TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch23 on pg 44: The Missing Pieces - Page 43

Cliffhanger. Now that’s just cruel 😃

Mihir’s reaction really stood out. The overwhelming breakdown at the thought of losing her again… sob sob 🥺 It hit hard. His instinct to take the easy exit, and then consciously choosing to stay and face it instead, felt powerful and completely true to his arc you are trying to show in this story.

This chapter feels like a careful build-up for what’s coming next. I’ll share a more detailed review once I’ve read both this and the next chapter together.

This classic song❤️❤️❤️ reminded me Mihir n Tulsi's dilemma n fear.

tera mera pyar amar, phir kyo mujhko lagta hai dar

tera mera pyar amar, phir kyo mujhko lagta hai dar

mere jivan saathi bata, dil kyo dhadke rah rah kar

kya kaha hai chand ne, jisko sunke chandani

har lahar pe jhumake, kyo ye nachane lagi

chahat ka hai harsu asar, phir kyo mujhko lagta hai dar

tera mera pyar amar, phir kyo mujhko lagta hai dar

Originally posted by: ABC_1234

I have loved it! Eagerly waiting for the next update can’t hold my horses though! 😭

thank you dear

bas writing next

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Thanku so much dear for the update will wait eagerly for the next update

thank you dear, next maybe tomorrow or day after.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Even garima knows that tulsi loves mihir the most.Tulsi teaching mitali to cook was unexpected and interesting. How you wrote that only a woman can understand what the other woman does was nice.

Hey dear, thank you for your feedback.

The kids saw tulsis pics in Mihir’s room na.. so they asked him why so many pics of Nani/baa? Mihir said because he loves her very much and told them to keep it a secret. Yes Mitali wants to learn to make dal dhokli from tulsi. Exactly I do believe tulsi was also wrong (maybe just 1-2% wrong) to trust Noina whom she hardly knew

Originally posted by: bpatil3

This classic song❤️❤️❤️ reminded me Mihir n Tulsi's dilemma n fear.

tera mera pyar amar, phir kyo mujhko lagta hai dar

tera mera pyar amar, phir kyo mujhko lagta hai dar

mere jivan saathi bata, dil kyo dhadke rah rah kar

kya kaha hai chand ne, jisko sunke chandani

har lahar pe jhumake, kyo ye nachane lagi

chahat ka hai harsu asar, phir kyo mujhko lagta hai dar

tera mera pyar amar, phir kyo mujhko lagta hai dar

Hey apt song again and one of my favorites!!

I also read your review for chapter 18 - it’s beautiful - I will respond in a while or tomorrow morning

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Chapter 18

Bin Maange... The Title is apt for all the mothers who dedicated their life for their family without any reward or appreciation. It's not sacrifice, it's the oneness, belonging they felt, they build their home silently without complaints or hardly any complaints when they are badly ill. Kudos to such women.

Hey dear was eagerly waiting for your review- and the wait was totally worth it.

Correct - mothers even if working, they still do everything for the kids and family and husband - without any expectations as you say

Tulsi has been taking care of Pari, effortlessly, she didn't even hold any anger or want to punish her kid, when she is all sick n suffering. That's mother n her selfless love❤️.

Tulsi does have an idea about Pari helping Noina earlier but she’s already forgiven her for everything long back

Mithali noticing altogether a different atmosphere, a bond, affection, care, concern and love. she probably had ever cherished that parents love n care for their kid when it really is suffering. Mitali admiring Tulsi and being supportive to her taking care of Pari. The awkwardness between her n Vrinda will still be there for sometime until they talk normally.

Yes Mitali hasn’t seen family or love amongst parent-kid or siblings or between generations like this and all the people were there even when Noina was in the house and tulsi was not! Tulsi ke ghar aate hi jo difference hai - she can feel that and is awe of it - true, vrinda will take time to trust her

Between all this Pari realizing her mistakes and feeling guilty about her helping Noina's trap, ruining her life, separating her parents. especially letting her mother live a homeless, lone life and she don't know how to apologize her. Well depicted.

