TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch14 on pg 29: Woh Zakhm .. Ab Bhi - Page 28

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Ok let me start with this song 😜

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Kya kehna hai kya sunna hai

Mujhko pata hai tumko pata hai

Samay ka ye pal thamsa gaya hai

Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai

Bas ek main hoon

Bas ek tum ho

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Hey dear

You seem to be a classic song lover like me. I am amazed at how you manage to find apt songs every time!

So ye silsila jaari hai, chupke se aana, fur intzar karna, chai peena, chori chori dekhna, kehne k liye bahot hai, par kehne se dil darta hai.

Yes exactly

Inki monosyllable me baatein ho rhi hai. They don't require full sentence to get the gist of it. Mihir ki himmat to dekho bol diya jo bolna hai " bahot kaam karti ho" bahot hesitation se hi, but he told the truth, Tulsi cannot deny that.

he opened his mouth to say that - but changed to yahan le aao. Main disturb nahi Karoonga. But Kyunki tulsi usko itna ache se jaanti hai- she understood woh kya bolne wala tha but then stopped himself as he has no rights yet.

To me it appears that, It is Tulsi's way of dealing her fear, insecurities and also to be better of her own self everyday. Sacchayi ye bhi hai ki Tulsi ko apni pain se ladna na pade, so keeps herself busy. It's not just to be the business woman, but to not remember her dark phase of life, so she kept herself occupied with something which hides somewhere in the corner. But, kuch cheezein kahi dil k kone me dabake rakhne me jitni koshish ki jaayegi wo utni hi teji se dahad maarke jwalamukhi ban jaati hai. Tulsi has secluded that part of her heart, she herself has forgot to find it's way. Mihir can only ignite the spark to open that door.

oh my god! Some of these words are exactly what I have written in my next chapter- it’s truly amazing how much you are in sync with this story. Truly feeling blessed to have readers you and 1-2 others. Won’t respond more to this aspect as you will read it in next chapter

I was also thinking, ye Mihir har din 5.50/51/52/55 login timing k jaise mark karrha hai. ye sochkr ki mera boss khush hoga, i do not think he is sleeping any good, he is in that excitement of getting up early and be in the balcony.

Yes when I read your this comment, it reminded me when I was in a bpo Job and had to mark our login times. 🤣🤣

Neend toh use waise bhi 6 saal se kahan aati hai. But pahle it was sadness now it’s excitement as you say 😁

Good that for a change he is picking up newspaper. He clarifying his zero expectations beyond and above the timings she set is really appreciated.

Not just that. He told her, he wants to say a lot of things to her, but will say only when she’s ready to listen.

So two of them, 45 mins me kuch bolne nhi, Paper ka bahana bana ke ek dusre ke upar nazar rkhrhe hai, ye bacchoan se chupke, gharwaloan se chupke aankh micholi kab tak?? but ye raaz hi rehna chahiye until they atleast start to speak in sentences and paragraphs, keeping business news in the centre (Let them speak writer, ye chuppi hamse bardhasth nhi hoti, ouchhh, koun kambhkt bardhast karne k liye peeta hai, hum to peete hai aapse mile,baatein kare, aur har subah aapko dekhe😜).

Bahut jaldi aapke Armaan poore hone wale hain ji.

You know what? I almost fell off laughing after reading this part!!l

Tulsi cannot be a full fledged business woman, Mihir has lots to offer her, let them start at the office meetings pls😜. To Mihir ka three doses of the day quota khatam hoga. Ye public demand hai😂😂.

What do you mean? Tulsi is already a full fledged business woman but yes Mihir is more experienced- don’t your this wish will be granted

Well it's completely writer's choice, you know better when and where to fit them😂

Yes already a part of the original story outline- just wait for a few chapters

Accha, bacche kitne smart hogyre hai, sab notice karte hai😂, Shobha ko kuch to idea hai, so she is all set to display, Tulsi Mihir conscious hoke dekhe bhi nhi ek dusre ko.

Yes kids have no filter - jo dekhte sunte hain jo notice karte hain woh bas bol dete hain. Shobha has raised her own kids so she knows how to convince kids - but saath me usne sach bhi bol hi diya!

This was crucial part, shayad Tulsi n Mihir monosyllable me baatein kare, so that ye baat nhi karnewali cheez ek aur SM byte na bane.

true.. waise bhi it’s easier to target kids - ask them ghar me kya chal raha hai.. I didn’t write (miss on my part I guess) but kids ke school me baat ki hogi adults ne asking the school authorities to take care that no one talks or asks such things to the kids.

Mithali, ka kuch samjh nhi aa rha abhi tak, if she is changing for good it's welcome change. She need to think her life on her own, she is not a project, where planning is done by someone, and she has to execute as per plan and achieve the milestone. She needs reiterate, find ways to you to get some positive outcome while executing. Let's see how it progresses.

Mitali ka u will read in next chapter- Abhi Kuch bhi bolna means you won’t enjoy the next Mitali part.

