Creative Oneshots #4

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Misunderstandings In Love

**Episode Two: Let's Get it On!**

U-know shocked to see Naina with KC's blue silky nightie on, comes and sits down on the bed: Ummm......... Naina where did you get the

Before U-know finishes the sentence Naina speaks: I found it in the drawer, o is that orange juice (Naina looks at the orange juice) I'm really thirsty. (She gets up and dives for the orange juice, but it ends up falling on the floor, Naina on top of U-know... 5 seconds and Naina and U-know end up kissing. What they don't know is that KC is at the guest door shocked to see the scene going in front of her eyes, she leaves their in tears, U-know and Naina does not notice)

U-know pushes Naina, out of breath: I-I cant do this, I love my wife.

Naina shocked: You're married? (Naina has a shocked guilty face)

U-know shocked to see Naina with KC's blue silky nightie on, comes and sits down on the bed: Ummm......... Naina where did you get the

Before U-know finishes the sentence Naina speaks: I found it in the drawer, o is that orange juice (Naina looks at the orange juice) I'm really thirsty. (She gets up and dives for the orange juice, but it ends up falling on the floor, Naina on top of U-know... 5 seconds and Naina and U-know end up kissing. What they don't know is that KC is at the guest door shocked to see the scene going in front of her eyes, she leaves their in tears, U-know and Naina does not notice)

U-know pushes Naina, out of breath: I-I cant do this, I love my wife.

Naina shocked: You're married? (Naina has a shocked guilty face)

U-know: yeah... and I love her alot... she's my life, my everything and even on days when we fight I just want to be with her...

Naina guilty look: OMG I'm so sorry... I think I'll leave...

U-know: no it's ok... when she gets home I'll tell her you are in the guest room... she's a sweetheart...

Naina: are you sure?

U-know: yeah... I'll go to bed now... good night

Naina: good night...

U-know leaves and closes the door behind him. he goes of into the kitchen and see's KC's bag.

Meanwhile KC is roaming aimlessly on the streets and crying her heart out. she just walks when she bumps into someone.

KC: (looking down) I'm sorry...

Xiah: KC is that you?

KC looks up to find Xiah looking with concerned eyes.

Xiah: whats wrong? I thought you were going home. what happened? actually first lets get out of here its too cold...

Xiah takes KC to his apartment and after calming her down he asks her to tell him what happened.

KC w/ a pale expressionless face: he was in the apartment with her...

Xiah: your husband?

KC: yeah...

Xiah: You really do love him...

KC: yeah when I first saw him... he was my dance teacher...

**Flashback**

KC is the last person left in dance class.

U-know walks towards KC: KC what are you still doing here?

KC smiles: I was wondering if you can help me with the slow rain song?

U-know is now in front of KC: Why is that you are the only one who stays back, and you are the best dancer (he gives her a seductive smile). What rain song is this your talking about?

KC smiles back and goes to the CD player and plays the song and the music starts, both Yunho and KC already have fire in their eyes:

Click Here

Xiah :sighs: and smiles: wow you guys really do love each other.

KC sad yet smiles: yeah well I know I do... Yunho is my life... my everything... my world revolves around him and even when we fight I can never stay angry at him... but I never thought he would cheat on me...

Xiah puts his hand on KC's shoulder : sometimes the people we love the most hurt us the most

KC: yeah they do... I hope you find your girlfriend

Xiah smiles: here let me show you a picture of her

KC: and I'll get out my wallet and show u my Yunho...

Xiah goes to the shelf to get a picture of his girlfriend while KC removes her wallet to show Xiah.

Xiah hands a silver frame to KC and when KC's eyes fall on the frame the colour from her face drains away and she goes pale.

Xiah: hey are you ok... you look like you saw a ghost...

KC: is this Naina?

Xiah ::sighs:: and smiles: yeah... Isn't she pretty? And her eyes... wow I love her eyes... but why do u look so pale?

KC: (tears up) because she is the woman I saw snogging my husband tonight

Xiah sits down next to KC in shock.

Xiah cant believe his ears: No that can't be...

KC angry and sad : if you want we can go to my place... I bet she's still there.

Yunho + KC's house
Both Xiah and KC barge in the house, Yunho who was in his room working on his laptop goes outside to check what the noise is goes outside and finds his wife their.

Yunho angry: KC, I understand work is important, but that doesn't mean that you can't call me. I have been up waiting for you a-

Before Yunho can finish his sentence KC cuts in: WHERE IS THE WHO*E?

Xiah doesn't like the language but stays quiet.

Yunho shocked: U mean Naina?

Xiah has a shocked face: U mean Naina, my Naina is here?

Yunho confused at to what's going on: Yea - u -se-e

Before Yunho can finish his sentence Naina comes out scratching her head, in the blue silky nightie: What's going on out here? I was having such a nice dream about X- (she stops when she sees Xiah and another woman, Naina's face changes to happydream to disgusted-angry) So, Kim Junsu, you accuse me of cheat, and your having your own affair!! (puts her hands on her hips with disgust written on her face)

KC goes up to Naina and slaps her across the face once, then again and again: How dare you accuse him of cheat??!! When you are cheating, and having an affair with my husband?

Naina pulls KC's hair... and yells: and you are the innocent little wifey... you have been whoring around with him (pointing at Xiah) while here your husband is worried...

KC grabs a hold of Naina's Hand and digs her fingernails in until Naina lets go of her silky hair: I wasn't whoring... I love my husband and I respect and honour my vows... it wasn't me and Xiah on the bed snogging each others heads off

Both Xiah and Yunho look at both of them in shock

Naina tries to explain: it wasn't like you sa-w

KC sarcastic smile and laughs: HA! yeah and I suppose all those other people were wrong when they said you and Yunho heated up the dance floor.

Yunho: (in shock) you went to the ball

KC brushes her hair in exhaust: yeah I went to the ball... I canceled my meetings with my clients just so i could surprise my husband only to find he had left with another woman... slut like (under her breath)

Xiah trying to reason with Naina: Naina.. I know you have been hurt but did u have to break up a happy marriage (looks towards KC and Yunho)

Naina yells and walks up to Xiah: Happy Marriage my foot... She (points to KC) doesn't even care about her husband... she's flinging accusations without even asking him what happened? I think he is better off with out her........

KC turns to Yunho with tears in her eyes: is that what you think? That you are better off without me?

Naina angry: yeah thats why I'm here... he doesn't need you anymore

Xiah angry: Naina let him answer... this is between them

Yunho in a deadly quiet voice laced with steel: How do you know my wife?

Xiah: I met her at the bar where I work... she was trying to drown her sorrows but I stopped her... then after I got out from work I was walking home and she bumped into me crying so I took her to my place for something warm to drink. We talked about how you guys met and when she saw a picture of Naina she told me that Naina was the one she had seen kissing you.

Yunho turns to KC looking at her with emotionless eyes: Naina is right... if you can't trust me then I don't need you anymore...

