| hey guyz..howz u all... u all must b wondering.. y I opened a new post.. well d reason is dere were some errors in posting new parts or editing d previous one.. so I opened a new thread ...😃 PART ---- 1 - 17 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=935527&T PN=1 PART ---- 18 - 19 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=935527&T PN=90 |
well i m a lil upset coz of some people.. y u all r turning into silent readers.. huh.. 😭 dis is not done yaar.. afterall I re-opened dis ff coz of ur luv..😳 n i feel now u hv stoped liking my ff... 😔so I think I should end dis ff on a happy note..coz u hv stope liking it...😭
do comment
Luv u all..
Chandni😊
PART - 20
hi guyz...howz u all... dis part is dedicted to TIYA.... MY SPECIAL FRD...😳 THE ABOVE SIGGY IS MADE BY HER... BUT SHE REFUSED TO TAKE CREDIT😉BUT I WOULD LIKE TO SAY HER THANK U ONCE AGAIN...😃 LUV U TIYA 😳
lets cont. wid d part..
recap - ridz get nottie !!!😉
r - ouch... armaan ...😉
ar - k..kya hua..😕
r - armaan ..kuch chubh raha hai.. pata nai kya (n starts itching her back)😆
ar - dikhao main dekhun..😳 (he removes her net n touches her back.😳.)
r - ahh.. armaan sach mein kuch hai.. 😆
(n smiles 4m d corner of her lips.😛. armaan notices dis... n gives a nottie smile..😈 now he knew wat 2 do..😉)
ar - nai ridhima kuch nai hai.. n moves his hand on her back...😳
r - ahh.. armaan.. ouch ...dekho na pata nai kya hai..😆
ar - all rite den.... (he opens her zip )😳😳
ridhima shocked ...😲
r - kya kar rahe ho .. n jumps out 4m armaan's lap. n lie straight on bed to hide her bare back 😳... n tries to close d zip... armaan jumps on ridhima...😳
ar - arre..kya hua.. tum hi ne to kaha tha kuch chubh raha hai..😉
r - to tum zip khol doge..😡😳
ar - ab tum chillati ja rai thi...😆
r - hatto ..😳
ar - kyun.. ab jab zip khol hi di hai.. to baki kaam bhi karne do..😉
r - armaan...😳
ar - i mean ..dekhne do na kya hai.. 😆
r - tum kabhie nai sudhroge... 😳
ar - ridhima.. ab ismein sudhrane ki kya baat hai .. main to tumhari help kar raha tha..😆
r - koi zarrorat nai hai... plz hato ..mujhe zip band karni hai...😳
ar - arre mahotarma.. aapk ghulam k hote hue ..aap kyun takleef karti hai.. hum hai na..aapki madat k liye...😳😆
r - armaan..😳
ar -(gets up 4m her)achcha turn ..main band kar deta hun..😊
r - (shows him finger) no shaitani..😊
ar - haan.. pakka.. no shaitani.. only duty nibhani 😉(i know chori ka hai.. par thoda innovate kar diya 😆)
ridhima turns.. armaan starts closing her zip v slowly.. showers kisses on her bare back.😳. evrytym he move his hand up to close d zip..😳
r - armaan... n tightly hold the bed sheet...😳
armaan hold her fist tightly.... she closes her eyes ... armaan turns her face 2wards him.😳..n stares her beutiful eyes.. ridhima could feel his stare ..😳 he moves down n kisses her eyes... ridhima.. keeps her hands on armaan's back ..😳. he kisses her cheeks n finally her lips.. both share sum passionate moments n go to sleep...😳😊
RAHUL'S HOUSE..
r - (talking to himself)kya karun .. muskaan se baat karne ka bahut maan.. kar raha hai.😳. aur ye punjaban cel off kar k mazze se koi comedy picture dekh rai hogi..😆. aur yahan main pagalon ki tarah usse baat karne k liye marra jaa raha hun.. 😆kya karun..........
ek kam karta hun.. uske ghar chala jata hun.😉. nai nai .. agar itni raat ghar gaya to mujhe chittar(sandal) utha k maregi.😆😆... par milna to padega...😛 ok.. cool down..relax...take some deep breath.. f9 .. ek kaam karta hun... kidhki se jaunga.😳. usse surprize dunga.. tab shayad bach jaun..😉.. g8 yahi karunga.. rahul u r genius....😃😉
(n leaves 4 muskaan's home)
MUSKAAN'S HOME...
muskaan njying her bath..under d shower.. n singing songs😆.. enters rahul 4m window.😳. n searches 4 her.. realizes she is bathroom n prefer to w8 4 her.. in her bedroom only...😳
muskaan.. over wid d bath suddenly a lizard falls on her shoulder... she starts screaming.😆..rahul get up.. but is helpless coz muski is in bathroom...😳 muskaan throws d lizard quickly cums out (still screaming)covering her self wid towel...😳 n hugs rahul.. 😳😳n shut her eyes tightly..😳. without realizing who was d guy... opps who was dere in her home....
soon she realizes n luks up at rahul n feels v. awkward..😳 as she was just in a towel.. she leaves him..rahul..picks up a bed sheet 4 bed .. n covers her..😳😳😳
m - tu... tu yahan.. (still holding his shirt...😳) itni raat ko..😳
r - vo.. vo..actualy..teri bahut yaad... yaad aa rai thi.. aur.. tera cel.. cell bhi off tha.. to socha... tujhse mil kar tujhe surprize de dun..😉
muskaan realizes her position... n leaves his shirt.. n tries to move...but looses her balance..(coz of long sheet😆).. rahul catches her... both luk deep into each others eyes... 😳
m - ra..hulll..😳
r - mus..kann😳
muskaan turns away her face from him😳rahul holds her 4m shoulders n pulls d sheet a lil down 😳, slowly removes her wet hair 4m her shoulder.. n kisses .. a chil runs down muskaan's spine... muskaan.. deeply lost in d moment n so rahul.. share some intimate moments.. 😳just wen he was about to kiss her lips ..muskaan cums back to her senses... n pushes him away... rahul realizes wat dey were doing... 😕feels sry..
r - i ..m .. sry muskaan..
m - rahul ..tu ja..plz ja.. abhi k abhi ja.. plzz
r- i m gng.. i m sry muskaan... i m really v. sry..
he moves backward looking at her n moves out of d window..n waves hand.. muskaan luks down without wishing him gud bye😭 .. rahul reaches back his home....
ok guyz.. dats it 4 d day...hope u njyed..
do comment n plzzz plzzz plzzzz i alwayz w8 4 ur suggestions... n one request .. i really respect n luv ur comments.. so plz instead of giving me pms about ur comments or critics..or nything.. plz comment it here in dis section only.......
Luv u
Chandni...
PART - 21
hey guyzz..i m really v. sry 4 d delay..was nt wel at all.😭..n was really v. busy coz of college n stuff....
ok b4 u start reading dis part..let me tell u .. i m nt sure weder itz gud or bad.. coz dere is less of romance ,😭 most of d part covers rahul - muski scene only 😉.. so plz armi - ridzi n atul - anjie fans..really v. sry.. but next part wll surely b full of romance.😳.. so plz bear wid dis part...hope u dnt find it boring..(fingers crossed..)😕
recap -rahul go back his home..
both not able to sleep at nite.. thinking watever happened.. is nt rite.. n should not hv happened...😭
MRG. - SANJEEVANI - LOCKER ROOM..
Every1 dere in locker room except muskaan..
at - (2 armaan) to tera pakka hai..ki tu bangkok ja raha hai..😕
ar - hmmm..
at - ridhima ko akela chhod ke..😉
r - atul.. to kya hua.. itne logon mein ye opportunity armaan ko mili hai..😃 aur main nai chahti meri vajah se vo ye opportunity miss kare..😳 aur vaise bhi main akeli kahan ..mere saath to tum sab ho..😊 (in low voice..lukin at ar..) akela to armaan hoga..mere.😳.i mean hum sab k bina..😉
an - oo.. meri choti si behan..shaadi k baad itni badi ho jayegi..mujhe pata hi nai tha.. rite rahul..😉
rahul luking at door..w8n 4 muskaan...unknown wat is happening..😛
an - rahul !😕
r - hmm.. haan anjali bolo..😕
an - main kya tum bolo.. kaun si duniya mein ho...😆
at - ohh.. abhi tak muskaan nai aayi na..isliye..😆
ar - (to tease rahul)😉 arre champ... kyun usse tang kar raha hai.. MUSKAAN.. aati hi hogi.. aakhir MUSKAAN ..bhi to rahul ko miss kar rai hogi.. hai na MUSKAAN... i mean basket.. 😆😆😆
ra - dekh tu. 😡enters muskaan...😉
at - (starts singing) ghar aaya.. mera pardesi.. pyaas bhuji meri akhiyon(eyes) ki 😆😆
ra- atul..😡
mu - hi..😊
all - (except rahul) hi..😊
muskaan luks at rahul.. n greets him by sign language (of eyes u c😳)
at n ar ( sings 2gether) aankhoin ki.. gustankhiyaan... maaf ho..😆
all laugh except ra n mu..
muskaan without reacting goes to operate her locker n so rahul..😊
ri -(whispers) inhe..kya hua hai..😕
an - ( W )dnt know.. aapas mein baat tak nai kari..😕
muskaan turns.. n sits on bench to tie her payal.. rahul stares her..😳
n others stare dem.. n den each other..😆
ar - at (2gether sing..) ishq - haye !!!😳😆
rahul cums back to senses .. n starts itching his head.. muskaan unaware wat rahul was doing.. 😆
ra -amm...chalen.. duty pe late ho jayeingein..😕
ar - (keeps his hand on rahul's shoulder) arree.. champ.. tune hamare priy mitr(best frd.) rahul ko bataya nai.. ki aaj duty..10 baje se start hai 9 baje se nai..😉
ra - kya.. 😕
at - haan .. chal tab tak canteen chalte hai..😊
all start walking.. muskaan stops n hold her head..sh was nt. well n suddenly fell down on floor... 😕everybody shocked...😲
every1 tries to wake her up...
r- muskaan.. muskaan... n notices..her body was v.hot..
r - armaan..isse to bahut tez bukhar hai..
an - o god.. jaldi karo..isse ward mein le chalte hai..
every1 rush 2wards ward... after sumtym muskaan cums back 2 her senses.. n notices every1 around her...she tries to get up..rahul helps her.. she gets v. uncomfortable.. rahul notices dis.. n moves back after helpin her..
ri - ab kaisi ho muskaan..😕
m - bilkul changi..😊
at - kya khak changi.😆. dekh kitna bukhar hai tujhe..
enters dr.keerti..as dey all were late 4 reporting..
k - kya ho raha hai yahan pe..😡
ar - mam vo..😕
keerti notices mu on bed... n get tensed..
k - dr.muskaan kya hua aapko.. touches her...o god ..appko to bahut fever hai..😲
kisi ne inka temp. check kiya..😕
an - mam 104 degrees..
k - o god.. dr. muskaan ...aap aaj rest kijiye...
m - vo mam ...main ghar ja k rest kar lun..😕
k - kyun..😕
m - vo kya hai na mam.. hospital mein dr. hun to theek hai..lekin jaisi hi patient banti hun na..meri tabeeyat aur khrab ho jaati hai..😆
all giggle..😆
k - jaisi aapki marzi..par vahan aapka dhyan kaun rakhega.. i guess aap akeli rehti hai..😕
r - mam ..main jaun..😉
all luk at eah other..n smile..😉
k - aap..😕
r - mam ..i mean ..main muskaan ke ghar k paas rehta hun. 😉amm..to...to.. 😕
armaan interrupts..
ar - to..mam ye iski zyada achchi dekhbaal kar sakta hai ...😆
k - .😕
ri - jee..mam..ar theek keh raha hai.. 😛
at - haan mam..😆
an - yes mam..😆
k- ok..rahul aap aaj leave le lijiye.. aur muskaan ka dhyan rakhiyega..
r - jee mam..😊
rahul takes her back home... she was sleeping in car so he preffered to take her ..his home only.. 😳
SANJEEVANI..
all busy with dere respective duties.. after sumtym break..
