They are killing the show!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I just want to get my thoughts out! GRRRRRRRRRRRR this sucks! i wonder if the person who used to execute this show is not here anymore. Because it is so hard to believe its done by the same people. How can it be the same person?? before everything that happened we got to see it fold in a beautiful way. For example when Kanaiyah was bugging Tanya it wasn't just done in the wait outside your house wearing gunda mawali outfit. It was done in a nice manner. He got her at places where no one expected. Said funny lines. Sneaked a cell phone in her purse, while she was at restaurant was sitting right behind her. Even her rape wasn't just kidnapped her and raped her but it was done in a twisted way. Then the marriage was also done in a nice way. From filling the maang till the end. We got to see nice drama after drama! Even raghav and Sujata was nice. They had a surprise element, from Sujata looking at Raghav through the glass to lying to her about the picnic it was all cute.
Now what the heck is going on????? what is there to watch???? I am so sorry to say this but you can paste trishna's face all over the show but she is not relatable. She is just a pretty face who is not a bad actress. Same goes for Raj. With Raj's character I would expect girls to throw themselves at him. But here we have 2 "goodlooking" people who doesn't inspire and any sort of devotion out of appreciation!
Raghav Sujata...what is going on!!!! I have never even got bored of Ekta this much and we all know how much she drags. We get it. For past 3 months Raghav only has only 1 line he says to everyone...from his Dad to kul, sujata, mansha anyone who comes in contact. " sujata is not only my love but my life also" GRRRRR ok!! what next?? Stop showing us your no good dad's face. What happened to your mother who was present at the beginning of the show? Did I miss something? did she pass away?
Rajdeep and Trishna...I have nothing to say. They are the only passable thing in the show and that too because Rajdeep does funny adorable stufff.
Raj and Tanya...what could've been a beautiful love story is nothing but ugly!! It's pure pure pure ugly. They had the kitchen scene and then they had the tiny scene where Raj looked at her in Sujata's engagement. That's it. Everything else has been so.....so...... dumb. It doesn't even make sense. I can try to make sense of everything else int he show even Trishna sleeping with Rajdeep ont he 1st night. But I can't make sense of their relationship. The main reason I believe any Taaj fans looked forward to them grow was because we believe it can be something deep. There is nothing deep here. If the creators don't fix this now they will ruined forever. You can't hold back thinking oh the fans will wait..so we can make them fall in love slowly. NO!!! We have waited to see them slowly fall in love through awkward sweet situations. You can show us lovingly holding hands today like nothing is wrong then show us they feel awkward when their hands brush against each other next month. IT WON't MAKE ANY SENSE!!!!!!
Also I know we wish she had an ex who would come back but that also doesn't make too much sense. Tanya never looked liek the type who would have a bf. She was the goody goddy daughter who was close to her dad, never did anything wrong, close to her younger sister who was her partner in crime. And also the whole guy girl love relationship is all new to her. You can tell. These are all new emotions. Even when she was lying on the bed she wondered if this is what happens when you love someone. Definitely Raj is her 1st experience in the field of love. And If Tanya wasn't in love before she is really not the type to pursue a relationship without love.
I am denouncing myself as a Taaj fan. I am stillt he biggest Shalini fan but I am officially denouncing myself as a Taaj fan. They can bring her a new guy, no guy whatever. But the taaj story sucks. It is the most horrible compromised marriage I have seen as of yet. I think they got married in august..it's November now and we are still on the same boat we were. Except now it is less romantic and nothing seems natural anymore. Just like Tanya smiling and then being upset doesn't make sense. Just like them holding hands don't make sense. Just like Tanya thinking on bed about Raj didn't make sense!!!
But by any chance if they still want to salvage the show
1. Break Raghav Sujata! Totally. No reason to elope or wait! Just break it off. Give Sujata a new guy. Someone who looks nice but still older than Rajdeep and Raj. Give Sujata a new edge. Something we haven't seen before. If the show is about 4 daughters then 4 daughters need to be somehow ont he same level. No one is interested in Sujata right now. Make her move to a new city to forget everything or give her a new job where she ends up having cute disagreement with her boss. He can give her life a new meaning. Raghav can pine. Trivedi can suffer seeing his son suffer.
2. Get Rajdeep's secret out or move on with it. I believe in suspense but the way they are unraveling things it's not exciting at all. Bring back the girl. Or make Rajdeep have some sort of accident where he wants the girl back, he doesn't remember trishna. We have seen a happy trishna she was likable, we have seen a cold trishna and most of us hated her, now we are seeing a weeping trishna it is definitely not working. When a good character weeps you want audinece to weep with you. That is not happening here. So I say let Rajdeep lose his memory where he forget Trishna. Now let Nupur and Trish work together to fix him. That way we can connect with trish at some level and you can drag this story as long as you like!!
3. Take of the thousand bangles the girls wear. We get it! they are new bahus. But we have seen them be new bahus for 4 months now. It's getting old. I would appreciate if they stopped putting so much gloss on. Yuck looks so made up! trishna needs to go on a darker lipstick and no eyeshadows. Tanya can work with eyeliner again no gloss. She has that simplicity people like about her. She doesn't need that much makeup. Because people will like her even without makeup. For nupur we get it! you are rich. Then get better blouses for you Saree. Yuck! Stop wearing armbands too!
