TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch: 13 on page 27: Green Tea & Petal - Page 19

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Posted: 7 days ago

Read a quote :


"Men argue for the right to be free while women argue for the right to be upset. Men want space while women want understanding"


Badla Nazariya..

Is it just reader's, No.

Is it just the Men Rights, No.

Is it just the News Makers, No.

Is it just the Social Media, false news propagaters, No?

It's entirely changed the mindset of two individuals. Probably, Mihir git an opportunity to confess the truth, put his heart out, his self realization, his admiration, his love and respect for the woman he deserves. Often we fail to do so, especially men, pay less attention to these small gestures towards their wives. Mihir has to acknowledge after all he is blessed with the priceless diamond in the form of wife.

Similarly, Tulsi underestimated him on personal issues, not because she hates him or angry with him, but his personality over the years had made her be judgemental on this issue.

However, the thick wall has now broken, probably they both resolve the issues by simple gestures. I do not think, Tulsi will like Mihir hiding himself out of shame, she never wanted this from him, neither she ever thought of it. All she wants is Mihir to hold his head high and be the man-who has guts to completely aceept his faults infront of the world, he need not have to prove anything to anyone.

I know Tulsi admires Mihir in lot many ways, and she never had doubts on many of his abilities, but this change -keeping your manly ego aside, appreciating someone who really deserves, and crediting it, something new.

Sure they will talk about all these when things get right between them...

Until then..smiley42

Edited by bpatil3 - 7 days ago
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Posted: 7 days ago
This is fantastic, I really enjoyed reading the first few parts. Haven't gotten to the rest.
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Posted: 7 days ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Achaar scene was lovely . Mihir saying that this is Tulsi's house,she can dedicate according to her and she doesn't owe anything was nice.I am glad that pari too joined Tulsi to work.

Thank you so much for your comments. Means a lot! Please keep commenting.

Chapter 8 I kind of felt like rushing- because my mind was already in creating the sickening quagmire of chapter 9. But I somehow managed to restrain myself and give it the slow treatment it deserved - it was supposed to be a calmer chapter - so that chapter 9 hits harder!

Thank you


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Posted: 7 days ago

Everyone, a big Thank you to all those who commented for the first time- thank you for understanding my need for some kind of acknowledgement for the hardwork I am putting into this story!

Other silent readers, please do comment- even a single line about something you don’t like or something you want in this story - will show me your engagement with this story.

I m having a busy week - so will take my time responding to the reviews and then writing the next chapter

Will take 2-4 days for the next chapter- earliest by tomorrow late night

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Posted: 7 days ago

the previous update of this story, mens right barking, the twitter insta and the forums- it would be so funny if it wasnt this dangerous


whatever they wrote for tulsi- she controlled the husband, made him namard, she came back for her selfish reasons- kinda what mihir did. mihir had all the power. he was the one who had affair, he had the entire family for whom tulsi had to return, he had shantiniketan and baa's place. tulsi would forever be linked with the family through mihir. hes always in that higher place


and i liked tulsi's anger and the thoughtful side that maybe she was selfish using bandhej and virani industry. but that was mihir too. virani needed bandhej and vice versa. there is no using or taking advantage as pointed out by mihir in interview


for a woman scorned for the second time, tulsi is remarkably restrained. she didnt scream shout , didnt ask for money. walked away, came back when she wanted, in her own rules and terms. it had to hurt world seeing this silence which was her way to protect herself, and showed how cold she is. bechara mihir whos tortured by his estranged wife. poor mihir. the anger was so good.


also the double standards for wives- tulsi is here, in the family, bt she dont contribute financially as per gossips. tulsi isnt giving wifely rights to mihir- what rights? is it sex? why no one asked the shady timeline of tulsi leaving and noyona entering SN? all fine for men. the moment women did something to protect herself, its bechara mard. smiley11


that picture description of noyona mihir and tulsi and the divider in the pic was written beautifully. how tulsi sees her own unsmiling face and is like i behaved in that way, i wasnt cold- its sad. again everything is on the woman. woman has to smile , look stylish, 10 handed durga. man just has to show up. or else its bechara mard.