LOCKER ROOM..
an - hope ..muski ab theek hogi..😕
at - rahul ko cal kar k pata karein?😕
ri - hmm.. gud idea..😊
atul calls rahul..but dere's some network problem..😕
at - arre aar ..network prob aa rai hai..😡
ar - 1 kaam karte hai ..duties over hone k baad muskaan k ghar chal te hai..😊
an - hmm. ye theek rahega..😊
RAHUL'S HOME...
MUSKAAN..WAKES UP..N SEES HERSELF IN RAHUL'S HOME .N RAHUL SITTING NEXT TO HER..APPLYING WET CLOTH ON HER 4HEAD...😳
m - rahul.. main yahan...(n tries to get up)😕
r - (rahul helps her)vo.. tu car mein so gayi thi..tere ghar ki keys ka pata nai tha..isliye maine socha ki tujhe yahin le aaun.. 😉ab teri tabeat kaisi hai..😕
m - theek hun..😊
r - tere liye kuch khane ko lata hun..😊
he goes n brings some fruits..she refuses to each..he forcefully feeds her.. 😳
r - khayegi nai..to theek kaise hogi..aur fir mujhe maarne ki taakat kahan se layegi..😆
m - oye pidhdhe ..tujhe maarne k liye mujhe ye sab khane ki zaroorat nai hai.. n hits him on his arm..😆😆
r - ouch !! ..😆 punjaban.. bimaar hai to itni tez maarti hai.. theek hogi to pata nai kya karegi..😆
both laugh ..but stop.. as both recall dere previous nite..😳
r - amm.. muskaan.. kal jo hua ..usk liye i m sry..
m - (bends her head) nai rahul..galti dono ki thi..to.. tu kyun..😕
r - mujhe tere ghar aise nai aana chahiye tha..😭
m - (in a v.low vol.) mujhe acha laga tu aaya..mujhse milne..
rahul stares her.. 😳
m - aise kya dekh raha hai...😕
r - tu naaraz to nai hai na..😕
m - nai..😳
both of dem.. chit - chat 4 a long tym...in sanjeevani..duties over all others reach mu home..
at - arre ghar to lock hai...😲
ri - inti tabeeyat khrab mein kahan ja sakti hai..😕
ar - rahul ko fone karte hai..
armaan dials d no. rahuls picks up..
ar - rahul..muskaan kahan hai..😕
r- vo mere ghar par😳 ..par tu kyun pooch raha hai..😕
ar - vo hum sab usse milne aaye the..😊
r - tum log mere ghar aa jao..muskaan yahin hai..😳
ar - tere ghar ..kyun..😕
r - aa to sai ..sab bat dunga..😉
all reach at rahul's home..
ri - kaisi ho muskaan..😕
m - theek hun..😊
at - isliye rahul k ghar aa gayi..😉😆
she blushes..😳
ra - oye..kya kuch bhi bolta hai..😕
an - par muski..yahan kar kya rai hai.😕.
rahul explains everything..😊
ar - ohh..ok.. (whispers in atul's ear..) saala..tharki.. 😆😆
r - kya bola..😡
ar - k..kuch nai...muskaan kaisi hai..😉
ar - theek hun hero..😊
after 1 hr.. evry1 goes back.. muskaan still at rahul's home..as no1 is dere to take care of her..😳
MALIK'S HOUSE..😳
ar n ridz , sitting on bed.. watching a romantic movie.. ridhima's head on armaan's chest n his arm around her..😳
ri - kitna pyar karte hai na ek - dusre se..😳
ar - karte honge..lekin mujhse kam..😉
ri - acha kitna pyar karte ho mujhse..😉
ar - hmm.. tough ques😆
ri - y 😕
ar - apna pyaar bayaan to nai kar sakta..😉
ri - ye kaisa pyar hai...jo tum bata bhi nai sakte..( takes d remote n switches off d tv😉)
ar - ok.. ye to nai keh sakta ki kitna pyar karta hun..par itna zarror keh sakta hun ki...😳.
agar kabhie zindagi mein khud ko akela pao... to mud kar dekhna.saaye ki tarah tumhare saath milunga..😳
chand ki chandni (itz me 😆😆) jaise usk saath hamesha rehti hai.. 😳vaise tumhara saath kabhie nai chodunga..(ridhima luking deep into his eyes.. 😳)
aur..(n notices ridhima is crying)..oye ..kya hua..😕
ri - armaan.. itna pyar mat karo mujhe.😭. n holds him tightly..
ar - kyun..kyun na karun itna pyar..😳
ri - darr... lagta hai.. agar kabhie tumse bichchad gayi to kaise jeeyungi tumhare bin..😭
ar - phir vai baat.. maine kaha na..tumhe mujhse koi alag nai kar sakta..n tights his grip..😳
armaan in a v. naughty manner.. just to make atmosphere a lil light
ar - achcha 1 baat batao..😉
r- hmm..😊
ar - vo ladki agar minnie nai..sach mein mera koi past hoti..to tum kya karti..😉
r - main kya karti..mujhe tum par vishwas hai.. tum mujhe kabhie dhoka nai de sakte..😳
ar - ok..just assume.. sirf assume karo na plz 2 min k liye..agar vo tumse aa k kehti ki vo mujhse pyar karti hai..aur mujhe tumse alag kar degi to tum... kya karti😆😆
(r - removes her head 4m armaan's chest..n luk at him..)
r - muh noch leti uss chudel ka.. 😆😆
ar - achcha chilll..vapis aao.. 😆
again she keeps her head..on armaan..😳
ar - oye..main parso jaa raha hun..😭
ri - armaan..(she bcomes v.sad) n hugs him..tum baar baar mat kaha karo..😭
ar - kyun..😕
ri - kyunki.. main tumhare saath present moments ko njy nai kar paati..😳
ar - O.. to tum presents moments ..njy karna chahti ho..😉
r - hmm... n closes her eyes..😳
ar - moves his hand on ridhima's face..😳
she understood his intentions.. but kept her eyes closed..😉
ar - ridhima !!😳
r -armaan..sone do na.. 😆
ar - utho yaar.. mujhe tumse baat karni hai..
r - kal karna..😆
ar - f9.. shifts her on bed.. 😆😆
r - aree..
ar hatto..jao so jao..main bhi so raha hoon..😡
n turns his face away.. after 5 mins... ridzi blows some air in his ear..he smiles..but tries 2 hide...😉.
r - armaan...😊
ar - sone do..😆😉
r - to tum nai uthoge..😉
ar - nai..(n shows fake anger)😆
r - theek hai..😉
she starts tickling him... he unable to control.. jumps 4m d bed...ridhima giggles..😆😆
ar - kya hai.. abhi to tumhe bahut neend aa rai thi...😡
r - haan..par ab nai aa rai..😉
ar - mujhe aa rai hai..😆
r -o really ....😳
ridhima gets up 4m the bed ..n moves 2ward armaan.. n moves her finger on his face ...ina v. seductive manner...😳😳😳
r - (in a vvv..... seductive voice...😳😳😳.) par..maine to socha tha ki aaj poori raat jaage gein..😳😳
ar - (holds his finger..) achcha..😉
r - (whispers in his ear..)..so..wanna spend some lazy lamhe wid me.. n bites his ear..😳😉
ar - (pics her in his arm.. wid a v.evil smile..) y not..😈.
keeps her on bed.. removes his shirt.😳😳.armaan on top of rid..
armaan showers kisses on her...😳😳 rid nys every touch .. both were about 2lock dere lips...😳
tring tring !!!!!!!!!!!! phone rings..😡😡
ar - argh !!! main ye phone tod dunga..😡😆
r - armaan...jao phone dekho..😕
armaan picks up d phone.. dere was some emergency n he is asked to come 2 hospital 4 nite duty...😡 phone cut..
r - kiska phone tha..😕
ar - hosp. se..koi emergency hai..jaana padega..
he quickly gets ready..ws in abad mood .. n about 2 leave..ridhima pulls him back..😳
r - kuch bhool rahe ho..😳
(ar checks his wallent ..hankerchief..n stuff..😆.)
ar - nai..😕
ridhima..keeps her arms around her neck.. n moves her face close 2 his face... n gives him a passionate kiss on lips..😳😳. after few mins..
ar - wow..😉
r - jao !! 😆
armaan leaves...😊
precap - atul - anjie romance... ridz armaan emotional n passionate moments !!😳
do comment..
Luv
Chandni😳
PART - 22
hey guyz.. thnx seriously i was v. scared while posting d previous part😕..phew !!now i m satisfied....😃
here's d next part...
MRG. - SANJEEVANI
no masti 2day😭 as muski is nt wel evn rahul is wid her.. armaan back at home..coz of nite duty..😡
locker room anjie already dere enters atul..
at - hi..😊
an - hi..😳
at - sab kahan hai ?😕
an - muski abhi bhi bimaar hai..rahul ussi k saath hai.. ridz aur armaan aate hi honge.😊
at - matlab..tab tak hum akele hai ??😉
anjie moves back..😳
an - hmm...😳
atul moves forward n holds her 4m waist..😳😳
at - kab tak bhagogi..😳
an - atul abhi nai plzz.. hosp. hai..koi aa jayega..😳
at - to ..😉
an- atul.. 😳
at - moves his face closer to her.. n was about 2 kiss her cheek..😳
an - atul sister luvly..😆atul quickly leaves ..she starts laughing..😆. as no one was dere..😆 n tries 2 run... atul pulls her back n drags to the changing room..😳😳
both face 2 face ..atul twists her arms..😛
an - ahh.atul..plz jaane do..😳
at - nai..pehle 1 kiss do..😉
an - atul koi aa jayega..😕
at - koi nai aayega..aur agar aa gaya to main sambhal lunga..😉
anjie blushes.. atul leaves her hand..n moves his face closer to anjie's face.. n first kisses her eyes..😳 anjie holds atul's shirt .. den moves dwn to cheeks..n finally kisses her beutiful pink lips..😳😳 completely lost in each other.. 4getn were dey were... deeply lost in each others arms😳share d most first n passionate kiss .😳. after sumtym both depart.. anjie v.shy.. hugs him tightly...suddenly dey depart as dey cud hear someone's footsteps😡..anjie asks atul to wipe of the lipstick mark 😳n runs out of the changing room... n sees ridz cuming..
r - hugs her.. hii di..😃
an - hi..a..hi ridz..😕😊
r - di kya hua.. aap theek ho..itne nervous kyun ho ?😕
an - ner..nervous.. aur main..no..no way.. 😕😊😕
atul comes out of d changing room ridz understands all coz she had seen anjie cumin out of the room 2 ..n smiles naughtily..😉😛
at - hi ridz.😊.
r - hi..kya baat hai atul.. aaj to kuch zyada hi smart lag rahe ho..😉aur di aap bhi pehle se zyada pretty lag rahe ho.. lagta hai atul k pyar ka asar hai.. (n giggles)😆
anjie hits her lightly on shoulder..😛
an - bahut badmaash ho gayi hai..armaan kaha hai ?😕
ri - kal uski nite duty thi.. to aaj nai aayega.. aur phir kal subhah uski flight bhi hai na..😭
at - o haan.. main to bhool hi gaya tha... khaer.. chalen gabbar hamare intezaar mein sukh k kaanta ...nai nai..phool k gubbara ban gayi hogi..vo bhi gusse ka😆😆
all laugh..
ridz moves.. anjie follows her.. but atul holds her hand.. anjie v. shy...
at- aaj shaam ko ghumne chalogi...😉
an - dekheingein..😳
ri - di chalen..ya romance karna baaki hai..😉😆
at - kyun jalan ho rai hai..jo armaan nai aaya.😆.
