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Posted: 4 days ago

Chapter 31:

Mihir entering Anjar home, scrutinized every nook n corner, to find its Bandhej's growth. His close observation to her Room specifically, his imagination of her lonely nights, teary eyes, sleeplessnights, her command to guide people build a life, identify their own talent, value their skills build something which gives food, respect, name and help lead a meaningful life.

He just entered the room in her absence, but as promised to himself he will never enter her territory without her permission whether its in her presence or absence, he truly lived by his words. He didnot occupy without her will or permission in her absence.

He is affected by the pujari's world she built a life for people here, she is helpful, kind but she was not happy, never shared her sorrows, somewhere these words pierced his heart.

He felt so proud and happy to find her renovating Temple, the free meal service, the devotion she had, above all she gave life to the poor, skilled,trained them, help them understand life is beyond your household, and how working independently can help them grow economically, her grass route connections, her connections with the locals,her hardwork to hunt talented, skilled people, uplift them utilize their traits in better way, make them understand is the marathon of a task at the grassroot ppl. Her hardwork, dedication, constant strive to learn something unknown, her simplicity, her ability to build trust among unknown ppl, her efforts physical and mental ability to learn and build a cooperative for the people, by the people, to the people conceptually has been made into reality. It's not easy for anybody whose life has gone on a toss, has nothing, when she has no shoulder to cry upon, say her sorrows, she became the one for others. Isn't it amazing personality, her sorrows looked small infront of others, and she did the right choice of lending her ideas brainstorming locals, be their Kaki. Kaki is her entitlement earned by her affection, her teachings, association with people.

Mihir would fall in love with this Tulsi more than ever, at the same time he realized how lonely, unhappy even after being around people. Pujari's words would definitely touched Mihir's heart she worn MS and Sindhoor always, that means somewhere he feels she had atleast not hated him, but missed him, felt betrayed by him.

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Posted: 3 days ago

Dear reader friends, next chapter could take 2-3 days more.

I am sorry about it - but my work is keeping me busy these days

thank you for your patience and your support for this story


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Posted: 3 days ago

Mihir is right.noina won't harm him.the problem will be for her and children.But didn't expect mihir to say Mitali's name.mihir saying that the business belongs to tulsi was a proud moment.Gautam taunting tulsi that she loves others children more than hers and Tulsi's dialogues to him were emotional. Gautam asking mihir why he us doing this to mom again and again was emotional.

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Posted: 2 days ago
Hi there, Apologies for the delayed reply. I was in the middle of moving to another country, so things have been quite hectic. First of all, how have you been? I wanted to say that your stories are truly a breath of fresh air. I genuinely enjoy reading them. If I had one piece of feedback, it would be about the pacing. At times, it feels a little slow, and I also find myself wishing there were more scenes featuring Tuhir. That may simply be because I'm most invested in their characters and don't find myself as interested in the others. Since it currently seems like TUHIR may not return, I've been feeling a bit frustrated and sad with the direction the writers are taking. As for your writing, I honestly think it's superb. If I could suggest one thing, it would be to include even more dialogue, as those moments are especially engaging and bring the characters to life. Of course, that's just my personal opinion. Overall, I really appreciate your work and look forward to every new chapter.
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Posted: a day ago

Originally posted by: fan_fiction123

Chapter 31..

This chapter is very beautiful and emotionally rich for me 😍 Gautam’s homecoming makes it special but TuHir’s usual cups of tea, remembered habits, shared silences, phone calls about antacids, and favorite meals become acts of love neither consciously intending, makes it soothing for parched TuHir shippers.

hey dear, thank you so much this beautiful review and sorry for the delay in responding to it..

I am so glad you are enjoying this chapter- Gautam is challenging and fun to write - his swag and nariyal-like personality is so difficult to put on paper. Yes TuHir are healing slowly and coming back stronger together


I also loved how Mihir and Tulsi’s relationship keeps healing through tiny everyday moments instead of grand declarations. Mihir instinctively placing lighter where Tulsi used to keep it, and Tulsi silently moving it to where she keeps it now, show Mihir still carries different versions of the home Tulsi had left behind. 🤗

Yes I am deliberately avoiding grand declarations of love and dramatic scenes.

