TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch: 13 on page 27: Green Tea & Petal - Page 14

Been 2 days and not a single detailed review on this chapter?is no one enjoying this FF!

I have about 26-27 chapters planned with each chapter properly mapped out!

But if no one is enjoying this story, what’s the point? I will stop

I'm short of words the depth of knowledge you have about the textile manufacturing process, design and related says it all you did your homework well. ❤️❤️

The man is guilty, repenting each every deed of his. He is unable to forgive himself, it's everyday torture to fall in his own eye. He may not want to remember those, there are circumstances which will take him back, make him feel more unpleasant and sad for his past. Mihir is lonely, he has to endure this punishment bcoz when your conscious questions you, you should surrender.

सुख की कलियाँ, दुख के कांटे, मन सबका आधार

मन से कोई बात छुपे ना, मन के नैन हज़ार

जग से चाहे भाग लो कोई, मन से भाग न पाये..

So this is his current situation.

I just wanted Shobha initiating a talk to her father, as she is noticing some changes in him, very artificial and being in his own world of guilt. He is feeling miserable, unless you say this to somebody be it your wrong decisions of life, kr anything to your close person, you will feel more relaxed.

Tulsi's focus is fully into business and her house, children and their life.

However, I loved how she felt "Light" it has a larger and strong meaning here. Human beings finally need that acceptance and get respect they deserve from their favourite person. Nothing more is required for that heart to fill with satisfaction. She may not have been sharing entirely everything to Mihir, but she agrees Mihir is better businessman and the same time he is learning to appreciate his spouse when situation arrives.

Mihir comparing Noina and Tulsi be it home, business or relationship, he now realized an orange cannot be compared with an apple, and he was so wrong to do this comparision.

Tulsi's vision and long term goal of sustaining business, going with the market demand, client relationship and being the trusted Vendor. Her vision and business tactics both are commendable. Sometimes, to be in the competition one should do without monetory benefit. Not all busineses run on monetory benefit every time a new project is taken. Some Projects ROI will be zero, still has to be done for achieving larger goals,mission and be in the market.

Tulsi's leadership quality is shown- upholding her employee's competency and not trying to overshadow under her name. Rithik was a scapegoat and made to believe he is a looser, leader should show empathy, trust, help someone overcome his/her fear and be a better person. It's more satisfying when your support and good words brings confidence and eventually produces positive outcomes.

This is exactly Mihir and Tulsi used to do for each other once, acknowledge spouse's silent support, sacrifices and being each others strength, not hindrance .

Well Tulsi trying to meet Damini so that she can atleast start with a step.

Tulsi is okay to wait and give a try again.

Sorry for being late....

I almost read thrice half.. 🙄 i'm not gonna write any review until i'm satisfied reading myself.

Thank you dear.

Finally got the first review!! I was getting so disheartened that 2 din hue and no one gave a review to me!!

will give the detailed response later!! But you know there’s a reason why I am showing mihir going into his shell!! He knows he doesn’t have any rights on tulsi but paradoxically it’s tulsi only who he needs the most emotionally right now!!

Imagine a 60 plus man yearning and carrying guilt over 6 years for having wronged 2 women! Now he knows he has wronged only his wife and every day he’s finding a new way he’s wronged her! He’s been yearning for her for 6 years and now that she’s in the same house, he can’t so much as look at her without being careful

sorry previous message got posted mid way

Socho Kya ho sakta hai to a man that age carrying so much pain and guilt in his heart

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

Finally got the first review!! I was getting so disheartened that 2 din hue and no one gave a review to me!!

will give the detailed response later!! But you know there’s a reason why I am showing mihir going into his shell!! He knows he doesn’t have any rights on tulsi but paradoxically it’s tulsi only who he needs the most emotionally right now!!

Imagine a 60 plus man yearning and carrying guilt over 6 years for having wronged 2 women! Now he knows he has wronged only his wife and every day he’s finding a new way he’s wronged her! He’s been yearning for her for 6 years and now that she’s in the same house, he can’t so much as look at her without being careful

I'm sure there are silent readers too.

Don't stop, as in the new chapter you have mentioned First is to create relationships not to gain commercial growth. So take it that way. Initially, you may not get what you expect, however ppl get engaged to such stories eventually. Pls don't loose hope, move forward.

Regarding Mihir he needs Tulsi emotionally, no one can heal, but to start with he has a daughter. Daughter can somehow make her maa to talk to her father casually.

That's true he wronged her the most.

Tulsi should open the door of her heart, which was shut years ago. Mihir should let her open a window, so that he can share his grief, sorrows and guilt. Ask for forgiveness. Until then he has to suffer.

