kitne door kitne paas

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Tia stares unhappily out of the window of her bedroom and gazes at the sky with tears running down her cheeks. Ranveer had gone to Delhi because of a business deal there. It had been five days and she longed to see him, hear him, touch him...
She smiles as she remembers their first meeting and every moment spent with Ranveer after that. They had been teenagers then and now they were married. Ashi and Yuvi had also married shortly after that. She laughed lightly as she remembered how she and Ashi had fought when they had first met and remembered her many jokes. She thought they were perfect for each other just as she and Ranveer were for each other. She goes over to the bed and sits down on Ranveer's side. She pickes up the photo frame in which was the picture of her and Ranveer smiling happily during their honeymoon. She blushed a little as she remembered the nights. Then suddenly, she got a strange feeling and put back the picture. It was a feeling of sheer joy and happiness. Something pulled her towards the door and she opened it wide. There was nobody there. She went out in the garden. She was clueless as to what she was looking for but she still looked for it. A few tears fell from her now red and swollen eyes.
'Ranveer, Tia misses you. Come back,' she whispers. A sound comes from behind her and she turns around.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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its lovely rosa..pls cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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your an awesome fic riter..................gr8
plzzzzzzzzz cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
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guys thanks for the response but the fact is that these fics r not mine i have assembeled it from some where else.

if still u want me to cont then i will.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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No! If you're getting them off someplace else, we can also read it from there only...

Btw, all of you who're interested in writing fanfics with a NEW format, check this link out -

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=149439

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