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Love is abt surrender ---- of one?s heart, soul, mind and body?..the bonding of two souls?..dancing.?.intertwining?..becoming whole?.complete?.one?What else matters?

THIS IS THE STORY ABT THE ETERNAL JOURNEY OF TWO SOULMATES / TWINFLAMES?..A MIRACULOUS?MAGICAL?MYSTICAL?ROMANTIC?BEAUTIFUL?YET SAD ?DESTINED & FATEFUL JOURNEY OF TWO LOVERS?.WHO WILL OR WILL NOT MEET AT THE END????

What happens when you fall in love? When the Cupid strikes, love bytes! Its lovebugs or loveblues or just an affair of the heart! Whatever be it, it?s the reason to live, a language spoken in comfortable silences. It enters gently into your heart unannounced and changes lives forever! Love is timeless. It?s the memory of yesterday, the happiness of today and the promise of tomorrow. It brings new dimensions in life that makes everything seem worthwhile. And then, when there is hope, there is faith, when there is faith, there is love and when there is love, Miracles happen!

HERE I?M PRESENTING TO U THE PROLOGUE TO THE STORY OF TWO ETERNAL LOVERS?..............................

~:PROLOGUE:~

? Pyaar se tab tak pyaar naa karo, jab tak pyaar tumse pyaar naa kare?..aur jab pyaar tumse pyaar kare, tab usse itna pyaar karo ki voh kisi aur se pyaar na kare??

Kitne khoobsurat ehsaas se bhara shabd he ye ?PYAAR?, joh dill ki gahriyon mein ek mithi sihran si jaga jati hai?Kabhi ?Kabhi sochti hun?..?Akhir kyun adhiktar PYAAR ka anjaam JUDAI hi hota hai..????Tab chahkar bhi javab nahi mill pata. Jab tak pyaar nahi hua hota hai, Tab tak toh sab thik rahta hai?Par jane kyun Pyaar ki chingari sulagne par dill uski ek jalak..ek nazaar ke liye betaab hone lagta hai?..Har pal bas uska hi intezaar rahta hai. Uske bin sab kuch suna suna lagne lagta hai?Akhir PYAAR mein aisa KYUN hota hai???????

Iss Sawal ka javab mein aaj tak nahi jaan pai. Haan, tab Mirza Galib ka vah mashoor sher barbaas yaad aa jata hai?.

?ISHQ par kisi ka jor nahi, yeh toh vah ATISH he Galib ;

joh JALAI na JALE aur BUJHAI na BUJHE??

Kehte hai, pyaar ki gahrai ko joh jitna Adhik jaan ne lagta hai?voh usme utna Adhik dubta chala jata hai. Ise achi tarah se ek Pyaar bhare dill ke alawa kon samaj sakta hai. Maine bhi Pyaar kiya hai, ya keh lijiye, Pyaar ko hi aur Pyaar mein hi jiya hai aur abb tak Ji rahi hoon. Halanki iss pyaar se vapas milan nahi hua, lekin ek ruhani milan ke ehsaas se hum dono hi sarobar hai.

Mujhe yaad hai voh din jab usne mere gussel svabhav par ek thikhi tippani ki thi, ? Itne khoobsurat chehre par itna baad surat Gussa aur juban se itni kadvi boli aap par bilkul nahi janchti, zara isme mithas ki chashni toh ghol kar dekhiye, apke jivan mein shahad hi shahad ghul jayega.?

Bas uske yeh shabd mere dil ki diwaron par iss kadar likh gaye ki voh likhavat aaj tak nahi mit saki hai. Uska toh pata nahi, lekin mein uss par mar-miti aur aaj tak jaise usi ke naam par ji rahi hun. Voh aksar khud age badhkar mujse baat karta aur phir dubara milne ka vada bhi leta. Mein ziddi svabhav ki hone ke bavzood..kuch nahi keh pati. Vah har baar muskurate hue milta. Uski dilkash muskurahat mere jehan mein sihran paida kar deti. Vah hamesha dill khol kar mujse milta. Dhero pyaar bhari baatien karta, par kabhi yeh jahir nahi hone deta ki usse mujse chahat hai??????.

?..kyunki usse lagta ki kahin voh mujhe kho naa de, kahin mein usse rusva naa ho jaon. Voh mujse bilkul usi tarah pesh aata, jis tarah

? khuda pesh aata hai apni iss Deewani se.?

Abb?ajj mere kan taras jate hai uske pyaar ke izhaar ko sun ne ke liye. Har lamha ek umeed rahti hai ki ajj woh apni dill ki baat mujse kahega. Ajj mera ARMAAN ake dill mein chipe apne ehsaas ko shabdoon ka roop dega. Lekin intezaar bas intezaar hi rah jata hai.

