Kaun Apna - FF - Part 2 Page 1 By Sneha/Kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dear: Members of Kaun Apna Kaun Paraaya,

Like my cousin said earlier, she won't be able to continue this fan-fic no-longer so am continuing it for her and also this is my first fan-fic so I am kinda scared and worried if you guys won't like it or if I upset anyone with anything... and I know many of you guys might be upset why Sagar's sister's name is Ganga but there is a mystery behind it...

Anyways, here is the next part...

Sneha
PS: Before I start - I would like to thank these people for my cousin....


Originally posted by: fanatic 21

awesome yaar......... 👏 👏

i'm loving d mystries sorrounding d chrachters...
its makin it more interesting....



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too..

Sneha

Originally posted by: rituka7

good part
update soon.........



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too..

Sneha

Originally posted by: prerna1

nice part but Raj aur Naina k bich me koi misunderstanding hai kya aur agar hain to kya jaldi mention karo. 😊
aur Sumit aur Mj Nair relatives hain kaise ...
ur fic is really interesting plz update it fast....



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too.. I hope this part answers your question....

Sneha

Originally posted by: KRIZZY

superb
ud was amazing ab jaldi se next ud de dena plzzzzzz.........
wating for d ud



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too..

Sneha

Originally posted by: koolarch2001

nice ff dear... update soon...



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too..

Sneha

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

hi!
The update was very good.
thank you
continue soon😊



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too..

Sneha

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*

awesome.cont soon......



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too..

Sneha

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good part.
Bechara Sumit agar nahi chahta apni marriage k baare me sab ko batana fir bhi batana pad raha hai use. 😡
Naina bhi Mrs. Shekhawat bolne waali thi apne ko. 😉
Too good.
ud soon.



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too.. Uh Yes! Poor Sumit he doesn't have a choice but to accept his marriage even though he isn't married but trapped in a promise... 😉

Sneha

Originally posted by: yyyy

👏 👏 👏 nice intro...Much similar to LRL 😳 ...does RN have some misunderstanding bw them?? 😕 😕



Thanks a-million on my cousin's behalf 🥰 and I promise you that you will also love my work too.. I hope this part answers your question....

Sneha

Originally posted by: prerna1

hey plz conntiue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz waiting eagrly



Finally the wait is over.... 😀

Sneha

Originally posted by: kajal_arjun

Hey Kashish.... Its fine it me...

But please continue soon cause we are waiting....

Kaajal



Thanks Kaajal - your the only one who doesn't mind and I hope everyone else will also welcome me like you.... Also I would like to thank you on the behalf of my cousin - Kashish and I promise not to disappoint you and others...

Love,

Sneha



Finally the wait is over.... 😀

Sneha

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Prologue, Character Sketch & Part One are on this link - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/left-right-left/979987/kaun-apna-ff-part-2-page-4-by-sneha

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part Two

'What's wrong with him?' said by Abhi, who was taking a sip out of his coffee'

'I don't know yaar' Sagar told Abhi, 'I don't know why, but I feel like he is hiding something from us?'

'I also agree with you' Abhi told Sagar, 'But the strange thing is after Navin's death' Rajveer hardly shares his feelings with anyone'not even us'

Naina excused herself from the gang and started looking for Rajveer' and found him in his room

Narrator's Voice' If Sagar or Abhi can't understand Rajveer like me, but Naina can and she also knows the reason why he left'

'There you are?' Naina told him,

Afterwards place her hand on his shoulder, while he said 'Naina, why didn't you tell me that you wanted to be a lawyer instead of an army officer?' Rajveer removes Naina's hand from his shoulder and said 'why?' falling down to the ground'

For awhile Naina stared at her husband than bends down toward him and says 'it doesn't matter anymore'' she told him, while wiping his tears and her tears'

Afterwards, she leaves from his room when he said 'Naina, do you hate me for killing Navin?'

Scene Switch' to the mess

Sagar & Abhi introduce themselves to the cadets, who were sitting right across from their table'

'So are you guys ready for tomorrows exciting class with us?' said by Abhi, who was busy staring at Ritu who was sitting with Shalini'

'Absolutely Sir, we are ready for tomorrow's class' Ali answered for everyone at the table' while rest gave weird expression after Major Nair's class'

Slowly time passed by' and now everyone is getting ready for bed while Naina keeps on thinking about what happened early between her and her husband'

Slowly Naina fell asleep'

'I think first period went well' said by Ali, who was taking a bite out of his sandwich

'I totally agree with you, bro' confirmed by Yudi and Sumit

Alekh just stared at them than took a sip out if his drink (meaning alcohol)' even Naina was observing everyone around her' ex-specially Huda (who was staring at her for along time)'

Naina was about to leave when Huda said 'Hi, I'm Amardeep Huda' Naina looked at him for awhile than said 'Do I care?' also adds on 'I don't thing so' So stay out of my way'

Naina leaves from there and everyone starts laughing at Huda including Pooja, who was sitting beside Ali and Sumit

During Rajveer's class, Naina was sitting beside Huda, who was annoying her to death even Alekh notice that and switched places with Naina'

Naina thanked Alekh from bottom of her heart and sat beside Pooja, who was talking non-stop but it wasn't bad as Huda' Naina quietly took down the notes while Rajveer Sir explained them'

Thirty minutes later, period two was over and now they are heading to the mess for lunch afterwards' Capt. Sagar's class with Rajveer Sir'

Naina was happy to have most of her husband's class instead of Abhimanyu Sir's class' (Narrator's Voice: for some reason Naina never liked Abhi from the beginning' Anyways, let's go and see what Rajveer is doing with his friends')

'Rajveer, did you go over the notes I gave you?' said by Sagar, who was taking a bite out of his sandwich

Confused Rajveer asked 'when?'

Sagar stared at Raj for awhile than said 'this morning' also adds on 'remember' than hits him on his head when cadet Singh comes over there'

'Yes Cadet' said by Abhi

Naina gave Sagar Sir a weird expression than said 'Sir, I never knew that you like cheese sandwich with orange juice when you are allergic to orange juice?' and gives him apple juice'


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Guys, I need just two or more replies to continue and also now on I'll be continuing instead of Kashish Di also please forgive me - if there is any mistake or if I hurted anyone...

Sneha

Edited by Radha...Shyaam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks a-million cousin for continuing for me...

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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it was nice plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cool.. good one... cont soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sneha tumhe acchi tarah se pata hai tum kisse hurt kar rahi ho!!!!Tumhe acchi tarah se pata hai problem kya hai toh puchne ka koi matlab nahi hai!!!!You don't care so why are you asking!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻Nice part dear.....thanks for continuing yaar...i have already started to like your work...it's good

continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dear plz continue we are waiting plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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too good . plzzzzzzzz update .

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