i think tulsi had thought mihir is giving her space, and maybe there is no love. now that she knows mihir cares a lot, he defended her publically, wonder what she would do. she can be thankful, but should she? mihir did bare minimum. its something a decent person would do and he did. now what?



also, tulsi knows its mitali. i wonder if pari and ritik does too. tulsi needs to confront mitali and give her ansh treatment. bohut hua samman

Edited by Phir_Mohabbat - 7 days ago
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Posted: 7 days ago

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Thanku so much for such an amazing update would love to read from you that how mihir not in good health will be revealed to Tulsi in your ff

Hi, firstly thank you for commenting - it means a lot to me! Please keep commenting on each chapter - I will be waiting!

I’m so glad you liked this update! Tulsi will find out soon. But what should she do with it- just because he’s suffering bad health, do you think tulsi should run into his arms? Think and tell me what she should do.


thank you again!!

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Posted: 7 days ago

Originally posted by: ABC_1234

I have absolutely loved reading it so far. Hope to read more from you soon……

Thank you for commenting- please keep commenting. As a writer putting so much into a story, nothing matters more!!


I am glad you’re enjoying this story. Surely you’re going to read a lot more - this is a long FF


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Posted: 6 days ago

Originally posted by: saloni_306

Your writing skills are great 😃.. Like we could just imagine the situations and POVs. The feminist side of me wants Mihir to suffer more and the lovesick side of me wants Tulsi to just go to mihir's room and check on him ..

Hi thank u for commenting- please do comment on every chapter- I will wait!


I am so glad you are liking my writing- so glad I am succeeding in bringing to life my story as I want to show it!


Hope you read my previous reply to you - both your sides will be satisfied 😊

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Posted: 6 days ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hi dear,

Hey this is not done, you proved me and Tulsi wrong,smiley5smiley36smiley9 i'm pleasantly surprised smiley31. Thank you for this.

Hi dear,

I was eagerly waiting for your review and truly it was worth waiting for. Thank you!!

I am glad I could surprise you!!


Wow what a read, i m short of words. Kitne acche se likha hai ye chapter yaar, hatsoff.

thank you thank you 😊


Mihir ki tarif karoon ya writer ki, you put everything brutally right, not by heavy words or adjectives, simple plain truth. I don't know how to praise, my dictionary is limited, and tum har baar reader ko maat deti ho, how writer??? My respect for you, you deserve lot more appreciation for handling this giant rock of a false narrative.

let me confess something- while I was writing that sickening media narrative- I totally concentrated on making it as nasty as I could - that time I was not even thinking about how Mihir would dismantle that narrative- I just had that point in mind - this interview so cunningly engineered by Noina as the biggest problem for TuHir- Mihir will convert it into an opportunity to take both of them out of this quagmire. At that time (while writing chapter 9) I had absolutely no idea how and what he’s going to say - all my concentration was fully on the media being shitty!

So when I started working on the interview for chapter 10 - I had a veryyyy tough time finding a way out! At one point I even thought let Mihir fail once more - par that meant - meri story ki dhajiya udd jaati - with it needing 5 more chapters and my entire chapter map of 26 chapters going haywire. So I just started writing the other parts - kept thinking how or what he’s going to say. That’s when I realized- jhooth ka .. false narrative ka sirf ek hi todd hai- sach



Mihir's presence of mind right from commanding every adult to function normally, instructing on the security at office, home, also without hurting Tulsi's ego or spoiling her dignity let her go by auto. At the same time asking his sons to follow her quietly. He anticipated how explosive this news is and what amount of destruction it may cause to Tulsi n himself. He was so stressed until he saw her video, where she was safely took home without a drop of ink on her, he was so relieved. I can visualize his panic, his anxiety and his worry.

