Originally posted by: bpatil3
Hi dear,
Hey this is not done, you proved me and Tulsi wrong,

i'm pleasantly surprised
. Thank you for this.
Hi dear,
I was eagerly waiting for your review and truly it was worth waiting for. Thank you!!
I am glad I could surprise you!!
Wow what a read, i m short of words. Kitne acche se likha hai ye chapter yaar, hatsoff.
thank you thank you 😊
Mihir ki tarif karoon ya writer ki, you put everything brutally right, not by heavy words or adjectives, simple plain truth. I don't know how to praise, my dictionary is limited, and tum har baar reader ko maat deti ho, how writer??? My respect for you, you deserve lot more appreciation for handling this giant rock of a false narrative.
let me confess something- while I was writing that sickening media narrative- I totally concentrated on making it as nasty as I could - that time I was not even thinking about how Mihir would dismantle that narrative- I just had that point in mind - this interview so cunningly engineered by Noina as the biggest problem for TuHir- Mihir will convert it into an opportunity to take both of them out of this quagmire. At that time (while writing chapter 9) I had absolutely no idea how and what he’s going to say - all my concentration was fully on the media being shitty!
So when I started working on the interview for chapter 10 - I had a veryyyy tough time finding a way out! At one point I even thought let Mihir fail once more - par that meant - meri story ki dhajiya udd jaati - with it needing 5 more chapters and my entire chapter map of 26 chapters going haywire. So I just started writing the other parts - kept thinking how or what he’s going to say. That’s when I realized- jhooth ka .. false narrative ka sirf ek hi todd hai- sach
Mihir's presence of mind right from commanding every adult to function normally, instructing on the security at office, home, also without hurting Tulsi's ego or spoiling her dignity let her go by auto. At the same time asking his sons to follow her quietly. He anticipated how explosive this news is and what amount of destruction it may cause to Tulsi n himself. He was so stressed until he saw her video, where she was safely took home without a drop of ink on her, he was so relieved. I can visualize his panic, his anxiety and his worry.
Yes Mihir in my story now fully understands his responsibilities being the patriarch- and when he saw even in this situation, tulsi doesn’t want to use the family car, owing to her self respect - he just worked around it and came up with the solution. Also did you see that - in the morning he sent only one son but by the evening he saw how badly it’s spiraling so he sent 2 in the evening to protect her on the public road where it would have looked strange to provide her with security coverage thereby giving more spice to the media.
What a man, just 5 words and #Nohir was tossed in the sky, with the same speed it hit ground and disappeared
. This is unbelievable writing dear. I really want to know, how nicely you protrayed this, It is proved that apne muh pe usska naam bhi lene ki zaroorat nhi, no noise, no shouts, no defense, just plain ignorance, and it's like saying "it really doesn't matter, simply makes no sense to talk about " brilliant.
Noina- he feels worse than disgust with her - for her one sided lust (and now he realizes greed for his money), she’s ruined his marriage, perhaps forever! So he dismisses her with an IT not even she
Mihir kitna samjhdaar hogya hai tumhare ff me yar😂😂. His business traits have really worked well here, he applied them diligently in a much more dignified and respectful way.
Kaash show me bhi aisa hota Mihir
His math from 38 to 44yrs and the 6years of life is all in the public domain. But those 38 years everything was plain simple, bcoz ot didn't need instructions to follow, it functions on its own embracing everything, just how the nature does to we human beings, we don't even thank every day for giving us this intangible life essentialities. You did a fantastic job here writer. The depth and meaning of their life and household is now known to everyone. He also ensured that she is capable of what she is, her nature is to give. Similarly, he stating she earned that right to be cold, contemptuous and unforgivable, he as a husband had displayed it to the world that, the kind of mutual understanding they have for each other and their relationship status.it's obviously hubby n wife by nature have rights upon each other, so full stop here.
Exactly! Without saying it in so many words - he’s telling everyone that only.
Tulsi's car journey her surrounded by the mob, she trembling by the unexpected, suddenly she asking how did Angad n Rithik managed to escape her from the mob, every detailing was top notch.
Yes she’s a strong woman but in such situations even she’s affected more than she wants to show her sons
Then comes the Mihir anxiety attack part, the daughters n sons handled the situation so well, Pari wantedly dragging some trivial, casual talks, not kbowing how to, but succeded. Tulsi felt it unusual. The same way dining table scene, Tulsi noticing his seat, plate, glass all being empty, thinking herself probably he is ashamed of facing ppl, especially her. Again this quiteness and forced normalcy at home is pinching her and looked artificial. Deep down she was expecting Mihir at the dining, Chachi announcing his absence left her relieved to some extent, though she didn't display anything.
Until dinner - she’s not seen the interview so she’s very sure that he messed up there badly and so is ashamed to face her. She’s very angry and upset with him until then. She’s always been a very private person so now she’s been dissected by everyone in public completely owing to his mistakes
I 'm sure Tulsi chupke se jaake Mihir ko dekhegi, to check if he is ok after all it's probably the worst, stressful day for him.
Let’s see
Chalo let her go get water. She has to get sync in with the news " i have left her no dignified option, version, our house, came alive".
Exactly… by now you should understand that agar main ek chapter me ye likhti hoon ki she’s gone to kitchen toh something will definitely happen in kitchen
Thank you.
Pls post next, i m being greedy now.
Lotz of luv....
thank you so much for this review
Next by tomorrow morning or tonight late hopefully
Best regards❤️
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