The lighter scene has multiple layers - one is of course what you said. The other is - tulsi acknowledges his gesture by waiting a moment before changing the place and smiling to herself that he kept her home in his memory / heart but now she keeps it in a different place - signifying that she herself has changed.


A hand steadying another after a stumble, shoulders brushing in a narrow doorway, reaching for the same newspaper.. through all of these moments you have shown their bodies remembering a marriage long before their hearts are ready to trust it again.

Exactly

Gautam’s homecoming and the way you handled it has my heart 😍❤️ Every interaction reflects incremental healing for him. The way everyone received him, his hug with Tulsi lingering a little longer, his embrace with Mihir, his awkward return of Damini’s hug signaling the growth in their relationship and his laughter with his siblings feels like a man rediscovering a version of himself he had buried deep. ❤️

Gautam is proving difficult to write - I can’t get his swag on paper. But glad you enjoyed his scenes.

The dinner sequence is especially moving. Pari quietly giving up “his” chair before anyone saying a word, and explaining to Garima that it was always Bade Mama’s place, and Mihir insisting that Gautam reclaim it because he is the eldest son. 😍 Very small exchange but very important for his emotional healing as they communicate belonging without sentimentality.

Indian dining tables are like that - every person has a place based on seniority or relationships. But when a person is absent for long - his seat being vacant is odd during meals so someone fills it temporarily. Exactly - Gautam needs most is this - to see his place unchanged in the family. Even if he’s been absent for decades.


No one holds any grudge on him for fighting for Ranvijay/Noina. Him going with Damini to their room finding it unchanged to understand new dynamics between TuHir and “aata rahunga..” at the end shows he is already miles ahead in his healing.

Yes the one person who should have a grudge was Pari - but how can she, when she herself was once Noinas pawn. yeah Gautam is healing fast now


Mihir’s trip to Anjaar was another standout. Seeing Bandhej through his eyes and realizing everything Tulsi built on her own was incredibly moving. It all expand Tulsi’s identity beyond wife and mother into institution-builder. His prayer in the temple and his wish to give her the recognition she deserves showed how much he has grown.

So glad the Anjaar scenes came out well. Yes he’s seeing tulsi in a new light… now, after losing her, she’s his top priority in every way. He wants to see her at the top.


His repentance is evolving from guilt into active restoration. 🙏💛

correct.

The irony of the priest unknowingly telling Tulsi’s own husband that she always wore her mangalsutra and sindoor, remained devoted to him, built a small empire, and yet never seemed truly happy is profoundly powerful. Sometimes an outsider’s observations carry a weight that even the person living the experience cannot express. Mihir hearing those words in silence becomes one of the chapter’s most heartbreaking moments. 💔❤️

Yes - would have so difficult for him to hear those words without giving any outward reactions. Could barely swallow his food. Heartbreaking as you said

Their phone conversations, the distance making intimacy easier and Tulsi’s realization that she naturally slips back into caring for him over the phone while remaining guarded in person is psychologically rich. Her acknowledgment that she may not survive another betrayal elevates her hesitation beyond pride or resentment 😟 Watching her withdraw the next day, and Mihir quietly understanding why, is deeply emotional. 🥺

Yes correct. The distance made them (especially tulsi) fall into old rhythms of 38 years - without realizing.. it’s Mihir who realizes first since he’s been noticing every small thing about her since she returned. Her fear is very real - it’s not about another woman coming between them again - it’s about getting hurt by him again and then having to rebuild herself all over again.

His return home to his favorite meal, the torn invitation that ultimately serves only to confirm he will attend as her plus-one, and the family recognizing the need to re-enter society despite Noina’s presence all signal steady progression.

