Koi TUm Sa - part 3 - twist in the part

Part 3

Pratham was at home.. thankign god for saving gauri.. he was very happy for her…

GM.. saw pratham in mandir.. she was happy to see him there…

Next day while having breakfast.. pratham told his parents that he will join office from today.. all r surprise to see the change..

Yash called.. pratham.. gm told him that pratham sis goignt o join office today and wont be able to meet them..

Yash is shocked /surprised..

Prtham joined the office and .. cacth up everythignv ery easily..

And at night pratham went to the club .. eith yash and hiten..

Hiten: pratham.. we heared that u joined.. office..

Pratham: thast true.. actually.. I reliesed that I without any reason r neglecting the office.. only for gauri.. who can never be mine..

Yash. Pratham.. dont worry if not gauri koi aur mil jaye ghi tumhein..

Hiten: yash (whisping) plzz ..

After a while pratham left

Some days fater.. when gauri had recover .. ravi took her for a party.. she was with anita.. anita took her out and they start talking..

Gauri: I dont believe.. it has pratham really joint office.

Anita: yes gauri.. well I was surprised.. when he helped u when u were in hospital.. u r really lucky tumhein do .. do insan pyaar karte hain..

Humein to apna bela lo.. some one said..

Gauri turned… away.. and saw few goons..

They tried to misbehave with her.. anita tried to stop.. them but they pushed her away.. ravi came there.. but didn't do anythign .. gauri slapped them and run away.. and reach ravi..

After a while.. a car stopped out side the party.. pratham came out of it.. along with hiten and yahs.. he finds..anita injured.. he asked her where is gauri.. she told him.. that she left.. and ravi dotn even.. said ahythign to the goons..

Pratham .. run to catch..

And start beating gauri.. him.. and warned him not to put his eyes on gauri.. and any other girl..

After some days.. the pandit told abotut he mohurrat of gauri and ravis wedding..

Pratham was broken.. and knew that nothing could happen..

But known that .. suddnely there will be a way for pratham..

Gauri got a call.. that .. ravi has been out of an accident.. and they coudltn find his car… there was ravis chautha.. pratham came with a mala.. fro ravis pic..

Gauri save.. pratham.. she hodl his coller.. and start shouting that pratham killed her ravi..

Her mother tried to get him free.. and gauri fainted…and fall down… everyone looked at her and took her away.. the doctor came.. and told them hats she is a little disturped.. that why.. btu she wills end the tests.. and will tell them later..

After some days.. gauri mother came witht eh report.. where it was written that gauri was pregnant..

Gauri was shocked.. to see it.. and didn't believe that she was pregnant.. her mother slapped her.. for it

But gauri knew there was something worng.. and she wanted to meet the doctor..

At the doctors clinic..

The doctor.. was takign with pratham

Doc: pratham.. tis the 1^st and last tiem I ever did semthing .. wrong.. who issi liye coz u r like my brother.. otherwise

Pratham: I know didi.. but I didn't have any other choice.. gauri ko paney ka aur koi rasta nahin tha..

Doc. Tum..

She hears wardboy saying that the doc. Is busy.. pratham hear and says its gauris voice..

The doc. Told pratham to hid in the cupboard.. gauri came in when pratham goes in the cupboard..

Gauri: soc. Plzz I beg.. u .. to tell the truth.i know im not pregnant.. as I havent done anythign wrong.. (gauri was crying)

DOC: gauri I can understand.. par par…report to yehi kehti.. haan.. and in my life neer that's kidn of sort has haoppen ever.. par if u want.. then u can get a cehck up of some other doctors..

Gauri stand..s quit and leaves..

Pratham came out..

doc: uff.. ab kya.. agar gauri kissi aur doctor the consult kar liya to..

Pratham: no didi I know here .. she wont do it..

Doc: to ab..

Pratham: ab kya .. my next plan..

Gauri came home.. she run into her room.. and start ceying..

Gauri: (thinking) how could this happen.. I didn't do anythign wrong.. aisa koi waqt hi nahin aya.. tke yeh saab..

After some days.. pratham came to gauri house to say.. that he wanna marry gauri..

Gauri was refusing.. but her mohter told her.. what will she do .. if this child was born.. and etc.

gauris father came back froa busniess trip and heared what gauris mother said.. he slapped gauri infront of pratham.. and said she should die.. pratham run to gether free.. uncle plzz.. its not her fault..

pratham: uncle u don't worry im gonna marry her.. there wont be any problem.. but u dotn tell my parents about the pregnnacy when they come..

gauris parents leaved from there ..,. and they promsie they wont say anything..

gauri pushed pratham ways..

pratham: hey dotn do that

gauri: how dare u.. I wont marry u in any cost..

pratham: ofcourse u will.. ur parents just said yes.. so.. my to be wife juts wait and watch..

the mairrage was fixed afetr some days.. gari was crying.. and mrmebering ravi by holding his pic..

anita came there and told her to forget.. about him..

gauri: anita tum bhi..

anita: haan u r getting married to pratham now.. belive me as fare I know him he is a really good.. its just his.. behaviour which is bad.. but he isa good human being..

the wedding day.. at the mandip.. pratham was waiting.. gauri was siting infront of the mirror and watchign her self..

anita came to get her down… and she she reach the mandip.. pratham gave a wickhed smile.. and whisper to her that… he has a big surpise for her.. she just have to wait till they to at his palce..

bedaai took place.. and gauri enterd mittal house..

after a while.. few girls took her into prtaham room.. and made her sit on the bed.. but she stands up.. and start wathcign out from the window..

pratham came into the room.. she looked at him, he smiled..

pratham: so u want the surpise haan.. (he took a file and gave it to her).. yeh lo.. read it

gauri took the file.. and read her name out side it.. she open it, she didn't undertsand anything…

pratham: let me tell u what it is.. this file .. is ur report.. of the day u fainted.. there is written that u r a little weak nothing else.. and yes it also mean that u are not pregnant..

gauri are shocked..

pratham: yeh saab maine tumhein paney ke liye kiya.. tha.. wisay I could also call the child which sint there.. mine.. but kya karoon I couldn't..

u remember.. the day when u drank whisky.. and had to stay in the girls hsotel.. it was me who took u to the girls hsotel and told anita not to say who brought u here…

I could also .. say that day ..

Gauri was about to slap him.. when he hold her hand.. and pulled her toward himself..and hold her tiet

Pratham: u might think.. im a bad guy.. but im not.. its u who made me like this.. I wanted to be ur friend.. but no u always.. run away from me.. what did I do.. haan

Gauri: pratham.. leave me..

Gauri took her other hand to slap him.. but he also hold the other hand then.

Pratham: u know what ur parents think ur pregnant.. hai na.. but u r not if I want to I can do what ever I want with u.. but no.. I want to win u with love.. not like this..

he leaves her hands.. and went out..

gauri gets tears in her eyes..

end

it's shaping quite diffrently than i thought. But it's amazing. Please continue and i think u must inform about this fanfic in kyunki forum so tha u can get a lot of support.

i didnt udnertsnad .. how what shoyld i say to them

Originally posted by: gain

it's shaping quite diffrently than i thought. But it's amazing. Please continue and i think u must inform about this fanfic in kyunki forum so tha u can get a lot of support.

Originally posted by: Nausheenghtfan

i didnt udnertsnad .. how what shoyld i say to them

i mean u should inform them that u r writing a fanfic for HitenGauri here. I am sure they will definitily read it as it is amazing

REALLY GOOD.... THANX CONTINUE SOON........