an - stop it yaar.. aur tu badmaash..kum bola kar..choti si hai..aur baatein to dekho..😆😆chalo letz go..😳
Nite - all 3 over wid dere respective duties..atul anjie go 4 a date..ridz back home.. armaan opens d door..
both hug...😳😳
ri - armaan tumne kuch khaya tha na ? n kisses his cheek 😳
ar - haan..kha liya..jaan dnt wry.. n kisses back😳
ri - kya khaya ?😕
ar - hotel se mangwa liya tha..😊
ri - chalo..main fresh ho kar aati hun..😊
after sumtym ridz cumback n sees lots of eatables on bed..
ri - armaan ye kya hai..😕
ar - vo maine socha..tum kaafi thaki hogi..isiliye khana bahar se hi order kar diya..😳😉(so caring husband na..i know😆)
r - (smiles) iski kya zaroorat thi..😳
ar - kyun nai thi bilkul zarrorat thi..mujhe pata hai aaj tumhara kaam hosp. mein double tha..
ri - hmm.. vo to tha..
ar - to chalo jaldi jaldi kha lo ..😊
both hv dere dinner n talking.. dnner over.. both go n freshn up.. ridz wearing pretty red nite gown armaan in his tracks..
armaan combing his hair n ridhima packing his suitcase.. n shouting at him.. coz , armaan was getng bored at home ..n tried 2 do packing himself..n messed up every thing.. 😆😆😆
ri - armaan ye sab kya hai.. tum kapde bhi theek se nai rakh sakte.😡., aur ye kya.. perfume.. vo bhi suitcase mein.. god !! 😡toothbrush k saath socks...😆 armaan tumhe kitni baar kaha hai..tum packing mat kiya karo..😡
(armaan combing his here n humming songs..ridhima gets annoyed n stops doing packing.. n luks at him angrily..)
r - tum sun rahe ho ya main deewaron se baatein kar rai hun..😡
ar - mujhe kuch kaha mohtarma..😉
r - armaan..😡
armaan cums n stand in front of her.. n shows a lil attitude..
ar - dekho..i ws geting bored.. 1 to maine koshish ki..aur upar se mujhe sunna rai ho..😛
ri - ye koshish hai ??? aisa lag raha hai jaise kissi kabaadi ki dukan hai..😆😆
n starts again packing.. armaan holds her 4m back.. n puts his chin on her shoulder..tumhare bina 8 ghante main kuch nai kar paya .. 8 din kya karunga..😭😳
ridhima's anger melts coz of his sweet innocent voice...😳
r - achcha dekho .. is bag mein tumhare saare formal wears hai..ye sab conference k liye hai.. .ye tumhare casuals.. saare combination mein hai.. ulte - pulte mat pehn na..bandar lagoge.😆. vahan main nai rahun gi tumhare liye😭😭( a tear flows 4m her eyes 😭she quickly wipes it.armaan notices.. but doesn't say anything..he is just luking at her..not at the suitcase..)... aur haan cell phone se to tum uthoge nai.. isliye ye alarm clock..aur plzz tym jaate he adjust kar lena.. ye na ho conff. ho jaye..aur tum sote reh jao..😆 ye tumhari baaki zaruri cheezein 😭n luks at him..
r - kya dekh rahe ho..😕
ar - tumhe.. 😳
r - armaan maine tumhe suitcase dekhne k liye kaha tha..
armaan moves her face towards him.. n puts his hands on her face...
ar - kisse jhoot keh rai ho..😭
r - m..matlab..😕
ar - mujhse apne aansooin nai chupa sakti tum.. u know it..😭
ridhima hugs his v. tightly.😳.😭
r - i'll miss u armaan..😭
ar - i'll miss u 2 ridhima..😭 n kisses her head..
ridhima lifts her head up.. armaan kisses on her cheeks wet with tears... she closes her eyes.. ready 2 enter into dere dreamworld..armaan picks her up.. n takes 2 d bed.. removes her gown 4m d shoulder n kisses her.😳😳.. ridhima in return kisses her chest..😳 both burning with passion...showers kisses on each other..as dey wnt b evn able 2 c each other 4 next 8 days... armaan slides his fingers on ridhima's lips.. n kisses her beutiful pink lips v. lightly😳😳... in return..ridhima holds him n gives a v. long n passionate french kiss... 😳😳both share wild n passionate moments n go to sleep....
ok guys..dats all 4 d day...hope u liked it...
precap - armi - n ridzi romance..not yet over..but omg armaan naughtiness.. will land dem into the most embarresing moment of dere lyf..!!! 😳😉
w8n eagerly 4 ur comments...😃
Luv
Chandni😳
PART - 23
hey guys...howz u all... 😊wel b4 u all start readn dis part...I would like 2 share one thing wid all of u..personally i feel dis is d best part i hv ever written😊 n blv. me tears welled up in my eyes wen i was writing armi ridz sepration..😭. hope u all will nt only like..but will luv it.....😳😳 lets cont..
armaan is hvng bath..ridhima is setting d breakfast table..😊.doorbell rings.. o god ...whole sanjeevani enters 2 dere house😆😆...opps i mean dr.shash, padma, nani, dr.keeri, shubh., all interns ... evryone to wish armaan gud luck... she welcums dem..😳
all are sitting on sofa..ridzi after serving dem..again starts setting d table..n talking 2 dem.. armaan cums out of d bathroom..n as usual is i a v.naughty mood..😛 silently he walks n starts searching ridhima n finds her setting d table.. he hugs her v. tightly 4m back.. without noticing everyone was dere.😆😳.(dey were on one side..datz y )
r - armaan..kyya kar rahe ho chhodo..😳😕
ar - kyun? aaj to main jaa rai hun..fir kisse kahogi.. n kisses her ear😳
r - armaan..plzz chhodo..samjha karo...😳
ar - samajhna kya hai..jaan tum samjho..😉
everyone blushing n giggling luking at dem..but none of dem utter a word..😆shash , padma n nani are v.happy ..luking at armi's luv 4 ridzi..😳
r - armaan..hatto..😳 vo dekho..plzz..
ar - nai man sirf tumhe dekhunga..ab jaldi se meri gud mrg kiss do..😉
r - armaan.. 😳😕
(n luks at every1 ..n is v.shy... but armaan as u all know never listens 2 anyone.. nt even ridz if he is in naughty mood..😛)
ar - kya.. dekho main w8 kar raha hun...😉
r - tum pehle chodo.😳.n tries 2 escape..
ar- (tights his grip..) nai bhaag paogi jitni bhi koshish kar lo.😉.
ridzi tries v. hard to make him understand dat all were dere.. but he is nt. ready 2 understand..
ar - ridhima vo kya hai..😉
ridhima luks dere...armaan kisses her lips.. 😳..ridz is v. shy..😳
r - armaan.. 😳she runs into d kitchen...😉
ar - oye hoye !! n follows her..but stops coz of a familiar voice..
sh- BETA ARMAAN ...😕
omg !!!! armaan's expression is worth watching
slowly he turns n sees every1 ...
ar - p..pp..papa.. papa aap..😕
sh - kyun..tum mujhe dekh kar khush nai ho..😉
ar - nai..😆i mean of course papa.😕. goes n touches his feet.. den touches padma's n nani's feet...armaan was soo nervous n shy.. dat accidently he touches atul's feet 2 😆😆..
atul jumps ..oye main itna budhdha nai hua..😆
ar - ohh..sry..😕
an - jeej...ye sab kya tha..😛
ar - ku..kuch nai..aap sab yahan...achanak ek saath..i mean..kuch kaam tha..😕
ke - nai dr. armaan. hum sab aapko gud luck wish karne aaye the...😊
ar - ohh..😕
meanwhile ridz cums out with all eating stuff ..n quickly goes back to kitchen..😳
ar - aap log beathiye.. main ridhima..ki help kar k aata hun...😕😳
mu - nai..main hun na..main jaati hun..😛
ar - teri tabeeyat khrab thi na.. tu rest kar..😊
mu - hero main theek hun..main jaati hun..chal anjie..😉
an - chal..😊 both go.. armaan tries to follow.. rahul holds his hand..
ra - abbey tu kahan ja raha hai..hamare paas bhi to beath..😛
ar - haan..main..main beathta hun na.. 😕
in kitchen both anjie n muskaan teasing ridz.. n in main room every1 pulling armaan's leg..😆😆 after sumtym..
sh - well armaan..hamein chalna chahiye..hosp bhi jaana hai..wish u all d v.best.. do well .😊.
ar - jee papa..thnx.. touches his feet n hug him..😊
pa - all d best beta.😊.n pulls hir ear n whispers..shaitani kum kiya karo tum..😛
ar - mum aapko to pata hi hai.. main aape line maarta tha.. aur vaise mujhe pata tha aap yahin ho..main to aapko jealous feel kara raha tha..😆😆
pa - achcha..😳
nani- kya baetin ho rai hai..😉
ar - kuch nai sweetheart bas aise hee..😆.
nani- hits him lightly..besharam.. 😛
evry1 wishes him luck.. n goes except interns..coz dey will go 2 escort him 2 airport..
now all in one room.. ridzi blushing like hell..😳
mu - oye..ab kyun itna sharma rai hai..hum sab hee to hai.. 😆
rid - muskaan.. n runs towards bedroom.. 😳
every1 pulling armaan's leg.. armaan thinking about ridzi's condition..
an - guys.. abhi mere pyaare jeej kuch der mein jaane hi waalen hai.. to mujhe lagta hai. hume in luv birds ko akela hi chhod dena chahiye😳
at - hmm.. ja kamre mein.. ridz teri w8 kar rai hogi..😉
ra- haan hum sab yahin hai..😛
mu - aur darwaze se kaan laga kar tumhari baatein bhi nai sunegein😆
ar - nai ...aisi baat nai hai.😕
at - O..to tu nai jaana chahte.. itz ok..😆
ar - nai nai.. 😆
evry1 laughs..
ar - main..abhi aaya..😳
he goes to bedroom n locks d room to avoid any more embaressment.. luks at ridzi standing wid the support of almirah in dere room..n blushing like hell..armaan holds her..
ar - ridhima..😳
ri - armaan..😳 tum.. n hugs him.. armaan hugs her more tightly.. 😳
ar - tumne mujhe bataya kyun nai.. 😕
ri - tum kissi ki sunte ho kya..😳kitni baar to batane ki koshish ki thi
silence 4 sumtym
ar - ridhima...jaane ka tym ho gaya..😭
ridhima eyes filled wid tears.. she dnt want armaan 2 go.. but controls her emotion n luks deep into armaan's eyes.. n notices even his eyes filled with tears...
ri - armaan.. 😭
armaan keeps his hand on her face..n kisses her 4head.. mvs dwn to cheeks n neck.. ridhima hold him v.tightly n dnt want 2 leave him...he was about to kiss her lips.. 😳
knock at d door... 😡
mu - jaldi karo yaar...
armaan in a low voice - aaya..😭
armaan leaves her.. n moves back luking at her..😭. picks up his bag... both cums out of the room...😭
all notices dere sad faces..
ra - am.. chalen..😕
ar - (armaan luks at ridz) hmm..😭
all move out 4m d house..armaan was about to go..
ar - atul tu chal hum aaye..