Glad all this came out well enough! Yes you can’t ignore society for long. I wonder why the show missed such a great opportunity to show the impact of Nohir scandal on their social standing. But oh well- no point talking about the show - it’s gone down the drain totally

The chapter ends leaving me both excited and anxious for the next one. Mihir knows exactly what Tulsi will have to endure because of his past silence, and that quiet guilt is heartbreaking. I’m looking forward to seeing how they navigate what lies ahead—together. 🌸

Yes he knows what she will have to face and he can’t even shield her - because that would take away her agency

thank you again❤️

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Posted: a day ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

.This Ghazal by Hariharan:


beeti baate dohrane ki aadat si ho gayi hai

beeti baate dohrane ki aadat si ho gayi hai

chalte chalte, chalte chalte

ruk jane ki aadat si ho gayi hai

beeti baate dohrane ki aadat si ho gayi hai

beeti baate

jab dil par koi zakhm laga

khamosh rahe ya hansne lage

jab dil par koi zakhm laga

khamosh rahe ya hansne lage

humko aansu pee jane ke

aadat si ho gayi hai

humko aansu pee jane ke

aadat si ho gayi hai

chalte chalte ruk jane ki

aadat si ho gayi hai

beeti baate

humko ye bhi yaad nahi

kya khoya hai kya paya hai

humko ye bhi yaad nahi

kya khoya hai kya paya hai

logo se dhokha khane ki

aadat si ho gayi hai

logo se dhokha khane ki

aadat si ho gayi hai

chalte chalte ruk jane ki

aadat si ho gayi hai

beeti baate

wow!! So beautiful.

The lyrics gave me goosebumps

You surprised me yet again ❤️

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Posted: a day ago

Hey dear! So happy to see your review on my story after soo long. Hope they keep coming now for every chapter

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

I loved the party scenes. And being tulsi is must be so suffocating. The constant reminder of what happened. How she's compromising her self respect coming back. Giving explanations and taking the high road. So exhausting to even feel that for her

Very correct!! She has to take the fall for his mistakes. The irony here is - generally affair hota hai toh bhi men don’t let anyone know - here Mihir’s stupidity is that koi affair naa hote hue bhi he showed to the world that he had an affair- ab kaun believe karega nahi tha. And it’s tulsi who has to bear the brunt of his stupidity

She did compromise for kids. And for mihir too cause she still loves him. But that's not all. She was him changing and this is her giving him chance. And also mihir is changing. He's taking her granted. He falters but comes back to her. He's becoming the person tulsi deserved long back

Correct - she said she’s coming back for kids but deep down it’s for mihir she came back even when she claimed- never your wife again.

Yes losing her for over 6 years has made him change at a fundamental level. Earlier her life revolved around him and the kids.. now she’s his sole focus

And the people wanting that gossip cause they don't really care. Their show of pity and solidarity. But they won't understand and they don't want to. Tulsi basically grey rocked them lol. Mihir let it show he's thankful for tulsi and they are back as iconic couple. A unit. Ignoring noyona and pretending he didn't know what she was showing to people regarding their relationship

As is said - Kuch toh log kahenge logon ka kaam hai kehna.. except her old friend Sunita and her husband, no one in that gathering who spoke nonsense was their well wisher.

Did you notice? Mihir let Tulsi handle it mostly because shielding her would have made it worse- it would have looked like she’s weak who needs to be shielded.

What did you think about - bahut reasonable sawaal hai!

Got the sarcasm and condescension beneath it😜?



I liked the significance of mihir walking with tulsi, not ahead of her. Keeping his conversation short with his circle and letting tulsi speak up more, giving spotlight to her. He helped her at the correct times. Growth points for mihir

Very correct- it was in continuation of his torn invite and his decision to go as her plus one. He tried his hardest to place her and bandhej at the centre and succeeded to a large extent- by the end no one was talking much about their relationship and every one was interested in knowing about Bandhej

And I like how tulsi don't stay quiet now. Her saying to lower his tone, explicitly saying she don't want to burden him at this point -shes not suffering internally. I hope she continues this to keep check on mihir

Correct - even tulsi needs to change

And mihir really needs to warn ashish. Noyona to gold digger + potential black widow nikli. Ashish would be dead husband #2.

Yes they will try to warn Ashish but question is will he listen and understand

This almost slap thing should come out soon. And this would also tell mihir that tulsi don't trust him with everything. Especially not with the fact there is no justification for that physical thing and he can't soothe that. He also can't guarantee it won't happen. It won't. But can he guarantee or justify it? Nope. And that is a separate hurt separate from the cheating thing. He can say there won't be repeat of noyona mandira cause he gets tulsis value now. But there is nothing for the almost slap and push

That incident is addressed in the next chapter. After reading your words I doubt it would satisfy you.

