Originally posted by: raksha.l
Rehs, my dearest SM...First of all take a bow from me for such a splendid show of creativity...Reading your FF, it didn't feel like this was the first attempt....I admit that I read this FF only because I was the one who asked you to post it in the first place...But what a read it have been...The thing which started off as a responsibility, before I knew, became an addiction....I would wait for each and every part patiently (the very thing why I don't venture into the FFs in the first place...haha...) then there was a gap as I had to be away from the forums for some time and then I came back and read the whole thing together...Wooow, what an experience it was...It was like one cute romantic novel...😍..
1.The main thing abt your FF was the way you kept the people within the realms of their characters....For an ametuer writer like you, its a commendable thing👏
2.Loved the kiddooo and at least to me it a first, the way you made the kid convey his part of the story...lol...It just shows how out of the box you are capable of thinking...👏
3.No stretching...👏
4.No stuuupid twists...👏
And many more such simple simple things, which actually make or break the flow of a story....👏
You are thanking me???😲.😕....Hellloooooo....its me who have to thank you...you not only gave me a good ff to read, you also made me feel like a million bucks...
Haha, you are one of my special members on this Forum and you know it too...😉😆
luv,
Raksha
Itti Si Khushi Sab TV