KC runs out of the apartment with tears in his eyes....

Xiah who can't believe wat is happening: KC... he turns to Yunho... be sure that you mean what you say because once the gulf has grown it'll be hard to get her back. Take it from someone who still regrets not trusting their love. She loves you alot.

Naina angry upset and hurt: if she is so sweet why don't you go after her?

Xiah angry and hurt: maybe I will... because she needs someone and since her husband can't be bothered whether she lives or dies I'll go but your making a big mistake...

Xiah leaves Yunho and Naina deep in thought...

**Episode Ends **

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Next Story is about Roshni and Hero

Written By: Me (Naina)

Note: It is different, so bare with me on it.

I'm Rating this PHU= "Potential Heating Up Your Room"

Please Listen to Both The Songs!! That I posted.

Dr. Love,"I will Eat You Up"❤️

In the outskirts of Lovelight, France there is a famous Cancer Hospital called Oasis Paradise. Although Cancer is a horrible disease, this hospital is known for giving the patients excellent care, the best services & feel like they never left home, even if it maybe their last days on Earth, the patients leave happily.

This huge 15 storey building which is surrounded by planted palm trees and a beautiful beach. It is a place where many doctors, nurses, lawyers, etc want to work and enjoy the atmosphere.

Oasis Paradise is also known for the best-looking staff. No one knows how that happened, but just to let the patients have something good to look at. All different races work at the hospital, a multicultural society working under one building.

Dr. Hero Jaejoong or more famously known as 'Hero.' All the women adore him, except for one woman who does not like talking to working with Dr. Hero, but to bad today she has to do more than talk to him.

Dr. Roshni [stumps on Dr. Hero's foot]: 'This is not your parking spot, THIS IS MINE!'

Dr. Hero [holding on his foot]: 'Damn it, Rosh, Do we have to do this everyday? Errr!! My parking spot is on the 5^th garage floor, and the elevator is not working, You can always take Naina's spot'.'

Dr. Roshni [looks at Dr. Hero in anger]: 'Just because Naina comes into work with Xiah these days, does NOT MEAN I CAN TAKE HER PARKING SPOT! I'm NOT YOU I don't like stealing other ppls parking places'

Both are now walking towards the hospital and arguing at the same time.

Dr. Hero [fixing his collar]: 'Uhh.. She is your best friend' and

Naina & Xiah [runs towards them]: Hi you guys!

Naina [gives light hug to Sara, Xiah does the same to Hero then all of them walk towards the hospital]: Why are you both arguing?

Dr. Hero [flicks his collar up]: 'Obviously your friend here, has a thing for 'The Hero'

Dr. Roshni [smacks his arm with her tote]: 'THE HERO! [smacks him again] YOUR NAME IS JAEJOONG! ERRR!! [she stomps into her office]

Dr. Hero [looks towards Naina & Xiah]: 'What did I say, she can't take a joke?'

Naina [puts her hands on her hips]: 'Of course Rosh will be mad at you, you take her position in the hospital, all the patients want to work with her, take her parking space'.

Dr. Hero: Alright jeez! But she still gets paid the same salary as me'.

Naina [wtf face, and gets angry]: 'ERRR, Never mind, I have to go meet with some patients. [gives a light peck to Xiah] Bye Baby.

Xiah ::sighs:: 'She is the sexiest psychologist I know.. I love it when she gets all fiery.' [Xiah shivers to get all the arousals removed]

Dr. Hero [laughs]: 'I have to go meet my patients.. see you at the board meeting.'

Xiah [waves and heads to the law office section of the hospital].

The board meeting comes around later in the evening and all the important people of the hospital come into a meeting room. Everyone takes a seat around a big table.

Dr. Hero [looks towards the chief of staff]: 'So, Dr. Jung, What's the topic today?'

Dr. Yunho [smiles]: 'Well, Halloween is in a week, and I needed some volunteers for the staff Halloween party'..

Dr. Roshni [smiles]: 'We are all willing to help Yunho.'

Dr. Yunho [smiles]: 'Of course, I need someone to take charge of organizing.'

Dr. Hero [smirks]: 'Give that job to Rosh, she's the bossiest and the dictator.'

Naina giggles, Roshni punches Naina in the arm.

Naina [rubs her arm]: 'Ouch!'

Dr. Yunho [annoyed by Hero's remark]: 'I guess you will be helping Dr. Roshni '.'

Dr. Hero [wtf face]: 'Me!'

Xiah giggles, Hero punches him in the arm.

Xiah [rubs her arm]: 'Ouch!'

Dr. Yunho [annoyed & looks towards Xiah & Naina]: 'And you two will be assisting Jaejoong and Roshni.

Naina & Xiah are ecstatic but fake a sad face.

Xiah [fake angry-annoyed face]: 'O-o-o do we have too?' [winks at Naina]

Everyone gets assigned different tasks and all of them start walking towards the garage.

Next Day, Dr. Roshni & Dr. Hero do their daily rounds and meet up with Naina and Xiah at the hall where all them are.

Dr. Hero [yells]: 'This is ridiculous, how are we supposed to decorate this big hall and make it into a scary place?'

Roshni [yelling at Hero]: 'NO NEED TO YELL!'

Naina [laughs]: 'We got loads of stuff and we can make the 'On-Call Room' a secret trap cave' Muhahaha!' [snickers and rubs her hands together like Cruella got all the puppies]

Xiah [pats Naina's back]: 'Honey, your already getting into the spirit of the holiday, looks like your going to be Cruella.'

Naina [fake laughs]: 'And your going to be my 'Slave.'

Xiah [comes closer]: 'Anytime' [winks at Naina]

Hero [laughs]: 'Omg, you two never stop! Ok, Roshni and I will make the cave.'

Roshni [angry]: 'I don't want to make out the cave with you.'

Hero [digusted face]: 'Roshni, I don't want to [uses fingers to quote] 'make out in the cave with you,' so stop dreaming.'

Naina giggles. Roshni punches her on the arm.

Naina [rubs her arm]: 'Ouch! What's with the punching?!'

Roshni [ANGRY]: 'Why do you always laugh when he says something?'

Naina [Xiah rubbing her arm now]: 'Because you just said you wanted to make out with him' [and whispers to Roshni] and I don't blame you. [winks at Roshni]

Xiah [jealous]: 'NAINA'.'

Hero [comes forward to Roshni]: 'Are you afraid something might happen between us?' [cocks his eyebrow up]

Roshni [smiles comes even closer]: ''.[and yells in his face] 'IN YOURRRR DREAMS!'

Xiah, Naina and Hero cover their ears from the explosion.

Hero [holding onto his ears]: 'OMG! You can be so loud, WHY DON'T YOU BE SHREK or THE HULK for Halloween?!!'

Xiah and Naina both giggle. Roshni storms into the 'On-Call Room'

Naina [regains her composure and goes and slaps Hero's head]

Hero [rubs his head]: 'Ouch, what was that for? You were laughing too!'