Zubaan se bhale hi vah kuch na kahe, lekin uski ankhe haal-e-dill bayaan kar deti thi, par mein samajkar bhi naa samajh banane kaa abhinay kiya karti thi. Humara milna, saath mein hasna-bolna, hume ek alag hi duniya mein le kar chala jata tha, jahan par hum dono ke alava koi na hota????.

Phir voh dor bhi aaya jab mujhe laga ki mein use kho dungi. Uski judai bhar ki kalpana se hi mein sihar uthi. Mein shayad apni nadani mein kuch galat bhi kar baithti, koi galat kadam utha leti, lekin usne sabra se kaam lete hue mujhe roka hi nahi, balki samjhaya bhi,

? Humare bich yeh jo rishta hai, uska koi naam nahi na hi koi pehchan hai. Yeh ek ehsaas hai, jo hamari aatmaon (souls) mein hamesha rahega. Hum dono hi jante aur samajhte hai ki yeh humare liye kya hai. ?

Voh shaks meri rooh mein ajj bhi basta hai, chahe voh mere paas nahi hai. Humara rishta ajj bhi utna hi pavitra hai, jitna pehle tha.

Abb?ajj mere kan taras jate hai uski pyaar bhari meethi meethi majedar baatein sunne ko, mere kan taras gaye hai uske pyaar ke izhaar ko sunne ke liye. Naina taras gaye hai piya daras ko. Usse dekhne ki chah mere rom-rom mein agg laga deti hai. Usse door jane dene ki izzazat mujhe dhik karti hai. Uska mujhe bahhon mein bharna, mujhe choomna mujhe tadpata hai. Uska mujhe pyaar bhari nazaroon se dekhna, baat-baat par kalai thamna, meri bah marodna mujhe bohot yaad aata hai. Uski choti-choti gustakhiyon par ajj?abb bada pyaar aata hai.

Ajj asal maino mein voh mujhe apni DEEWANI bana gaya hai. Abb mujhe ehsaas hota hai ki usne sahi kaha tha?

? Ajj tumhe bhale hi mere pyaar ki kadr na ho..par yaad rakna..ek din aisa aega, mera pyaar rang laega?..

Phir tum meri prit ki laat mein aisi matvari ho jaogi, ki tumhe ajj mera na banana tadpaega?tum meri ho jaogi..sirf aur sirf meri.?

Voh sahi tha..ajj mein bas uski hoon..sirf uski?agar who ek baar mere samne aa jaye toh main usse bataon..usse kahun..ki mein sirf aur sirf teri hoon?sirf aur sirf??.

? TERI DEEWANI???.

If wishes were horses, beggars would ride,
If dreams had wings, one could be pegasus and fly!

Life is a bundle of experiences.
One has to cross the stormy seas, climb the rugged mountains and walk through the thickest shrubs.

Sometimes, what you say, you never mean, what you dream, you never get, What you think, you don't expose!

THE SAME IS THE CASE WID ME..N MAY BE U..N MAY BE..BOTH OF THESE LOVERS..

JUS WAIT N WATCH?..

?TERI DEEWANI?

CUMIN SOON..

Hey all..Well I know u all might be ready wid u?r shoes n sandals for givin me a good thrashing buh still..tomatoes or eggs phekne se pehle plzzzzzplzzzzz plzzzzz apne comments/compliments/appreciation/criticism/suggestion..plzzzzplzzzzz chod dena..plzz plzz pehle veh sab post kar dena phir mujhe ande aur dande marna?

Jokes apart..buh seriously yaar..I had a dream..an absurd one?buh do not worry this is not based on that dream?hehe?well I took a part of the dream n thought of ..U know bringing a totally new concept of Fic writing?Well sum of u might be knowing that I?m crazy abt reading n writin n sooooooo tis after havin tis dream..I thought that why not use this idea in another fic?..and truly speakin I worked on to make this PROLOGUE? I rilli had to work for making this PROLOGUE?So if?IF at all u think that this FF n writer is worthwhile sparing a few moments for..then plzzzz plzzzzz post u?r comments..plzzzzz?.

One more IMP NOTE:

As I have mah exams goin on..this is the mock n final is in December..so I?d be continuing this FF as soon as my exams end?surely..coz after that I?ll be free..n I hav written down or shud I say penned down the nxt few prts..they jus need to be typed n posted (for which I?m soooo lazy..lolzz)??SO SURELY I?d be continuing this FF after/in DECEMBER..or may be IF POSSIBLE (there is a biiiiigggg IF) I?d try n cont it asap..in b/w the exams..or sum time b/w the mock n final?..

SO FOR NOW..THIS IS THE PROLOGUE?I HOPE U LIKED IT..I LOVED TYPING IT?RILLI I DID..N I JUS WISH THAT U LIKED READIN IT AS MUCH OR MAY BE A LIL LESS THAN ME WRITIN IT?..PLZZZ DO COMMENT OR POST OR CLICK THE THANK U BUTTON??😉

Waitin for u?r replies eagerly?..

