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Posted: 4 days ago
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Chapter 3: The Consequences of Truth

Months passed.

Life at Angad's house continued peacefully.

Saloni managed her teaching job and household responsibilities despite her growing disappointment with Dev's lack of ambition.

Dev had improved slightly, but he still avoided taking real responsibility for his future.

One day, Saloni's father invited everyone to a grand family function.

Father: All of you must come. It will make me very happy.

Vrinda smiled.

Vrinda: Of course. We wouldn't miss it.

The entire family attended.

The hall was filled with relatives, business associates, and friends.

Among them was Tejas, who continued living comfortably as a ghar jamaai.

As usual, Tejas received special attention from everyone.

Dev watched silently.

The old jealousy resurfaced.

During dinner, Tejas approached Dev.

Tejas: So, Dev, how's life?

Dev forced a smile.

Dev: Fine.

Tejas smirked.

Tejas: Still searching for the perfect job?

Several guests laughed.

Dev's face darkened.

Tejas continued.

Tejas: Actually, forget jobs. You seem to have mastered the art of living on other people's earnings.

The surrounding guests exchanged awkward looks.

Dev clenched his fists.

Tejas wasn't finished.

Tejas: At least I contribute to the family business. What exactly do you contribute?

The laughter became louder.

Humiliated and furious, Dev walked away.

Unable to control his anger, he began drinking.

One glass became two.

Two became four.

Soon he was heavily intoxicated.

Later, while everyone gathered on the stage for photographs, Dev stumbled forward.

Angad immediately noticed.

Angad: Dev, stop.

Dev ignored him.

Tejas smirked.

Tejas: Looks like someone can't handle a joke.

Dev pointed at him.

Dev: Joke?

The hall fell silent.

Dev laughed bitterly.

Dev: You think you're special because you live in your father-in-law's house?

Tejas frowned.

Dev continued loudly.

Dev: At least you're honest about it.

Dev Ne Kiya Saloni Ko Gumraah! | Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi

Everyone stared.

Dev's voice grew louder.

Dev: I married Saloni for the same reason!

The room froze.

Saloni's face turned pale.

Father looked shocked.

Dev continued speaking recklessly.

Dev: I thought I'd become a rich son-in-law and enjoy life without working.

The silence was deafening.

Saloni felt tears fill her eyes.

Father sat down heavily.

The truth had finally come out.

Back at Angad's house, nobody spoke during the journey.

The atmosphere was unbearable.

As soon as they entered, Saloni packed a small bag.

Dev sobered up immediately.

Dev: Saloni... listen—

Saloni turned toward him.

Her eyes were full of pain.

Saloni: Everything was a lie.

Dev lowered his head.

Saloni: I loved you.

Dev had no answer.


Saloni placed a hand on her stomach.

Saloni: And now I'm carrying your child.

The family was shocked.

Vrinda covered her mouth.

Angad looked devastated.

Saloni wiped her tears.

Saloni: I don't want my child growing up around lies and irresponsibility.

She picked up her bag.

Dev stepped forward.

Dev: Please don't go.

Saloni shook her head.

Saloni: When you learn the value of responsibility, maybe then we'll talk.

She walked away.

The house erupted.

Angad was furious.

Angad: Are you happy now?

Dev remained silent.

Angad: We trusted you.

Vrinda's eyes were filled with disappointment.

Vrinda: Saloni stood by you when nobody else would.

Madhvi and Akshay looked frightened.

For the first time, Dev felt completely ashamed.

Not because others were angry.

But because he had destroyed the trust of the person who loved him most.

The following months were difficult.

Very difficult.

No one gave him special treatment anymore.

He attended interview after interview.

Many rejected him.

Some mocked his lack of experience.

Others refused to hire him.

Still, he continued trying.

For the first time in his life, he refused to quit.

Finally, after months of struggle, he secured a job as a clerk in a manufacturing company.

The salary was modest.

The work was exhausting.

But Dev accepted it proudly.

Four months later.

Dev had changed considerably.

He worked sincerely and had earned the respect of his colleagues.

One morning, excitement spread throughout the office.

Employee: The new management representative is arriving today.

Dev continued working.

A luxury car stopped outside.

The office doors opened.

Dev looked up.

His expression changed.

Tejas entered confidently.

Employee: Sir, this is Mr. Tejas Deshmukh.

Dev froze.

The factory belonged to Saloni's father's business group.

Tejas had been sent to oversee operations.

Tejas smiled coldly.

Tejas: Well, well.

Dev stared at him.

Tejas: Life has interesting ways of bringing people together.

Their relationship quickly became hostile.

One day, after a disagreement regarding office work, a heated argument broke out.

Tejas: No matter how hard you work, you'll always remain a clerk.

Dev lost his temper.

Dev: At least I earn my salary honestly.

The argument escalated until both had to be separated.

Consumed by anger and resentment, Dev made a terrible decision.

He went to meet Saloni.

