Kahin To Milage.... Pa2Pg3 - 11-14-08

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Friends, its me Mickey and I want to share my latest fan-fic with you guys...

I hope you guys like it! 😛



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Kahin To Milenge... is about five siblings who have gotten separated at very young age of their childhood.

Title Sequence...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BoeNd6km-yE[/YOUTUBE]

Prologue.... Character Intro


Pronita is Tia's twin sister (but doesn't look the same) who have recently gotten married to Jai Walia after working with him for three years in his company in America. Jai is so happy with Pronita and they decided to go on their honeymoon, but god had something else planned. They get into a terrible car accident after they arrival India. Jai survivals the accident but his wife dies in the car accident. Also Jai was going to introduce his wife to his family but now how can he break the news to his family. Ex-specially his Massi who always wanted to see him settled in life and after knowing that he was married. She was so happy for him and now he has to break the news to his family...

Will Jai be able to break the news to his family about his wife's death or destiny has something else planned for him?

Waqt made Tia into Bani Dixit, who is a prostitute by profession, but never lets anyone touch her body in her life even though she lives there and if she needs to fight for herself than she will. Always tried to run away from that place since she arrived their at the age of 14. Slowly time passed by, Bani grew into fine women but still never lets anyone touch her body.

One day, Kunal helps Bani escape from Gujjar's dirty jism place because he cares for her and never let anyone touch her body for some reason. Both Bani and Kunal feel strange connection between each other but don't realizes it. Anyways, after Bani runs away from there she meets with a accident.


Will that accident change Bani's life? Also, will Bani once again turn into Tia after finding her siblings and change their bad habits even though they are older than her?

Arjun, Rudra Prataps' eldest son, is an obedient, loyal son for whom his father's wish is a command. He is a self effacing and headstrong man, who has no control over his anger. He cannot tolerate anything against his father, who adopted him when he was five years old. He loves his younger brother Shourya a-lot also could kill in cold blood for him. Also, he has hopes in finding his siblings one day because he can not live without them, but lives for his family who
adopted him.

Will Arjun get successes in finding his siblings before something terrible happens to him?

Karan, s a successful super rock star who is very arrogant & is used to always having his way. A complete brat, he doesn't believes in love. He is very attached to his mother Devika Sabharwal who
adopted him when he was only four and half & shares everything with his childhood friend Raunak. Karan also has faith in finding his siblings who got separated from him after his parent's death.

Will Karan also be able to find his siblings before he gets himself in hug trouble? Also his search for his sibling will bring a difference between him and his mother who became his life?

Waqt made Kunal a gangster for living but he isn't mean if you get to know him from his heart. Also, he has hope in finding his sibling by the song his mother taught them on her birthday before her accident.

Also, will Kunal be successes in finding his siblings? Also will Kunal protect Bani after he finds out that she is none other than his younger sister Tia?

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PS: Bani is going to be paired with Jai... our Ram Kapoor

To Be Continued...

Signing off

Mickey

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Maybe the concept didn't do the magic but I hope the first part will.... 😃

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Part One... Bani meets Jai Walia

Jai didn't know how to break the news to his family about his wife's death... Shattered Jai sat in his car and told his driver to drive because of his broken arm.

"Hurry up, Bani! If Gujjar catches me helping you escape from here he will kill me so hurry up, Bani if you want to get out of this hell" whispered Kunal

"Kunal, I'm hurrying but my dress got caught in the tree branch" Bani told him

Kunal helps Bani free her dress from the tree branch before anyone catches them... Both Kunal and Bani run in the jungle but they get caught by Gujjar's thugs. Kunal fights to protect Bani and tells her to run but she told him... she isn't leaving without him... but Kunal forced Bani to run...

Gujjar's thugs followed Bani... Bani ran onto the road and meets with a accident...

"What happened Vijay?" Asked by Jai

"Mr. Walia, I think we might have hit someone?" Vijay told him

Jai told his driver to check who they hit... Vijay gets out of the car and saw a girl who is badly injured and her forehead is bleeding... Vijay told his sir about how bad the accident it was and they take her to the nearest hospital.

Kunal keeps on fighting and runs from there... Gujjar burns in anger of Bani's escape of the help of Kunal his contract killer who back stabs him for a girl.

"Gujjar, she is just a girl than why are you after her?" his thugs asked him but he shuts them up.

Gujjar leaves from there and Kunal looks for Bani but doesn't find her...

Jai takes Bani with him home and everyone misunderstands her as his wife... Massi was happy to see her munna and his wife...

