Premeer wedding Hungama~ One Shot fan-fic

Heya Everyone!

~ As the title says this is my one shot fan fiction on PH's marriage. Actually I was planning to submit this for the scene contest but it was was more then 230 words. ~ So I thought might as well let your guys read it, it may help you get through the loooong weekend.

~ I made Prem and Heer a tad more livelier..as in added more humour to their personality..well tried too😆😆

~ Before you begin, I dedicate this to GAJAR! (Anshu-Vava,,,) HAHA this is for her!😆😆 She knows why😆😆😆

The day which destiny had hand written had finally arrived. It was Prem and Heer's shaadi, something which was decided long before the two were born, an alliance, and an unbreakable promise.

Meher ran into Heer's room with the 'pooja ki taali' but stopped in her tracks when she found Heer on the floor moaning.

H: Ouch, meri phere (foot) uff itna dukh ra hain!!!

Meher's eyes widened in shock (the camera zooms into her face 50 times, her face goes orange, you can hear thunder..blah..blah..all BT style)

M: Deedee, yeah aapko kya hua..aap zameen par kyon hai?!?!

Heer began sobbing.

H: Kay Kaho Meher, Mujhse bahut bari galthi hui hain, maine who zaleel high heels pehne ki koshish ki hi, lekhin mein chal hi nahin paye..aur phir gir gaye..I think my ankles twisted..I can't walk..OUCH!

Heer began sobbing loudly. Meher giggled at her sister antics.

M: Deede, yeah problem baad mein solve karlenghe hum, abh appe utheye..we have to go, baariti already mandap par beht chuke hain..quickly..

Heer winced in pain as she attempted to walk out of the room with Mehers help.

Meanwhile downstairs Prem sat on the mandap impatiently, tapping his hands and looking here and there and back around again.

Preet immediately came to his side and began singing his latest fav tune.

PR:''Ek kunwaara, phir gaya maara, phas gaya dekho, ye bechaara
Dodin ki hai ye chaandni, phir kaari kaari raat hai, tu maan jaa dulhe raja. Tak ser khaaji, tak ser khaaja, AAJ teri shaadi tera baj gaya baaja'

Prem looked around and gave Preet the hardest evils he could conjure up, Preet laughed in return.
PR: Looks like we are all set to become Heer's Lallo bro. Uff..I mean not WE..YOU are!
He shouldered Prem while saying this and grinned in delight. Prem simply rolled his eyes and
replied back irritated.
P: Kaha Yaar, yeah Heer kahin nazar nahin ari hain…itni dhere kyon lag ri hai.
He looked up towards the stairs; Preet also joined him, and the song 'Jaane jaan dhoondta phir raha'
begins playing in the background...

'Jaane jaan dhoondta phir raha'
'Hoon tumhe raat din main yahan se vahan'
'Mujhko aawaaz do, chup gaye ho sanam Tum kahan'

'Main yahan'……………..


Yes the bride Heer finally arrived; dressed in an exquisite crimson red lengha decorated from top to bottom.
She looked stunning to everyone else, but Heer herself was cursing the thing.
H: Issh, itni bhari (heavy) cheez kaun pehtha hai, aur upar se mein chal bhi nahi sakthi.

She was right; she couldn't walk properly as she was holding Meher on for dear life, taking her support.
Meher however was internally groaning about the pain she was going through while helping Heer as Heer's
nails were digging into her.

After what felt like 3 hours Heer finally managed to reach the mandap area, she immediately plopped herself
next to Prem and smiled. Prem grinned in return and muttered to himself.
P: Shukar hai tu aageyi meri MAA
He did a double take and corrected himself.
P: I mean to say Jaane Jaan.
He blushed, Heer was indeed looking stunning, her face was evenly make up-ed and some of her hair was
let loose around her face. Prem continued to admire her when he suddenly felt a hard slap on the back of his head;
he looked around to find it was none other then his mom Gayathri.
P: OUCH! Jaane Jaan, I mean MAA ye app kya kari hai???
Gayathri giggled and shook her head as Prem blushed at his mistake.
G: Arre beta Heer ko dekhni kiliye puri zindighi pari hain, usse goor na band kar, aur shaadhi par diyan dhe
P:Sorry Ja..i mean Maa.
Prem turned around fully red in the face while Here giggled behind her heavy chunri.

