujata to get married and sujata can say yes so raghav can move on with his life........and after when she is married raghav can create probs for her....(raghav is nice though so lil probs )not v much.......or on sujata/raghav wedding day something happens to raghac coz of Mr.tirvedi....and the guy who already loves sujata(rajdeep's cousin or her boss or Mr.kohli's friend's son) would marry sujata.........
for mansha I want her to stay single for a while and later she can get married with raghav......maybe raghav can take revenge from sujata through mansha and then would start falling in love with her
trishna/rajdeep.....rajdeep's truth is out.....trishna helps rajdeep......and nupurs attitude would be change after that......but then aarti comes back......and she is trying to scare rajdeep but trish helps him...nupur comes to know that aarti is alive so she starts using her against trishna and then she finds out that picture trishna has with raj and would falsely accuse trishna...that leads to our taaj story what I mentioned above....


Edited by anushe khan - 07 November 2008 at 7:08pm
Edited by anushe khan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The show really need to put some good masala in it, otherwise it is doing to flop instead of having such a good casts. They should show more TAAJ scene and please please stop insulting the Kholis... Kholis should have more self respect, you are professor man..the girls are educated then why behaving like 17th century people. Thank you for sharing your views.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Vivaahians🤗 Thanks for participating🤗 Means alot to me!

NEW DOTM will be posted soon!
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