Arre last wala to dhamaka tha, now Mihir wants to return back the favour another 30mins extension with Geeen Tea, Tulsi being thoughful suggested what is good for both of them. I'm sure like Mihir Tulsi might also have sleep issues, so it is sorted.

Haan na, he wants all the time he can get - cheeky Mihir finally surfacing to an extent.

Tulsi Valentine day yaad karke hasi thi kya, jo Mihir ne chori se pakad liya and she sits straight.

Mihir ne ad - happy Valentine’s Day- dikha ke wish kiya - without saying the words himself - isiliye hasi aa gayi without wanting to.

Chalo phool na sahi, petal to le liya, Mihir ko kuch kuch andaza hojayega ki kitni baatein karni hai, kaha rukna hai, aur kab kehna hai.

Yes aur Mihir is going v v patiently .. while simultaneously telling himself not to hope. And he’s failing to keep the hope at bay.

I'm liking this silence.

har baar zaroori nhi ki baat ho,

Khamoshi bhi dil tak pahuch hi jaati hai.

(I don't wanna talk about Noina, sorry, Mujhe aaj k episode me Mihir phir se Noina pe vishwas kiya lag rha hai😜🙄)

Solemce next chapter me nahi hoga! Noina - yaar show is obsessed with her.

Thank you writer, for the great stuff...

Pleasure is all mine

Thank you dear for this wonderful review. Replies in red

Originally posted by: bpatil3

I want Mihir to miss his morning Tea session now😜..

Something like he should come aroud 6.15 or go back within 6.30 or so.

Dekhna to hai mujhe ki Tulsi ki reaction kya hogi. Cold to nhi hogi, but evening Tea pe kha baat hogi 😜

🤣🤣🤣😜😂😂

As someone, I think, phir mohabat said, Mihir is grabbing every possible breadcrumbs tulsi is throwing him with both hands. So no chance of his doing anything of the sort!! Unless koi reason ho

Originally posted by: fan_fiction123

I’m really enjoying every chapter. The story, the characters, and the emotions are all so engaging.

Love how Mihir is so mature here and trying to redeem himself. Tulsi gradually caving in superbly written.

Can’t wait to see the next updates!

hey dear, thank you so much for this feedback/ review! I will be waiting for your review after every chapter

I am so glad you are enjoying this story!
At the cost of sounding immodest, I will say - I am happy I could shape up this story and its characters exactly the way I envisioned them.

I am even happier that I found readers like you who are enjoying the very slow burn story - I mean we are 13 veryyyy long chapters into this story and TuHir have yet to have THE TALK.

next chapter late tonight or tomorrow by noon

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

🤣🤣🤣😜😂😂

As someone, I think, phir mohabat said, Mihir is grabbing every possible breadcrumbs tulsi is throwing him with both hands. So no chance of his doing anything of the sort!! Unless koi reason ho

You cannot disappoint me like this. He has to miss one or two. Arre atleast let him be late know, ye kitna studious lag rha hai well ahead of time😜. She should get frustrated waiting him, and she should shout at him "agar nhi aana chahte to mujhe pehle hi bol do, mere paas bahot kaam hai" biwi wali attitude.

Originally posted by: bpatil3

You cannot disappoint me like this. He has to miss one or two. Arre atleast let him be late know, ye kitna studious lag rha hai well ahead of time😜. She should get frustrated waiting him, and she should shout at him "agar nhi aana chahte to mujhe pehle hi bol do, mere paas bahot kaam hai" biwi wali attitude.

😂😂

Interesting scenario

But Abhi toh she will get worried about his health

but yes - interesting scenario - let me see if I can include it in some future chapters

Waise biwi nahi girlfriend wala attitude chalega kya😜😂

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

Waise biwi nahi girlfriend wala attitude chalega kya😜😂

Arre abhi to Mihir ko bahot papad belne honge, abhi to patavo karyakram chal rha hai. GF ko manana eazy nhi hai..

`Rose petal, lovely 44 years of marriage will lead you to believe you both know everything about each other, but still behave as if the other person will not know the things they are doing for each other.. or they know but don't want to address it.
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Mitali should get a chance, but not just by accepting mistakes in front of Tulsi .. everyone should know what she did, and now she wants to make it better.
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I really liked how nonchalant and not in a dramatic way things are moving between mihir tulsi .. But now you have reached a point where you have to justify why they should be together .. as love and care are not the issue, but emotional cheating is .. and that's a tough part, also going to be very interesting
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update soon as KSBKBT2 seems so boring this whole week ..

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Arre abhi to Mihir ko bahot papad belne honge, abhi to patavo karyakram chal rha hai. GF ko manana eazy nhi hai..

abhi time hai

Saloni ji,

I will reply to your review later! Deep into writing the next chapter now. just wanted to tell you that the next chapter may come late tonight - maybe after midnight or tomorrow by noon!