Thank you dear, I am glad this part came out well

The dining table light moments khichdi everything was normal. Tulsi n Mihir looking at each other silently, Pari noticing and smiling, she is some how at peace to see her parents being by each other.

Exactly

Pari is the reason to separate her parents, here Pari's sickness becomes the reason to reunite her parents, temporarily. Finding ways to atleast initiate some talks about Pari or Garima etc as a team.

Yes she saw that and is happy about it

She must be thanking her stars for giving her this opportunity to create such a tiny effort.

yes

Tulsi effortlessly entering Mihir's room, has relieved so much it is as clean n pure as she left, it stated all. She looking at the wall, taking her time to reminiscent her memory said it all.

Earlier that room was a wound to her - the scene of Mihir Noina hugging and she saying I love you Mihir (Jo dikhaaya tha show me). But once she saw those pics and then came to know it was protected by Mihir from noina - that scene doesn’t come to her memory now.

Mihir's Green Tea, conversation changing to Pari, Tulsi noticing it and curious to know what is it he holding, well described.

Thank you- I’m glad

Mihir is desperate to know where is Tulsi going to sleep tonight. Somehow he feels, the distance from his room, staircase to Baa's room is much longer, probably he is not finding the ways to enter it, perhaps do not want to create awakwrdness for Tulsi and want to let her live peacefully where she likes. Tulsi staying at Pari's room, often entering his room bcoz of Garima and Tea etc, although he liked it, he cannot compell her to be here. He will be disappointed once Pari is fit n fine, he will miss these smallest efforts and the moments they share to talk to each other. Loved it. ❤️

Yes he is! Glad you caught it! There’s nothing more than her moving to that bedroom that he would want but of course he would never force her for anything now

Thank you writer. Sorry for the delayed comment.

pleasure is mine. Thank you dear and no sorry please- I understand you were busy

thank you so much again for this beautiful review! My replies in red

Hello dear, sorry that I didn’t send a detailed review earlier, and I completely understand why you asked for one over DM. This chapter really deserves it. 👏🏻😇

As I mentioned, I had to reread couple times before my treacherous brain processed beyond the meeting part and stopped wondering what would happen next.. 😃🫣 Would Gautam flip, would Karan arrive on time, would RV know he has been deceived by Angad etc. etc.

Chapter 22: is one of your most emotionally precise chapters so far. What stands out most is how controlled everything feels. The silences, pauses, and small gestures do the work, and they land beautifully.

Tulsi is the quiet center here. Her strength is in restraint, in observation, in choosing when not to react. The balcony scene, especially during the call, is devastating in its stillness. Her “tum hoti kaun ho” doesn’t feel like anger but feels like a boundary drawn after years of endurance, and that makes it far more powerful. Loved it. I wish show Mihir Tulsi would have said that at least once. Sadly they both let Noina and Pari walk all over them.

Wondering if Tulsi’s emotional retreat comes due to the fact that she became extremely aware that she has been fooled by Noina when she orchestrated the whole bedroom scene and taking pride in it to the extent that Noina still has audacity to blackmail Mihir over it. That too in Tulsi’s name by calling her “any self respecting woman” and in a way demeaning Mihir. Maybe she didn’t like Noina still bullying ‘her’ Mihir (in Baa’s words) 😉

As I said earlier, Mihir’s breakdown is heart breaking. Almost wondered if he would have one of his episodes bringing them more close that night. Well greedy brain wants more TuHir moments 😇

The parallel tension between the emotional arc (Tulsi & Mihir) and the external conflict (the company takeover) is handled really well.

The boardroom setup at the end is especially effective. Feels like a battlefield where personal history and power politics are about to collide. Loved Tulsi Mihir’s united front and the fact that their kids were expecting it that they didn’t even blink when she sat next to him when at least in their minds they feel that their parents won’t even look at eqch other home forget about talking or sharing messages.

Mitali asking for trust, Mihir silently choosing to stay, Gautam’s entrance add to a sense that multiple threads are about to converge in a big way.