( n hands over him d bag.. atul realizes dere condition n without pulling dere leg anymore.. goes..😊)
at - jaldi aana..
armaan hugs ridz.. n gives a v. passionate kiss on her lips.... both were sharing dere last passionate moments as 4m now.. dey wnt be able to meet each other 4 next 8 days 😭😭
outside rahul blows the horn n yells..
ra- armaan..jaldi kar..late ho rahe hai..
armaan leaves her.. still dere 4head touching each other n armaan holding her 4m waist..
ri -(slowly)armaan..jao..😭
ar - pakka..😭
ridz hugs him v. tight.. n cries😭
ar - agar tum aise hi royi..t main nai ja paunga ridhima..😭
ridz controls herself.. n smiles.. nai tum jao..😊😭
ar - pakka..😭
ri - (wipes lipstick mark 4m his lips wid her duppatta😳) hmm.. 😊😭
both come outside holding each others hand.. armaan sits in s car..
an - ridz tum airport nai chal rai..😕
ri - nai di..
mu - kyun..😕😕
ri -(luks at armaan) armaan ko jaate hue nai dekh paungi..😭😭
ra - chalen armaan..😕
ar - (luks at ridhima..) apna dhyan rakhna ridhima..😭
ri - tum bhi..plzz khana tym par khana .. (n to light d atmophere)conf. mein koi shaitani mat karna..😊
every1 smiles.. 😊
armaan wipes her tears. rahul starts d car.. slowly - slowly ar n rid ..leave each others hand..... waves hand.. n luk at each other.. till dey disappeared 4 each others vision....😭😭😭
armaan goes..every 1 back in sanjeevani...
ok guys.. dats all 4 d day.. hope u liked it...
do comment... w8ing eagerly 4 ir comments n need a suggestion ... u want me to show dere sepration 4 1 or 2 days..or just 2 take a leap...??.. n guyz itz a humble request plz post ur comments n sugestions here only..as sumtyms i m nt able 2 read pms. n i m nt able to fulfill ur requests .. 😭
Luv u
Chandni😊
PART - 24
Hey guyz i soo sry 4 . three things
1) u all cried coz of me na..😭.. but dnt wry 4m now onwards .. only romance..😳
2) u all had 2 w8 4 a lng tym..but kya karun yaar.. busy wid col. ..nt my fault😉
3) most imp. - 4 nt rlyin ur pms.. really v. sry 4 dat... but wil surely rly u guyz. in 1 or 2 days....😊
N ... THNX A LOT 4 UR VALUABLE SUGGESTIONS....😊
~~~~ wel as u all suggested... i'l show 1 day of sepration... n den a leap like ekta's serial...so.. plzz bear wid dis..~~~~
SANJEEVANI -
every1 missing armaan...no masti at all 😭..even dr. keerti is missing dere childish behaviour.😉.no one is teasing ridz at all coz she is already v.sad.😭.. but every1 tries 2 cheer her up...dere(in bangkok) armaan is busy wid his conff.
duties over... nite...every1 goes to dere home...😊
MALIK'S HOUSE
ridzi opens d door.. n imagines armaan dere... she tries to touch his face...but he disappears...soon she realizes..it was her imagination..she goes n freshns up... prepares d dinner..but dnt eat.. as she was w8n 4 armaan's call... few mins later..
TRING TRING !!!!!!! ridhima runs to pic up d fone..😃
r - hello...😊
silence😕
r - hello ..😕
silence
r - armaan..😕😳
ar - oye hoye!! tumhe kaise pata chala mai hun..😛
r - kyunki 1 tum hi ho..jo kahin bhi ho.lekin mujhe satana nai bhulte😛
ar - achcha..😛
r - hmm..😳
ar - kaisi ho..😳
r - theek hun😊
ar - mujhe miss kar rai ho..😉
r - nai to.😛
ar - jhoot..😉
r - nai..😉
ar - vaise basket .. maine bhi tumhe bilkul miss nai kiya 😉😛..
r - achcha😳..kyun?😕
ar - yahan pe itni soni soni kudiyaan hai... sabke saath din kaise nikal gaya pata hi nai chala...😆😛😉
r - armaan..main maar dalungi tumhe.. 😡
ar - afsos ..tumhara mujhe maarne ka armaan..filhaal to poora nai hoga.😆.
r - tumhe sharam nai aai..yahan main tumhare intezaar mein beathi hun ...tumhe itna miss kar rai hun.. aur tum vahan ja kar ladkiyon se flirt kar rahe ho....😡😭
ar - CAUGHT U !!😃
r - matlab..😕
ar - pehle keh rai thi mujhe miss nai kiya..ab kh rai ho.bahut miss kar rai ho..sach saamne aa hee gaya..😛
r- armaan.. tum na...😳
ar - kabhie nai sudhroge..i know😆
r - acha ..conf. kaisi rai..😊
ar - bahut achchi.. world k best dr.s aaye hue the...i was feeling so proud yaar.. ..
(armaan kept on talking .. ridhima was smiling as she was able to feel how happy armaan was...😊 AFTER 5 MINS...)
ar - pata hai basket.. (ridhima interupts)
r - armaan ........ bas karo...kitna bolte ho... 2min to chup raho..😆
ar - ohh.. i m sry itna xcited tha..pata hi nai chala..😆
r - tumhari khushi ko mehsoos kar sakti hun armaan..😳
ar - tumhari bahut yaad aa rai hai basket...😭.aur main itni xcitment mein puchna hi bhul gaya..😕
r- kya.😕.
ar - yahi ki..tumhara di kaisa raha..😊
r - bahut bore..
ar - kyun ?😕
r - tum nai the na..isliye😭... koi masti nai hui..sab tumhe bahut miss kar rahe the.. infact dr. keerti bhi hamein serious dekh kar upset thi..
ar - kya ..gabbar.😕. i dnt blv dis.😆
r - armaan.. 😡
ar - ridhima..😉
r - armaan... 😳😡
ar - yes jaan..😳
r - armaan(she changes her tone.. n in a v. baby voice) tum kab aaoge ?? tumhari bahut yaad aa rai hai..😭
ar - main bhi tumhe bahut miss kar raha hun..😭but kya karun ..agar mera bus chalta..to pehli flight le kar tumhare paas aa jaata ..😳
r - haan - haan.. tum to superman ho..😆
ar - nai..main tumhara armaan hun..😳
r - silent..
ar - ridhima..😕
r - i luv u armaan..😳
ar - luv u 2 basket ..😳
r - achcha ..tumne khana khaya ya nai ? 😕
ar - nai.subhah se conf. mein busy tha to tym nai mila..
r - armaan..tum aisa kyun karte ho..aisa bhi kya kaam ki tumhe khana khane ka tym nai mila.. main vahan nai hun iska matlab ye to nai ki tum apna khyal hi nai rakhoge.😡.😭
ar - bol to aise rai ho..jaise tumne kha liya..😆
r - haan..maine to kabka kha liya..
ar - achcha.. to is waqt side table pe dinner kisk liye rakha hai.. koi aa raha hai..😛
r - armaan tum... tum yahin ho 😃..(n luks around in xcitment)
ar - kash!!... 😭par tumhe itna to jaanta hi hun ..ki tum mere fone ki w8 kar rai thi.. hai na..😳
r - (in tears) tum itni door reh kar bhi mere baare mein...😭
ar - shh.. kuch kehne ki zaroorat nai hai... kaha tha na..armaan ki zindagi ho tum.. aur meri zindagi mein kab kya.. ho raha hai..itna to main jaanta hi hun..😳
r - armaan.. tum bhi na..(n wipes her tears)...acha ..saari baatein chodo.. tumhe 1 gud news deni hai😃
ar - yes yes yes !!!!! 😃 ...i knew it... kaash mera trip 1din aur delay ho jaata.. to main tumhare paas hota..😃😭 aur hum ye khushi saath celebrate karte..😃
r - 😕
ar - wow basket.. i m sooooooooo haapy !!!👏👏
r - 1 min armaan... tumhe kya ho gaya hai..😕.
ar - mujhe nai tumhe hone wala hai... i know it..😃
r - mujhe kya ??😕
ar - junior aanewala hai na.... i knew it..yes!!!!😃
r - armaan tum pagal ho gaye ho...😕
ar - matlab..😕
r- aisa kuch nai hai...😭😆😕
ar - kya..😕😭
r - haan.😆.
ar - lekin abhi to tumne kaha gud news hai...😭
r - tumhari yai to prob. hai baat sunte nai ho..react pehle karte ho😆
ar - m..matlab kya hai tumhara..😡😕
r - are baba... sanjeevani mein 1 basket ball match hai.. 😃
ar - che.. ye koi news hai.😆. maine to socha..😳
r - jo tumne socha vaisa kuch nai hai.. aur vaise .. tum hi to chahte the ki 1 match plan ho..jismein sab khelein ...😊
ar - par main vahan nai hun basket.😭.
r - wel.(shows a lil attitude).my name is ridhima armaan malik u c .😉.
ar - i know.. to 😕
r - armaan main epapa ko keh k schedule tumhare aane k baad ka plan karwaya hai...😃
ar - really.!!!!!!😃
r - yes..howz dat..😉
ar - perfect... luv u jaan...muwaah....😳
r- i know .. i know..😆
ar - ridhima.. tumse kuch kehna tha..😳
r - haan kaho...
ar - international call hai..mera bill badh raha hai..fone rakhun...😆😆
both laugh...😆😆.
r - ok baba.. luv u armaan.. n miss u ..😳.
ar - luv u 2 ridhima... plz ab khana kha lena.. apna dhyan rakhna... n i miss u 2..😳
r - tum bhi apna dhyan rakhna...bye..😳
ar - bye.. luv u ..
PHONE DISCONNECTS.......
DAYS KEEP ON PASSING.. ARMAAN N RIDHIMA WERE MISSING EACH OTHER BADLY...😭 ARMAAN WAS BUSY WID HIS WORK .. N IN MUMBAI RIDHIMA WAS BUSY WID HER PATIENTS.. MATCH PRACTISE N STUFF... MEANWHILE.. RAHUL MUSKI WEDDING IS FIXED.😃.. N FINALLY ATUL N ANGIE CONFESSED THEIR LUV IN FRONT OF DERE PARENTS 😳N DERE ENGAGENMENT IS FIXED...😃.. ARMAAN FINISHES OFF HIS WORK 2 DAYS B4 N AS USUAL WANTS TO GIVE SURPRIZE TO HIS BASKET.. 😉
armaan in bangkok.. doing some shopping for his luv..
ar - luks at some clothes... n is gets v. confused ...
(2 himself)
basket ko ye pasand aayega.😕. pata nai.. kya karun.. haan..ye red dress achchi hai.😃. nai nai..pehle hi usse itne saare red dresses le diye hai..😆.agar ek aur liya.. to pehne ki jagah..mere muh par maregi..😆kya karun n scratches his head..😕
..a lady over dere was watching him n cums 2 him..
lady - may i help u sir..😊
ar -ahh.. no.. thnx😕😊
lady - ok.. (n turns)😊
ar - ah.. xcuse me.. 😕
lady - yes sir..😊
ar - actually i wanna buy sumthing 4 my wife.. but really confused.. u c..so can u plz help me..😳
lady - sure sir.. ahh.. sir if u dnt mind may i ask u sumthing ?😕
ar - yeah..sure..😊
lady - are u newly wed..😳
ar - (blushes) yeah..😳
lady - ok sir.. plz cum 2 dis corner i'll show u sum dreses..😊
armaan follows her.. n finally wid d help of dis angel (4 him atleast)😉 buys sum dresses 4 ridz.. after a long shopping he thnx her.. n goes to airport..