Months had passed since they last spoke.

Saloni was visibly pregnant.

She looked healthier emotionally but was startled to see him.

Dev spoke harshly.

Dev: I want my share.

Saloni frowned.

Saloni: What share?

Dev: Your father's property.

Saloni looked stunned.

Dev: I'm your husband. I have rights.

Dev, Shaloni at Odds

Saloni couldn't believe what she was hearing.

Dev continued.

Dev: If necessary, I'll take this matter to court.

Saloni stared at him in disbelief.

The man standing before her seemed completely different from the one who had promised to change.

Heartbroken, she met her father.

Father listened quietly.

Saloni finally said:

Saloni: Give him the share.

Father looked shocked.

Father: What?

Saloni: End this matter before it becomes uglier.

Father reluctantly agreed.

Though hurt, he wanted peace.

The family gathered to discuss the transfer.

Just then, Tejas arrived.

When he learned what was happening, he became furious.

Tejas: This is ridiculous.

He turned toward Saloni.

Tejas: After everything he has done, you're still supporting him?

Saloni remained silent.

Tejas continued harshly.

Tejas: You've ruined your own life because of him.

Saloni finally snapped.

Saloni: Enough.

Tejas: No. Someone needs to tell the truth.

Saloni: This is between my husband and me.

Tejas: Then your husband should stop behaving like a greedy opportunist.

The argument grew louder.

Father tried to intervene.

Neither listened.

The emotional strain became too much.

Saloni suddenly held her head.

Her vision blurred.

Father noticed immediately.

Father: Saloni!

Before anyone could react, she collapsed.

The room erupted into panic.

Tejas froze.

Father rushed forward.

Dev stood motionless in horror.

As doctors were called and family members gathered around the unconscious Saloni, a terrifying realization struck him.

His selfishness had once again hurt the person he claimed to love.

And this time, the consequences might be far greater than he had ever imagined.

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Posted: 4 days ago
#12

Chapter 4: Redemption and Reunion

The moment Saloni collapsed, chaos erupted.

Her elder sister Roshni immediately took charge.

Roshni: Stop standing around and help!

With the family's assistance, she rushed Saloni to the hospital.

Dev stood frozen.

For the first time, he truly understood how much pain his actions had caused.

Saloni's father looked at him with disappointment before leaving for the hospital.

Dev remained behind, unable to meet anyone's eyes.

The next morning, Dev reported to work.

He was determined to focus on his duties and avoid further conflict.

However, trouble was already waiting for him.

Tejas entered the factory with several officials.

He walked directly to Dev's desk.

Tejas: Pack your things.

Dev looked up.

Dev: Why?

Tejas smirked.

Tejas: Because I have officially taken over the company operations.

The entire office became silent.

Tejas continued.

Tejas: And the first decision I'm making is to throw you out.

Dev stood up.

Dev: You don't have the authority to fire me without cause.

Tejas laughed.

Tejas: I don't need your permission.

Dev clenched his fists.

Dev: This factory is not your personal kingdom.

Tejas stepped forward.

Tejas: And you're still the same opportunist who married for money.

Dev grabbed Tejas by the collar.

Dev: Enough!

Tejas pushed him back.

Within seconds, both men were involved in a heated scuffle.

Employees rushed to separate them.

Just then, a familiar voice echoed through the factory floor.

Father: That's enough!

Everyone turned.

Saloni's father had arrived.

Both Dev and Tejas stepped back.

The older man looked furious.

Father: I am ashamed of both of you.

Tejas tried to explain.

Tejas: Uncle, I was only—

Father raised his hand.

Father: Silence.

The entire factory fell quiet.

He then removed a file from his briefcase.

Inside were the property documents.

He walked toward Dev.

Father: Here.

Dev looked confused.

Father: These are the property papers you demanded.

Everyone watched.

Tejas smiled triumphantly.

But to everyone's surprise, Dev folded his hands and stepped back.

Dev: I don't want them.

The room went silent.

Father frowned.

Father: What?

Dev looked directly at him.

Dev: The demand was a pretense.

Tejas's smile disappeared.

Father stared at him.

Dev continued.

Dev: I wanted to expose who Tejas really is.

Tejas shouted.

Tejas: That's a lie!

Dev ignored him.

Dev: The moment he thought property was involved, he started insulting Saloni and trying to control everything.

Father slowly lowered the file.

Dev's voice became emotional.

Dev: Months ago, I would have accepted these papers without thinking twice.

He looked down.

Dev: But not anymore.

The factory workers watched in disbelief.

Dev folded his hands respectfully.

Dev: I don't want your property.

He looked at Saloni's father.

Dev: I only want your blessings.

Tears formed in the older man's eyes.

For the first time, he saw genuine sincerity in Dev.

Suddenly his phone rang.

The smile vanished from his face.

Father: What?

A worried voice came from the other side.

It was Roshni.

Father's expression changed instantly.

Father: We're coming immediately.