Overall, this chapter feels like a pause before impact but not a quiet one. It’s loaded, intentional, and emotionally dense. Really strong groundwork for what’s coming next.

Awaiting next 😇🤗

One completely different note, wondering if Mitali eventually confess and take action against Noina for drugging Mihir without his consent, possibly involving the Narcotics angle? I guess not as then she will be caught too 🤷🏻‍♀️ Maybe over time, the other Virani kids could step in legally regarding the company violations to close every door for Noina and ensuring she’s out of TuHir’s lives for good 😃

Great chapter!

Noina's intermission *phone call* was necessary so that Tulsi could realise that what it would mean if she forgives Mihir. But heart goes for Mihir .. I think this was his breaking point... Two things that were most important to him - Tulsi and the Virani's Legacy... One he has lost already and other is on the verge of lost!

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Tulsi's thought on log kya kehnge were so right for everyone... On choosing to do something which will be questioned or accepting something because you had no other options... First one will let us breathe freely even when no one is there to support you.. but fir second option even if Tulsi will be surrounded by happy people for her decision to be with mihir ... She is going to feel suffocated..!

.the only path where Mihir and Tulsi can unite is by exposing Noina's crime to the world . What she did to their company as well as to Mihir also .

Excited for next chapter...

Originally posted by: fan_fiction123

Hello dear, sorry that I didn’t send a detailed review earlier, and I completely understand why you asked for one over DM. This chapter really deserves it. 👏🏻😇

As I mentioned, I had to reread couple times before my treacherous brain processed beyond the meeting part and stopped wondering what would happen next.. 😃🫣 Would Gautam flip, would Karan arrive on time, would RV know he has been deceived by Angad etc. etc.

Chapter 22: is one of your most emotionally precise chapters so far. What stands out most is how controlled everything feels. The silences, pauses, and small gestures do the work, and they land beautifully.

Tulsi is the quiet center here. Her strength is in restraint, in observation, in choosing when not to react. The balcony scene, especially during the call, is devastating in its stillness. Her “tum hoti kaun ho” doesn’t feel like anger but feels like a boundary drawn after years of endurance, and that makes it far more powerful. Loved it. I wish show Mihir Tulsi would have said that at least once. Sadly they both let Noina and Pari walk all over them.

Wondering if Tulsi’s emotional retreat comes due to the fact that she became extremely aware that she has been fooled by Noina when she orchestrated the whole bedroom scene and taking pride in it to the extent that Noina still has audacity to blackmail Mihir over it. That too in Tulsi’s name by calling her “any self respecting woman” and in a way demeaning Mihir. Maybe she didn’t like Noina still bullying ‘her’ Mihir (in Baa’s words) 😉

As I said earlier, Mihir’s breakdown is heart breaking. Almost wondered if he would have one of his episodes bringing them more close that night. Well greedy brain wants more TuHir moments 😇

The parallel tension between the emotional arc (Tulsi & Mihir) and the external conflict (the company takeover) is handled really well.

The boardroom setup at the end is especially effective. Feels like a battlefield where personal history and power politics are about to collide. Loved Tulsi Mihir’s united front and the fact that their kids were expecting it that they didn’t even blink when she sat next to him when at least in their minds they feel that their parents won’t even look at eqch other home forget about talking or sharing messages.

Mitali asking for trust, Mihir silently choosing to stay, Gautam’s entrance add to a sense that multiple threads are about to converge in a big way.

Overall, this chapter feels like a pause before impact but not a quiet one. It’s loaded, intentional, and emotionally dense. Really strong groundwork for what’s coming next.

Awaiting next 😇🤗

One completely different note, wondering if Mitali eventually confess and take action against Noina for drugging Mihir without his consent, possibly involving the Narcotics angle? I guess not as then she will be caught too 🤷🏻‍♀️ Maybe over time, the other Virani kids could step in legally regarding the company violations to close every door for Noina and ensuring she’s out of TuHir’s lives for good 😃

reserved for later response