Naina [guilty look]: 'Yea, but It was funny, I'm her friend, you on the other hand sometimes go overboard, go say sorry.'

Hero [smiles, and keeps rubbing his head] 'I guess your right, plus she already headed to the 'On-Call Room' so I will take the supplies to make the secret trap cave.

Hero heads to the 'On-Call Room.' And sees that Roshni is already their, he closes the door and locks it. And walks up to her and hugs her from behind.

Hero [whispers in her ear]: 'How long are we going to keep this secret from everyone, especially our best friends?'

Roshni [bites her lower lip]: 'If you come up behind me like that and hug me, can I really control myself, Dr. Love?'

Hero turns her around and finds Roshni looking intently at him'

Listen to this Song Explains the Current Situation http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K-pOy-I1oe8&feature=related

Hero moves his lips towards Roshni and both fall onto the 'On-Call Bed.'[giggling]

I'm Doctor Love(Love)
I'm Doctor Love(Love)
Come be my patient(patient)
I'll cure without a drug
I'm Doctor Love(Love)
I'm Doctor Love(Love)
Come be my patient(patient)
I'll cure without a drug
I'm Doctor Love

Back Outside

Naina [turns toward Xiah]: 'Did you realize that Roshni was'. Nevermind.'

Xiah [curious about what Naina is trying to say]: 'What are you trying to say?'

Naina [comes closer]: 'You don't think Hero & Roshni are faking all this hatred towards each other? Don't you remember we hid our relationship from them, until they caught us kissing in the 'On-Call Room.'

Xiah [laughs]: 'Honey, I highly doubt they are dating, they have nothing in common'. I'm going to give these boxes of supplies to them'. I'll be right back.'

Back In the 'On-Call Room'

Now Listen YOU HAVE TO LISTEN TO This Song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ayVRxG0v5_k

When I first saw you I knew nothing's like it used to be [Roshni dives into Hero's mouth and both have a World War, both battling for each other's tongue]
Boy you have got to be the finest thing in history [Roshni loosens his tie while still French kissing him]
The way I feel inside is just so hard to understand [Hero takes off Roshni's jacket, and starts to kiss her neck, as Roshni moans]
You'd feed my appetite in ways I can't explain [Roshni bites Hero's neck and Hero makes a hissing noise]

I'll eat you up
(Right Now, Your Love)
I'll eat you up
(Right Now, Your Love)
(Woah)
I'll eat you up
(Woah)
So yum yum [Roshni licks her lips in satisfaction]
(Woah)
Can't get enough
(Woah oh oh) [Hero: 'You are being a vampress r-r-right.. Ouch!]
I think I'm in love

Hero [looking at Roshni in his arms]: 'Babe when did you turn into a hungry lioness?'

Roshni [gives a passionate kiss to Hero & winks]: 'Since I met you, Dr. Love.'

Hero [sits up and puts his head on Roshni's shoulder]: 'You sure we should hide this from our best friends, I mean just because they hid their relationship from us, doesn't mean we should, we have been dating for six months now, I don't want to act'' I want to tell the whole world, How much I love you.'

Roshni [smiles & annoyed by Hero's question]: 'I just feel it's not necessary to tell them.'

Outside The 'On-Call Room' Door, Xiah is in shock to see his Jungly friends at each other and he drops the box of supplies and runs to Naina.

Xiah [panting]: 'N-n-a-ina! Omg! You were right about temtm.'

Naina [comes over to Xiah]: 'Calm down babe, I was right about what?'

Xiah [calms down]: 'Hero, and Roshni, they are, come on lemme show you.'

Xiah grabs Naina and both are in shock to see what their friends are doing.

Naina [whispers to Xiah]: 'What are they each other's favorite meals? Their biting each other as if he's a steak and she's a hungry dog.'

Xiah [gasps]: "How did they move their hips in that direction, is that even possible?

Naina [shocked]: "Ouch, that must have hurt!"

Xiah [points]: 'Omg! I did not know Roshni can be like that'. How come you never do that to me?' [whines and yells]

Naina [ANGRY & yells]: 'WHAT, do you want to join them Mr. Xiah Junsu!'

Suddenly 'The On-Call Room Door' is open.

Hero [with a messed up hair & hugging Roshni's waist]: 'What are you two doing, disturbing two lovers?'

Naina [speechless]: 'H-h-h-ow? Y-y-you? How?

Roshni [smiles at Naina]: 'We have been dating for six months' anymore questions?'

Xiah [smiles & looks at Roshni]: 'I have a question, can you teach Naina how you bit Hero's neck like that and he hissed that l-looked pleasurab-le'..

Before Xiah could finish his sentence Naina pulls his ear: 'Why did you not tell us you guys were dating?'

Xiah: 'Ouch!'

Roshni [smiles]: 'Simple, Revenge, for not telling me you and Xiah were dating, and Two, I cannot be seen dating my competition can I?

Xiah and Naina [confused look]: 'Ohhh'

Hero [annoyed]: 'Now can you leave us alone, and block this area, tell people not to come over here for another''.'

Roshni [finishes Hero's sentence]: 'Another three hours.'

Xiah & Naina [shocked face]: 'WHAT!'

Hero [all smiles]: 'You heard my Dr. Love!'[give Roshni a quick kiss on the lips]

Xiah [smirks]: 'Alright Jungle Animals, make sure you guys actually make this place into a 'Haunted Cave,' not your 'Make Out Cave'' Come On, Nain. [pulls Naina with him to leave]

Naina [still shocked walking back with Xiah]: 'B-b-ut.. h-h-ow?'

Roshni [looks at Hero & winks]: 'Where did we leave off?'

Hero [points to his neck]: 'I don't know about us, but you left off right here.'

Hero carries Roshni back to the 'On-Call Bed'

Halloween Night

Thriller Music in the background'. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=un3-Hb9wF9s&feature=related

Naina is dressed as Cruella and Xiah is dressed up as a Dalmatian.

Hero is dressed up as a Man who got bit by a werewolf.

Roshni is dressed up as a Werewolf.

Xiah [laughs at Hero]: 'I guess Roshni, helped you with those bite marks huh?'

Hero [smirks at Xiah]: 'I see Cruella didn't give you anything..'

Xiah [annoyed]: 'Ha ha! Very Funny!'

Naina [grabs Xiah's hand]: 'Come on, let's dance to 'Thriller.'

Xiah [annoyed]: 'I'm not in the mood.' [walks away]

Naina [looks at Hero]: 'What's wrong, with Xiah?'

Hero [smiles]: 'I dunno, but I bet he headed to 'The Cave.'

Naina heads to the Cave.

Roshni [comes behind Hero]: 'GRRR!'