Noyona hurt where it should and I hope next time her words don't impact tulsi

With this, Noina has exhausted her words to tulsi.. that could actually hurt. Her next vaar won’t be words!

Update soon!

So sorry about the delay - my work kept me very busy last few days

Posting next chapter either late tonight or tomorrow by noon

thank you dear

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Hopefully your reviews continue - please😁 pretty please

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Posted: 21 hours ago

Thank you for reply. And I agree with you.. the show has gone down the drain. Current track se Noina wala kai jyada achha tha.. I can’t bring myself to watch it.

Last episode I watched was when Pari got married. Usake baad bakwaas track shuru ho gaya. Wahi ghisa pita K serial marital rape track.. 20 years later.. 🙆🏻‍♀️

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Posted: 21 hours ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hey dear thank you for the beautiful review

This chapter raised so many questions in me.

I will take it as a compliment 🤣

Initial conversation with Karan, pulling out some information from his network pool of people about Noina's business and her personal life,Mihir remembering how she framed him with the victim card of her husband being abusive and baddy, regrets his own actions of believing her.

Yes Mihir ne bola tha naa uske finances and businesses ke baare me pata lagao and tulsi had told him to dig out her personal life - dhuleti evening, remember?

Finally, father n son decided to have some strategy in place how much ever possible.Karan's sorry for intruding their me time, quiet understanding.

Dhuleti se hi planning chal rahi hai - since she refused to give up her stake in VI.

Tulsi who is coming back was shaken again.

Yes and Mihir is angry and desperate to know what happened - what Noina said.

Ok. I wondered with ease she went inside their bedroom, she found exactly the things and objects kept, so nothing has been changed occasional shobha cleaning Tulsi's wardrobe, brought some relief to Tulsi. Tulsi finding the gift, inspite of many of Mihir's mistakes he always loved her, cherished her alone. The truth comes everyday and she couldn't figure out 6years pain vs love which one weighs more.

about going to their room - remember? When pari was ill and Garima was crying in Mihir’s room/their old bedroom, first time she remembered the Nohir scene ( of her hugging him passionately and saying I love you Mihir) and she hesitates at the door but then has to go in as Garima is still distressed. Once she goes in, she sees the wall with pics, the rose with one petal missing which he conserved With care and the tulsi plant outside. The next day she asked him about Noina coming to their room - wondering in her mind how could he make that collage on the wall with Noina visiting his room- and how he angrily told her that he kept it locked from Noina - and then the next day because Garima was still sleeping in his room, she went there to give him kaada and stood there for a long time looking Aaram se at the wall. So since then she’s comfortable going there. But never opened the wardrobe- never needed to till now.

Correct - love of a lifetime (imperfect and flawed yet true) versus 6-7 years of pain - she has to decide

Trust she started to learn again, rely upon Mihir.

Yes she’s getting there.


Shobha has been always a great daughter she knows how to manofy her mom for such things, she did what suits the best for her personality and the occasion. Mihir quiet surprised but happy too, he do not have the courage to describe her beauty. 😜😂 But aankhoan se sab keh diya...

yeah Shobha is so lovable- positive full of life and always there for everyone- that makeup scene was inspired from the show itself - she did her makeup a few times and when tulsi was going on a dinner date with Mihir she said - Shobha ne kaha lal lipstick laga ke jaao.

Mihir toh Waise hi uska deewana hai Aaj toh flat ho Gaya 😂😂


Then the whole family admiring Tulsi for dressing up, everyone got surprised, but they know she has to look her best at the conclave , which she forgot or left behind the past 6years, they acknowledging in their own way.


Yes family rarely sees her dressed up now. Yes She’s left this aspect of life behind.

Mihir n Tulsi's drive was silent.

