Angad is going to mumbaiEpi 3 sudhir

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ohh I am inspired by pallavi didi's post .. suddenly an idea came to my mind.. Its like a game as well as you can show your talent .. and we know there are so many talented ppl in our forum.. lets start.. I am explaining it how to play..
Its a serial .. I am starting it with its starcast .. and their introduction .. whats their character..
I will write 1st episode.. then some one will continue it.. again another person will continue its next part.. okay..
Serial is... '' Kaisa ye pyar hai.... part 2
characters Name .. Angad.. Kripa.... Misti Prithvi.. . soni.. Jeet.. Dilip.. Naina.. .. Names are similar. but not charater.. you can add more character no problem
I am starting
Angad is the only son of Mr Dilip Khanna and Naina khanna.. Dilip Khanna is a Bank officer .. He lives in Simla , with his wife, son and Mother ..
Kripa ... Daughter of a Business man Mr Sunil Sareen.Its their Family business. his wife Mrs Jaya sareen .. Kripa has a younger sister name Kriti..
they live in Mumbai and they are very famous and Rich.. Kripa is an ordinary student.. she is a 2nd yr commerce student. and spoilt brat Drives Honda city 😆 Her sister is in 12th class ..
Kripa's Dadi lives with them like Angad.. and She is very sweet lady.. loves Kripa very much and pampers her always.. Now todays Episode end.. Kyph lover continue Next episode.. mind it you can add more characters .. add any thing no problem..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Deeksha.. But you play it .. write next episode.. kuchh bhi just agey badna hai..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudhirm_2007

Thanks Deeksha.. But you play it .. write next episode.. kuchh bhi just agey badna hai..

i am not that creative srry!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 Idea kuchh jaana pehchana sa lagta hai! 😆
I will try to write this when I can...... although Im too busy with my FF, but I cant resist the temptation. 😉😳
Sudhir Bhai, can u plz edit ur title with Part and page no when we update? 😳
KYPH 2 😆
Scene 1:
Morning in Sharma's Luxury flat in a Mumbai High-rise building.
Jaya Sharma is making breakfast for everyone. She tells the maid to call Kripa and Kriti : Zara unhey bula dena, nahin toh dono aaj College aur school ke liye late ho jayengey!
The maid Shanta knocks on Kripa's door: Kripa Beti, utho, college ka waqt ho gaya.
A slim, lovely hand pushes down the pink velvet blanket, silky dark hair falls like a curtain over the pink polka dotted pillow . A pair of lovely chocolate brown eyes open, then squeeze shut from the glare of sunlight pouring in from the gaps in crimson velvet curtains : Uuunnhhh! Abhi mujhey aur sona hai. Aaj 11 bajey pehli class hai. Shanta Tayi, tum jaao yahan se!
Shanta Tayi complains to Dadi approaching with a bowl in her hand : Badi Maa, dekhiye Kripa nahin uth rahi.
Dadi smiles: Tu jaa, Kriti ko utha, main Kripa ko jagati hoon.
Dadi knocks on Kripa's door: Beti, zara uthkar dekh, main terey liye besan-santrey ka lep banakar layi. Abhi laga le, nahin toh sukh jayega.
Kripa couldnt resist the offer. Her Dadi made her the best natural facials from fruits and veggies, honey, milk and besan, which made her skin glow like the costly pearls that her father sold in his Jewelry Store.
She gets up and stretches lazily with a yawn: Aati hoon, Dadi!
Her pink and black design satin nightgown falls down to her calves, kissing her shapely legs as she walks gracefully to open the door.
Dadi hands her the bowl and smiles: Good Morning, Beta! Jaa, mooh haath dhokar yeh lep laga le, phir nashta karney aaja.
Kripa grins : Good Morning, THANKS, Dadi, U are the BEST! Main 15 minute mein aati hoon.
She goes to her bathroom and after her ablutions, applies the weird smelling paste on her face and neck. After it sets, she walks to the Dining room to join the rest of the family, her Papa, Mama, sister, brother and Dadi at the Breakfast table.
Kriti laughs: Didi, tum phir se Dracula ki Amma bankar aa gayi ?(pointing to her green face)
Kripa rolls her eyes: Dont be jealous, Haan! Jab yeh lep utarungi toh Ash se bhi sundar dikhungi! So keep quiet! Tujhey bhi Dadi ke lep laganey chahiye, phir terey Pimples nahin niklengey.
Kriti is more of a tomboy even in 12 th Grade, she laughs and shakes her head: Naa Baba, mujhey Bhootni nahin banna. Kitni weird smell aati hai, Dadi, please dont mind!
Dadi smiles benignly: Kriti Beta, main terey liye khushbudaar lep bana doongi, tu fikr mat kar.
Kriti: No, Thanks, Dadi, main aisey hi theek hoon! Mujey Didi ki tarah Super Model ya actress nahin banna.
Kripa had modelled for a family friend's Fashion Boutique since she was 17. She also wanted to be an actress but her family wanted her to complete her education first.
Jaya hands Kripa a plate of buttered toast and Uppma. The Sharmas are strict vegetarians.
Kripa wrinkles her nose: Nahin Mama, Uppma nahin, its so fattening! Mujhey Juice aur dry toast chahiye!
Jaya scolds her: Itni si umr se hi Dieting karegi toh padhai kaisey karegi? Kamzor pad jayegi!
But Papa sides with Kripa: Agar wo nahin khaana chahti toh zor kyun karti ho? Rehney do, waisey bhi Uppma mein bahut Calories hain. Mujhey bhi nahin khana chahiye yeh sab. (he ruefully looks down at his potbelly)
Jaya sighs in resignation and hands Kripa some dry toast and Juice.
An hour later, dressed in a smart, sexy black and white knee length dress, her silky hair open down her shoulders, dangling earrings, a designer handbag and shoes....Kripa steps into her Honda City and zooms off at great speed.
Her Papa shakes his head as he gets into his Ford Ikon: Ek din yeh ladki accident karkey rahegi! Itni tez gaadi chalati hai! Bachpan se hi apni marzi ki maalik hai, kisiki bhi baat nahin sunti!
Jaya who was handing him the Lunch Box shook her head sadly: Aapki aur Maa Jee ki laad pyaar ne isey bigaad diya. Bhagwan karey yeh kabhie koi galat raastey per naa chaley. Main toh kehti hoon iski umr 20 saal ho gayi hai, ab iski shadi kara deni chahiye. Hamari biraadari mein ladkiyon ki shadi jaldi hi hoti hai.
Papa objected at once : Nahin Jaya! Isey padhney do, agar kaam karna chahey toh karney do. Mainey hamesha apni betiyon ko Beton ki tarah dekha hai. Usey apni zindagi jeeney do, shadi ke liye toh abhi samay baaki hai. Let her enjoy and live her dreams.
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Next part: Angad speaks to his parents in Shimla, about moving to Mumbai to study Commerce there, but his real dream is to be a singer.....a famous ROCKSTAR someday! 😳
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Edited by pallavi25 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg what a start.😆. starting me hi super duper HIT.👏👏👏. Aab to Hero appearance hua hi nehi.. Pallavi Didi you are genius..
Edited by sudhirm_2007 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudhirm_2007

