RM ff 'BILLO RANI 'updated prt2 on pg 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi my name is nada and i m crazy for RM n coz in the serial they have so less scenes to main apnay dil ki baat ko is story say biyaan karoon gi its my first attempt on writing a fanfic on my most favourite jodi RAHUL- MUSKAAN so plz bear with it

the characters will be the same but i will start from the flashback as how the tom n jerry becomes enemyn khoon k piyasey of each other

Amost 18 yearsago

it was mr garewal sons birthday a cute little boy is dressed in a spiderman costume and receiving congratulations n gifts from all the other guests he goes to his father n ask

r: papa main cake kab katoon ga

papa: thodi dair aur beta

r: but papa meray sab freinds a gaye hain

papa: nahin beta thodi dair aur remember i told u our new neighbours have come and he is my best freind he also has a adorable princess so lets just wait for them

r:says very sweetly yes papa (but in his head wat the hell my freinds are waiting i want to play , i want to eat that specialy made spiderman cake its my birthday n here i have to wait for mr chhada n their little princes arghhhh)

sometime later when rahul was playing a fighting game with his freind mr chaddas family arrived and his father called him he goes very irritatedly

papa :rahul meet our new neighbours mr n mrs chaada n their daughter muskaan int she cute

r:(looks from upto down to a plump little girl with very curlry hair clad in a foolish pink princess dress which was too tight he think shen looks like a jerk , but says very sweetly _)yes papa shes very beautiful

r : very impatiently) papa ab cake kat loon

papa: no beta first say hello to muskaan introduce her to ur freinds n than we wiill cut the cake

r (who wants to scream but cant as his father is very strict )says very sulkily HII MUSKAAAN chalo mein tumhain apnay freinds say milata hoon

now muskaaan who was silent for this whole period as his mother has instructed her to behave at the party look at the birthday boy and thinks in her head

(ohhhhhhhh so he is the birthday boy hayee kitna patla hai lagta haai ghar mein kuch khany ko nahin milta par papa to keh rahay thay in k pass 5oo cows hain lagta hai sara doodh beich detay hoon gay aur is ka costume to dekho red n blue arghhhhhhhhh i hate this combination aur upar say kitna kitna loose hai lagta hai bhaday ka hai.........oh n hes also wearing specs foolish spiderman kabhi specs lagata hai )

r: (calls her impatiently)chalo na kya sooch rahi ho .......(moti itni hai hilnay k liye bhi soochna padta hai )😡

m(wakes from her lala land n start following him as her mother has told her not to misbehave ) and says .........i like your dress (arghhhhhhhhhhhh)🤢😉

r : thanks : i also like your dress ( that filthy pink yuckkkkkkkkkk)🤢

so rahul introduce her to his freinds...........shes so freindly everybody was playing with her , talking to her and ignoring rahul as she knew so,many different games everyone forgets about the birthday and when rahul calls his freind for the cake cutting ceremony nobody was eager to go with rahul so rahul gets very angry as he wants to show off his spiderman cake but nobody was giving attention tro him soi he grabs muskaan hands and take her to the table and his freinds also followeing her

m: chodo mujhay u dont know how behave with a beautiful girl

r: ( who was taking deep breaths as he had to drag that fat girl )😵oh i m so sorry ( ha she think shes a girl ..shes a bulldozer ........and more what she think shes beautiful , bean bag bhi kabhi khoobsurat hota hai eewwww ) shall we cut the cake

m: (says carelessly ) as ur wish (hunhh)

but as soon as rahul starts to blow the candles muskaan sneezes and blow all the candles😆n rahul was😡

now rahul was boiling with anger but his mother says dont woory and again light the candles

but this time when again rahul was just start to cut the cake muskaan drops 😲

and wat does she drops i will tell u in the next part i hope u people like it i knew its a little long and might be boring for some people as its their childhood but trust me shrooaat say likhoon gi tabhi to un ka character analysis ho paye ga

plz give comments and ne suggestion to improve the story

thank you

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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz continue.it sounds v.funny😆and its v.nice too👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh how sweet!!!! I love it! You should move it to the ffs section or else the mods will close ur topic. Awsome job hun! R-M are also my fave! Me and Sunita Di were the first ones on the forum to start an R-M FF and now we have another!!! yay! continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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RM R MY FAV PLEASE DO COUNTIUE.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice.....Rahul n Muskaan n one of my favourites as well....arent they just so cute!....well pls continue soon...n if u dont mind...can u pls pm .....thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww they're soo cute
plz continue it n pm whenever u update!
i'm a huge rm fan...i love it....ha ha "bulldozer"
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nada

r: (calls her impatiently)chalo na kya sooch rahi ho .......(moti itni hai hilnay k liye bhi soochna padta hai )😡

r: ( who was taking deep breaths as he had to drag that fat girl )😵oh i m so sorry ( ha she think shes a girl ..shes a bulldozer ........and more what she think shes beautiful , bean bag bhi kabhi khoobsurat hota hai eewwww ) shall we cut the cake

😆LMAO....i fell down reading those lines.......good start!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy hun
umm...
sorry to say but i already have a ff called hum tum on AR and some other DMG charcters...
i dunno if its possible to have both ff with the same name...
sorry...
i wouldn't be saying this if i had alreayd finished theff... but its still going...
sorry...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey hi guys
can any1 plzz tell me whn is dr.muskan( drushti dhumi)'s real birthdate???
plzzzzzz guys some1 tell meeee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys a big thanks to all of u who read it n like and even a more bigger thanks to those who have commented on it so lots of love for lrl,bhavni, mits ,princess, disha, n tina, ashiyuvi ( hey i read in some post that u r punjabi so plz will u help me in this fic as i m not a punjabi so sometimes its difficult to translate a word in punjabi )

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