Post this one conversation, probably Tulsi also should think once, how did she too believed Noina's words that Mihir is Happy with her? In a way Tulsi also succumbed to Noina's trap. Why she had to run away from Mumbai believing Noina? Mihir tried to explain that timr, but she had no heart to listen to him.But she was heartbroken at the moment and her mind stopped thinking rationally. Mihir confessed that he loves Tulsi, but her anger over powered her logical mind.

This self realization probably may ease out, her to initiate a normal conversation with Mihir.

Then slowly, har ek gaanth ko suljha sakte hai.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

I'm sure there are silent readers too.

Don't stop, as in the new chapter you have mentioned First is to create relationships not to gain commercial growth. So take it that way. Initially, you may not get what you expect, however ppl get engaged to such stories eventually. Pls don't loose hope, move forward.

Regarding Mihir he needs Tulsi emotionally, no one can heal, but to start with he has a daughter. Daughter can somehow make her maa to talk to her father casually.

That's true he wronged her the most.

Tulsi should open the door of her heart, which was shut years ago. Mihir should let her open a window, so that he can share his grief, sorrows and guilt. Ask for forgiveness. Until then he has to suffer.

Post this one conversation, probably Tulsi also should think once, how did she too believed Noina's words that Mihir is Happy with her? In a way Tulsi also succumbed to Noina's trap. Why she had to run away from Mumbai believing Noina? Mihir tried to explain that timr, but she had no heart to listen to him.But she was heartbroken at the moment and her mind stopped thinking rationally. Mihir confessed that he loves Tulsi, but her anger over powered her logical mind.

This self realization probably may ease out, her to initiate a normal conversation with Mihir.

Then slowly, har ek gaanth ko suljha sakte hai.

Now if I respond to you in any detail - I may end up giving away my story - which will make my future chapters less enjoyable for you to read! So I will once again say only this - your understanding of this story and TuHir’s situation is simply superlative! I’m awed ❤️❤️

One thing I can say without giving away anything- Tulsi as you saw in one of her self-thoughts in a past chapter, she doesn’t deny loving him.. in fact she accepts to herself that she has never stopped loving him! Also when she has that conversation with Mihir in first chapter - when Mihir says I have only ever loved you, she doesn’t deny that! She instead says - love is not enough, respect too is needed!

So that’s the whole crux of this story - she NEEDS TO feel respected by him - which she already is in these 20 days! Correct?

You are also right - she needs to introspect herself about her role too - was she 100% right? Kya 1% bhi galti khud tulsi ki nahi? She needs a jhatkaa to get into that introspection

While I do agree with you about silent readers, I am also human! I have put so much thought and mapped all the chapters before I wrote the first word of the first chapter! So it’s natural to be hurt over the lack of response, isn’t it?

But hurt or not, I know one thing - I have a very good story that DESERVES to be written fully! So maybe despite lack of response, I will continue - maybe not as enthusiastically but probably I will continue!

Since you are the only one who has given me review so far, I am asking you to- when do you want the next chapter? It’s almost ready - just needs editing/polishing

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

Now if I respond to you in any detail - I may end up giving away my story - which will make my future chapters less enjoyable for you to read! So I will once again say only this - your understanding of this story and TuHir’s situation is simply superlative! I’m awed ❤️❤️

One thing I can say without giving away anything- Tulsi as you saw in one of her self-thoughts in a past chapter, she doesn’t deny loving him.. in fact she accepts to herself that she has never stopped loving him! Also when she has that conversation with Mihir in first chapter - when Mihir says I have only ever loved you, she doesn’t deny that! She instead says - love is not enough, respect too is needed!

So that’s the whole crux of this story - she NEEDS TO feel respected by him - which she already is in these 20 days! Correct?

You are also right - she needs to introspect herself about her role too - was she 100% right? Kya 1% bhi galti khud tulsi ki nahi? She needs a jhatkaa to get into that introspection

While I do agree with you about silent readers, I am also human! I have put so much thought and mapped all the chapters before I wrote the first word of the first chapter! So it’s natural to be hurt over the lack of response, isn’t it?

But hurt or not, I know one thing - I have a very good story that DESERVES to be written fully! So maybe despite lack of response, I will continue - maybe not as enthusiastically but probably I will continue!

Since you are the only one who has given me review so far, I am asking you to- when do you want the next chapter? It’s almost ready - just needs editing/polishing

Ok appreciate your thoughts and expectations.

Once you complete the editing, post anyways i m free to read today also😃

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Ok appreciate your thoughts and expectations.

Once you complete the editing, post anyways i m free to read today also😃

okay chapter is edited! Should I post the chapter first or respond to your review first?

Respond then post. We will have the continuity😂

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Respond then post. We will have the continuity😂

your wish is my command 😊