Hero [smiles & turns to Roshni]: 'Come On, let's dance''

Both Hero & Roshni Dance to Thriller'.. and later in the car'

'Eat Each Other Up'😛 ......Now Roshni only has competition in the bedroom.😉

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Lucky 7

Sal: can you guys stop it already?

Salma looks at Hero and Sara.

Sal: Hero are you listening? the party is tomorrow.

Hero: hmmm..

Sal: (getting mad) if you are listening then stop looking at Sara and look at me. I can't plan the menu all by myself.

Sara smiles.

Sal: oh, I so need a new sister.

Salma walks of to the bar area. The restaurant has a full house with no empty seats. And she will strangle herself if she is stuck between Sara and Hero romance.

Sal: Max can I get something to drink? [in a soft voice]

Max raises his eyebrow.

Sal: like water, or a soda.

Max hands her a water bottle.

Max: what's wrong?

Sal: nothing. It's just..You know how I am suppose to plan the party for my boss. Hero was suppose to help with the menu, while Sara helps me look over everything else.

Max: you want me to separate them?

Salma smiles.

Sal: no.. I love them like this. I have never seen a more loving couple.

Max smiles and nods, while making a drink.

Sal: the psychic was right. Who would've thought out of all people they would end up together.

Max: [gives her another smile, and serves the customer] You don't really believe in psychics do you?

Sal: of course I do. The psychic has always been right. Specially after Sara...

Max: oh please they always speak bullshit. How hard is it to say someday you will find the love of your life.

Sal : but that's not what she said!

Max: oh really? [amused] so what did she say?

Salma is about to speak then stops.

Sal: I can't tell you that it's her personal matter.

Max smirks.

Max: fine. Did she say anything about you.

Salma looks away.

Max: yes.....no...??

Sal: yes [says hesistently]

Max: what? a Prince charming will come and sweep you off your feet?

Sal: something like that,

Max laughs

Max: how predictable!

Sal: She said my 7th boyfriend will be my true love.

Max stops smiling

Max: 7??? Like 1..2..3..4..5..6..7?

Sal: Is there any other type of seven?

Max: please tell me you don't believe in this!

Salma doesn't say anything.

Max: wow..that is so...unintelligent.

Salma goes to hit Max with the menu folder but Max takes it away.

A paper falls out that has scribbled menu items.

Salma tries to snatch the paper but Max moves away

Max: hold on..I can help you

Salma looks at him questioningly.

Max: no really!

Sal: are you sure?

Max: yeah. I will get off work in few minutes. We can go over the menu and everything else.

Salma lets out a breath.

Max: really [reassures her] I can help.

Salma smiles and thanks him.

Few days later:: In the party

Salma didn't expect the party to turn out so well. After this she might actually get to keep her job. Sure the boss is moody at times but the job has it's perks. She should thank Max again. She looks around for him and spots him with bunch of girls. She might like her job and all the hot male models she gets to see the ad agency but the girls are whole another matter. Now they are here surrounding
Max. Can't they see he is not their type? She is sure he must be feeling uneasy. She can't see his face, his face is turned toward her. But somehow she can tell he is not liking this.
She walks over to him and places her hand on his arm. Max turns and his lips slide into a smile. She knew automatically the smile said " thank you for coming to my rescue" Salma looks down and returns him a soft smile.

Sal: Max sweety! I see you have met my colleagues.

Salma takes great satisfaction to see the smiles vanish from Camila's face.

C: did I miss something? Are you guys together? Like actually together?

Max wraps his arm around Salma's waist

Max: do we not look together?

C: Oh!!!! [trying to hide her embarrassment] well nice meeting you.

She walks away.

Salma is still trying to get used to being so close to Max.

Max turns toward her and for a second feels like he got lost somewhere.

M: thanks. [says softly]

Salma tries to find her composure.

Sal: No problem.

Max lets her go.

Sal nervously pulls her hair behind her ear.

Sal: I should go check on the other guests.

Max nods.

Salma walks away still trying to understand what happened when she bumps into someone and is few seconds away from falling.

S: [thinks to herself] There goes my job! I am going to embarrass myself in front of the whole agency.

My career is ruined! I can't face this. She closes her eys shut.

But she still didn't fall. It feels like she is floating.

She opens her eyes to find the most gorgeous pair of eyes looking at her.

The guys smiles and lets her up after few seconds..

Salma smiles. She can't stop smiling. She is afraid she might embarrass herself from smiling this big.

Max got scared for a second that she might fall and hurt herself. he was relieved to see the guy catch her. But now as seconds pass the relief is vanishing. He has never seen her like this. Is he about to lose her before he even got a chance to be with her.
For Max the week goes on like every other week in the past. Except he has this gut feeling he is losing out on something precious.

Sal: Hi!!

Max looks up to see Salma smiling.

Max: hi....[taking his time] long time no see. I usually see you everyday.

Salma smiles big again

Sal: I have to talk to you!!!

Salma lets him know everything that is going on.

Max: No way!!

Sal: please...

Max: no!!! [getting up from the bench]

Sal: pleeease!

Max: No! [losing his patience.]

Sal: Max I came to you because you are the only good guy I know who can help me.

Max: get someone else.

Sal: I can't! Chad thinks I am dating you. I already had 5 crappy relationships. You can be my 6th and then Chad will be the...

Max: 7th?

Sal: yes!!

Max: so you want me to date you for a week...pretend we have a bad break up and that's it?

Sal: Max..

Max: No!

Sal: But

Max: it is so stupid! Can't you see how stupid it is?? It is actually the most retarded thing I have ever heard! It doesn't matter what number the guy is. if you think he is the right guy be with him. have faith in your love Salma!! If you believe some bogus psychic over your love then your feelings are questionable.

Max looks at Salma.

Max: anyways. [lower voice] I believe my break is over.

Max walks away.

Salma watches Max as he leaves.

Max really believes times is going by slow. two months passed since has seen Salma. Finally he saw her coming out of a restaurant the other night. With Chad of course she looked happy. Which made him sad. he is happy in a way knowing she is happy.
Salma comes homes finding Sara and Hero looking over the huge piles of guest list.

Sal: am I dreaming? or are you guy really working on the list instead of romancing.

Hero laughs, without diverting his attention from the work.

Sara: this is what I get from a ungrateful sister.

Salma laughs and grabs a water bottle from the fridge. She comes back and grabs a list herself.

Sara: God. [running her fingers through her hair] the wedding is in 2 days and everything seems to be a mess.

Sal: stop scaring me.

Hero: where are we getting the cake from?

Sal: I don't. Chad is getting it done by some big named people.

Hero: for what? why waste that much money. Max and I could've taken care of it!

Sal sits up. She wonders if her heart just skipped a beat.

Sal: Max?

Hero: yes Max. he seems great at this stuff. You should've asked him for help. if it wasn't for him you might not even be with Chad.

Sara laughs.

Sara: the guys is truly a sweetheart. He helped you plan that event when he had no clue what was going on.

Sal: then why did he help me?