Hmm

Omg this event turned out to be gossiping more about Tulsi Mihir's life than Business prospects 🙄🙄

yes ye high society ke networking events me yehi hota hai - people like gossip more than anything- and yahan toh TuHir were showing up together after so long. So ye toh hona hi tha


Noina, mujhe hi lagg rha tha ki jaake ek ghoos de du, brilliant work by you, you made me hate her even more, such a cheap lady, no dignity and sanity at all. You justified her character, you incarnated exactly how she behaves.

Thank you dear - glad I could justify Noinas character

Tulsi ne bahot kuch handle kiya, it takes a lot to be non reactive, courageous, unaffected, composed and calm, when someone assasinates your character or family matters publicly.

Haan it’s so difficult and terrible - society toh aisi hi hoti hai

Genuinely,Tulsi godd how she bear this humilation, how much inner strength she needs as a wife, as a woman, as dignified individual. She proving herself by building Bandhej from scratch to a known name today, still suffering from identify crisis?? 🙄😟

Exactly! Humiliation without any fault of hers and despite suffering so much already.


All she has to bear this, bcoz she is Mihir's wife. Or it's her own mistake to leave SN believing Noina's words more than Mihir's or not setting up a befitting reply to Noina as a wife, however, Mihir has been quiet on this many times, it's Mihir who has given more lenience to Noina to humiliate Tulsi, otherwise which woman on earth has the audacity to insult your wife. The culprit here is Mihir, who did not deny the fact that Noina is not his fiancée or acknowledged his affair/fling, but made public appearances with the lady openly, allowed her stay at SN. It's not easy to accept him, however genuine he has been, bringing your najayaz rishta home is utter disgusting. 🙄🙄😡 So Tulsi's cold treatment towards him is definitely not wrong. Perceiving what we think as a character is different than how humiltaing and painful it is, when the society questions you, your emotions go for a toss🙄🙄. Emotionally weak karna, sanskar, sahi, galat, acche insan, good traits, ko leke Noina hamesha wohi auzaar use karrhi hai, enotionally blackmail karo, weak karo, sanskari log hai they will easily succumb to these manipulations, kyunki ethics ke saath saath, human emotions ko bhi value dete hai, so it's easy to belittle them, insult them, abuse and blame them for being wrong, unkind, unfair, weak. 😡😡😡 Noina goddd such a disgusting woman, intolerable.

If Mihir had told her clearly ki mujhe kuch yaad nahi uss raat ka aur Noina bol rahi hai kuch hua - then she wouldn’t have left like that.. but if you remember that scene before the tulsi plant - their confrontation before she left - Mihir was like I am sorry galti ho gayi mujhse.. bahut stress tha etc isiliye ye galti ho gayi - so it’s like he believed noinas words and she believed his words. If he had given her any idea that he doesn’t remember anything things would have been different.

Yes - correct definitely Mihir is the culprit here. Like I said Abhi ek previous response mein - logon ka affair hota hai toh bhi kisi ko pata nahi chalne dete - here Mihir did the most stupid thing a man can do - affair naa hote hue poori duniya ko dikhaya

So the next bakra would be his friend Ashish. Ashish has to be protected from noina.

Yeah let’s see it Mihir can do it- save him.

I loved Tulsi's tum girne ki aadi ho, aur kitna girogi?? Mihir paying no attention to her, protecting Tulsi from this evil lady's taunts, insults such a marathon of a job. However this lady will pull her stunts to separate Tulsi n Mihir so that she can emotionally weaken Tulsi. Tulsi's identity is questioned, pitied, and made remarks on her personal life with her husband. It's nit easy for Tulsi to take these however prepared you have come. Such a tough time.

(Good you are showing him doing the right job here, show me to mujhe Mihir ko maarne ka mann karrha tha. 😡)

Yes so difficult to take that crap from society. Yes Noina is always cheap and manipulative.

Agar ab bhi Mihir doesn’t behave/does the right thing toh Meri story mein toh he lose tulsi permanently


Tulsi's silence at the end says lot many things, Mihir's anger, restlessness, helplessness, he can't wait to ask Tulsi, why her facial expressions, vody language changee, what the evil woman has brought to the table in particular that made Tulsi indifferent, quiet.

