[[PART10--Pg19]]DMG FF-SoWhenDoYouKnowIt'sLove?

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For the fast readers--'coz am kind😳!:-

Part 1 & 2--Pg1
Part 3 --Pg2
Precap --Pg3
Part 4 --Pg4
Part 5 --Pg6
Part 6 --Pg8
Part 7 --Pg10
Precap2 --Pg12
Part 8 --Pg15
Part 9 --Pg16
Part10 --Pg19

Please Comment!


Hi DMGians!!.....I'v read a couple of FanFics so i pretty much got inspired to write my own by reading them!....So hear we go my first ever FanFic!!.....And i will only continue if y'all want me to continue!!.....So here we go!!.
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Dr. Riddhima Gupta- A 22 year-old doctor (Intern at Sanjeevani) hoping to become one of the World's successful doctors! Riddhima is a "Seedi-Sadee Ladki" who can get cocky sometimes but gets upset with herself when her cockiness makes someone miserable!

Dr. Armaan Malik- A 23 year-old doctor (Intern at Sanjeevani) who is always bringing a smile to everyone's face!...But now and then he crosses his limits which annoys everyone especially Dr. Shashank Gupta (Riddhima's Father!And The Head Of Sanjeevani!!) Armaan is "Thera-Mera Ladka" who is a big flirt and thinks his "SuperCool"!

Dr. Anjali Gupta- A 23 year-old doctor (Intern at Sanjeevani) a modern girl but would never cross her limits although sometimes she shows her "nakhre" ...She is Riddhima's older sister and her Bodyguard! q:

NOTICE:- Many other Doctors and family members will be introduced further on in the FanFic!..You will find quite a few similarities between my FanFic and DMG but as you read on it will get different!!

PART 1

Scene-- Gupta Residence
Riddhima just came back from her morning jog and finds her sister [Anjali] waiting for her in the living room with a annoyed look!

"Oh God!...Di looks really annoyed!" thought Riddhima,...Riddhima was afraid to make eye-contact with her sister Anjali, but finally got the courage to ask what's wrong even though she knew..."Errmmm.....Di kya hua?..Di?"
"Oh Riddzy thum aga
yee??...Why did u come so soon you should have came later." said Anjali sarcastically, But then she got on a serious note, "WHERE WERE YOU RIDDZY?...chalo jaldi se thayar hojao!...main late hojawngee phir se!"
"Sorry Di!...A lost track of time!...aur mein woh Armaan koh phir milein Basketball Court mein!...aur..."
"...Aur phir tumhara jagar shuroo hua!....haina?" interrupted Anjali, "Thum dono hamesha jagar kyun karthee ho?...mein usko dekungi meri behen ki saath hamesha jagar karthi hain!!....Only i have the right to shout at you!" continued Anjali with a grin.
"Di!..Aap Bhi na!" said Riddhima and pushed her gently,"okay Di..I will go get changed, aap jao mein cab leke awngee!" Anjali was in a hurry that she said okay and left the house giving Riddhima and her Nani a kiss on the cheek.

Scene-- On The Road

Riddhima was in the cab, on her way to work,...she is at a red light when Armaan was in his car, on his way to work as well, Armaan's car was right beside the cab Riddhima was in!

"O God ...Dr. Keerthi is going to kill me!!" said Riddhima quietly, fidgeting with her dupatta.
While Riddhima was scared, Armaan was tapping his steering wheel and singing 'It's a Beautiful Day', When his eyes caught Riddhima, as soon as he saw her ..wel he jad to say something!
"ARRE!" he said in a quite loud voice, to get her attention, and he did! "Kya baath hain?! Daddy's Pwinshess aaj ek cab mein hain?....Kya baath hain!....someone rightly said nothing is impossible!!"
"Tumna!"
"Mein-na!"
"Chalo Driver...Green Light...Kya ek performance hora hahain?...Chalo" said in Riddhima in a quiet voice so Armaan don't hear.
"Huh?" thought Armaan quite confused to see Riddhima's cab go, and then he realized that its green light!...But as soon as he got ready to drive again,...the amber light turned to Red!.."O SHIT!" and of course hamari pyari Riddhima unki thumbs-down sigh tho dekani paregi!

Scene-- Outside the Hospital
Riddhima thought she would wait for Armaan, actually Dr. Kreethi had told the interns that their briefing would be done in a half an hour since an emergency case cropped up, so she thought she will wait for him and company him.