Yes Mihir in my story now fully understands his responsibilities being the patriarch- and when he saw even in this situation, tulsi doesn’t want to use the family car, owing to her self respect - he just worked around it and came up with the solution. Also did you see that - in the morning he sent only one son but by the evening he saw how badly it’s spiraling so he sent 2 in the evening to protect her on the public road where it would have looked strange to provide her with security coverage thereby giving more spice to the media.


smiley32What a man, just 5 words and #Nohir was tossed in the sky, with the same speed it hit ground and disappearedsmiley40. This is unbelievable writing dear. I really want to know, how nicely you protrayed this, It is proved that apne muh pe usska naam bhi lene ki zaroorat nhi, no noise, no shouts, no defense, just plain ignorance, and it's like saying "it really doesn't matter, simply makes no sense to talk about " brilliant.

Noina- he feels worse than disgust with her - for her one sided lust (and now he realizes greed for his money), she’s ruined his marriage, perhaps forever! So he dismisses her with an IT not even she



Mihir kitna samjhdaar hogya hai tumhare ff me yar😂😂. His business traits have really worked well here, he applied them diligently in a much more dignified and respectful way.

Kaash show me bhi aisa hota Mihir

His math from 38 to 44yrs and the 6years of life is all in the public domain. But those 38 years everything was plain simple, bcoz ot didn't need instructions to follow, it functions on its own embracing everything, just how the nature does to we human beings, we don't even thank every day for giving us this intangible life essentialities. You did a fantastic job here writer. The depth and meaning of their life and household is now known to everyone. He also ensured that she is capable of what she is, her nature is to give. Similarly, he stating she earned that right to be cold, contemptuous and unforgivable, he as a husband had displayed it to the world that, the kind of mutual understanding they have for each other and their relationship status.it's obviously hubby n wife by nature have rights upon each other, so full stop here.


Exactly! Without saying it in so many words - he’s telling everyone that only.



Tulsi's car journey her surrounded by the mob, she trembling by the unexpected, suddenly she asking how did Angad n Rithik managed to escape her from the mob, every detailing was top notch.

Yes she’s a strong woman but in such situations even she’s affected more than she wants to show her sons


Then comes the Mihir anxiety attack part, the daughters n sons handled the situation so well, Pari wantedly dragging some trivial, casual talks, not kbowing how to, but succeded. Tulsi felt it unusual. The same way dining table scene, Tulsi noticing his seat, plate, glass all being empty, thinking herself probably he is ashamed of facing ppl, especially her. Again this quiteness and forced normalcy at home is pinching her and looked artificial. Deep down she was expecting Mihir at the dining, Chachi announcing his absence left her relieved to some extent, though she didn't display anything.

Until dinner - she’s not seen the interview so she’s very sure that he messed up there badly and so is ashamed to face her. She’s very angry and upset with him until then. She’s always been a very private person so now she’s been dissected by everyone in public completely owing to his mistakes

I 'm sure Tulsi chupke se jaake Mihir ko dekhegi, to check if he is ok after all it's probably the worst, stressful day for him.

Let’s see

Chalo let her go get water. She has to get sync in with the news " i have left her no dignified option, version, our house, came alive".

Exactly… by now you should understand that agar main ek chapter me ye likhti hoon ki she’s gone to kitchen toh something will definitely happen in kitchen

Thank you.

Pls post next, i m being greedy now.

Lotz of luv....

thank you so much for this review

Next by tomorrow morning or tonight late hopefully

Best regards❤️


My response in red

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Posted: 6 days ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

You got 8 likes, does mean silent readers.(SR)

Dear SRs:

So probably you can leave few words here to encourage and appreciate the writer, if you are really liking it.

You can criticize too, our writer is big hearted, she will appreciate positive criticism and tries to inculcate and justify the characters.smiley17

Ty

Thank you for supporting me.

Absolutely correct - if anyone wants any scene or character included, please do let me know - I will try to do it if it doesn’t get in the way of my core story

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