Hero gets a phone calls and he excuses himself.

Sara: did you have a fight with Max or something?

Sal: No. why?

Sara: Just asking. He is not coming to the wedding..I thought you guys were friends.

Salma thinks for few seconds trying to let the words sink in..

Sal: I thought so too.

Salma goes to her room

Wedding Day

Sara wakes Salma up.

Sara: o0o you don't look too good. What's wrong love?

Sal: I don't know. I couldn't sleep last night.

Sara: It happens. When I married Hero it was the same.

Sal: You did? you didn't even have a wedding. You just married him.

Sara: yes but still, through the whole time I kept wondering if I was doing the right thing.

Sal: am I doing the right thing?

Sara takes her time.

Sara: Only you can know that.

Sal: How do you know?

Sara: you will know.

Sal: Is he the right guy?

Sara: he loves you and is ready to hand you over the whole world if you only ask for it. question is...is that good enough for you?

Salma smiles. Sara smiles and pats her back.

Sara: Now lets get ready so we can go!! We have a house full of people downstairs who are waiting for the bride to come down so we can leave. We can't keep them waiting forever!

Salma doesn't remember exactly what was going on. it felt like dream come true when Chad proposed with the most expensive ring she has ever worn till date. He is perfect in every way. he makes her very happy. But as wedding date came near it only kept getting worse. She had a feeling she was losing out on something that was essential for life. Sara helped her get ready and she can't remember any of the words but everyone lavished her with compliments. She remembers getting in the car.

Sara: Salma are you ok? You have staring out the window for the longest time! In half an hour you will become someone's wife. [getting teary eyed] I am going to miss you so much!

Salma just smiles. She hugs Sara and looks out the window again. Her heart is aching by the second. The car drives infront of Max's restaurant. Unknowingly a smile crosses her face. God she hasn't been there forever. That used to be her second home! The car passes the restaurant, and she can feel her heart ache more.

Sal: stop the car

Sara: what?

Sal: tell him to stop the car.

Hero: have you gone nuts? we are in middle of the road

Sal: well tell him to park it. NOW!

Hero: sal..

Sal: Now! [demanding and pleading at the same time]

Hero tells the driver to stop and Salma runs out.

Sara and Hero gets out after her.

Salma runs toward the restaurant.

Hero: Oh great! everyone is enjoying the sight of dressed up bride running.

Sara lightly punches Hero on the stomach.

Sara: shh.. she is in love.

Hero: I know but why on her damn wedding day.

Hero smiles.

Max has never kept himself so busy with work. He tried not to think about Salma, but even in a noisy crowd she haunted his thoughts. He looks up when the noisy crowd all of a sudden gets quiet. he looks where everyone is looking and there she is.

Salma ignores all the look and walks toward Max as fast as she can.

Max: what are you doing here?

Sal: I have to talk to you!

Max: now?

Sal: yes now!

Max: ok

Sal: not here.

She takes his hand and pulls him toward the back oom.

Sal thinks of what to say but she can't think, all she can do is try to make sure she doesn't start crying.

Sal: I don't love him.

Max: you don't?

Sal: I don't. I didn't know what love was and it surely doesn't go my numbers. He is perfect you know, he keeps me happy. But...[trying to find her words] I don't love him.

Max: how do you know?

Sal is taken a back with the question. How does she know. Chad is everything she had ever wanted.
Salma pulls Max into a kiss. For the 1st time she in life she felt complete. As by touching his lips their soul somehow connected. The kiss seem to go on forever till she pulled herself back for air.

Salma lightly places her hands on his chest

Sal: because you seem to have my heart, and I have nothing leftover to give to anyone else.

Max smiles and pulls her in his arms.

Salma starts sobbing again. But for the 1st time of the week she did it out of pure joy.

Sara and Hero walk in.

Hero: well well I guess she found her lucky 7.

Salma opens her mouth in shock because she hadn't given it any thought.

*** Note from Juoty: I had role planned for all 5 sisters but I couldn't give them lines because that would make the story 1000 pages long. I am suppose to be Salma's boss. Fatemah baji is the psychic and Naina is her crazy assistant.***

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Next Story is Written By: Sara (dilkeroshni)

Soulmates

A Naina and Xiah Story

By: dilkeroshni

[Two five year olds sitting on the side of a lake with their feet dipped in enjoying the warm breeze and the sun shining down on their heads.]

Girl: Junsu-ah.. we'll always be best friends no matter what right?

Junsu: [lightly smack the girl on the head] is that even something to ask?

Girl: promise me we'll always be friends'

Junsu: Saranghamnida (I love you) stupid' of course we'll always be together.

Girl: I love you too Junsu-ah

Junsu: of course you do.. you're going to marry me when I am older.

Girl: I am?

Junsu: of course.. you love me and I love you so I am not going to marry anyone but you' you're my girlfriend..

Girl:[giggle] so that makes you my boyfriend..

~Two days Later~

[A five year old girl is sitting on the swing in the deserted playground. She is staring out in front of her with no expression on her face. Silent tears fall down her face, not even a sob escaping. A few minutes later she is joined by a five year old boy.]

Junsu: [looking worried] hey, what is wrong?

Girl: don't hate me..

Junsu: I can't ever hate you!!

Girl: what would you say if I said I was moving away to America?

Junsu: what????

Girl: mi ahn hae (I am sorry)

Junsu: you're leaving me?

Girl: Junsu-ah please don't hate me.. I am going to try to come back here as soon as I can to you..

Junsu: or I can come find you [puts his arm around the girl] I'll have to when we have to get married'

Girl: [giggling] so you're still going to marry me..

Junsu: of course, I will always wait for you.

[As night approaches they both walk away in different directions.]

~15 years Later~

SeoulUniversity (Seoul, Korea)

[A girl with waist length jet-black hair, eyes consisting of light eye shadow, eye liner and mascara with lip gloss. Earrings dangle from her ears sway with the rhythm of the song playing in her mind. She does not notice the door opening and a boy of 5 ft 11 inches with black hair inching towards her with a mischievous glint in his eyes and an innocent smile on his face. He places his arms around her the girl lets out a blood-curling scream as the boy bursts out in laughter lighting up his whole face.]

Naina: Junsu-ah what the hell were you thinking?

Junsu: nothing.. [plays with the necklace with two engagement rings covered by the scarf around her neck] so have you told your Baji, Jouty and Salma yet?

Naina: no not yet, I am just waiting for the right moment. How was band practice?

Junsu: it was good. We need to set up Jaejoong with someone. All the rest of us have you guys but Jaejoong has no one.

Naina: oh I am sure he can find someone by himself without all of us playing matchmaker.

Junsu: Is there something you know about Jaejoong then the rest of us know?

Naina: no not the rest of u.

Junsu: so who else knows??

Naina: oh lets just say everyone but you.

Junsu: a hint? [kisses her cheek]

Naina: one of the two transfer students from America.

