SS hummey tumse pyaar, last part and epi p.2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Heres is a lovely b-day gift for my lovely neelima.. happy b0day neelima.. AKA lovelyredrose

Hummey tumse pyaar

Hummey tumse pyaar kitna

Hum nahin jaantey

Magar jee nahin sakte,

Tumhare siva

Bani a 25 year old doctor, doing her residency in UCLA hospital' was thinking about her meeting with her current boyfriend Jai Walia' a business tycoon.. owner of Raj enterprises.. She was being rewarded as one of the top 3 doctors, by him and was asked out by him the same night about nearly 2 months ago.. suddenly breaking out of her thoughts she heard knocking on her door

Jai: hi, (kissing her very passionately at the door step before entering)

Bani: (blushing) hi how r u?

Jai: im good, r u ready yet

Bani: yeah just give me 2 mins,

Jai: kk

Bani: jai im nervous

Jai: nervous about wat?

Bani: well ur family is going to be there, wat if they don't like me

Jai: bani they wont like u, they'll love u' if I can like u the same second I saw u y cant they

Bani: yeah but still, i'.

Jai: bani don't worry, (giving her another passionate kiss on her lips) everything will be ok.. now hury up b4 were late

Bani: (feeling much better) ok just give me 10 mins

10 mins later JB were driving to the hall where pia (jais cousin, best friend and partner) and pushkar (banis best friend, and fellow doctor) were going to have there mehndhi ceremony

Pia: jai bhaiyya finally u guyz r here.. hi bani(giving her a side kiss)

Bani: hi pia.. congrats, I don't know how u got stuck with this pagaal here (hitting pushkar on his shoulders)

Pushky: hey, r u my friend or hers

Pia: bani whispering (bhabie) in her ears.. welcome to the family.. I heard jai bhaiyya were going to speak to bade papa and badi ma

Bani: yes and I am very nervous' how did u do it wen pushky told seema auntie and karan uncle about u

Pia: good luck.. that's all that I can say.. but its not going to be bad at all.. they already love u.. and they secretly want u to be there bahu anywayz.. (laughing)

Jai and pushky: hai wat r u 2 whispering and laughing about

Pia and bani: sorry guyz its girl talk

Jai: pushkar lets go from here.. we r not invited..

Pushky: yeah man.. its my wedding and I feel left out

Bani: awwwnn pushky stop complaining..

Pushky: wat and I get yelled at, jai dude take some advice, never get married

Pia: (slpas pushky on his shoulders) wat, wat do u mean?? Ufff.. main tumhe baad mein dekhloongi

Rano: hey girls.. lets start playing antakshri.. larkiyan or larkon ki team..

Pia: sounds good to me

Rano: okay everyone baithe baithe bore hue, karma hai kuch kaam, chalo shirru larein antakshri, leke pia aur pushkar ka naam.. ok girls team 1st

Pia: mere paaon mein mehndhi lagi hai, unse kehdo ke therein zarra, o o o doli charne main der lage gi

Pushky: in dinon, dil mera, keh raha, hai mujhe, tuuu khawaab sajaaa, tu jeelay zaraaa