4. Raj needs something to do. I know soap heroes usually have no job except yelling at heroines and not believe them when they speak the truth. But lets see what he does. If he is home let me see him work through files. Enough standing infront of the mirror.
5. For Taaj...really it has gotten to a point where you can't salvage it! You really can't. We can't go back on having awkward moments and see them slowly fall in love. They passed it. This is what can happen Raj can do something very bad that breaks Tanya. I would say get carried way and get close to trish but that would hurt Rajdeep. Taaj can be fixed after a incident like that but the brother relation Rajdeep and Raj share can't be salvaged. So let Raj do something or say something anything where he ends up hurting Tanya. Then let Tanya get hurt. Have a miscarriage because of Raj where she can't forgive him or anything. Then Raj can start earning her love and in the way fall in love himself. I would say bring in a new guy for Tanya but it won't make sense. Tanya doesn't go outside to work neither will it suit her character. I would rather not see her have an affair with a doctor, so that leaves no place for a new guy to enter her life.
6. Bring back comedy! The situations are too dark for main characters but Mausa and Mausi will do just fine. We love their couple. There is more to it than we see. It's clear Mausi is a ditz and Mausa is witty. Mausi always complains he says she is not good enough. Let us see more. Maybe a bedroom fight. Mausi can beat up mausa with a pillow. or mausi can cry while mausa tries to make her feel better!
7. What happened to sanjana? bring her back. In the future Sanjana and Mansha can go after the same nice hot guy! the classic rich girl Vs poor girl always works. It will create fine conflict! What happen to the T's? will they be good bhabis and sipport nand or will they support their sister. What about the R's will they support their loving playful sister or will they go with their sweet mansha who is like a sister and favorite choti saali!!
8. STOP with all the fakeness. Some sort of fakeness makes the show more appealiing. Such as zooming in twice or thrice in a shocking scene. Going black and white when it's major. But zooming and and making those horrendous noises when simple things such as a picture fell is absolutely unnecessary. Not only those but also other fakeness. Like trishna adding candles to her room that day?? it was daylight?? what were the candles for???
9. Biggest of all the show has been dragging so much stop showing pointless scene. try to establish something with each scene. Don;t just throw in a scene for no reason. More than half of the show is taken up by ponitless flashbacks. What is the point???? usually nothing. I am not saying don't have flashbacks, but stop overdoing it!!!!!
phew! I think I should just print this out and send it to them! Does anyone else offer any solutions that makes sense!
Edited by Perfangel5655 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow very long list👏. Nice ideas though. They are dramatic and controversial yet nice and interesting. if we followed those dont you think the show will become number one on zee. Maayka and bmtd will come after you.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow! Very nice ideas! I wish if the creators can read them.I am total agree with you, this show start very happening. Raj's entry, Raghav's acceptance for Sujata, and Kayiha's scenes, everything was done with a proper script and good story lien.....now there is no stroyline, it doesn't make sense to repeat same dialogues about Sujata- Raghav relationship. Yes, in Tanya's life Raj is the first man.......he is so handsome, so nice, everyone will die to get him. And Tanya has him and there is nothing in between them.... they should also show some comedy in the shows.....why always they have to show how Napur and Trivedi ji insult the Khohali's..........the show is full of talented actor and actress, the creator shoild make the use of it to make the audience happy. Thank you so much Fatima! Wonderful ideas........hope it goes in the right hands to take some positive actions to save this how.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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k i might one idea which might make sense is to get kanniya back he might give us some entertainment atleast
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Posted: 16 years ago
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the show is so slow. is it that hard to find a concrete plot? I would stop watching this sucky show ina heartbeat if Shalini wasn't in it.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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me too.....I only watch this for shalini..... I dont think creatives read our posts.......coz all we are seeing is trishna...trishna......I think vivah creative are really impressed by her but they dont know what people want......eachone of us want to see shalini's acting...but they paste trishna everywhere and jsut show us shalini's face to satisfy us.....you know my suggestion to shaliniw ould be to leave this show if its going to be like that..they are wasting her talent........we hardly get a scene of her..all we are getting isboring rag/suj...and trishna.......even I can bear sujata...but trishna's acting is so irritating..today she didnt even know how to cry.......same face...Im so tired now.....Please shalini leave this show if they wont focus on you.......we just waste our time behind all this crap story
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I just loved ur ideas and totally agree with you...lol
I wish one of the creative team's members looks through them or more so, it'd be so great if u send them this!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow! I really loved all your ideas. You are right about the direction of the show. After reading your list I remembered the episode where Tanya is coming to find her mom after she has been raped. it was the parking lot scene between Tanya and her mom. I have never seen any scenes like that. I was crying so hard and I cried long after that episode was over. It really touched me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow! They need to put you in charge of this show. Right now all your ideas can save this show && make it better! I agree the show was fantastic in the before the marrige!

