Paraj FF: Andaz- Page 2

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Part 6

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Arjun addressing pari as the thief who stole his heart was romantic.arjun pari promise scene was lovely.rain scene was romantic.surprising that they had a secret wedding.pregnancy revelation scene was sweet.sad that arjun's dad didn't accept pari as she was an orphan.glad that arjun left from there as he wanted to be with pari.sad that though he bought a gift for pari he died in an accident.jagdish is so cruel to not accept pari and even said that he is not sure whether this baby is arjun's.sad that pari tried to commit suicide.the priest convincing her to live for her baby and giving her shelter and job was lovely.

Ajay anushka meeting was lovely.their love confession was sweet.happy wedding scene too.ajay appreciating her food and the promise scene were lovely.pregnancy revelation scene was sweet.i am shocked that anushka's health worsened during pregnancy.their conversation was very emotional. They were so happy with sunny.suddenly anushka talking to ajay and then dying was very sad.ajay saying that maybe their ex spouses want them to have a friend was lovely.

Good that ajay stopping giving monthly allowance to ranvijay for partying instead of studying.shocking that ranvijay is lusting Lakshmi. I am shocked that suhas knows pari and noticed her connection with arjun and ajay.but why is he saying lies about Paridhi's character to ranvijay?loved ajay saving garima from falling down.kitchen scene was funny.the kids holding paraj's hands during thunder was lovely.paraj dream song is cute and romantic.loved ajay proposing to pari.sad that she feels guilty to love ajay.but the priest convincing her to accept ajay without guilt was nice.shocking and scary that suhas and ranvijay are chasing Lakshmi. Glad that rishmi saw each other.

In the football scene garima is addressed as he instead of she.

I am relieved that rishi saved lakshmi from suhas and ranvijay.rishi consoling lakshmi,confessing his love to lakshmi,lakshmi realising his love for her..deciding to give him a chance was emotional. Glad that ajay himself arrested suhas and ranvijay.i wish Indira's reaction was also shown.

Shocking and sad that indira rejected pari hearing suhas' fake story about pari being a old digger.shocking that she taunted pari for being an orphan.i am shocked about Ajay's revelation that he is Indira's illegitimate son and still she showed double standard. Ajay is right.if her sasur had also shown thus attitude her marriage with her 2nd husband wouldn't have taken place.glad that indira realized her mistake and decided to accept pari.

Your edit is lovely.but the woman in the edit with paraj is not indira.

Rishi proposing lakshmi was lovely.i am surprised that jagdish realised his mistake and came to take pari and garima with him.what struck me was Indira telling him that she also made the mistake of judging someone wrongly and he shouldn't repeat that mistake.sunny and garima asking paraj to confess love and singing was cute.paraj confession was sweet and emotional. Glad that paraj and rishmi got married and jagdish accepted paraj.the last paraj scene was lovely.

Pari asked jagdish where he was when she was carrying him instead of her.

Sunny garima said that now they will become real brothers instead of siblings.in the final scene instead of siblings it's written that they have become inseparable brothers