The Daughters of Udaipur:Fan Fiction - Page 3

Nishta should have mentioned abhir too but thik hain loved both ladies gossiping about it lol

Arman is so dumb it's pathetic. Him making bageera widow and leaving 2 kids and entire useless poddar is such a selfish decision. He really fears tears over his death lol

Lol maida don't know varnica yet but mukti figured her out already

Glad that harshu approves of ru and darshu and they are still in touch

What about abir ?

Some one awesome for ru please but some dhamka for ar.and ab

Waiting to see how about reacts to ak dance academy news and ar sickness

I hope about does not jump.go.conclusions why she was not notified..it should have been ar decision

This stalker thing could have been handled with more maturity

You're writing skills are really good....

Loved the chapters...

Hope she(abhira) doesn't get in her head to contest to akashara academy coz even after knowing about the existence of the academy she has done nothing about it...and I don't want her to fight about it....

Loved everything..

Hey one more thing please change Arman's age....he can't be 32 maira is shown 16 and Daksh 18....Arman and abhira are in their late 40's early 50's...

I understand itv has no logic and the main leads still act like they just met but don't do that here please ..

Hey you ok..? Its been a while you updated the story....do continue

Originally posted by: ashsamik

Hey you ok..? Its been a while you updated the story....do continue

Yeah the forum is dead....there is nothing new here....

Thats why we are waiting for your story...😊