FF: Ahista Ahista...epilogue~pg.51 11/25

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Hi guys, im sonali and this is my very 1st ff. it's going to be called Ahista Ahista. I have read sooo many ff?s and decided to write my own. Ever since, i heard about prem's character being killed..i' ve been really sad so i thought of writing an ff to keep me and u guyz busy! I hope you guys are interested.

Character sketch:


Heer mann- the rani. a simple and beautiful girl. She is a passionate, very sensitive, and a quiet girl. She sticks with her traditions and principals. She is a kind and respectful girl but when something wrong happens, she can get fired up. But, She loves her parents and sister Sanchi and Ashlesha a lot. She is a lawyer and went out to Canada to get her degree. However, she?s a dreamer and is waiting for her prince charming to take her away one day.

Ashlesha Mann-a modern sweet, loud, talkative, bubbly girl. She loves dressing up but is very down to earth. She can cheer up anyone with her non-stop talking, especially Heer. Ashlesha is the one who keeps the house atmosphere lively and happy all the time. She is very close with her sisters and they all confide in each other all the time and never keep any secrets. Sanchi Mann- a sweet happy girl who sticks with her values?.she is the oldest from her sisters and is the most hard-working too.While Heer and Ashlesha were learning to walk she was learning her abc's. When she was 10, her best friend Karan died because of cancer. At the age of 20, she moved away to America to be a doctor. She hasn't seen her family since six years and misses them. She isn't in a hurry to marry yet.




Balraj Mann- A hard-working father and husband, and loves his family a lot. Every day, he lives with a hope of light that his best friend Lalit will come back from Canada.



Teji Mann- A sweet caring mother and loves her daughters very much. She enjoys spending time with her daughters.

Prem Juenja- He is the raj kumar.a very hot, rich business man. He was raised in Canada but still is very traditional. He loves his brother's and mother Gayatri and is an ideal son. He is also very protective about his sister Veera. Girl's drool over him but he is still waiting to find his rani.


Preet Juenja- He is the guy that every girl dreams of. Preet flirts with every girl he see?s but still didn?t find his dream girl yet. He?s a hot prankster who loves playing pranks on his dad, Lalit. Also, he will do anything for Prem and tells him everything.

Harman Juenja- He is the oldest and responsible son and brother?He used to be funny, talkative but since his wife Anita died?.he has been heart-broken?.his parents are now looking for a girl who will be able to mend Harman?s heart again and show him the path to happiness.




Veera Juenja- When Veera was a little girl she got sent to a boarding school. The lonliness made her heart in to stone. She is now a spoiled modern girl who lives her life by her own rules. But she loves her family and confides in Prem the most. It?s very hard for someone to impress Veera. She never wants to hear the word no and get?s everything she wants.



Lalit Juenja- A successful business man?.He loves his wife and his children but he can?t stand Preet?s pranks. Only one person can calm him down and that is Prem. He misses his birthplace India and his best friend Balraj.


Gayatri Juenja- She's a typical mother and is very caring. She loves her sons and daughter. She was very tight with Teji. She dream?s of the day when her bahu, Heer would join the Juenja parivaar. Other charahcters: Abir Malhotra- Abir is Sanchi's best friend. He is a decent and a rich man. When Sanchi moved to America..she met him and immediately became friends. Sanchi trusts him with her eyes closed and could do anything for him. She only likes him as a friend and and is helping Abir to find a beautiful girl for him. Anjali Puri- She is Ash and Heer's friend. She is a middle class simple shy orphan who is very down to earth. She vists the mann parivaar occasionally and is like teji and balraj's daughter. PM List! rangras pooji123456789 fj08 ashpush amanaranjan Parth Garewal heer hann srklover93 ruexangel miss_hyper rag-ran4ever destinny kish desh rocks! thapanee chillingal16
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Sonali..looks like u r new to IF..welcome to the forum..and the character sketch of ur FF seems different and interesting..go ahead and continue..all the best!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranrags

Hey Sonali..looks like u r new to IF..welcome to the forum..and the character sketch of ur FF seems different and interesting..go ahead and continue..all the best!!

hey thx u r soo sweet😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

intersting
can't wait .....

thx i'll update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guyz im sorry if i had any hindi mistakes...it was my 1st update ever so dont mind plz! Part 1
Even though it was 6 in the morning, someone was frantically hurrying to get ready. Yes...it was our Heer.
Heer (talking to herself) ooof! Mein to late honi wali hoon..flight ki liya.
She stared at herself for one second in the mirror and then frantically started packing again. She quickly put on a simple but beautiful golden salwar suit something that looked like this.