Raat - i want RD's truth out now! im tired of waiting && if he saw aarti as trish or like you said they show's TRPs will bump!
They've ruined TAAJ for me but I'm not denouncing yet. I'll wait && see, if they add more bullspit, i'm out too! I think it was too soon for the holding hands and smiling at Tanya when RD said romance your wife (how can he? he doesnt love her that way, shouldnt he feel awkward and look the other way, like omg! what is he saying? instead smiling at tanya mischeivously wtf!) && i agree raj is the first thing close to love as it gets for Tanya && a new guy will not make sense! maybe if kahnaiyah came back and he did stuff, that can also trigger raj's love?

RS - i wanted them to elope b/c i couldnt think of any other guy situatuon good enough! but you have a really great one! i love the whole getting a job and falling for the boss, love it!

Sanjana - lol i was just going to post a thingy ask where is she? i hate that in shows! characters disappear w/o reasons! the idea of mansha and her figthing for a boy sound funny and cute i love it!

Mausi/mausa! I love this couple seriously! they are soo cute && they are perfect for each other, the complete each other. one funny and crazy and ditzy and wild and other smart charming witty and handsome aawwwh! i would totatly love to see they cute moments or for once just watch shakti look at mausi like man she so beautiful!

Me && my mom were talking about the makeup && clothes for Ts. She's like too much make-up && Trish looks like she's ready to go the party all the time! && as for the zooms too my mom's was laughing at me yell at the tv about this. y-day tanya stepped into trish room (she mad at tanya still in the us, we havent been revealed of the pregnanacy yet) but she steps in and we get 8 zooms on each && 2 black and whites! come on! are you seriously kidding me?!