"Hi Armaan!.....How are you? By the way why are you soo late?!...Keerthi ma'am bohoth naraaz hain!..ab kya karogi tum?!" said Riddhima pretending to care.
Armaan looked at her with a fake smile but soon started to grin, "Actually mein ek, bohot.....BOHOT koobsurat ladki ko deki!...God!...SHE WAS SO DAMN HOT!....JUST LIKE HOT CHOCOLATE AND LIKE EVERY GUY I WANTED SOME..."
"KYA?!" said Riddhima looking at him disgustedly
"Ermm..." Armaan realized he said too much "Woh....dekhon mein ...sirf mazak..."
"Armaan ....come on a was kidding!...aur tum kithni ghande ho!"
"Mein to sirf mazaak karethee!...Ermm....anyway hum yaha kam karne athee hain!....Aur hum gup-shup kareheehain!...Chalo!" said Armaan trying to change the subject.

Hey DMGians Thats All For Part 1 So Please Tell Me What You Thought And If I Should Continue!!...Please Be Honest And Criticize Me All You Want!....I Would Love To Improve!!

SORRY IF YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT I WROTE!!....i couldnt think of any other way to write the words!...sorry!

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Hi DMGians...again!...Please Please People Comment Otherwise I Will Get The Impression That You're Not Really Bothered With This FanFic....And Now The 2nd Part Of My FanFic!

Continuing with the rest of the characters!:-

Dr. Atul Joshi- A 23 year-old doctor (Intern at Sanjeevani) he is cute and loving boy...very decent! He became a doctor to fulfill his father's dream of him becoming a great doctor!

Dr. Muskaan Chaddha- A 22 year-old doctor (Intern at Sanjeevani) a lively girl!...A Punjabi Kuddi! She is always up for Masti and making people laugh!

Dr. Rahul Garewal- A 23 year-old doctor (Intern at Sanjeevani) a modern guy but a sensitive guy also!...He believes in love with his heart and soul!...He has known Armaan ever since they were in High School!

Part 2

Scene-- In The Locker Room

Riddhima is following Armaan into the locker room!,...and she is still disgusted at him for what he said! In the locker room they both meet Anjali -- Atul -- Rahul and Muskaan.

"
WOW!.....dekho kaun aya hain!.....Armaan tum to waqt pe agayee!" said Anjali teasingly.
"WOW!!......I don't need that!" said Armaan mocking Anjali.
"OH MY GOD DII!!....aapko baatha hain yeh ladka kithna ganda hain!! sach main!!....us ka naam sunoo and the first think al say Chi!" said Riddhima in an exaggerated tone.
"Ms Basket-jee!! If Your done insulting me hum sab briefing keleeyain chale?" said Armaan...hoping that Riddhima won't tell them about the "hot-chocolate" joke.
"Arre Bhai!....Briefing adda ghante mein hain!!" said Atul putting his hand on Armaan's shoulder.
"I know Yaar!...Hero thu kithni lucky hain saach mein!...if akri moment mein ek case keliye Keerthi ma'am ko jana nehi hothe.....phir!...Armaan there hal kya hotha!!....Actually shayad mujhe beri maza hota!" said Muskaan teasingly.
"Arre....tum log na!....hamesha meri saar peh naach te ho!...But its true!...I am lucky!...Dr. Keerthi mujhe tho...Pheww!" said Armaan wiping the sweat off his head.
"Superman!....if u were so bothered tum us ladki ko dekar....."Riddhima started saying but was interupted.
"Arre...Mujhe bohot book lagee hain!...mein canteen mein jara ha hoon!...anyone coming?" interupted Armaan.
"Are you feeling alright?...hum abhi abhi breakfast karke yaha aya hoon aur tum abhi break fast karna chathe ho?" said Riddhima in a stretched tone.
"Well am going!" said Armaan and went out of the Locker room.

Scene-- The Corridor And Into The Canteen
Riddhima follows Armaan to tease him while he at the front is pulling annoyed faces.