SANJEEVANI - BREAK TYM.. EVERY1 IN CAFETIRIA
ridhima still wondering wen dese 2 days will pass..😭 but all of dem giggle.. as armaan had called atul n told him about his plan n asked to inform others.. xcept ridz..😉
so now as every1 knows armaan is cuming...so dey all start teasing ridhima..😆 even she wonders.. y dey were all acting like dis..coz 4 past 6 days.. dey all were v. sympethetic wid her..😳. after lots of leg pulling finally atul says..
at - achcha chodo ye sab mazak ..ridhima aaj basket ball ki practise karein..😉
r - aaj..😕
an - haan..ismein problem hi kya hai..😳.
m - aur tera bhi mann behel jayega..😊
ra- haan..muski theek keh rai hai.. kya kehti ho..😊
r - theek hai ... kitne baje..😕
m - shaam ko 6 baje..😃
an - done..😃
ri - di.. 6 baje??😕
ra - kyun koi prob. hai..😕
ri - 6 baje armaan mujhe call karta hai..😳
m - aaj nai karega ..😆
ri - kya..😕
m - mm..mera matlab hai.. tu ..😕
ra - tum pehle usse call kar lena.. usk baad game start kar dengein.. but guys main thodi late ho jaunga( as he wil go 2 airport)😉
m - kyun(pretends)😆
r - vo kuch kaam hai..😉
ri - theek hai.. tum aaoge to hum tab start kar dengein.😊.
at - nai nai ridz.. hum start kar dengein.. ye beech mein join kar lega😉
ridhima suspects dat sumthing is fishy.. but gives a jerk to his thoughts n thinks.. armaan his not here.. so dere can b no pranks n stuff..😆
an - kya soch rai ho..😕
r - k..kuch nai di..😕😊
at - to fir done aaj shaam 6 baje ..basket ball court..
ALL AGAIN GO BACK 2 DUTIES....
ok guys ... dats all 4 d day.. hope u liked it..
precap - armaan's surprize... n dere romantic nite !!! xcited... me 2 ..😉
do comment
Luv
Chandni😊
PART - 25
hey guys.... 2day is d most special part .. u all must be wondering y .😕..well d reason is..😃
***HUMSAFAR*** has completed it 25 part... n itz d SILVER JUBLEE !!! 👏👏👏
I m really v. happy n excited.. so i would like to congratulate ALL OF U , even 2 all silent readers.. (n me 2 ) coz u all made ***HUMSAFAR*** a huge sucess (wid a lil contribution of mine).. thnx a lot 4 ur luv, support, suggestions.. everything... So promise me u will keep commenting... n I promise I'll keep writing !!
letz cont....
recap - armi wil give surprize to ridz..😉
Ridz calls armaan... but his cell is switched off.😕.. so dey all start practising.. n rahul goes 2 airport ..😃
both meet hug each other.. armaan congratulate coz finally muski will b his wife !! ... 😉
In car.. discussing about the plan stuff...rahul reaches bb court .. n signals atul.😛. n as per plan.. dey take a break.. n all gather around ridz so dat she is nt able 2 see armaan😆 ..... armaan silently moves out of d car.. n hides behind the pillar off the bb court...rahul again signals atul.. 😉
at - chalo yaar ..bahut break ho gaya..tum ladkiyan bhi na..kitni baatein karti ho😆
an - atul..😡
r - di..rehne do na.. 😊 luks around.. ye rahul abhi tak nai aaya..😕
rahul cums 4m diff direction..
ra - aa gaya.. aa gaya.. chalo letz cont..😊
ri - kitni der laga di..tum gaye kahan the..😡
ra - vo apne frd. se milne..😉
m - chalo na..ab to ye aa gaya hai.. game start karo..😊
armaan was watching everything hidding behind the pillar.. again game starts.. armaan was v. careful ... just wen ridhima was about to do basket.. he runs n picks her up... from behind.. n takes atleast 5 - 6 rounds... ridhima screaming n ball falls 4m her hands !!😃
armaan .. puts her down..ridhima is ina g8 shockn at d same tym is v. xcited ..
r - armaaaan !!!! tum ...😲 (n hugs him tight )
ar - yo basket.😉.. again picks her up...😳
eveyr1 claps.. rahul n atul blows whistle(cute gundas)😆
armaan leaves her.. ridhima in g8 xcitement..😃
r - armaan.. tum.. yahan.. tum to 2 din baad.. o god.. ye sab kaise..
ar - (puts finger on her lips) kitna bolti ho.. thakti nai ho..😆
all giggle..
r - par tum.😕.
ar - kuch nai yaar bas .. apni dharampatni ko bahut miss kar raha tha.😳.isilye jaldi se kaam khatam kiya .. aur aa gaya tumhare paas.. 😳
r - par.. tumne mujhe bataya kyun nai..😕
ar - agar bata deta.. to tumhare chehre jo ye itni khushi hai.. shayad vo nai dekh pata..😳
both hug..😳.
m - humse bhi mil le.. humne bhi tujhe kuch kum miss nai kiya..😆
armaan ridhima depart..
ar - tujhe to main bata hun punjaban😆.. hugs her.. ( keeps his arm around her shoulder).. main kuch din bahar kya gaya ..tune shaadi k liye haan kar di.. 😛
m - vo kya hai na hero.. bechare ne bahut insist kiya.. ab tu to jaanta hi hai.. main kissi ka dukh nai dekh sakti..😆😆
both laugh n give each other a hi5 .😉.
at - muskaan.. tujhe kya pata..dukhi to bechara tujhse shaadi karne k baad hoga..kyu armaan..😆
ar - hey champ.. both hug😊..
m - tu na faltu mat bola kar..😡
an - stop it guys.. hey jeej...😃
ar - heeellllloooo saali sahiba.😉. (n takes long steps in a slow motion to go near her😆) i mean .. bhabhi...😛
an - wat jeej..😳. buth hug..
he goes back 2 ridhima.. main sirf 6 din bahar gaya.. aur yahan to poori kayapalat ho gayi.. kyun basket..😉
ridhima was thinking sumthing..
ar - oye.. kya hua..😕
r- armaan mai soch rai thi.. tumhe kaise pata tha ki main yahan bb court mein hun..😕
all of dem exchange glances.. 😛
ar - a.. aa.. ridhima... vo.. actually ..hua na ..kya..😕
r - rehne do armaan main samjh gayi.. ye tum sabka plan tha na..😡
at - arre ridz .. naaraz kyun hoti ho.. hum sab to tumhe khush karna chahte the..😃
r - lekin atul...😕
ra - guyzzzzz.... 1 min.. jhagda kis baat ka hai.. armaan vapis aa gaya hai.. ridhima tum khush ho.. hum kush hai.. to watz d big deal..😃
an - rahul theek keh raha hai ridzi..😊
ar - acha agar tumhe bura laga ki maine tumhe nai bataya to i m sry😳
r - nai.. aisa kuch nai hai..😳
both hug v. tight..😳
an - ahem ahem.. ye saara romance ghar mein karna jeeju.. 😆
both blush.. all chat 4 sumtym den armaan goes to sanjeevani to meet ever1.. all congatulate him.. n are v. happy 2 see him back n also he did well in bangkok..n .. NITE - ALL GO BACK HOME..
..........MALIK'S HOUSE..........
Both enter d house..armaan throws his bags .. n lie down on bed...
ar - ahh.. basket bahut thak gaya..
ridhima...locks d door, picks up the bag ..
r - aate hi ghar mein toofan machana shuru kar diya..😆
ar - O...plz yaar.. abhi nai.. main tumhari daant baad mein sun lunga😆 😆
rid cums near him
r - achcha utho.. fresh ho jao.. 😊
armaan pulls her... ridhima on top of armaan..😳
r - armaan ..kya kar rahe ho..😳
armaan.. moves his fingers on her face.😳.
ar - aaj bhi yahi puchogi.😳.😉
ridhima blushes n bends her face.. armaan keep his finger on her chin n lifts her head up..
ar - i missed u basket..😭
ridhima hugs him tightly .. n cries..😭
ar - ridhima kya hua tum ro kyun rai ho..😕.
ridhiima keeps on crying..
ar - achcha meri taraf to dekho..😊😕
ridhima raises a lil.. n looks at him (sobbing..) armaan wipes her tears...
ar - kya hua..😕
r - i missed u armaan... 😭
ar - ridhima.. ab to main aa gaya hun na .... chalo.. rona band karo.. cum on.. ab meri achi basket ki tarah smile karo.. chalo..smile ..😊.
ridhima smiles..😊
ar - ye hui na baat...😃
fone rings !!!😡
ar - abey yaar .. is fone mein koi camera hai.. jab bhi hum saath ho ye baj padta hai..😡
r - armaan.. shh.. 😛
ridhima picks up d fone.. it was of her frd. i d meantym armaan goes n freshn up.. after dat ridhima prepares d dinner.. both njy dere meal..
after sumtym....
ridhima cums out of bathroom.. n sees armaan standing near d window..😊
ridhima goes near him.. n keeps her hand on her shoulder.. armaan turns..
r - kya soch rahe ho..😕😊
armaan puts his arms around her waist..😳
ar - kuch nai...😊
r - to phir aise chup chap kyun khade ho..😕
ar - arre vo bas aise he.. achcha chodo ye sab.. main tumhare liye kuch laya hun..😃
r - mere liya.😕. kya..
ar - 1 min..😊
he goes near d table on where bag was kept .... n takes out the gifts n gives 2 ridz...
r - armaan..itne saare gifts !!!😃😳
ar - hmm.. sab meri wife ik liye..😉
r - lekin..😕
ar - lekin vekin kuch nai... khol k dekho na..😳
ridhima was about 2 open a pack..
ar - nai nai nai...😕
r - kya hua..😕
ar gives a box ..
ar - pehle ye dekho..😊
ridhima opens it.. it was a v. pretty saree...ridhima was sooo happy to c it..😳
ar - kaisi hai ??😊
r - bahut sundar...😳
ar - tumhe pasand aayi..😊
r - bahut....😃
ar - achcha ab ye wala dekho..😊
ridhima opens it.. n it was a v. beautiful suit.. ridhima's eyes glittered..
ar - kaisa laga..😊
ridhima gives him a tight hug..😳
r - armaan..ye to bahut khoobsurat hai.. thank u .😳..
ar - che.. cum on basket.. thank u nai kehte..😉.
r - acha to fir..😳
ar - agar tumhe ye sach mein acha to ek mithi si kiss do.😉.
ridhima gives a kiss on his cheek..😳
ar - haye..kitne dinno baad ye kiss naseeb hui hai..😆
ridhima hits him lightly😊..
r - armaan !! tum bhi na.. achcha aur ismein kya hai..😊
ar - khud hi dekhlo na..😉
ridhima opens it.. n finds a v. beautiful white dress .... n was really v. shy after she saw dat..
ar - pasand aayi.. 😕
ridhima doesn't say anything.. armaan was luking at her.. with a v. confused xpresion.. 😕
ar - tumhe ye achchi nai lagi ??😕
ridhima smile n gives a peck on his lips .😳.. n runs near d window.. n keeps d dress on table ....😳..
armaan still trying 2 figure out wat exactly happened with him... 😆😆
after few sec.s .. he 2 goes near the window.. n picks her up n his arms..😳
r - armaan .. mujhe neeche utaro.. kya kar rahe ho..😳
ar - batana zaroori hai.. n winks..😉
ridhima blushes.. armaan takes her 2 d bed.. armaan o top of ridhima.. holdings his arms...😳
ar - Itna pyar kis liye..😉
r - bas aise he.. tumne hi kaha tha agar pasand aayi to kiss do.😳.
ar - oye hoye !!.. meri itni baatein kab se maan ne lag gayi.😉..
r - jab se tum door gaye tab se..😭
ok guyz.... ahh.. i m tired now after writing such a long part.. hope u all nyed..
precap - party organized 4 armaan.. 4 his sucess😃
w8n eagerly 4 ur comments as dis is d most special part of ***HUMSAFAR***
Lots of Luv
Chandni 😊
PART - 26
hey guyzz.. thnx a lot 4 ur wonderful omments !!! ..u made me really v. happy..😃
so without waisting anymore tym.. letz ont with d part...😉
MORNING - 7. AM ... MALIK'S HOUSE...