Junsu: transfer students? America?

~At the Lunch benches outside the cafeteria~

Salma: where is he??

Changmin: should I be jealous?

Naina: yeah u should she's gonna leave you now for Jaejoong after he has found himself a girlfriend.

[yoochun snort]

Jouty: hehe well you never know maybe i'll leve yoochun here Jaejoong is hot and sexy and really smart and funny and his voice [sigh]

A foreign voice: should I be worried about you coming after my boyfriend?

[Everyone turns around to look at a girl who is 5 feet 4 inches tall with amber color hair trailing down her back. Her face consists of minimal makeup. She is wearing a blue shirt with black jeans.]

Fatemah: of course you should be... after all he is sexy... and has a lovely voice... when I hear him sing I melt.

Yunho: now should I be worried and looking for a new girlfriend soon? Start looking out for other girls u know if you leave me.[points to a girl who is walking by] maybe she'll make me a good girlfriend.

Fatemah: [hits him] oi... You know I love you... gosh when we are together I only know you... how can u even think of looking for another girlfriend... [pulls a sad face]

[Yunho starts to lean forward to kiss Fatemah but is blocked by the folder Naina puts in between his face and Fatemah's face.]

Naina: please no kissing in front of us.. some of us would like to eat and you don't want to scare off the new girl. [turns towards the new girl]

Hi, I am Naina and you must be Julie.

Julie: hey, its finally nice to meet you all.. I've heard so much about you guys.

Junsu: so you can tell us who each one of us is.

Julie: yeah you must be Junsu. [points to everyone else and says their names]

Changmin: wow you got everyone right.

Julie:[hehe]

[All of a sudden someone shouts Junsu's name and the next thing everyone knows Junsu's arms are filled with an enthusiastic girl hugging Junsu.]

Salma: [taps the girl on the shoulder] uhm who are you?

Girl: oh I am Sara Lehri.. Junsu's long time girlfriend.

Naina:[looking a bit angry] lo..loong.. ti..time' gir'girlfriend?

Sara: well yeah.. I knew him since we were five and I am a girl and a friend'.so girlfriend.. and he said he would marry me and only me.[smile]

Naina: WHAT?[looks at Junsu angrily and stomps off]

[Everyone is shocked w/ their mouths hanging open and eyes wide. After five minutes of silence.]

Junsu: ah' who are you?

Sara:[looks a bit sad] you don't remember me Junsu-ah..

[All of a sudden Junsu's eyes get really wide]

Junsu: SARA'[hugs her tightly]

[Naina who was walking back towards them thinking that the girls words must have been a misunderstanding sees Junsu hugging the girl, kissing her forehead and looking far happier then he ever did.. turns back around and walks back in w/ two tears escaping her eyes]

Junsu: hey everyone, this is Sara.. my bestest friend in the whole wide world. Hyung don't you remember the sara that I always used to talk about.

Sara: yeah the one you're going to marry.

Junsu: ah [falters] no I am not going to marry you.

Sara: [angry] WHY NOT? You said you loved me and were going to marry me and only me..

Junsu: I don't know you anymore nor do I love you.. we were five at that time..

Sara:[with tears in her eyes] What?? [Whispers] you lied to me' I never went out w/ anyone b/c I always waited for you.. I will always wait for you. [with that she walks away to the bathroom]

~In the Bathroom~

[Naina is washing her face when Sara walks in.]

Sara: so you're the one he loves now?

Naina: yeah he loves me not you!

Sara: are you so sure about that.. I was his first love.

Naina:[exasperated sigh] you were only five.

Sara: so love doesn't bow to age.. and he promised me he will marry me.

Naina: we are already engaged so he'll be marrying me.

Sara: I don't think so.. He'll be marrying me and don't you forget that.. He will come running to me from you. [with that she walks out of the bathroom leaving Naina with her thoughts.]

Naina: [thoughts]: He loves me and only me. You were only a friend. He asked me to marry him and not you. He didn't even remember about you until now.

Naina walks out of the bathroom to join the rest of the group and get to know Julie better.

Naina: hey Xiah'

Julie: [interrupting Naina] aaaw' you have a nickname for him.. Xiah sounds like Asia' you two are just so cute..

Naina:[looks at Julie like have you lost your mind girl] uhmm'. Xiah is his stage name for their band and it does represent the fact that he is going to win over Asia and be known throughout all of Asia.. Well that doesn't mean that I don't have nicknames for him like you know honey' sweet heart..jaanu'.cuddle muffin, hunkey monkey..

Jouty:[ick] sheesh I think she gets it.. some of us would like to keep down what we ate and not drown in your sickening sweet endearments.

Salma: guys we should leave we have that party tonight for our club.

Junsu: oh I should go invite Sara.

Naina: why would you want to invite her?

Junsu: well she was one of my closest friends and I want to catch up with her.

Naina: oh okie.. yeah sure.

[Junsu goes to catch up with Sara]

Fatemah: don't worry he loves you.

Naina: but what if he falls back in love with her again.

Jouty: they were only five Naina'

Salma: yeah plus you've been with him for what.. forever'

Naina: nope, only 7 years, 5 months 8 days 3 hours 19 mins 22 sec.

Jouty:[snort] you're a goner' and that's how long you guys have been going out'. You guys knew each other 3 years before that'

Salma: yeah di, and Junsu oppa loves you and only you.

Naina: yeah I know I just can't live without him.

~The Party~

[Everyone is sitting around watching a scary movie. On one side of Junsu is Sara and on his other side is Naina. Horror is one of Naina's favorite genres in movies and she is enjoying it. All of a sudden she happens to glance over at Junsu to see Sara almost in Junsu's lap and her happy mood vanishes.]

Naina:[whispers in Junsu's ear] can we talk privately?

Junsu: yeah sure.. Sara I have to go

Sara: NOOO [looking as if she is trying to crawl into junsu] don't leave' I am really scared. [tears start to fall from her eyes]

Junsu:[gives Naina a helpless look] we'll talk about this later. She needs me.

Naina: [gives junsu a strained smile] yeah of course.. I am gonna go to the bathroom.

~In the bathroom~

Naina{Thoughts): Needs him'. She needs him.. what about me? You haven't even look my way once during the movie.. and you always used to cuddle with me. You haven't even said one word' I am the one who is always trying to talk to you.. yet you always give one word answer and go back to talking to Sara. I don't give a damn go keep talking to her.

[with her mind set on this she walks out of the bathroom and goes and sits next to Fatemah]

[through out the rest of the night Naina ignores Junsu and keeps busy with everyone.]

~At 6 a.m~

Junsu: hey guys I am going to go drop off Sara. Naina you can catch a ride with one of the others. [without looking behind him he walks out of there.]

[Sara catches Naina's eyes and gives her a smirk before turning out and walking out behind Junsu.]

Jouty: Naina you okie?

Naina: [looks at jouty w/ a mix of anger and sadness in her eyes] does it look like to you that I am okie?