Love ya all?..t.cccc

-Ur?s Ever Madhu😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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tadaaaaaaaaaaaaa"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!here i am first. u know i wud be. LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wow!!!!!!!!!!gr8. interesting and fantabulous. CONTINUE SOON!oh, yr exams aren't over.!!!!!!!!!!oh well. i was thinkin wait 4 you until i update bike race. i guess i ahev to do it without u.miss u.😭😭 love, samira
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Do hav a look at this banner....
All credit goes to Anki ( magicgirlankita)..my sweetu si pyaari si sumtimes naughty buh lovely sister..who took out her precious time for making tis banner for me...
Thank u sooooo much Anki..meri pyaari si badi behna..I thank u from the bottom n core of mah heart..thank u soooo much....Love ya jaanu....☺️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow that was soo gud👏👏👏.it was very touching and emotional.ur prologue was great,i felt like it was wow!!!!! i felt soo peacefull and pleasent reading this.
i am sure u worked alot for the prologue,because every line was soo beautiful.the way u explained the love between them both was great.i am waiting to read the next part.gud luck for ur exams.continue soon............
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Posted: 17 years ago
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after reading ths.I must say"mein b ho gaye tere diwani".Actually i;m a silent reader but ur skills of writing fascinate me. Plz continue soon if u can
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: samijan

tadaaaaaaaaaaaaa"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!here i am first. u know i wud be. LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!wow!!!!!!!!!!gr8. interesting and fantabulous. CONTINUE SOON!oh, yr exams aren't over.!!!!!!!!!!oh well. i was thinkin wait 4 you until i update bike race. i guess i ahev to do it without u.miss u.😭😭 love, samira

Oh sami di...u beat me in reserving my posts hehe😆...Well I'm more thatn happy to see that u r the first one to compliment me...yuhuuuuuu..😉😉😉.Ahhh I shud hav guessed that the first comment was gonna cum from mah sweetu sis😛...Awwwww thanx a lot for praising me sooooo sooooo much...Yeah that's so sad isn't it..mah exams aren't over..😭...Oh!!!!!that's so sweet of u to wait for me..buh I guess I won't be able to cum n u know.....I'll try mah best to cum.😊.do PM me wheneva u update..Miss ya too jaanu....😭😭
Love ya..t.cccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasya

wow that was soo gud👏👏👏.it was very touching and emotional.ur prologue was great,i felt like it was wow!!!!! i felt soo peacefull and pleasent reading this.

i am sure u worked alot for the prologue,because every line was soo beautiful.the way u explained the love between them both was great.i am waiting to read the next part.gud luck for ur exams.continue soon............

Awwww thank u sooooo much for complementing me😳..thank u sooo vry much....I'm glad that u liked it. 😉😉Awwwwww so u read tis whole very carefully n I'm happy that u did..😛I like to please my readers..If thay feel good..then I too feel Great...😃...Thanku for wishing me luck..thanx a lot yet again..😛..Will try n cont asap...
Love ya......t.cccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: janu1610

after reading ths.I must say"mein b ho gaye tere diwani".Actually i;m a silent reader but ur skills of writing fascinate me. Plz continue soon if u can

Hey jaanu di (hpe ca call u that)....Thank u sooooo much for u'r exaggerating compliment.😛.thanx a lot..will cont asap....
Love ya jaanu di...t.cccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey MAdhu u r fantastic man................Very touching Prologue.............I was amazed.............i could feel every bit of it...........wonderful writing..... Hats off..............👏 Desperately looking forward for the updates.............Plzz Plzz continue asap........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Oh sami di...u beat me in reserving my posts hehe😆...Well I'm more thatn happy to see that u r the first one to compliment me...yuhuuuuuu..😉😉😉.Ahhh I shud hav guessed that the first comment was gonna cum from mah sweetu sis😛...Awwwww thanx a lot for praising me sooooo sooooo much...Yeah that's so sad isn't it..mah exams aren't over..😭...Oh!!!!!that's so sweet of u to wait for me..buh I guess I won't be able to cum n u know.....I'll try mah best to cum.😊.do PM me wheneva u update..Miss ya too jaanu....😭😭
Love ya..t.cccccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

awwwwwwwwww, sweety, don't worry. yr exams will be over. as they say there will be dark clouds but it doesn't take a lot of time 4 the sun's ray to go thru. Just like tht yr exams willl be over. I know it. And don't orry. I will pm u. U will be the first. and ya i did beat u.What did u expect?? yr diii wudn't come. U shud know tht it wud have been me after all u r like my sis.😊
And don't panic. ok😊i might update this weekend. Crossing my fingers tht i don't have any exams.LOL!we r on the same boat madhu.
love,
samira

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