armaan n ridhima both are in bed.😳. hving a wonderful sleep (after d special nyt😳) ... rid facing opposite to armaan... n armaan holding her tyt 4m waist n his hin on her shoulder.😳.. sunlight falls on rid's face..slowly she opens her eyes.. wid a broad smile on her face... she turns a lil.. n sees armaan sleeping peacefully..😳. she keep staring his face.. without blinking her eyes... n kisses his 4head.😳😊. armaan's sleep gets disturbed coz of d touch😳 n opens his eyes .. n finds her princess lukin at him ... ridhima blushes n turns her face again.. n tries 2 get up.. armaan holds her hand..😉
r - armaan..😳
ar - gud mrg.😳 (eyes closed.. he is v. sleepy as was v. tired coz f travelling)
r - gud mrg😊.. n luks at him.. she smiled wen she saw his eyes closed.. he luked so cute while sleeping.😳. just like a baby she thought😳
slowly armaan leaves her hand n again go back 2 sleep.. ridhima smiles. n gets up n goes 2 bathroom..covering herself wid bed sheet😳
AFTER 1 HOUR...
armaan opens his eyes.. luks around n finds ridhima nowhere.. 😕
ar - RIDHIMA !!😕
r - (4m kitchen) breakfast bana rai hun.. tum jaldi se utho fresh ho jao.. hosp. k liye der ho rai hai..😊
ar - (2 himself) kya yaar.. fir vai boring hosp😡. uper se ye boring basket..😭 jab dekho kitchen mein hi hoti hai😆..(thinks about last nyt)vaise... boring to nai hai...😉😉
ridhima yells
r - tum abhi tak uthe nai.. jaldi karo na armaan..😆😆
ar - uth raha hun yaar...
ar - (2himself) chal beta uth jaa.. subhah subhah agar ye garam ho gayi.. to poore din romance ki chutti..😆😆😆
after sumtym
both are getting ready to leave 4 hosp. both standing in front of mirror..😉 n jst lyk another day.. khati meethi fight😉
r - armaan.. hatto na.. tyaar hone do..😡 (pushes him)😆
ar - tumhara make - up to 4 ghante tak khatam nai hoga.😆. pehle mujhe tyaar hone do.😡. (pushes her )😆
r - (again pushes him)😆..agar itni hi jaldi hai.. to subhah jaldi utha karo..😡(combing her hair)
ar - tum to jaldi uth gayi thi na.. fir tum kyun nai tyaar hui..😡 (pushes her.. takes d comb 4m her hand😆 n starts combing his hair😉)
r -(takes back d comb..😆) armaan .. hatto.. pehle main tyaar hongi.😡.
ar - F9.. 😡ho jao.. goes n sits on bad..
ridhima trying 2 close thread of her suit.. 😉
r - armaan.. dekho na ye bandh hi nai rai..plzz help na..😊
ar - sry. khud kar lo.. main nai karne wala..😡😉
r - armaan..😕
ar - wat.. main newspaper padh raha hun..😡
r - sedha bolo katrina ko dekh rahe ho.😡😆.
ar - tu..tumhe kaise pata..😕
r - itni badi badi aankhein kar k jo newspaper dekh rahe ho...😆😆
ar - not bad basket.😉.
r - achcha chodo na ye sab.. plz help karo..
armaan luks at her struggling 2 close thread.. armaan gives a naughty smile..😈
ar - lao.. main kar dun..😉
r - jao na ..katrina ko jaake dekho..main manage kar lungi..😡😆
ar - cum on basket... main kar deta hun😉
he removes her hair 4m back.. n moves his fingers on her back.. 😳
r - armaan.. kya kar rahe ho..😳
ar - shh.. v. slowly closesd thread..😳
ridhima was blushing so muh.. as if armaan has touched him 4 d first tym..😳😳
armaan turns her .. ridhima luking down.. he kees his finger o her chin n raises her head up..😳
ar - bahut achi lag rai ho..😳😉
r - ar..maan.. l..late ho rahe hai..😳
armaan.. staring at her pink lips..😳
ar - hone do..😉
n bend a lil..2 kiss her.. rid. keeps her hand on his lips..😳
r - tum subhah - subha shuru ho gaye..😳
ar - subha - subha matlab..pyar kya tym k hissab se hota hai..😆
r - hum late ho rahe hai.. plzz ye sab baad mein.😳.
ar - kab..😉
r - armaan..😳
ar - vaise tumhe yaad hai aaj kya hai...😉
r - kaise bhool sakti hun..😳
ar - achcha to batao aaj kya hai..😊
r - main kyun bataun .😉.tum batao.. 😳
ar - main kaise bhul sakta hun ye tareek(date)😳
r - kyun...😕😳
ar - aaj se theek 1 mahina pehle ..mujhse tumne most eligable bahelour ka tag cheen liya tha..😆😆😆
r - achcha...😡 n hits him
ar - arre mazak kar raha tha.. chalo is kushi mein 1 kiss to do..😉
r - abhi nai.. hum late ho rahe hai..😳
ar - yaar 1 kiss hi to maangi hai..
r - no.. plzz baad mein .. ab chalooooooo
ar - alryt.. abhi tumhari maani.. raat ko kaise bachogi..😉
r - jab raat aayei tab dekh lengein.😆. abhi jaldi karo.😳.
both reach SANJEEVANI - LOCKER ROOM..
at - yaar.. pata nai aaj aisa bhi kya ho gaya jo hitler ne seedha conf. room mein aane ko keh diya..😕
m - mujhe to bahut dar lag raha hai..😭
ra - dar kyun rai hai..humne kuch galat thodi na kiya hai yaar..😊
at - rahul is ryt guys...koi meeting hogi dats it..😊
enters armaan n ridhima..
ar - kya hua.. tum sabki shaklein kyun bani hui hai..😕
m - tu sunega..tera bhi yahi haal hoga..😭
ri - par aisa kya hua..😕
an - kuh nai ridz.. humein conf. room mein bulaya hai..
ar - to..😕
m - tu kya pagal hai..😡 aaj tuesday nai hai..😭
ri- to..😕
at - yaar meeting har tuesday hoti hai..😕
ar - yaar kuh urgent kaam hoga..😊
m - tu pagal hai... (raises her finger .. in a v. heavy voice.. n slow motion)yaad kar vo din ..jab tuesday nai tha..😆😆😆 aur issi tarah meeting bulayi gayi thi..
ar - haan to..😕
m - (irritated) kya to to kar raha hai.. yaad kar us din hum saare suspend huye the.. aur is baar bhi aisa hua na.. to mummyjee o mujhe maar hi dalegi..😆😆😆
ri - relax muskaan ..aisa kuch nai hoga... tab hamari galti thi.. aur is baar hamne kuch nai kiya.. so just relax..
ANN - ALL INTERNS REPORT IN CONF. ROOM..
all go n stand in one lyn..
sh - to drs aap sab jaante hai ..aaplogo ko yaha kyun bulaya hai..😊
m - (slowly) suspend karne ..😭😆
sh - wat dr. muskaan..😕
m- kk..kuch nai sir..
sh - wel any guesses..😉
all - no sir..😕
sh - jaise ki aap sab jaante hai.. ki dr. armaan bangkok gaye the.. aur vaha pe sucessfully sabhie cases ko handle kiya.. aur conf. mein active participation dikhayi.. to sajeevani administratin ki taraf se.. aaj mere ghar pe 1 party hai😃👏👏..s u hv 2 b dere.. at 7 .. ok😊
all have a huge smile on dere faces.. ridhima eyes glittering coz of honour which her husband got.. n armaan was easily able to dat..
all - jee sir😊
ar - thank u sir.😃.
all - thank u sir..😃
sh - now u may go bak 2 ur duties.. 😊
dey all turn..
sh - dr.s..😊
all - yes sir..😕
sh - wel i know did is hosp. still i wud get a lil personal.. aaj aap logon ki chuti jaldi ho jayegi.. 👏
all luk at each other..
m - kyun sir..😕
sh - muskaan beta.. ghar pe party ki tyaari bhi to karni hai.. ryt..😉
all smile..😊
at - jee sir...😊
sh - nw. u all can go..
all move outside.. n scream.. n congratulate armaan👏..keerti cums outside..
k - dr.s ..part shaam ko hai.. abhi nia.. dis is hosp. better behave urselves.,😡
all - sry mam..
ke- get back to work😡
at(mimics her) get back to work..😆😆 huh..
all laugh... duties over... all parties prep done..all go back dere respetive home to get ready...
ok guyss.. dats all 4 day.. hope u nyed..
precap - lods of masti in party.. n ofcourse romance...
w8n eagerly 4 ur comments
Luv u
Chandni😊
PART - 27
hey guys.. here's one more part.. (v.long)hope all of u will njy..
RAHUL'S HOUSE.
rahul is in a complete mess..wat he should wear.. n is throwing his clothes out of almirah... 😆
r - ( 2 himself) .. kya yaar.. kuh samajh nai aa raha.. kya pehnu..amm.. ye ahcha hai.. nai yaar.. muskaan to ye colour pasand hi nai hai😉.. kya karun.. 😕
his fone rings.. rahul without luking at d no.
r - kaun hai bey..😆
oopssss.... c hu is on d fone😛
m - oye kankhjoore... maar dalungi.. 😡
r - mm..muskaan.. tu..😕
m - haan main... kyun tujhe kiska inteazaar tha..😡
r - are kisis ka nai.. tu bol na.. kaise fone kiya..😕
m - pehle ye bata.. ye koi tareeka hai.. apni hone wali beewi se bolne ka.😉.
r - beewi.. interesting.😉. sry. yaar.. vo maine no. nai dekha..😛
m - ahcha chadd.. ye bata tu hai kaha pe aur abhi tak lene kyun nai aaya .. main kab se ghar pe lock laga kar tera w8 kar rai hun.😕.😡
r - muskaan tu mere ghar aaja..😉
m - kyun..😕
r - yaar.. mujhe kuch samajh nai aa raha main kya pehnu..😕
m - tu abhi tak tyaar bhi nai hua..😡
r - nai..😕
m - thear ja.. abhi tere ghar aa k teri khbar leti hun...😡😆
after 10 mins (u know na dey are neighbours)
door bell rings..rahul opens d door.. n is amazed to c how beautiful muskaan was luking..😳. on d other hand muskaan was blushing coz rahul was stading shirtless...😳
m - r..rrahul.😳
r - hmm..😊
m - andar.. aa jaun??😳
r - aa.. haan.. aa na.. plzz..😉
she enters.. rahul closes d door.😳.
m - (luking at d room)ye sab kya haal bana rakha hai..😕
r - vo kuch samajh hi nai aaya..tu help kar na kuch..😳
she luks at his almirah.. n takes out a v. gracefull sherwani..😃
m - turns 2wards his face.. le ye pehan..😃
she noties rahul was staring her without even blinking his eyes.. 😳n muskaan was blushing like hell ..as rahulstanding without shirt ..😳
m - r..rahul..😳
rahul moves forward.. n hold her from arms... n bends .. muskaan who was already blushing like hell.. closed her eyes.. thinking he is gng 2 kiss her.. but instead rahul whispered in her ear..
r - bahut sundar lag rai hai.. n moves backward..😳
m - thank u .😳.(bends her head) tu jaldi se tyaar ho ja.. hum late ho rahe hai..😳
rahul gets ready n both sit in car to reach gupta mension..
while all dis was taking place here.. atul anjali were lost in dere world ...
atul already dere in gupta house.. n searching 4 anjali..
atul enquires 4m nani..
at - nani.. ye anjali kahan hai..😕
nani - aaj to bada bekraar ho raha usse milne k liye huh.. n giggles.😆.
at - (blushes) kya nani.. aap bhi... bataiye na..😳
nani - ja upar apne kamre mein hai..😃
atul runs upstairs..😉
nani - shaitan..😳
atul open d door a lil bit 2 c wat anjie was doing.. n finds her.. struggling to tie d thread of her backless top..😳😳😳
atul enters d room.. anjali still struggling hard..
at - main kar dun..😳
anjali eyes wide opens hearing his voice..
an - atul.. tum..yahaan.. n turns to hide her back...😳
at - vo.. kafi der se aaya hua tha.. tum dikhi nai.. to nani ne bataya..ki..
but stops .. as he saw anjali v. uncomfortable...😳
at - anjali..tum.. ammm.. main help kar dun..😳
an - no... it..itz..okkk.. m..main manage kar lungi..😳
at - plz..😳😉
anjali turns .. atuls ties d thread ..anjali's eyes closed.. atul bends.. n kisses on her back.. a chil runs down her spine😳😳..atuls turns her face 2wards him.. n lifts her face up.. keeping his fingers on her chin...
at - anjali.. meri taraf dekho.😳.
anjali slowy lifts her eyes up n luks straight in his eyes..😳
at - i luv u ..😳
anjali without saying anything hugs him...after few mins both depart.. atul still holding her 4m waist... were very close both v. about to kiss...
knock at d door.😡..both leave each other.. it was nani..😆
nani - anjali.. atul beta kya kar rahe ho.. sab log aa gaye hai.. ridhima bhi kab se tumhare liye pooch rai hai...😕
an - aaye nani..
both cum out of d room n reach d hall...
