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suwas

@suwas

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Posted: 17 years ago

#211

i personally don't approve extra marital affair & can't accept any reason like finding the true love. After all marriage is a serious commitment. but the way you presented it in the story Jb relationship doesn't seemed to immoral. Bani's marriage wasn't real as her husband didn't accept it as commitment. I agree with Vikram that just putting MS or sindhoor doesn't make two people husband & wife. but once when you accept the bond there shouldn't be any one else.

the way you had portrayed the relationship made the story so convincing.

Looking forward to your next ff/ss.

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preet

@preet_2010

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Posted: 17 years ago

#212

Hey Dhani,

you are truly an very talented person, I have loved reading each and every line of all your ff. You have presented this very sensitive issue in very good way. I want wish all the best with your studies, hope to read lots more of your amazing stories in the future.

preet

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#213

Hey Dhani! I absolutely loved the story and the twist with Vikram. Bani being concerned is natural, afterall there is a bond with Vikram be it a strange bond but there is something. With Jai it is different he is her everything no doubt about that. The moments they shared were beautiful and povital for the to survive in a loveless and lifeless life.
Bani being hurt because of Jai's words and then running of to her parents to tell everything to the reunion at the Taj was so sweet and well described.

Thanks for a great story and I will be waiting for the next thing you write😛, Yeh dil maange more

byebye
Ranjana

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bdev

@bdev

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Posted: 17 years ago

#214

Just caught up. Loved the ff, though I must admit that I am sad that you chose to end it, but what a touching ending it was. Loved how the story ended at the Taj Mahal where it began. You handled the story very well and I loved how you showed the relationship blossom between Jai and Bani. I even liked the backstory of Vikram, and I liked the confrontation between him and Bani, and how he calmly ler her go.

Please do write an epilogue (or better yet, do that and start a new ff 😃) , I just can't wait to read more of your writing.

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#215

i absolutely loved the ending. it was awesome. what a wonderful place to meet again and patch up. really liked vikram's character, calm and forgiving and realized his mistakes. wonderful ending. looking forward for more ff or ss. take care

nadia

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melonie

@melonie

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#216

Hai Dhani,

That was a sweet ending 👏....their reunion in Taj was something refreshing 😳...anyways I am gald Roshini and Vikram are out of the picture 😆😆😉

Good luck in college 👍🏼⭐️

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