Salma: uh di, you look like you want to murder someone.

Naina: [gritting her teeth] yes I wish to get my hands around someone's neck and squeeze the life out of them and then throw them around bring them back to life just so I can slap that smirk off of the bitc*s face. Preferably, Sara being that someone.

Fatemah: didn't it seem to everyone like sara was trying to keep Junsu's attention to herself only.

Naina: oh so now you realize it.

Yoochun: yeah I did notice that.

Jaejoong: don't worry Naina' she can't win this..

Julie: yeah you have all of us..

Naina: but it looks like she won this round.

~Two Days Later~

@The School News Paper Headlines@

@Divorce before Marriage@

[Underneath that is a picture of Sara and Junsu in an intimate position with Sara looking right at the camera right next to that picture is a picture of a dude kissing Naina]

Changmin [eyes wide]: OMO'.

Yoochun: looks like we need to call an emergency meeting.

~In an another room~

[Naina is holding the school newspaper with her eyes bugging out and Junsu walks in holding the newspaper as well and looking pissed off]

Junsu: I can't believe you kissed someone else.

Naina: I can't believe you would do that to me..

Junsu: what did I do??

Naina: cheated on me after such a long time I thought YOU LOVeD ME AND ONLY ME..

Junsu: you were kissing someone else..

Naina: you know what' I don't need to stand here and listen to this shit'

Junsu: yeah go back to your boyfriend you back stabbing

Naina: [slaps Junsu] you're the backstabbing two timing boyfriend so I suggest you keep your fu**ing mouth shut.. Don't talk before you know nothing. [with that she hands him the two rings and walks out of the room leaving Junsu lost in his thoughts]

**The Emergency Meeting 6 hours**

Jouty: what are we going to do?

Yunho: nothing they are both smarter then this.. they should be able to pick up the game that bit** is playing.

Jaejoong: yeah but it might take a bit of time.

Salma: yeah time that we don't have.

Fatemah: I will never forgive her for this.

[At that moment Junsu walks in]

Yoochun: you guys do realize that this is all staged right.

Junsu: what was staged.

Yoochun: These two pictures.

Changmin: what but it looks so real.

Jouty: yeah he is right I have an eye for these things just look at her position and eyes she was doing it on purpose.

Changmin: now that I think about it the guy that bumped into Naina was talking to Sara yesterday.

Junsu: what guy? what bumping?

Salma: oh Junsu oppa.. we were walking down the street when the dude bumped into Naina dee and their lips connected for a two three seconds before Naina dee punched the daylights out of him.

Junsu: [looking sad and angry] have you guys seen Naina?

Salma: no, why what's wrong?

Junsu: [tears in his eyes] I said something so bad to her.. If you see her I need to talk to her please call me.

Jaejoong: what happened Junsu.

[Junsu retells them of their fight]

Yunho: we taught you better than that'

Jaejoong: yeah you better make it up to her or I will forget that you're my brother.

Junsu: do you guys have to say this right now? I already feel like shit and this is not helping me find Naina.

[Everyone splits up to go look for Naina]

~Meanwhile in a class room~

[Naina is sitting down and thinking through everything that has happened when she hears someone walk into the room]

Sara: I told you he would come back to me.

Naina: go away!

Sara: you're invited to my wedding.. you know he proposed to me way before he met you.

Naina: walk away before I kick your as* and bash your face.

[Sara walks out of the room half an hour later Fatemah walks in]

Fatemah: Naina''

Naina:[in a broken voice] How could he do this to me? Doesn't he know how much it hurts..?

Fatemah: you're not the only one hurting love.

Naina: [bitterly] he is obviously so happy with her didn't you see this?[throws the newspaper at Fatemah]

Fatemah: you do know that all of that was staged.

Naina:[turns around to look at Fatemah with shocked eyes] what?

Fatemah: look at the way she is looking at the camera.. and leaning into him just in the right position so it looks like a lovers pose. Look at the glint in her eyes and Yoochun saw her talking with the guy who bumped into you and kissed you.

Naina: can you leave me alone for a while? I just want to think.

~An Hour Later~

[Naina walks into the cafeteria to see Sara hanging off of Junsu's arm while he is looking like he wants to run away.]

Naina:[all of the pent up anger of the last 4 days since that girl walked into her life builds up and she marches over to Sara] Get the Fu** away from him you whore. [She pulls Junsu away from her] I suggest you go find your own man.

Sara: I found him first.

Naina: baby doll he asked me to marry him and gave me the rings.

Sara: oh so where are these ooh so called rings.

[Naina starts to put her hand on her neck when she realized that she gave it back to Junsu her eyes meet Junsu's and he takes the rings out of his pocket and starts to put it on Naina's ring finger]

Naina:[laughing a bit] no u don't' you're not getting out of it this time.. get down on your knees and ask..

Junsu: [looks around to see his four bros and their respective girlfriends, fiancs or wife and everyone else that was still present on campus] gulp

Naina: make me yours in front of everyone.. so no one can break us apart ever.

Junsu: Naina would you do me the honor of becoming my wife.

Naina: hell yea.. you are not getting rid of me anytime soon.

Sara:[comes out of her stupor] NO.. HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?

WHY THE HELL DID YOU HAVE TO LEAVE ME TOO.. EVERYONE KEEPS ON LEAVING ME. AM I THAT UNLOVABLE??

Junsu: Sara..

Sara: SHUT UP. I CAN"T BELIEVE I CAME HERE LOOKING FOR YOU'

Junsu: we were five'

Sara: SO WHAT?? YOU SAID YOU WOULD MARRY ME AND ONLY ME..[she looks at Naina and starts walking towards her with the intent of hurting her]

Junsu: what are you doing Sara.

Sara:[a twisted smile on her face and a maniacal gleam in her eyes] oh nothing. [all of a sudden she jumps on Naina.. and starts to hit her] HOW DARE YOU TAKE HIM AWAY FROM ME?? [All of a sudden she is pulled back by the collar into the arms of two policemen who fight tooth and nail with her and get her out of there].

Policeman: I am sorry she won't bother you again.

Principal: I don't want her back here.

[The university nurse checks over Naina and fixes up her scratches.]

Nurse: So I hear congratulations are in order soon to be Mrs. Junsu Kim.

Naina:[hehe] Thank you

Someone from the crowd: so when's the wedding date? [

2^nd person: are we all invited?

3^rd person: kiss her you idiot [talking to Junsu] [Naina blushes]

[Junsu walks upto Naina and gathers her in his arms in a tight hug. After a few seconds he puts his lips on her putting in all the tender, care, love and pouring out his feelings into that one kiss]

~15 Days Later~

@NewsPaper Headlines@

@ Lehri Heiress Committed to an Asylum@

Sara Lehri was diagnosed with mental instability and admitted into an asylum'..

