Originally posted by: bpatil3
Kuch Raaz.. Pyar ke..
Chupana kitna mushkil hai insan k liye? Life is nothing like picture perfect, the Virani house displaying the picture perfect around Tulsi, anyone can catch easily, especially the woman who lived in that house for 38years of life and the kids whom she raised, she can easily pick it up a slight change in it.
Firstly I am really sorry for the delay. By the time I saw your review, I was already deep into writing the next chapter so I thought pahle woh kar loon.
Yes the family is happy with Tulsi’s return - she’s like the life of SN - but at the same time sab ki class lagi hui hai - take care of Mihir (as well as his kasam) - ensure normalcy on the surface when all are worried about his health
Ok the opening dhamakedaar, Tulsi ko Chachi ke yha jaana tha, but she heard something important, she was shaken by the news( kitne dramebaaz ho writer, Ekta maiyya ki competitor😂), Shobha n Chachi ki baatein, so Mihir had serious anxiety attack and BP issue , and he was on medication constantly. She cannot hold anymore, she lived all her life for this man and his wellbeing. She drifted to the hallway side table to read the prescription and the medical history, just like that, is it panic or concern.??
Arre frankly this section I consider as my failure as a writer. At this point in my story Tulsi needed to know about his health (insomnia and bp fluctuations issues) so I used the very cliched and popular itv trope of tulsi overhearing stuff and then Shobha (being in the anxious state over Mihir’s health since morning) forgetting both the eno sachet meant for gayatri as well as Mihir’s medical file downstairs- she’s been taking care of him all day so thakaan and anxiety ki wajah se bhool gayi file- I tried to find a better way to disclose to tulsi but couldn’t find any way that wasn’t typical itv trope.
Tulsi is obviously concerned and in a kind of panic - file haath lag gayi by chance toh naturally she will read it.
Anyways, she had to know the unknown, 6years she led a life alone, single handedly, she yearn for him, family, to prove herself her sorrows have taken the path of building something, her depression has boosted her to be an independent woman, her exhaustion gave her energy to work hard, create something on her own. She used all her negatives to build something positive.
very true. And it is that hard- earned independence that she needs to protect along with her heart - she has absolutely run out of her capacity for hurt - esp from Mihir- Noina was the last straw that broke the camels back (it is a popular idiom- if you know)
In contrast to Tulsi, Mihir dealt all his misery and sufferings differently. The self realization, guilt is so occupied his mind and heart, he could no more control himself but end up under medication.
This is exactly how nature has created men and women. Women are strong emotionally, men are strong physically, probably that's the exact reason, two different structurally built qualities of men and women are married to each other, so that their is a completeness. Universe has given us lots to learn and understand.
Absolutely right! Men are strong physically but weak emotionally - which is also why it is kind of easier for a parayi aurat to seduce or behkaao a man while the opposite is not true.
शिव वैराग्य हैं, तो शक्ति सृजन की ऊर्जा हैं। दोनों एक-दूसरे के पूरक हैं।
Exactly
Well, you narrated her worries, concern her being all up the whole night, not knowing where she is going she found the mandir. The moment she cleaning the idol, it started coming up into it's original form, this is refreshing to read, Tulsi ki bhavanoan pe jo dhool chadh gya tha, shayad usska ek layer hat gya hai. She remembering all her old days then her youth, father, baa and bapuji, then suddenly that innocent, charming Mihir's entry. And her comparing the Mihir whom with she lived, loved, played with to the Mihir of six year before, till yesterday wo khud hi kashmkash me hai, which one is right. Her whole life has been rewinded in her mind, this piece is beautiful❤️
Yeah. Bilkul sahi - jo tha woh toh temple ke idol ki tarah tha hi - but her cleaning the idol was symbolic- just as the idol ki chhavi clear hoti gayi waise hi tulsi ki nazar me Mihir ki bhi clear ho gayi
She is restless too, but again women can hold the pain for longer, until she heard he is alright. She leaving her place quietly, pretending she doesn't know anything and allowing her kids to take Mihir to the Hospital was just her presence of mind and her worry, probably not for husband, but for the person once she shared her everything with.
Very true - when she realizes that her own presence in the house is an obstacle to the much needed doctor’s visit, she has that presence of mind to take herself away. You are also right about it not being for her husband.
Pari n her first day at office, Tulsi teaching her from the scratch, is nothing wrong. This is how Indian Gurukul shiksha used to be. Even prince were made sit on the ground and learn everything along with others, so that they understand human beings, and the difficulties of any work, a trait to learn so that one day can become king the ruler.Not because he is King's son, but bcoz he is efficient and deserving.Similarly Tulsi's vision is to make Pari the same, liked Pari's acceptance to it.
Yes true - this part is my fave too. Yes tulsis training module at least for Pari is based on Gurukul system. Tulsi also wants to see if it’s time pass for Pari or is she really serious about working
Rithik arriving late, her mind is after Mihir's health condition, she cannot ask directly, she asked indirectly, Son can't reveal, kasam jo hai papa ka.
True.
Then her heart is not at peace until she heard from Kamla Sahab has come for lunch. And after that, the relaxed breath she took says all. Her going home and having a sound sleep of 2hrs boosted her up again.
Yes once she’s assured he’s at least not worse, she gets suddenly aware of her extreme exhaustion- it’s been a tough 2 days for her with barely any sleep
Mithali ka she needs to work out wisely.
In next chapter
Well dining, she need not have to look at him, neither he to look at her, there silences and every breath can humm a song, it's bcoz of the year old bond, they noticed every single movement of their body and soul.
True - their silences speak more than words can ever.
She is relived seeing him.
Last me tadka tha, 😂😂 chai pe chupke se aajavo wah.
shobha and gayatri ki baat ka natija - he needs her the most (and in fact she too needs him the most to heal her badly wounded heart though she won’t admit even to herself)
let's restart with Chaiii..
Bgm me ye song...
मिलो ना तुम तो हम घबराए
मिलो तो आँख चुराएं
हमें क्या हो गया है
हमें क्या हो गया है
Hey great song to suit their situation
I loved this paragraph so much❤️
She was not excusing it. She was not collapsing the distance between his failure and his suffering. Both were real. They did not cancel each other out.
But she was sitting with both of them. For the first time. Without managing the distance between them.
U know what - I rewrote these lines at least 7-8 times- wasn’t getting the effect I needed. The fact that you quoted these very lines - means mere efforts waste nahi gaye
Thank you writer. ❤️
Thank you for this beautiful review
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