PARTY HALL...
everyone is dere...ARMAAN OFCOURSE.. IS D CENTRE OF ATTRACTION !!! ... all are nying n dancing... music stops...
dr. sh - can i hv ur attention plzz.😊
all luk at him..
sh - thank u .. well aap log jaante hai ki ye party kis liye organize ki gayi hai..😃
Dr. Armaan ki is sucess se hamare pore sanjeevani ko un par fakr hai..😃
all clap.. armaan smiles n luks at rid.. main aaj sirf itna kehna chahta hun ki aaj mere bete ne mera sir fakr se uncha kar diya hai.. i m really proud of u my .. son ... 👏
armaan gets a lil emotional as he was mising his parents on dis ocassion .. but shashank .. made his day..😃
ar - thank u papa...😳
armaan takes d mike ..
ar - a.. main bhi kuch kehna chahta hun.. sabse pehle to .. thank u papa.. mujhe agar ye opportunity mili.. to aapki vajah se..agar aap mujhe meri galtiyo pe nai daant te to shayad maine jo achieve aaj kiya hai.. vo kabhie nai kar pata.. so thank u once again..
(all clap..)
aur.. aur.. meri zindagi k us special person ko.. jo meri sab kuch hai.. my angel.. my wife ridhima( ridhima's eyes filled wid tears😭😳).. agar ye mujhe support na karti to shyad main vahan itni achi performance nai de pata.. so thnx a lot basket.😆. (all giggle.. rid luks at armaan wid "armaan.. tum bhi na" luk) .. aur main aaj yahan sabk saamne kehna chahta hun.. ki
I LUV U BASKET.. AGAR TUM NAI HOTI.. TO MAIN NAI HOTA...😳😳
all clap.. armaan goes to ridhima n hugs her...😳
after dis long speech all again starts njying the party...😃
anjali - atul were nt dancing as dey were planning sumthing.. atul signals muskaan n rahul to cum 2 dem .. dey go.. aa tells dem d plan both agree... 😃😉
MUSIC STOPS...
ar - ye music ko kya ho gaya..😕
an - attention everyone.. thank u ...😊
an - jaise aap log jaante hai ki aaj hum yahan jeej ki sucess mein shamil hone aaye hai.. lekin is sab mein 1 aur cheez bhi special hai..😉
at - aur vo hai.. ki aaj armaan aur ridz ki shaadi ko poora 1 mahina ho chuka hai..👏
all clap.. ridhima blushes.. armaan smiles n luks at her..😳
ra- aaj armaan ne to apna pyaar ek baar fir ridhima k saamne byaan kar diya.. 😳
m - aur ab baari hai .. ridhima ki..😉
ridhima eyes wide opens..
ri - di.. ye sab kya ho raha hai..😕
nani - bachon.. tum log kya kar rahe ho..😕
padma - nai ma.. karne dijiye jo kar rahe hai..😃
ri - maa aap bhi..😳😕
an - thnx mom..😃
an - aaj main aap sabko ek chota sa incidence sunati hun.. jab hamari internship ka doosra din tha.. aur break mein armaan ne ridhima se kya kaha tha..
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ar - yo basket..😉
r - kya hai..😡
ar - yaar tum.. theek se baat nai kar sakti.. ye gussa hamesha tumhari naak pe kyun beatha rehta hai..😆
r - tumhari shakal hi aise hai.. jab bhi tumhe dekhti hun na..
ar - to tumhe gussa aata hai ryt.😉. cum on basket.. acha chalo.. hum apni dushmani ko dosti mein convert karte hai..😃
r - kya ..😕
ar - haan.. to tum mere saath coffe peene chalogi.😉.
r - main .. tumhare saath.. main bewkoof dikhti hun..😡
ar - kabhie kabhie😆😆
r - kya..😡
ar - nai.. mera matlab hai.. ki agar tum mere saath chalogi to hame ek dusre ko jaan ne ka mauka milega... wat say..
r - MAIN AJNABEE LOGON K SAATH KAHIN NAI JAATI... n turns..
armaan pulls her..
ar - ek din issi AJNABEE ka intezaar karogi tum..
********************* FLASHBACK OVER******************************
sh - par beta. tumye ab kyun bata rai ho.. 😕
an - vo is liye dad.. kyunki aaj ridzi hum sab ko batayegi.. is AJNABEE k baare mein.. ab jab usne is AJNABEE ko apni zindagi maan liya hai.. vo uske baare mein mehsoos kya karti hai..😳😳
ri - kya .. di aap.. plzz.😳.
m - arre pyaar kiya to darna kya.. bol na..😉
ra - haan rid. aaj tum bhi armaan se apne dil ki baat keh do.. jo tumne shayad isse kabhie nai kaha
everybody in d hall.. starts hooting n clapping...
ridhima luks at armaan who was luking at her.. wid a " keh do na ridhima"luk
an - cum on ridz.. kaho na.. 😃
AR - KEH DO NA....😳😳
ridhima blushes.. complete silence... all eyes on ridhima..😉
precap - wta will ridhima do now ?????????????????????????😕
guys.. dats all.. i know i left dis part at a wrong place...n also precap is a suspense...but wil cont soon
W8N EAGERLY 4 UR COMMENTS.....
Luv u
Chandni😊
PART - 28
hey guyz.. sorry sorry sorry... bahut late ho gaya na i know kya karun...was busy wid d other luv story (hai na tiya😉) .... n i m sure sab log mujhe mil ke bahut peetoge..😆. but plz yaar.. sry ... pakka promise aage se itni late nai hoga...AND YES... THOUGH I UPDATED LATE... BUT I HV A GUD NEWS 4 ALL OF U .... 4M NOW ONWARDS U WILL RECEIVE AN EXTRA DOSE OF ROMANCE, PASSION, WILDNESS...ETC. ETC. .....😳😳.. n dnt ask y ...ok...coz u wont get any answer..😉😳
ok.. bahut baatein ho gayi..letz cont wid d part.😳
recap- all ask ridz to express her feelings 4 armaan.. which she never revealed to him..
AR - KEH DO NA....😳
ridhima blushes.. complete silence... all eyes on ridhima..
ridhima bends her head... her eyes glittering... face became as red as a tomato.. she starts...😳😳 ( a v. beautiful song..hey dose who dnt know dis song.. itz a slow song..)
r - O AJNABEE... mere ajnabee.. o ajnabee ..mere ajnabee...😳
SILENCE
(armaan lukn at her.. with eyes filled wid luv..everyone smiling coz finally she started..😉)
ridhima continues...
na jaane aaye tum kahan se (moves 2wards him)
itna pyar laye tum kahan se....(keeps her hand on his cheek)
hoo.. na jaane aaye tum kahan se.... ( armaan holds her 4m waist)
itna pyar laaye tum kahan se..( gets more closer..)
ye raat bhi.. hai saji saji...(luks deep into his eyes)
o ajnabee... mere ajnabee...( a tear rolls down her cheek.. armaan wipes it)
(music) both start dancing( rem - lonavala type)..all luking at dem.. padma's eyes filled wid tears of joy.. luking how happy her daughter is wid armaan😳😳
haan dilwale... dekho fir milen hai.. (armaan winks.. coz finally he is back 4m bangkok )
jaane kahan hum chalen hai..(armaan smiles)
nazroin se nazrein mili hai.. ( lukin deep into each others eyes)
honthon se honth sile hai
ek aag si.. hai dabi dabi...( rid. moves a lil back..)
o ajnabee... mere ajnabee....(armaan cums closer to her)
(music) both lost in each others arms.... 4gtn where dey were..
pyar ka mausum aata hai... aata hai.. ek baar.. (keeps her head on his shoulder)
dil diya jaata ..ek baar.. ek baar....( armaan tyts his grip )
jawan - jawan dil ki dadhkan mein koi samata hai...( raises her head n luks at him)
koi samata hai... ek baar ek baar.. (armaan keeps his hand on her face)
o mujhe kya hua... ( stops dancing)
main udne lagi..( leaves him..spread her arms n takes a round)
o ajnabee...mere ajnabee....(luks at him..)
na jaane aaye tum kahan se... itna pyar laaye tum kahan se...( pointing her finger 2wards him.. n askn)
ho.. na jaane aaye tu kahan se... itna pyar laye tum kahanse..
( everyone claps... she runs and hugs armaan...)
party cont.s.. evryone nyin d meals... rid. standing wid sum of her frd.s .. n notices armaan ws lukn at her... rid. goes to armaan..
r - aisa kya dekh rahe ho..😳
ar - tumhe.. n holds her hand..😳
r - (blushing) armaan.. chodo ..koi dekh lega..😳
ar - mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..😉
r - pehle haath chodo..😳
ar - main bedroom(rid. - anji's room) mein tumhari w8 kar raha hun jaldi aao..😳😳
r - armaan.. main nai aa sakti plzz samjha karo..😳
armaan leaves her hand..
ar - main intezar kar raha hun.😳😳.. n goes upstair..
after few mins.. ridhima silently moves away from d party hall n goes upstairs..
IN ROOM - rid. opens d door n sees armaan nowhere..
r - armaan...😕😳
r - armaan tum kahan ho ??😕
armaan hu was hidin behind d door....closes d door... n hugs her tightly 4mback..😳😳
ar - hi wifey..
r - armaan.. kya...kya kar rahe ho...chodo mujhe plzz😳
ar - nai..😳. n kisses her shoulder😳
r - plz armaan.. koi aa jayega.. sab log neche w8n kar rahe hai ...😳
ar - karne do fir... maine bhi to tumhara kitna intezaar kiya tha...😳 (continues kissing her neck... )
r - armaan...kab ki baat kar rahe ho... plzzz..ahhhh... jaane do..😳
ar - shaadi se pehle😉
r - ab to ho gayi na...chodo..plzz😳
ar - nai..mujhe tum pe bahut pyar aa raha hai..😳😉
r - (still struggling 2 escape)armaan tum apna ye pyaar ghar mein kar lena..😳
ar - oye hoye !! 😉
r - armaan dekho koi aa raha hai..😳😳
knock - mus - ridhima...tum andar ho kya...
r - haan..haan...muskaan..main..main andar hi hun...(armaan kissing her shoulder n neck)...( v.slowly..chodo na..)
m - tu theek hai na...😕
r - (still struggling v. hard to escape.. armaan turns her face 2wards him)
main theek hun muskaan... bas abhi aayi...😕
m - jaldi aa..sab teri w8 kar rahe hai..
r - bas abhi aayi..(moving armaan back)😳
m - vaise armaan kahan hai..😕.
r - yahin kahin hoga... tum dekh lo.. main bas abhi aayi.. ( pushes armaan back)
m - theek hai..n goes..😳
r - armaan ..tum mere paas mat aao... pagal ho gaye ho kya..😳
ar - moving towards her... hum to ussi din se pagal ho gaye the jis din aapko pehli baar dekha tha... n holds her again😳😳😳
ridhima blushing lyk hell... armaan plzzz abhi jaane do...bahut gadbad ho jayegi..sach mein..😳😳
ar - sach mein..😳
r - (struggling v. hard) haan.😳😳.