Dev became anxious.

Dev: What happened?

Father: It's Saloni.

Without another word, both rushed toward the hospital.

At the hospital, Saloni was struggling.

The doctors were monitoring her closely.

Roshni stood outside the room, worried.

Father hurried inside.

Dev followed nervously.

Saloni looked weak.

When she saw Dev, she turned away.

Tears filled his eyes.

Father sat beside her.

Father: Saloni.

She looked at him.

Father smiled gently.

Father: There is something you need to know.

Saloni listened silently.

Father told her everything that had happened at the factory.

He told her how Dev had refused the property.

How he had asked only for blessings.

How he had defended her.

How he had worked hard to rebuild his life.

Saloni stared at Dev.

Dev lowered his head.

Father placed a hand on her shoulder.

Father: He has changed.

Saloni's eyes filled with tears.

Father smiled.

Father: He is a good man, beta.

Dev finally spoke.

Dev: I made terrible mistakes.

His voice trembled.

Dev: But I never stopped loving you.

Saloni looked at him for a long moment.

Then she slowly extended her hand.

Dev immediately held it.

Their eyes met.

Months of pain, regret, and longing disappeared in that moment.

Soon afterward, the doctors rushed in.

The family waited anxiously outside.

Minutes felt like hours.

Finally, the delivery room doors opened.

The doctor smiled.

Doctor: Congratulations.

Everyone stood up.

Doctor: Mother and baby are healthy.

The entire family erupted with joy.

Vrinda hugged Angad.

Roshni wiped her tears.

Saloni's father folded his hands in gratitude.

Dev stood speechless.

A little later, he entered the room.

Saloni was holding their newborn child.

She smiled softly.

Dev sat beside her.

For several moments, neither spoke.

Then Saloni whispered:

Saloni: Welcome back.

Dev's eyes became moist.

Dev: Thank you for giving me another chance.

Saloni placed the baby in his arms.

Dev carefully held the child.


The tiny fingers wrapped around his hand.

For the first time in his life, Dev truly felt the weight of responsibility—and the joy that came with it.

A few days later, both families gathered at Angad's house to celebrate.

Laughter filled the home once again.

Madhvi and Akshay excitedly played around the baby.

Vrinda distributed sweets.

Angad proudly patted Dev's shoulder.

Angad: I'm proud of you.

Dev smiled.

Saloni stood beside him holding their child.


Saloni's father blessed them both.

Father: Stay happy always.

As everyone cheered, Dev lovingly lifted the baby into the air and caught the child securely in his arms.

The room filled with laughter.

The baby giggled happily.

And for the first time, Dev realized that the luxurious life he had once dreamed about was nothing compared to the happiness of having a loving family beside him.

The end

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Posted: 4 days ago
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Glad that devsa fell in love.I think tejas wanted his brother to marry saloni as his brother can have a luxurious life with a rich girl.Devsa getting married was nice.Surprising that tejas is a ghar jamai.dev complaining to saloni that the servant didn't serve him like he served tejas is so stupid.i am surprised that saloni took it as a joke and laughed.i am surprised that she succeeded in convincing dev to stay with Vrindang. Saloni doing household work to help vrinda and telling Vrindang about sharing responsibilities and they are one family was lovely.when saloni pulled the sheet dev thinking that there is earth quake was funny.dev still trying to convince her to go back to her house was hilarious.


There r 2 songs in this chapter.but there are no pics or description.

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Posted: 3 days ago
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Posted: 3 days ago
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Chapter 2

Majestic update... brilliantly written

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 3 days ago
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Chapter 3

Excellent update... awesomely written


Thanks

Edited by khwaishfan - 3 days ago
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Posted: 3 days ago
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Chapter 4

Superb update.... terrifically written


Amazing end

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Posted: 2 days ago
#18

When tejas insulted dev I was surprised as he was also a ghar jamai like dev.but tejas says that he contributes to the family business. What does he contribute to the business?

I can't believe that in anger dev confessed that he married saloni for money.poor saloni leaving the house was expected.dev feeling ashamed as bcz of him saloni became upset and him getting reformed was nice.glad that dev became a hardworking clerk.i am surprised that the factory belonged to Saloni's father and tejas visited them.tejas insulting dev was irritating.loved dev replying that he works and earns with honesty.i am shocked that dev demanded share from Saloni's father and saloni herself asked her dad to give the share and finish it off.i am glad that when tejas insulted dev saloni stopping him by saying that it's between her and her husband.shocking that saloni collapsed.

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Posted: a day ago
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I am shocked that tejas fired dev.i am surprised that dev pretended to be wanting property to expose tejas infront of Saloni's father.i wish there was a scene where Saloni's father confronts tejas.dev saying that he doesn't want property papers and only blessings was lovely.glad that Saloni's father told the truth to her.glad that saloni had a baby.devsa hospital conversation was lovely.the last family scene of celebration was nice.

Edited by jasminerahul - a day ago

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