"
Tho saach mein thumko book lagee...aur....You dont want anyone to know about your "Hot Chocolate" Vali ladki?" said Riddhima in high innocent tone, just to land in Armaan's nerve!
"Riddhima leave me alone!...mein apni coffee pee na hain shanti mein!"
"Tum Aur shanti!...shanti chathiho tho Shanti Niketan mein jao!...actually vaha tho shanti bhi nehi hain.....phir batha nehi kaha shanti milega"
"OH MY GOD!!...she thinks she's funny!" thought Armaan while he rolled his eyes."Dekho mujhe jana hai" as soon as he said that he hurried off to get out of the canteen and go away from her but as he did that he rushed into Riddhima who was standing beside his chai and Riddhima lost her balance and was just about to fall however Armaan realized she was about to fall on her back so he saved her from falling on the floor and Riddhima simply drowned in Armaan's arms.
Riddhima is still in Armaan's arms and they both are not realizing that 2 minutes have passed since they nave been mesmerized in each others eyes, however seconds later, a try in the canteen fel on the ground making a loud screechy noise, which got them both out of their worlds!
"Dekr chalnehi sak tha kya?....Mujhe k-kahee chot lagthee tho!" said Riddhima confused about what just happened.
"Mein tho dekr chalrehithee!...thum m-meri samne kyun aya?!" replied Armaan equally confused as Armaan.
"Mein tho bus karee thi!......ermm....mujhe aab jana hain!...kuch k-kaam tha!" Riddhima responded even more confused thatn before!
As she walked on she felt a pull on her duppata,..."Mera duppata?.."said Riddhima looking back and realized her duppata was stuck on Armaan's shirt!...Armaan still unaware of this had his back to Riddhima and was leaning on to the table. "Armaan??.....Armaan??" called Riddhima
Armaan was in his own world,..."Yeh kya tha!...meh uski aankhon mein kogaya kaise?" thought Armaan while Riddhima was feeling uncomfortable about the fact that her duppata wasn't covering her and someone else had it!
"ARMAAN!!??"
"Huh?"
"Mein kabse thumko pukareheehoo!.....Mera dupatta?"
"O probably when you fell it got stuck!.....aur mein apni dunya mein thi aur thum mere saath uchi awaaz se math bath karna!...mujhe acha nehi lagtha!"
"Are you feeling alright?...mein kaha thumhara sath uchi awaz mein bath kareheehoo?"....said Riddhima quite puzzled "Mere duppata wapaz karlo please!...koi..koi deklaga!"
Armaan realized that scarf had came off completely since 1 end was stuck to his button and 1 end was just on the tip of her shoulder...he also realized that Riddhima was covering her neck!
"If you want your scarf to roll on dis dirty floor thats okay if you dont come near me!" said Armaan ...Riddhima did what he said. "Aur paas"..."Aur paas" By then Armaan's voice was full of nasha and romance, they both weren't aware of their surroundings and what was happening,...they were both simply drowning in each other's eyes!
"Oi...yeh Armaan Riddhima kaha chalee.....Arre hitler humko bulareehein!...Aur woh dono?" said Muskaan entering the canteen,the sound of her voice got Armaan and Riddhima out of their own worlds, and they both left with her puzzled!

Scene Armaan's Bedroom Riddhima's Bedroom

Their shifts are over and they are STILL confused!

"Mujhe kuch samag mein nehi ara ha hain!...Basket?.....NEVER!" Said Armaan in disbelief while he was throwing his Basketball about.
"Armaan?....Mein?.....KABHI NEHI! Riddhima tumne esa kaise soch liya!!" Thought Riddhima while she was in bed hugging her pyari si teddy!

What's Going To Happen Next Well Your Gonna Hve To Wait N Watch!!!

So Thats It For Part 2 Please Tell Me What You Think!!
And Please Comment!!
Thank You
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz do continue it wanna read more
plz pm me the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: redi50

plz do continue it wanna read more

plz pm me the next part
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Will Do!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey!
ofcourse i understood wat u wrote...and i lieked the 1st part too!
AR's taqraar was hilarious 2 read!
Wud luv u 2 continue!
And do PM me 2 hun!
Thanx in advance!
-Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG an amazing part sweety 👏
i loved it soooooooooo much ❤️
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
and PM me everytime u update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz ❤️
its an amazing concept⭐️
plzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tht was a gr8 part. continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyyy
i realy enjoyed readin it !!
it was fabb!!!
luved ar.....n the chocolate line was....soooo fabb
can imagine armaan sayin it !!!
is it shilps or suku ??
i can totally imagine shilpaa!!
i would luvv to read more...
please keep updatinn!!
n if u can please pm me !!
luvs revna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow very nice ff
it s tooo gud
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nice ff
plzz pm me wen u cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey ur ff is really cute, miss the bickering between AR, conitnue soon.

Thanks
Edited by cool_pisces - 17 years ago

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