&THE END&

ok i am on the run right now so didn't red all of them. I just quickly scanned over mine! BAJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love you! Do you know how much I dream about time traveling and all those nice witchy stuff!! ::sigh:: only if it were true!!! Now I know what to dream about tonight!😉

Originally posted by: suganain

Naina's mark😃

Ek Choti Se Kahani: O my gosh, another marvelous story written by Salma jee, loved it!
and I have to say, the story felt like I was watching a Famous Bollywood movie. I don't know why, but it did. So, I'm Yunho's sister, WOW, put me rite where I guess I'm supposed to be. Hehe! I love the ending and was smiling at how irrestible Baji is to Yunho. Obviously!😃

My Melody: Loved this story, time travel is fun! I'm a little confused though at one part. When Juoty comes to present time why does she call me Sunny? and later Lia: She took him away from me. No matter how hard i tried she still took him away from me. Now i will ruin her. Naina (typing error its supposed to be sunny) has already been to her. She will now feel pain like she has never felt before.

Kinda confused on that part. What did Lia meant by that? So I was evil before and in the present time I'm good.? I love magic, and I felt this had some Halloween Element. My story was going around the Halloween theme, but ended up being about "makeouts in a cave." lol!😆😆

Lucky 7: Oh, such a cute story, reminded me of the movie The Wedding Planner. Well sort of. It's funny how Salma ended up with her Lucky 7. I'm guessing Chad, was Chad Michael Murray. O two hot guys in a One Shot. Lucky Salma! Overall, AWESOME JOB JUOTY!

Still editing...

Originally posted by: dilkeroshni

oh crap i completely forgot to give my feed back.
Please forgive me naina and everyone else =[
I am so sorry...

Now onto the response well

Ek Choti Si Kahani (A short story)- what can i say, another amazing story by baby salma. Great job salz. aah it was soo sad in the begining and i sorta got mad at yunho... way to destroy a great night😉 Why does he think about love that way? Ofcourse we woman are always like that, we are perfectly reasonable its just men who don't see it our way😉 It was a sweet story and i really like it. Criticism time: I felt that you left some things unexplained (like yunho's problem w/ love and how he was able to change his view besides the fact that baji is awesome) and also the relations between the characters were a bit confusing so yunho, micky, you, and naina are bro and sis. Me and baji are sisters and how is jouty related? Micky's wife? I was confused about that. Also a few of the sentences were awkward or grammar was a bit off. I think there could have been more but i understand about exams and assignments so it was great. Otherwise i would give this 8 stars out of 10.

My Melody- Wow baji... a fantasy.. w/ magic and spells and time travel and its got all of us. A great mixture for a brilliant story. One of my favorite lines "Jouty: I'm going to turn her into a frog... then she can croak all she likes." I think you could have explained some things a bit more to make it easier to understand like "magic maker charm". I am so glad you were able to get everyone in the story but i felt you could have created the link between the characters a bit more like your sister lia just came out of nowhere.. a bit on her would have been good to know. wow jouty and yoochun falling for each other in their dreams. I thought that jouty's reaction to naina/ sunny should have been more volatile b/c jouty was pissed off at sunny so when she saw her again, it should have been a bit more..The relationships between the characters were beautiful. Well done baji.

Misunderstandings In Love- **eyes wide** WHOA... that opening was a shocker..naina and u know kissing in front of kc w/o knowing. question: didn't naina already know that he was married? xiah is such a sweetheart in this story. I felt like giving him and KC a hug b/c he deserves one and KC seems like she needs one.😉 Aaaaw their confession scene was so cute. KC is in for a big shock and damn idiot yunho i wish i was their to kick his butt. How can naina come to this assumption that xiah was having an affair b/c technically she is in no position to point b/c i don't see Xiah and KC w/o their clothes or kissing and its in someone else's home. The fight was awesome. I loved it. Yunho the idiot not speaking for himself. Does he really have such little faith in his wife b/c she really hasn't done anything wrong. Like i said he has no evidence like them kissing/in an embrace or w/o clothes on..in a bedroom.. This makes me question both naina and yunho's love for xiah and KC. Awesome job you guys. This was an great second part.. I can't wait for the next one.

Dr. Love "I will eat you up"- I love the hospital description. It sounds like an awesome hospital. haha in the beginning i was thinking this is going to be one of those hate is a cover for love type of stories. I loved the stomping on his foot scene. 🤣 How exactly did Jaejoong take rosh's place in the hospital? I was just a bit unclear about that. He seriosuly thinks its the salary thats the problem what an idiot!!! (my idiot though😆) Hahahah its like fate is laughing in rosh's face. I love the whole on call room theme turning into a make out cave. That is an awesome idea... I wish it was real. YOu know her Freudian slip of the tongue implies her true intentions so yes i really do wanna make out with him in that on call room. I love xiah's character in this story. He is the bubbly little cute doctor that knows how to make everyone smile. My fav scene w/ him was when he was looking in the door and whines "How come you never do that to me?'" and then the last scene with Him and hero where they say, " Xiah [laughs at Hero]: 'I guess Roshni, helped you with those bite marks huh?Hero [smirks at Xiah]: 'I see Cruella didn't give you anything..'Xiah [annoyed]: 'Ha ha! Very Funny!'"The song doctor love is quite addicting... i am addicted to it now nain and its all your fault love. Ofcourse Jaejoong can cure me w/o any drugs all i need is him. Naina you and xiah in this story are awesome. That scene in the all call room😳 whew its getting hot in there an very very steaming. I was blushing reading that and you are right i could eat jaejoong he looks edible and oh so tasty and yummm. He is definitely my favorite meal. A lioness huh ROARRR.. "not a hungry dog maybe just a vampire **wiggles eyesbrows* .. did he carry me bridal style??? I love this story Thank you sooo much Naina... I love it love it love it and i especially loved the realtionship between all the characters and everyones characters. Mwahs Thank you soo much love.

Lucky 7-Hero is soo smitten in the begining well through out the whole story. noooo salz doesn't need a new sister.. gimme another chance and i'll be the best sister in this whole wide world.. aneways that line made me laugh though 😛 Max is such a sweetheart in this story😊) I was like whoa salz got chad and max together she must be drooling by now. I guess there is a psychic connection between both couples huh? Loll i love their convo abt how its so predictable.. I could imagine that convo b/c it seemed so real. 7th boyfriend whoa... so she's already had 5. Its so sweet . Jouty you did an amazing job w/ this story. I loved how it still worked out in the end and she still ended up with mister number seven. Also your characterization was awesome i felt that you described each character and built them in a great manner. Great Job Jouty jaan.


A big round of applause to my four sisters who wrote such great and awesome stories. Many different genres Great Job everyone..👏

I am sorry that these comments were a bit late.. but naina were they long enough for you?? and I hope they help everyone i added my thoughts and my criticism hope it helps guys. I love you all so much thank you for always being there for me.. and these stories great works. mwahs guys.. Thank you =]