Bani: Arre re arre ye kya hua maine na ye jaana, Arre re arre ban jaaye na kahin koi afsaana (looking at PP 1st then looking at jai mischeviously) Jai: ABCDEFGHI - JKLM - NOPQRSTUVWX ' YZed,I Love You. Chhutiyon Ke Yeh Din Hain Suhane, Saathi Tera Yuh Saath Rahen, (winking at bani), Bachchon Ke Sang Bachche Phir Ban Jayen, Mauj Mein Jhoome Zara, Masti Karen, (looking at pia)
Rano: (looking at saahil: naam mera prem kali, prem kali mar ke chali , raste mein, khud ki gali prem gali, usane mera naam liya maine jiya thaam liya, usane mujhe, chhed diya maine munh pher diya, marati kya karati, raste mein vah khada tha kab se mere pichhe pada tha ' 2, josh bada usako chadha tha, raste mein vah khada tha
Saahil: (looking at rano and winking) Aaj kal ki, larkiyan, kamala larti hain, kisiko dil mein rakhti hain, aur kisi pe marti haiiiin
Raasshi: (looking at ranveer and sharmaying lol) Neend ud rahi hai, chain kho raha hai, Jaan jaa rahi hai, yeh kya ho raha hai) ' 2, Yeh kya ho raha hai, yeh kya ho raha hai, Aise naa mujhe dekho, Mera dil dhadak raha hai, Haan, aise naa mujhe dekho, Mera dil dhadak raha hai
Ranveer: ( looking at raashi mischeviously) Ik Teekhi Teekhi Si Uff Karaari Si Ladki, Mere Dil Mein Dil Mein Ek Bijali Jaise Hai Kadki) ' 2, Thodi Behkati Huyi, Thodi Chehkati Huyi, Gumsum Sehmati Huyi, Kaise Jaal Bichhati Hai Pagli
Krishna: ok ok , bas ab.. no more khel.. abhi dulha dulhan ki mehndhi ki rasmein puri karni hain.. ab chalo utho sab, bohut hogaya tum larkon or larkiyon ka flirting.. kab se dekh rahi n ho mein aur sab samajh rahi hoon.. ranveer raashi, JB, sahil rano.. yeh sab kya hai.. acha ach aab sharmao mat time nikla jaraha hai.. ab utho aur shraman bandh karoWhile, RR, SR, and JB were blushing and PP were having a great laugh seeing everyone in such an awkward position they controlled their laughter.. while all the married women were putting mehndhi on pia and pushkar, a sexy lady walks in
Lady: hi everyone, missed me
Pia: tu ab arahi hai neeima
N: sprry kya karti, tum tho jaanti h o na pia di delhi ki trains
Pia: haan haan, sab jaanti hoon tere bahane, zaroor veer se milne gayi hogi.. right.. isliye late hai.. usko bhi saath le aati
N: ahha, haan lekin mein unhe bhi sath lekar aayi hoon.. don't worry
V: hi pia' congrats pushkar
Pushkar: finally agaye tum dono.. now u guyz can make bani dance for me and pia
Bani: Wat? Dance? Me? Pushkar pagal ho gaye ho.. sorry ho nahin gaye pehele se theee.. r u mad..
Pia: 1st time I agree with pushky bani.. u have ot dance.. main jaanthi hoon how much u love dancing and noe how well u noe how to dance.. chalo ab zid chorro or karo dance.. plzz (giving bani the puppy dog face)Bani: ok fine.. give me 2 mins
N: wait bani bhabi, jai bhaiyya has to dance with u
When neelima said bhabi bani got sooo embarassed.. becuz jais parents still don't know about JB going out.. although Krishna auntie figured out about everyone becuz of antakshriJust then the music starts and we see jai dancing towards bani
sorry gotta go home now.. im at work.. will update next part hopefully by tonight or tommorrow.. if not hten next week pakka.. sorry neelima.. but i hope ur happy i finally updated ur gift.. lol..
Edited by phool527 - 17 years ago

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mayurmaaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey girls.. i noe its for neelima.. but the rest of u could read it and comment.. plzzz.. atleast let me noe if it was good or bad so that i wont ever try writing an SS eever agian.. lol...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey...... phool .......its nice ........really so cute and sweet gift for ur friend.......👏👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thanks for the gift binnita such a sweet jb and lol ....me with veer yaar lol ... so madam agaye ka part jaldi chahiye samjhi ...
me alekhya aka rose aka neelima
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful part pls cont soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey bini gr88 start dear
loved it
do cont soon
mayurmaaneet thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwnnn thank u galz.. i love the apreciation... i will continue soooon hopefullly tomm...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome...Loved ur new FF
nikita
Conintue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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phool this is sooo sweet haial something new jai and bani already boy and gal...cant wait now...hurry ap...
mina/meena/ sonam...ufff i'm confused now...i forgot which is my really name now

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