Yes Tulsi kaise aur Kya bataaye? And Mihir can’t be at peace until he knows - aur see what happens- he bangs the seat between them in anger and frustration- wohi gussa jo Noina ne bola

Tulsi's presence of mind, reminding Mihir they aren't alone in the car shows her personality and strength to bit react immediately, but handle things with calmness when needed. Mihir is restless, he knew Tulsi got affected, tum jaan ke kya karoge, main tumhe bacha rhi hoon khud se, mere paas koi jawab nhi hai. Beautiful conversation ❤️ lands straight, crystal clear the emotions were put here.

So glad the scene came out well.


Her composed face, eagerly waiting for how the event went, and if they had any uneasy moments, awkward questions and looks of people, which affected them. Family surely does anticipated that there will be way more gossip and unwanted talks, stories regarding Mihir n Tulsi's reunion. However, they all together will solve the issues gping forward, the first event will have all cooked up stories, as the public appearances increases with Bandhej's work in the front, ppl will forget this too.

Yeah the family does that naa - worries about how it went- and tulsi dint want to tell any one - exactly- dheere dheere people will forget.. already isi event ke end tak people were more interested in bandhej rather than gossip on TuHirs relationship

Take a bow writer, you have been wonderful with this Chapter, I'm short of words to describe the restlessness, frustration and the emotional turmoil both Mihir n Tulsi going thru.

Thank you thank you so much!! Taking a bow.

You have done a great job. I probably lived all the characters as i read each line. The demeanor of Noina you portrayed very well.

Thank you dear.. I am glad I could bring the characters including Noina alive!!


Toofan sa tha ye chapter, bahor sawal ke saath.

1. Is it to show off the world Tulsi living with Mihir?

2. Is it because she knew he loves her and she loves him she decided to live with him.

3. Has she decided just bcoz he repents every mistake and betrayal of his??

4. Has she accepted him for her family, children's happiness?

5. Has she accepted him bcoz he is a changed man, who loves her, owns his mistakes, apologetic about it, guilt ridden and do not know to live without her.

All the above are true except maybe 4 - Kuch hadd tak woh bhi hai hi reason but it’s the least important reason - for kids and family ke liye she can come home not accept him back solely for that reason

For me the answer is, if you love someone and do not find why you love them enormously, if you don't find the reason for loving him, then you truly love him, his entirety, his negatives, faults, his goods n bads.

Oh my gosh!! Ye words padhke mujhe doubt ho raha hai ki have you read the next chapter 😂😂

Thank you soo much dear!!

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Posted: 10 hours ago

Originally posted by: fan_fiction123

Thank u for this wonderful review. Sorry for the delay in responding but I wanted to reply when I could do justice to it,

Chapter 32.. it beautifully balanced a successful public evening with the private emotions that still remain unresolved between TuHir. 😊

thank you for saying this - I’m glad I could strike a balance


Tulsi revisiting their room and finding set and the note. Processing it, single tear, decided to wear it. Everything you depicted so beautifully 😍

On the show, Mihir has been such a moron ki I have to keep adding proofs of his fidelity and love at every place for tulsi to find. Glad it worked well here and the entire scene came out so well.

One of my favorite things about this chapter was how naturally Mihir and Tulsi moved around each other. Him recognizing the set, her recognizing the suit she had bought him years ago, and them noticing the slightest change in each others expressions 😍. Those little moments felt incredibly intimate and real. ❤️

Correct! Now last few days they have developed or rather found back their comfort level & natural ease with one another. That’s why I gave a few days transition with a few stray incidents (lighter, shoulder touching, stumbling and catching etc.)

The scenes before the event were especially lovely. Shobha helping Tulsi get ready was warm and emotional. It was nice to see Tulsi being cared for instead of always taking care of everyone else. Only daughters can do that - first Nandini on holi and now Shobha looking after her in their own way

Yes actually that scene of Shobha doing her makeup was inspired from the show itself - at least 2 times in the show - Shobha has applied or told tulsi to apply red lipstick.

