hi guys this is my first FF..so please comment on this.actually this FF was posted already,but it was disappointing only some saw but they gave me good comments.so i would like to continue.those who read this can just scroll down to read the 2nd part. MAJ .VAI SAYs THAT SHE IS HAPPY TO THAT EAGLE IS A WOMEN.WHEN GUNNY WALKS HE FINDS A SHADOW RUNNING AND CAPT.UDAI IS NOT THERE. NOW I AM GOING TO START MY STORY WHEN GUNNY GOES TO TELL THIS to VAI .HE DOESN'T FIND HER.SO HE PRESSES THE ALARM.AFTER THAT VAI ENTERS IN AN ABNORMAL WAY .SHE TELLS HIM THAT HE HAS RAN AWAY IN THE JUNGLE AND ORDERS HIM TO CATCH HIM.THEN, SHE GIVES AN EVIL SMILE LIKE EVERY VILLAN DOES..BUT GUNNY WAS UNSUCCESSFUL.BUT HE HEARD THAT HE HAD RAN AWAY THRUGH THE BACK GATE NOT TO THE JUNGLE.NOW,HE STARTED TO DOUBT ON MAJ.VAI.AND HE TELLS THIS TO ABHI. THEN ABHI TELLS HIM TO CHECK HER FILES TO FIND ABT HER.WHEN THEY BOTH GO TO CHECK HER FILES.THEY FIND A SHOCKING NEWS!. TO BE CONTINUED...........
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Edited by sonikudi14 on 03 June 2008 at 10:04pm __________________ aaj bhi mein fakhr ke saath kehta ke maine jo bhi kya mujhe uspe karv mehsoos hota, kyon ki maine wohi kiya jo mere zameer ko sahi laga aur mere liye sirf ussi ki ahmiyat hai'.Capt.Gunny LRL. | |||
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continued... they find in her personal details that she is a twin.and her sister got indulged in a terrorist attack .her name is maj.vaishanavi.then,she was put into jail.but she escaped.this was written in that.they fastly drove the vehicle to the commendo centre.when they reach there they find maj.vaibhavi is not there at her room. they search her eveyehere but in vain.at last,they find in her room an eagle sign with a letter with it.in the letter it is written that if u want her alive,i need the files abt the eagle operation.i will call and tell u the time and place.a call comes.gunny speaks to her.he says we will be there with the file.when they went there he would see a dark shadow coming but they could not see the face.he gives the file.they return vaibhavi back.when the dark shadow opened the files he didn't find anything.then,gunny,abhi and vaibhavi are now at gun points.now vaibhavi turns and faces the gun towards gunny and abhi to be continued.... Edited by halley on 11 July 2008 at 7:52am __________________ gunny rocks! | |||
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