Massi hugged her munna and told him to take Bahu in his room...

Bani is sleeping because of the needle in her left hand... Massi also told Jai to rest in his room and if they needed anything shout for her...

Jai nods his head and thought about how Massi misunderstood this lady as his wife... that's where Jai gets the idea of keeping this act in-front of his family until Massi doesn't get better. Than he will tell Massi and his family the truth about his wife's death, who he still love and always will.

Middle of the night, Bani wakes up and looks around where she is... Bani gets scared when she see herself sharing a room with a stranger... Bani tries to get up but her hand knocks down the glass and it makes a huge sound that wakes up Jai who was sleeping on the couch peacefully after his long journey.

He asked Bani... what's wrong but she keeps on staring at him

"Is there something wrong, Ms... Whatever?" he asked her again

Bani just looks at him... because she doesn't know what to ask

Again, Jai asked her the same question and Bani blurts out in anger "how dare you touch my body? How dare you? Remember one thing... no body dares to touch Bani's body even though she is part of that hell... where people sell their bodies for living and you touched my body... How dare you?"

Shocked Jai moves back and looks at her

Massi comes running into Jai's room because of all the shouting of his wife...

"Massi" shocked Jai says

"Munna, is everything alright and why is Bahu shouting?" worried Massi asked him

Bani looked at Jai for answer because she isn't his wife than why is his Massi addressing her as his wife...

Jai tried to plead with his eyes toward Bani who looked at them for answers...

Jai told his Massi that everything is alright but Massi still wasn't sure but leaves after Jai assures her.

Soon as Massi leaves... Bani starts questioning Jai for answers... Jai told Bani the truth about his marriage and how his wife died. And now he needs her help to keep this act in front of his family and for that he will give her anything she asks for...

Bani looked at him... her heart says to trust him but her mind says no because he might be those type of guys who might take advantage of girls in their critical salutations...

"What are you thinking Ms. Bani?" Jai asked her

"Mr. whatever you are, I can't trust a stranger like this but I need some time to think" she told him

"Fine, I'll give you this entire night to think about it and I promise that nothing will happen between us because I am not those type of guys your mind is telling you. And you are save in Jai Walia's mansion" he told her

Kunal still looks for Bani because he is worried for her and feels some sort of connection with her... whenever he see's her in trouble. In fact she reminds him of his sister, Tia who got kidnap at very young age in front him. Kunal's only goal in life, is to find his siblings and look for his sister, Tia. And that's the reason he became a gangster so it will be easy to find his sister, Tia and his siblings before he die.
"What are you thinking, Kunal?" asked by his friend
"Nothing, dude! Lets go before the cops come and takes us behind bars" he told his friend who always stood by him... no matter what happened in life.

Entire night, Bani thought to herself about Mr. Walia proposal in acting as his wife until his Massi doesn't get better...

Bani looked at him sleep on the sofa while she slept on the bed... her heart told Bani to agree with Mr. Walia because she will be safe from Gujjar's thugs, but still her mind disagreed.

Next day, Bani gets up by the knock and stares at Mr. Walia for further instruction in what to do...

Jai opens the door and lets Massi in...

She tries to check Bani's fever but she moves back... Jai looks worried when Massi asks him... "if everything is alright?"

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What will Bani do? Will she play along with the game for Mr. Walia's family?

Find out more on Kahin To Milengi

Signing off

Mickey

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PS: If you guys don't like this fan-fic than i'll stop right here!

😛




Edited by Patel...Rocks - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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g8 story yaar
luks vry interesting
pls cont soon
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Originally posted by: Twinkle_23

g8 story yaar

luks vry interesting
pls cont soon



Thank you, so much
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow...itz awesome.....love the chracterz and the ......vm of kahin to milage
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plzz yaar dont stop.. it seems like u r putting alot of effort in putting this FF togehter.. great start, FF and part.. plzzz continue sooon yaar.. i loved it.. lets see wat bani does.. and how will her bro find her and noe that bani is his sister tia..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing part
sounds really intresting.
i hope bani agrees to act like jais wife.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey.....
nice story....
and nice song😉....and i think i have seen and heard that song...long ago🤔...well i liked it...
do cont.soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey! Great Start! It seems very interesting...... the character description was very detailed..... loved reading it..... Please do continue soon.....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG I used to watch Kahi To milenge all the time when I was little it was my most favourite drama in the whole world and karishma Tanna looked so pretty in it😳
hey was just wondering did you watch it too is that where you got the story from😳
you should definetely write more it was a very sweet and emotional story😳

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