omg what a start.😆. starting me hi super duper HIT.👏👏👏. Aab to Hero appearance hua hi nehi.. Pallavi Didi you are genius..

Thanks sudhir! 😳😆😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lil confusion 😕

wat is kripa's surname ?
sudhir wrote sareen, pallavi said sharma

kahin kripa ke do do......!😲 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: annu127

lil confusion 😕

wat is kripa's surname ?
sudhir wrote sareen, pallavi said sharma

kahin kripa ke do do......!😲 😆


I wrote it sareen But also said it ,You can change it or add new things, If you want. ..so pallavi didi preferred Sharma.. Its okay..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Episode.....3
Angad is playing guiter and singing his favourite song'' Aab na jaa'' in his room
Naina entered '' Angad kya hai beta, papa aur dadi kabse tumhara intezaar kar raha hai dinning table par. aur tum ho ki gana gaa reh ho?''
Angad.. ohh sorry, sorry mamma.. chalo chalo..
Angad said sorry papa, sorry Dadi.. mere liye aap logo ko intezaar karna para..
Dilip Angad's papa said .. Haan beta badi zor se bhookh laga hai..kahan thhe tum?
Then everyone is eating, except Naina .. she is serving ,, and supervising everything
Dilip asked '' Angad tum kya socha, agey kya karoge?
Angad said 'papa mai mumbai me post graduation karna chahta hoon.. wahan scope zyada hai.. Actually he wants to go there for his music career.. But doesnt reveal it now.. Dilip doesnt like Angad's music obssession and Angad knows it .. In the mean time
Naina said . Angad aur ek roti lo beta.. Angad .. no..mamma Bahut ho gaya..
Dilip said.. okay but rahoge kahan?
Angad said '' ohh manage ho jayga.. I have many friends there...
Episode End..Precap..
Angad is going Mumbai... Reached there.. continue..
Edited by sudhirm_2007 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part! cant wait to read more!!

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