~RM Treats By Imane~ LAST PART pg.64 NO PMS

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow great vid mixes! 😊.. srry have to do hw .. cant read fanfic 😒
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Wow guys great feedback... i mean 23 views yet only one reply... and no comments back about fanfic i guess i won't have to continue nobody seems to like it... :(
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was sooooo good!!! I wanna know what happens next so please continue soon!!!
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It was really good! You mixed the story of like 4 different movies lol. DDLJ, Dil Mange More ka dialogue, 1st class ke 3rd class passenger, Hero #1, Jab We Met... Beautiful VMS. Continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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itz awesum story..plzzz continue..itz gr8
am a huge fan of rahul n muskaan,
i will b waiting 4 diz
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wow yaar nice ff................plz do continue....................n ur vmz r awesome.............esp meelon ka..................luved it thnx for sharing...............
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya great job; continue pls and pm
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great FF!!!!!!loved the first part.......do continue......
-surbhi😊
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*** 2 years later in Mumbai at a medical conference where India's most prominent Dr. Shashank Gupta is speaking and is out for a mission that requires him to find six best interns to intern at Sanjeevani and of course Muskaan, Ridhimaa, Anjali, Rahul, Armaan, and Atul are present in hopes of getting in to Sanjeevani. It's after the lecture when Muskaan hyper tensed gets up and starts to walk towards the list which has been posted couple of mins a go that has the names of the six lucky interns her friends had already rushed into the crowd but she is still trying to figure out if she should or should'nt**

Muski: Oye papaji… kya karao? Mera selection… nahi muskaan mushkil hain..

( looks at the crowd and people) ufff kya hoga… main toh kabhi bhi nahi dekh pao gii

(Walks in circles looking tensed)

Ridzi: Hey muskaan…Good news mera aur anjie ka selection hogaya. (HUGS)

Muski: (hugs her back but still tensed) acha angie kahan hain? Congratz bol na tha

Ridzi: Pata nahi.. main dekhti hoon, lakin tuney check kiya… tera naam?

Muski: nahi main who bas..

Ridzi: Oh ho.. Muski ja check kar main ajie ko dhoondti hoon ghum na ho ja.. (rushes to crowd)

Muski: Babaji… plz … iss bar.. meri sun layna… (eyes closed prays)

*** on the other hand Armaan and Atul are telling Rahul the same good news about them being selected and rahul who has his doubts is still standing at a distance and has not yet checked the list as well***

Atul: Yaar mujhay toh yakeen he nahi hota.. I mean main… wow….

Armaan: haan Champ…I can't believe it either… lakin kitna acha hogana we can all chill

Abey oye rahul tera kya hua? Check ki list

Rahul: nahi yaar yeh loog hatey toh na…(nervous and anxious tone)

Armaan: loog ya daar…

Atul: daar? Rahul tu daar raha hain yaar… koi baat nahi main ho na.. merey saath chal

( holds on to his arms sympathetically)

Rahul: Abey nahi yaar… main khud jao ga… lagta hain ab loog kuch hatey hain (looks forward)

Armaan: acha toh theek hain jaldi kar waisey he yeh jaga bahut boring hain.. lets go Champ

*** Both Armaan and Atul pat Rahul on the back and leave saying we'll be right outside now rahul is standing and thinking…***

Rahul: Chal rahul abb toh tu jaan lay apni kismet… dekhna na toh hain.. tu dekh le… uppar waley kuch acha he sooch kar rakhna merey liye (looks up and prays as well)

( Starts to walk towards the Bulletin Board)

*** Both Rahul and Muskaan walk towards the list and now are in front of it they stand and stare with confused expression and slowly start to scroll through it with their eyes… Muski points her finger to it and is searching down and rahul is just following it since he is so nervous he does'nt want to be the one to do the scrolling***

Muski: (to herself) Haiyo rabba! yeh list hain toh sirf chey namoon ki lakin bahut lambi….

Rahul: ( to himself) pata nahi mera naam hain bhi ya…

**Both muskaan and rahul have read their names and turn to each other stare and involuntary HUG… as if they have just won the hardest battle of all times***

Muski: Oye ajj main itni khush hoon itni khus ho kay kya bato

Rahul: Yeah main bhi… jaisey mera sapna pura hogaya hoon..

Muski: jaisey ajj yeh duniya meri hoon

Rahul: jaisey ajj mera din hooon.. meri zindagi mujh ko milli hoon

Muski: Jaisey.. (realizes that she is hugging someone that she doesn't know)

Rahul: (also finally gets over the moment and realizes the same)

Muski: (coming back to herself she pulls out of his arms) I.. am.. (looks at him and remembers)

Rahul: I am… (looks at her and remembers)

Muski: Arey… tum…tum yahan?

Rahul: You… tum yahan kaisey?

** Bulletin board near them falls down and they both look at it in confused expression**

Muski: (Laughs) yeh toh hona he tha

Rahul: haan kyunki jab bhi hum tum miltey hain kuch na kuch toh hata he hain…

Muski: Rahul right?

Rahul: haan naam tu suna he hoga… (show's off laughs)

Muski: Oye bas bas.. zayada free shree honey ki koi zaroorat nahi..

Rahuk: haan haan janta hoon teri Patiala ki shai joti

Muski: Tujhay yaad hain...? (is surprised how he remembers even she had forgotten)

Rahul: (surprised himself at how he seemed as if he knew her since forever) Haan who aisay he...

Muski: "Okay" rahein de… tub hi sanjeevaani join kar raha hain?