The rasams finally began (I'm not certain how a Hindu marriage takes place but in this one the
sindoor and the manglasutra will be done before the phera's) –Sorry.

Prem ginned to himself while he applied the sindoor to Heer, some of it fell on her nose, which of course
indicated he loved her VER VERY much.
Everyone adored the couple dearly and cheered heartily. Finally it was time for the pheras. Prem jumped up with
enthusiasm while Heer still stayed sitting. Everyone looked down on her confused. Her mother Teji edged her to get up

T: Heer beta utt jao aap.
Heer did not reply, Prem feeling like a hero, wondered of Heer wanted him to help her up, so like a true gentlemen
he extended his arm.
P: *Ahem Ahem* haath pakro Heer, zindighi baar nahin chodongha.
However Heer did not reply either, instead she began sobbing loudly. Everyone was shocked
(again we have the various shots from different angles zooming into everyones face, thunder..blah..blah..BT style)
Prem sighed and looked up towards the ceiling.
P: Hai Bhagwaan, cumse cum aaj ki din isse math ruliaya hota!
Meher came to the rescue and quickly explained the misfortunate incident about the high heels,
everyone laughed while Heer continued to cry.
Daljeet (sorry didn't get rid of her) smirked and decided to add a smart comment..
(at least she thought it was smart)
DJ: yeah to ab-shagun hua na?!?!
Meher looked at her and quickly muttered under her breath.
M: Sabse bada ab-shagun aap hi hai chachi!
PR: I agree!
Mehers words didn't escape Preets ears and he nodded in agreement..Meher blushed

Prem bent down and within seconds whipped Heer into his arms! Everyone gasped at the scene
and some awed in admiration. Heer began protesting.
H: PREM?!?! prem yah kya kare ho, utharo mujhe..
Prem shook his head in disagreement.
P: Hum phere is tarah lenghe! Kyon ki akhir ki phadak partha hai agar tum nahin chaloghi kyunki Prem to Heer
mein hi saamiyi hui hain, aur Heer to Prem ka hi prateek hai. Is liye meri haar kadam(steps)..
hum dono ki kadam honghe…kyon meri MAA..I mean to say Jaane Jaan?
He grinned at his own words while some people in the background 'wah wah-ed' and laughed at his words.
Heers eye watered once again as she lost her self into Prem's pure blue eyes…
Then they proceeded with the final stage, they took the phera's together, in each others arms.

AND

'…they both lived happily ever after!'

very nice i am having tears waise thode se he in my eyes very well done! dear keep it up
👏 its for u

wow the scene when he says jaanejaan to his mum was hillarious😆 ur tooo... gud writer yaar... its fabulous...fantastic...gud.. 👏

Ouma di!fab!! yea, i squashed m y scesnes ,a fter the cotest is over, will post mine here in detial! Do continy or write more!! 😳

Ouma....this was brilliant.... ur BT style of 'various shots from different angles zooming into everyones face, thunder..blah..blah..BT style'.... was sooo funny... 🤣
Heer crying here aswell... my god, she can make a river out of her tears and what Prem sed..... toooo goood yaar!!!! 😆 😆 Prem swooped Heer into his arms do to da phera's... awwwwwww 😍
this was really good.... i lubbbbed it.... do write more if you can wid ur sense of humour 😉
excellent, bravo 👏

iluved it cuz it was writen so gud
iqra

I coudnt stop laughing on Prem saying to heer "maa" and to mother "jaane-jaan" 😆

OUMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *shoutingggg* haww remember the last time I shouted was on your b-day 😆 Ahh well mann I told ju before ju shuda cut it and submitted it in scene contest..

Newayz lemme get down to thanchu karring juuu for dedicating it to mee ...muhaha maybe the first time someone has ever done it 🤣...

This one short come scene was HILARIOUS ..The dialogues are wickedd and the songs are too good as well...my fave being the Ek Kunwara phir gay mara 🤣...I lub it when Prem calls Heer MAAAAAAA hawww...calling his Mrs to be MUM 🤣 jokes 😆

Your a good writer...haha maybe start an FF so I can comment..muhaha..this is how scenes need to be though..with some humour + seriousness 😆 haha..man you killed it😆

chalo thats it..thanchu for dedicating it to meee ...muhaha and you know whats coming next 😆