She put on her favourtie payals and got her suitcase. yes, it was finally the day she was going to reunite with her family. After a year of staying in canada and studying, she was finally going to meet her sister and her parents. Quickly she opened the door to her apartment and looked back. Heer sighed. She was going to this place but no one could change destiny. As she called for a taxi, she remembered the day her father called and requested her to come back. That day she had just opened the door to her apartment when her father's call came.

heer- hello?
Balraj- hello..heer beta?
heer- bauji aap? namaste
balraj- aare beta thum ek cellphone kyun nahi late? mein kabse thume phone kar raha tha lekin koi phone nahin answer kar raha tha. Thume ek mobile tho lana chayia.
heer- bauji...aap jante hain mujhe mobile ki juratte nahin hai.
bajui- haan beta mein jaanta hoon liken thum mobile ko bhool aur aage ki soch.
heer-mein kuch samji nahin
bauji- heer beta thum jaldi say ghar aajo....ek kush khabree hai
heer- lekin kyun bauji aur kya kush khabree?
bauji-aab mein thume kush khabree thab batton ga jab thum ghar aajo gi
heer hadnt been able to protest and had agreed.

Heer got in the taxi and asked the taxi driver if he had a mobile..he hestiantly gave it to her and heer thanked him. She called the number that she had memorized since she was a child

Someone- hello?
Heer- hello? Ashlesha?
Ash- (screaming) omg di..aap?
heer-aare ash samblo apne aap ko
ash- omg heer di meini aap ki voice ko itne barso baad soona hai..
heer-aab thum mere avazz har waqt soono gi
heer- mein airport ki pass hoon aur jaldi ghar aar hi hoon
ash-(screaming again) di i cant wait!
heer- lekin mein phele Anjali ki ghar jaanogi aur phir uske saat ghar aaongi..theek hai?
ash-theek hai..di take care of yourself
heer- acha...Im at the ariport..mein phone aab rakti hoon
ash- aacha di...bye

Heer hung up and thanked the driver again. Quickly she paid him and walked towards her destination.




Meanwhile, a handsome guy was saying good-bye to his family at the airport. it was our raj kumar prem!

prem turned towards and family and said good-bye

Prem-aap phikar mat karo...I told rahul to pick me up
Gayatri- theek hai prem lekin thum seeday Balraj bhaisab kay ghar jaana. aur jinta mat karna...hum kal ko india aajogay theek hai?
prem- haan ma theek hai
prem- lekin aap mujhe india aake surprise baatad do gay rite?
lalit- haan beta
lalit handed prem a piece of paper with balrajs address on it
lalit hugged prem and wished him best of luck for the trip.
prem- aare ma yai preet kahan par hai?
gayatri- mein to aabe aabe dekha tha preet ko yahan par
prem suddenly caught a glipmse of preet
prem- woh raha preet...ek larki kay saat

preet was sitting in the waiting seats talking and laughing with someone.

preet-haan tho thumne aapna naam kya baatiya tha?
girl- kareena
preet-aacha kareena..tho mein kay raha tha-
suddenly preet felt a firm grip on his shoulder and immediately knew it was prem.
preet-um aare bahiya aaap...
prem-haan preet mein...
prem- thum yahan par kya kar rai ho?
preet-umm...kuch nahin
prem- theek hai..agar thum kuch nahin kar rai ho tho chalo
prem tried not to laugh as preet protested.
preet finally gave in and walked slowly behinde prem
preet turned around and sadly waved good-bye to kareena


prem said good-bye to his family for the last time. prem grabbed his suitcase and turned to go suddenly veera stopped him and hugged him. even thouh prem was only going to be away from them for one day...veera was going to miss him. prem finally started walking to his manzal.
Edited by sonali09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey!
Thats a fantastic character sketch- love all the characters!
and I loved the first part!
Please continue soon!
?xXx?
Sunayna
Keep up the fab writing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!
Thats a fantastic character sketch- love all the characters!
and I loved the first part!
Please continue soon!
?xXx?
Sunayna
Keep up the fab writing!

thank you sooo much for the lovely comment 😃...i'll try to update in a few days
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice awesome
looking forward for next update....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey good going..it was nice part..u showed the scenes very well side by side..nice..waiting for the 2nd part!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

nice awesome
looking forward for next update....

thx sooo much ill try 2 update soon

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