Rahul: Haan soocha tha kay main aur Sanjeevani do alag alag duniyaan hain…

Muski: maine bhi kuch aisa he soocha tha lakin chooda yaar zindagi hain kabhi apni kabhi kisski

Rahul: Tumharey kehnay ka matlab hain kay zindagi kabhi achi toh kabhi kachi pakki…

Muski: Haan haan wohi kuch… acha chal… chood… baad mein miltey hain..

Rahul: Baad mein kyun?

Muski: Oye kal shal orientation kay liye Sanjeevani mein.. tu kitna bhuudu hain… (knocks his forehead)

Rahul: Huh? Haan… yeah ok lakin tu rehti kahan….

Muski: Chal chal (sees ridzi and angie calling her from distance) mujhay jaana hain…

Rahul: Ok… bye (he stands there in a dazed sort of manner just watching her go)

*** next morning it's interns first day at Sanjevaani and all are excited and nervous as well. They all wake up and everyone seems to look for the best outfit, nice shirts, and matching accessories, ridz picks out a pink churidar while angie a pair of her fav jeans and cute top, Muski is more of a kurti jeans girl and her Patiala jewelry which suits her well… guys well they have their wardrobe Armi in jeans and contrasting double shirt looking cool in aqua blue Atul too has picked out a nice t shirt and pants to wear on his first day and Rahul who woke up late and had 5 mins to get ready threw on his jeans and his chocolate brown t shirt which looks pretty good for a five min to get ready type of a person… they all reach Sanjeevani and are now are in Locker room after a brief intro to each other they all get called to report to the nurse station***

Muski: Chalo… chalein… shruu hui nayi zindagi…

Atul: Haan yaaro chalo chalein.. hummm tummm

Armaan: ok guys lets roll and see what's next (looks at Ridz who thinks that he is a bit too much)

Ridz: Apke baad… (Annoyed expression)

Angie: this is gonna be a good day

Rahul: Sighs and walks off last

** Senior Doctor introduces everyone and says***

Dr. Kirti: Good morning interns… iam Dr kirti and app sab ko welcome karti hoon I'll be assigning you duty jiski app sab ko puri responsibility denay hogii…is that clear

ALL INTERNS: yes mam..

Dr kirti: so lets get started.. Dr. Armaan and Dr. Ridihima you guys pediatric ward Dr. Anjali and Dr. Atul OT assistant and Dr. Muskaan and Dr. Rahuk come with me I have an special assignment for you…

*** All intern gives up a thumbs up to one another and go on to their respective work place while muskaan and rahul are now following Dr.kirti to her cabin***

Dr Kirti: So Dr. Rahul and Dr. Muskaan app doono ko ajj hee sanjeevani choor kar jana ho ga

(Muski and rahul look at each other with "what did we do" looks)

Dr kirti: Interns don't worry appko medical camp per post kiya gaya haaan jahan they need two interns and other interns will be joining you soon app dono abhi he nikaly gay shimla is far and I expect you guys to reach there by night and this time app ko car sanjeevani de raha hain lakin driver ajj nahi aaya hain so you are on your own is that ok?

Rahul: yes… yes mam its fine

Dr kirti: Good… wahan pooch kar call kardegeyay ga (she leaves)

Rahul: Oye tujhsy kya hua hain.. aisey chup kyun hain

Muski: who yeh Dr kuch zayada he nahi lagrahi I mean awwaz dekhe hain aisey jaisy mereay papaji gussa kar rahey hoon… aur ankhein toh jaisey abhi kahlay mujhay

Rahul: (laughs) acha toh yeh sab note kasr rahi thi…

Muski: Nahi main toh ussey gapay lara rahu thi khotey

Rahul: Abey phir shuru hogai abb chal… jaldi nikalna hain

Muski: tujhay driving shriving to atti hain na…

Rahul: nahi.. main palne mein ata jata hoon.. abb chal late horaha hain

*** Both muskaan and rahul are now in the car and as rahul pushes the play button on this CD played to chill with some of his fav songs which include olden collection of olden times and muski makes a face looking back and forth from dc player to rahul's face until he finally notices**

Rahul: Arey babre tu toh churail nikali nhia nahi… bhootni (laughs)

Muski: Oye khutay main job hi hoon yujhay kya hua hain 14th century ki dukhi aatma…hehehhe

Rahul: Plz muskaan meray musiq collection per mat jaa…

Muski: nahi jaarahi bas yeh CD change kar rahi hoon..

Rahul: (stops the car and is about to stop muski when he touches her hand and feels something)

** Muski drops the CD and rahul realizes that he has been holding on to her hand for a while and so Muski feels awkward and she knows that she feels something as well but Rahul moves his hand quickly**

Rahul: Umm.. fine.. Ms.Patiala lakin lets make this work..

Muski: abb kya problem hain? (fixing her self)

Rahul: Addey raastey merey gaaney aadey raastey teray…

Muski: Haan haan dekhegay...

*** Puts on Yeh Ishq hai.. and sings along and does her very cute dance moves…and rahul watches in amazement as he has never met someone so happy and gallant so energetic soo refreshing… he stares at her for quite a while… and she notices and says…***

Muski: Oye Gaari rook.. abhi…

Rahul: (ConfuseD) Kyun kya hua..

Muski: Kaha na bas rook.. rahul stop the car…

Rahul: Ok fine.. (Thinks to himself kahein ussney dekh toh nahi liya kay main.. naraaz toh nahi)

Muski: (walks out of the car and streches) Oye.. rahul.. main gaadi mein behthay behtay bore hogai thi toh... iss liye

Rahul: (TO HIMSELF) tHANK GHAWD..main shamjha...

Muski: Oye chal toh whaan kharey kharey kya doosra India baana nay wala hain

Rahul: Nahi.. huh? kya..

Muski: (Laughs seeing hime soo confused) chal bhook lagi hain kuch khatey hain...

TO BE CONTINUED…

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