😃 The way Mihir’s eyes appreciated her in her new look and she noticed that 😃🥰 And Garima’s comments about the saree and the necklace were absolutely adorable. Her belief that someone had brought stars from the sky for her Nani created one of the sweetest moments in the entire chapter. 😊

Of course - Mihir toh flat ho Gaya use dekhke..Garima is soo cute naa.. I was inspired from that phrase- aasman se taare Tod ke laaoon. It is what a kid would say naturally naa. For kids diamonds can become stars

The conclave itself felt alive because every guest had an opinion, assumption, or hidden agenda. Nobody openly attacked Mihir and Tulsi, yet every conversation carried some kind of judgment or curiosity. The social atmosphere was written very well, making the room feel like a silent audience watching them all evening or movie. ❤️

So happy that the conclave came out well enough. Took a few rewrites to get it right..


Mihir’s characterization was one of the biggest highlights. Him attending as Tulsi’s plus one and choosing the Bandhej table, redirecting conversations back to Tulsi’s expertise, and correcting people who framed Tulsi as lucky all showed how much his priorities have changed. By the end of the evening, everyone could see that he was standing beside Tulsi, not in front of her. 😊

Correct!! He was standing beside and sometimes even behind Tulsi


Tulsi’s strength came from her dignity, patience, and composure. She simply remained calm and refused to let others control the narratives of the conversation or fueling anyone’s gossip. Loved her “Tumhe girne ki aadat pad gayi hai,” it landed so effectively. ❤️

Correct - earlier I wrote that line as - kitna girogi tum..

This line I felt more clinical, kind of a diagnostic thing- like u diagnose an illness. So I changed it to this.

Noina’s downfall was handled brilliantly. She wasn’t exposed or publicly humiliated. Instead, she slowly realized that the story she had spent years building was no longer working. The most powerful symbol of this was Mihir walking past the Virani table and sitting beside Tulsi at the Bandhej table. That single action probably hurt more than any argument could have. 😊It was so satisfying 😃

Of course! As you probably realize, I am staying away from cliches and typical drama..

correct! Bechari noina - 3 din aur itne favors leke - she secured that table next to virani industries table for Ashish. Aur mila kya - ek taraf Ashish doosri taraf that lecherous man.

Noina mentioned the pillar incident. Unlike her earlier comments, this one touched a real wound. Tulsi’s reaction felt very authentic because trauma often remembers fear and impact more strongly than facts. The brief moment where she froze was heartbreaking and showed that some scars still remain. ❤️💔 Amar’s Mihir had done something similar in S1 initial days where she even left the house for that. I am excited to see how you handle that conversation.
Yes that was a real unhealed wound - traumatic memories continue to hurt a lifetime even if the person responsible for it has changed.

@bold - I think u are going to be disappointed with my handling of that conversation

I hope Mihir grovels before her for these particular incidents where he almost struck her. I can’t imagine how someone who loves other so much can even do that unless they have some sort of psychological issues. 🥺🧐

Yaaar!! Hasn’t he suffered in guilt enough?

Correct!! Even I don’t understand this - but it happens irl too I think - men often hit the women they love a lot

The car ride home was awesome too. After spending the entire evening composed and controlled, both Mihir and Tulsi finally allowed some of their emotions to show. Mihir’s frustration and desperation to know what Noina had said felt completely understandable. Tulsi’s refusal to tell him also made perfect sense. Neither of them was wrong, which made the scene even stronger. 😊

Exactly! Both were right in their own places. Did you see one thing - Mihir ko Aaj hi ke din itna gussa aana tha ki he banged the seat between them, jab Noina ne gusse aur haath uthane ki baat ki..

The line “Main tumhe bacha rahi hoon. Khud se.” was one of the best lines in the entire chapter. It perfectly captured their current relationship and all the complicated emotions between them. ❤️

Thank you for these words dear! I wrote the words after a lot of thinking..


Overall, long awaited evening was a success. Bandhej received recognition. Society began changing its perception of Mihir and Tulsi. Noina lost ground throughout the night. Yet the most important issue remained unresolved. Tulsi still carries painful memories, and Mihir still does not know what Noina said. That lingering tension makes the ending much more powerful. 😊

Yeah so glad it came out exactly as i wanted

Glad the ending tension was well placed.

I also am looking forward to if and how Mihir’s Ashish will find out about Noina.

Let’s see if he finds out in time or if Mihir can warn him off Noina

Thank you soo much for this lovely review dear!!

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