>>Randomess:: your like so talented! vms, siggys, the fab updates, && you debate awesomely!! always have support for your arguements , but this post is far by one of the best! your so creative with writing, do you want to be writer? you could totaly! you can write me a show && i would deff watch!! (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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well I was also thinking that it doesnt have to be tanya's ex bf...he can be just a good friend and raj can take it serious...and can get jealous....but they have ruined taaj's romance to an extent where the only way would be to seperate them and then bring them together...I mean something that will bring passion in their love..........maybe rajdeep would get to know about raj(coz he found out the pic or nupur will find out and will blame trish and raj falsley...and tanya would think her sister still loves raj)
and rajdeep will be mad trish and send her divorce notice or divorce her...... trish would be broken.....and kul would have a heart attack😆.....tanya willbe distressed coz of this and would know that the only person who can bring happiness in trish's life is raj......by that time tanya has a college friend who loved her but didnt tell her but tanya doesnt know it..she just wants to take his help......coz of her family and trish's happiness tanya can tell raj that she loves someone else..(there they can bring new entry) and then raj would be madly in love by that time and he would get hurt badly.....tanya will pretend to get closer to this guy and raj would get more hurt and then later the whole family will be against tanya ......and would support yuv and tanya would ask for divorce....but would be very broken and would get sick ...but the guy with her only knew her husband is cheating on her he didnt know tanya is sacrificing her love for her sister...and the day yuv will be divorcing tanya the guy can stop him and tell him about tanya......yuv will get mad at first and would come to tanya and ask her..she is selfish only thinking about her happiness , her family's happiness and what about him.....she is not the one to decide those things for him.....and can say that he loves her and doesnt care if she does or not coz she cant stop him and can say some harsh things to tanya...and tanya would be broken and confess her love and would tell him that she thought he is the only person who can keep trish happy...and raj would say that what about him ...for him his happiness starts and ends with tanya.......and she is the only true love in his life.......😆and some how rajdeep would come back and see trishna's situation..and would bring her back.... I dont care about them... I like shalini and all I care is shalini...😆
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Kanhiya can come back....and will reveal tanya's truth and nupur would get to know about it.(only that this is not yuvi's baby)...and she would be mad at raj for not telling him and would tell him to divorce tanya..and would ask tanya to leave that house and would tell raj that he has to decide if he wants his mother or his wife....raj would go with tanya...but then nupur would say something like you wont see my face ever...or something that she wont have any contact with him afterwards.....tanya wouldnt want raj to do that for her so she would ask him to stay with his mom ..in that house........and leave her if he would leave that house for her she would break her promise and would commit suicide or something striking"raj app ko meri zindagi ki kasam"..please dont follow me....and by that time nupur has already insulted kohli's that your daughter had an affair and she was cheating on my son.....and this is not her son's baby.....mr;kohli would be angry ...(tanya wont go home...and trish would call her mom....coz tanya told everyone if they would follow her she would give her life)kul will bring tanya home)or tanya would be at the door and mr';kohli is still angry and got faint........and would tell kul that tanya wont go with yuvi now....even if he asks or comes here.she cant see him...yuvi will be broken and trish would comfort him .......and would tell him that she will bring tanya back......but Mr.kohli is stubborn...trish comes .with yuvi....or just yuvi comes at first....mr.kohli insults him and sends him back.....he looks at tanya...and tanya tells him that she wont go with him and Mr.kohli would say that he would never send his daughter with him....and raj would say that she is his wife....and he has full right to do that and tanya would tell him(painfully)she doesnt want to live with him....yuvi would call her at times but she wont pick up the phone....she would be broken too.....and then trish would come and talk to tanya......or kanhiya will do something to her and yuv would save her and then he can tell her that he cant live without her..........you can add more.......😆
Edited by anushe khan - 16 years ago

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