armaan leaves her..
ar - jao... lekin usse pehle.. ek baat batao..😳
r - kya..😕😳
ar - ho gaya na is ajnabee se pyaar..😉😳.
ridhima remained silent... n ws blushing lyk hell..😳.
ar - bolo na..😕😳.
ridhima ... gave a peck on his lips... n runs away sayin ...ZINDAGI SE ZYADA...
ar - (2 himself) luv u basket... n moves out of d room..😉
**************PARTY OVER...ALL BACK TO DERE HOUSE***************
MALIK'S HOUSE..
ridhima standin near d window with her eyes closed....armaan cums.. holds her 4m back... n moves his arms around her waist... n closes his eyes..😳😳
r - (eyes closed ..EC) ..armaan..😳
ar - (ec) hmm..😊
r - (ec)i luv u 😳
ar - (ec) kisses her ear .. luv u 2 basket..😳
r - (ec)armaan..tumne mere sawaal ka jawaab nai diya..😳
ar - (opens his eyes) sawaal..kaisa sawaal..
rid.opens her eyes n turns towards armaan... n keeps her arms around his neck..😳
r - jo maine tumse party mein pucha tha..😳
ar - kaunsa...😕
r - ITNA PYAAR LAYE TUM KAHAN SE.... n luks deep into his eyes..
armaan smiles... n kisses her 4head..😳
ar - ye to nai jaanta ... lekin ek cheez hai jo jaanta hun.😳.
r - kya ?😕😳
ar - ki..jis din se tumhe dekha..aisa laga jaise dil par kissi ne dastak di...tumhari har aadat se pyar ho gaya... pata nai kab tumse pyar karne laga aur aaj.. tumse is kadar pyar karta hun ki tum mere hone ki vajah, mere jeene ka maksad... mera khuda ban gayi ho..😳😳😳.
ridhima's eyes fills wid tears..after listing 2 dese words of armaan.. a tear rolls down her cheek..armaan wipes it... n brings his face closer to her face.😳😳.. ridhima closes her eyes.. armaan kisses her 4head... 😳slowly he moves his finger on her soft pink lips...n kisses dem..ridhima responds equally..😳😳 slowly a kiss turns into the most passionate kiss dey ever had.. armaan keeps his hand on her shoulder n pulls down d net of her gown.. n kisses her v. passionately.. he was becoming more wild wid every kiss😳😳...ridhima was breathing heavily.. armaan carries her n takes her 2 d bed.. (Armaan on top of ridhima).. holds her arms tightly.. n contnues showering kisses on her neck n shoulder...ridhima was njying evry moment...😳 his soft lips n wild kisses were making her making her crazy... she had never evr dreamt dat her lyf partner wud be so caring , luving n romantic.... armaan kept on showering kisses 😳... both turned (nw ridhima on armaan) armaan was nuzzling all over her neck n shoulder... ridhima kissed his chest n rested her head on his chest... armaan moved his hand all over her back n kept on kissing ......😳😳. dey both share a wonderful nyt n go to sleep......😊
alryt guys... dats all.... hope u liked it !
precap - LUV IS IN THE AIR !!!!!
w8n eagerly 4 ur comments n suggestions..
Luv u
Chandni😊
PART - 29
Note - after my last part i received loads of pms n comments n surprizngly most of dem had same requests , suggestion to show some emotional romantic scenes🥰.. (d way i potrayed d honeymoon romance) coz in most of d ffs naughty romance is in d air... so i hv to change d scene otherwise i had a diff. story in my mind ..😉. but here i come wid an emotional romance... it will be a flasback scene ... d famous 10 july scene ... i will mold d scene d way v all wanted it.... every thing is just same (replace - sukriti by shilpa) ... d scene wll cont 4m where armaan holds ridhima tighty... n askn wat exactly she wants hope u will lyk it ...🥰
*********** PRESENT**********
dr ke - aaj kaafi new cases hai so u hv to be more alert n quick wid ur respective duties..
dr an - opd
dr mu - children ward
dr rid - ek naya case hai aap usse handle kareingi ... cllect d details 4m reception ( r - yes mam)
dr ra - path lab
dr at - aids ward
dr ar - genral ward
2day no masti at all ... everyone is busy wid dere respective duties...
Evening - Duties over.. everyone in locker room
m -haaye rabba ... aaj kitn akaam tha... main to mar gayi
an - sach mein yaar.. bahut tiring schedule tha..
ra - meri to sir ghoom raha hai...
at - koi nayi baat kar...😆
all laugh.. rahul makes n irritating face😆
ar - tum sab ko fresh karne ka ek tareeka hai mere pass😉
all - kya 
ar - kyun na hum sab club - 7 chalein😀
at - tu pagal ho gaya hai kya ...hum log yahan theek se khad bhi nai ho sakte.. aur tu hai naachne ki baat kar raha hai..😆
ra - nai , i guess itz a gud idea... usne vahan dance karne ko to nai kaha na😜
m - nai yaar atul theek keh raha hai..
all start fighting on dis small issue weder dey should go or not..😆
rid n armaan's pager rings
ri - ladte raho tum log.
. meri nyt duty hai.. main ja rai hun..
ar - meri bhi ... bye guys.. tum log ladte raho..😉😆
ar n rid go... n others after havn a useless fight go to dere home ...😆
NITE - AROUND 2.00am
both are really v. tired n after checking dere patients go 2 relax to dere fav. place - "THE FIRE ESCAPE"
armaan sits on the stair.. ridhima sits at d above stair behind armaan n keeps her arms around her neck... armaan bends his head on her chest ... n she keeps her chin on his head.. n closes dere eyes.. ( A PICTURE PERFECT POSE )
after 5 mins of silence..
r - armaan , bahut thak gaye ho na..
ar - hmm.. tum bhi to thak gayi ho..
r - hmm.. lekin jab bhi yahan aati hun na.. saari thakan door ho jaati hai...🥰
ar - tum bhi vahi soch rai ho jo main..🥰
r - tum kya soch rahe ho..
ar - rehne do..😉
r - armaan batao na..🥰
ar - vo din jab tumne finally maana to ki tum bhi mujhse kitna pyaar karti ho🥰
ridhima blushes...
r - tumhe kaise pata...
🥰ar - bas aise hi..😉
r - sach mein armaan.. kya din tha na vo..🥰
ar - hmm - 10 july 2007 ( 1 saal peeche kar diya.. actually v all cant make a luv story 2050 kinds u c)
r - tumhe din bhi yad hai..
🥰ar - yups ...😉
silence .. both enter in past ...
**************************FLASHBACK*******************************
armaan hold ridhima tighly n pushes her against d lockers..
ar - ridhima tum mujhe pagal kar dogi.. jab chaha mere kareeb aa gayi.. jab chaha mujhse door chali gayi.. chahti kya ho tum.. n holds her even more tyt
r - ahh.. armaan..
ar - kya armaan..
r - armaan.. u r hurting me..
ar - ohhh... tumhe ye dard mehsoos hota hai.. lekin mera dard nai dikhta tume... bolo ridhima.
😭.. (brings her face closer to her facen tyts his grip further..ridhima unable to bear pain)r - ahh... armaan...
armaan realizes n loosen his grip ....
ar - kyun karti ho ridhima aise.. kyun ??? 😭
ridhima yells n holds him 4m his collor
r - KYUNKI.. main tumse pyar karti hun...
😭 do u undertand dat... coz i luv u ..😭(armaan luks at her in a g8 shock he was not xpectn dis answer 4m ridhima)
r - (hits him on his chest holding his shirt..) nai reh sakti tumhare bina armaan..😭
. n kneels down on floor holding his leg n cries loudly..😭armaan bends n holds her hand..
r - (crying n yelling) tumne to mujhe apni zindagi ka hissa banaa liye.. par bhul gaye ki tum bhi meri zindagi ka hissa ho.... tumhare liye zindagi sirf ek mazaak hai armaan... tumne mere baare mein kabhie nai socha..ki jab tum aise harkatein karte ho to mujhe kaisa lagta hai..
😭😭ar - ridhima main...
r - tum kya armaan....
tumne mujhe saari khushiyan deni chahi.. ye baat main jaanti hun... lekin iska matlab ye to nai hai mujhe khush karne k liye.. ya mujhe ye yakeen dilane k liye ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho..khud ki zindagi khatrein mein.😭.. (n cries holding him tyt)ar - ridhima main sirf tumhe kush dekhna chahta tha...😭
r - meri khushi tum the armaan ... sirf tum...😭😭
after a long silence ...
ar - i m sorry ridhima.. main nai jaanta tha ki meri ye baatein tumhein itni chot pahunchati hai... i m sry rid. ... 😭
r - armaan... hum dono bilkul alag hai...😭
ar - lekin iska matlab ye to nai hua na ridhima ki hum ek dusre k liye bane.. main tumse bahut pyar karta hun..😭🥰
rid ... abt. to say sumthing... armaan's pager rings
ar - mujhe jaana hoga... duty k baad fire esp. mein milogi ??
rid bends her head..👏🏻👏🏻
armaan helps her 2 stand .. n wipes her tears...🥰
ar - tum theek ho..
🥰r - hmm.. tum..tum jao.. duty kar lo..main..tumhara intezaar karungi..🥰😭
AFTER 1 HR. armaan goes 2 fire escape n sees ridhima dere still crying .. he enters n closes d door..
ar - ridhima..
🥰rid. quickly wipes her tears...
armaan goes near her... 🥰
ar - (his eyes filed wid tears) dekho rid. ye baat koi nai badal sakta ki hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai.🥰😭..fir tumne ye dooriyan kyun banayi hui hai...😭
r - shayad isliye ..kyunki mujhe laga ..ki hum dono ek dusre k liye nai bane😭
ar - tumhe ab bhi aisa lagta hai ridhima...😭
ridhima bends her face n says - Nahi🥰
armaan smiles.. 🙂
ar - to kya..tum aur main... i mean..hum dono..🥰
r - blushes n moves her head saying yes...😀🥰
ar - sach !!
😀r - lekin armaan...tumhe mujhse ek vaada karna hoga..
ar - kya ?
r - kuch bhi ho jaye.. tum mujhse kabhie kuch nai chupaoge 😭(rem - muskaan , punjaab , bf stuff)
ar - i promise 🙂
r - aur zindagi ko mazaak ki tarah nai loge..😭
ar - tumhari kasam ...🥰
armaan spreads his arms ..she hugs him tytly... both lost in a precious moment armaan kisses her ear lobe .. rid. holds him tyt ... armaan showers few more kisses... both were v. close now ...armaan was desperate to feel d toch of her soft lips.. armaan moved his finger on her lips...
ar - (whispers) may I ??🥰
ridhima closes her eyes..🥰. he was about to kiss her...pager rings
both depart..
***************************FLASHBACK OVER******************************
ar - sach mei ridhima... agar tum meri zindagi mein na hoti...to main to khud ko imagine bhi na kar pata ... n kisses her hand...🥰
ridhima blushes.. n kisses his head ..🥰.
armaan turns his head...(ridhima's arms still around his neck)..n luks deep in2 her eyes... he moves his face closer to her face..both were about 2 kiss....
PAGER RINGS !!!!
armaan makes a v. irritating face...😆
ar - c dats all i need..
. pehle bhi ye pager hamare beech tha.. aaj bhi... n raises his hand to throw d pager..😆r - armaan ..kya kar rahe ho..
armaan realizes..😆. n checks n msg... both go back 2 duty....
alryt guys.... i dnt know about u all.. but personally i wanted dis famous scene to b lyk dis only... hope u all njyed it...
precap - STORY WIL TAKE A DRASTIC CHANGE !!!!
w8n eagerly 4 ur comments n suggestions🥰
Luv
Chandni🙂
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