A TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch-3 on page 5: Naya Savera - Page 6

Ritik and Mitali are biological parents of Timsy in my story! You will find out how in due course!

Chapter 4 is ready too! Will post it when I get enough comments/reviews on chapter 3😇

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And then will start thinking about my chapter 5!!

Ch-1:

Tulsi has portrayed her hurt so well. Mihir always fails to portray his emotions. Definitely he allowed Noina take control of his thoughts, decisions and he just saw what Noina showed him and did not believe Tulsi, never felt how can his wife be wrong atleast for her own kids?

Every minute detail you narrated so nicely. It's very interesting, Mihir deserves this punishment, he should earn Tulsi's faith back. Tulsi k bikhre hue dil k tukde ko jodne ki koshish Mihir ko karni padegi.

Tumhari patni banke nhi aavungi, bahot gehrayi hai iss me.

Thanks for the wonderful writing.

Ch-2

Well the family gathering, the nervousness, happiness,relief so good to read.

Tulsi being Tulsi cannot tolerate a man treating woman badly. However, I would expect, Tulsi to teach lessons to Mithali, to respect Rithik and be hiz true life partner, instead of being a spoilt brat , ask her behave like a responsible mother.

Mihir's hesitant, guilt and sadness expressed so well in his every gesture, i can imagine this scene so easily, you nailed it. Mihir certainly has to learn and appreciate new Tulsi and her wish. He definitely is happy having her home, around his family, near his sight. Tulsi ka pyar jo kahi khogayi hai usse Mihir ko khud dhundni padegi, uss ehsas ko jitni padegi.

Tulsi choosing Baa's room and her silent conversation with Baa, and that dhanywad, so much purity and belongingness. Ultimate truth of life to be around your loved ones, and tulsi sleeping peacefully after ages, narrates the human emotions. You truly deserve lots of appreciations for this kind of writing. Kudos.

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

The kids description is so cute. They ask and they don't care about the heaviness

And the way mihir sees things and file away for himself . Maybe someday he can share his thoughts

Now that noyona is gone mihir don't even feel the silence with sarcasm or taunts lol. I hope when tulsi feels more comfortable that talkative mihir returns

Hi, thank you so much 😊

For me, especially while writing this heavy-ish analytical kind of FF, the biggest challenge is writing kids! I’m so into the heavy stuff while writing that I need to pull myself out from that state before I can think- what would a kid say or do.. that has so and so effect! In a way I have to unthink!!

Yes Mihir being silent might feel out of character for him and maybe not enjoyable to some readers! But he’s lost the one person he has always been enormously dependent on in many ways! He’s scared of her further alienating him so that he won’t be able to even see her!!

Plus he’s genuinely changing - respecting the boundaries she set! He’s gonna show her respect - before love!

But yes once tulsi thaws a bit he’s gonna woo her all over again! Wait for that Romantic Mihir!!

Originally posted by: ElitePerfumer

Hi, thank you so much 😊

For me, especially while writing this heavy-ish analytical kind of FF, the biggest challenge is writing kids! I’m so into the heavy stuff while writing that I need to pull myself out from that state before I can think- what would a kid say or do.. that has so and so effect! In a way I have to unthink!!

Yes Mihir being silent might feel out of character for him and maybe not enjoyable to some readers! But he’s lost the one person he has always been enormously dependent on in many ways! He’s scared of her further alienating him so that he won’t be able to even see her!!

Plus he’s genuinely changing - respecting the boundaries she set! He’s gonna show her respect - before love!

But yes once tulsi thaws a bit he’s gonna woo her all over again! Wait for that Romantic Mihir!!

Mihir being silent is fine. He used to blabber so much to rile up tulsi and get some emotion from her. Him being quiet and seeing things is nice to watch. The silence feels very companion type

I liked the subtle snub tulsi getting her own plant. Someday both plants will be together

Madhvi akshay kid is very realistic in show imo. They don't care much about things moving onto another thing quickly. Garima too is being natural, i especially love the way she look at pari/tulsi. Hope to see only timsi or garima timsi bonding. They live in same house they must have their own stories conversation

Originally posted by: TianaWrites

Loved the chapter especially the first chai part... Reading this chapter was just like sipping hot Chai on a cold morning...

Regarding your point on Timsi... I feel Rithik should adopt the child. The child needn't be his biologically but he could take care of her. Mitali doesn't care for her. She uses the child as a trump card to get her things. Somehow I don't want the child to be under her care.

Happy Angad and Vrinda were accepted... but I was more attached to the Tulsi Mihir part you wrote... maybe I am biased... The weight between them is so evident as of now. Hope they'll come together

Hey thank you so much?! Awww I liked the way the chai scene came out too!!

Regarding Timsy… I got an idea while discussing with you all so thank you both especially Tiana and just Muhabat for the discussions! I’m obviously not disclosing it now but I won’t go the adoption or Amy such way!!

About Mitali, won’t it be interesting to know what she’s like without her maasi and mom?

Frankly that’s exactly what I want my readers to be interested in! TuHir and mainly TuHir! This is a totally TuHir centric story!! The other characters will only be used secondarily.. to take the story forward! I hope that’s okay with you all!

Their silent communication is something I am truly enjoying writing!

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Ch-1:

Tulsi has portrayed her hurt so well. Mihir always fails to portray his emotions. Definitely he allowed Noina take control of his thoughts, decisions and he just saw what Noina showed him and did not believe Tulsi, never felt how can his wife be wrong atleast for her own kids?

Every minute detail you narrated so nicely. It's very interesting, Mihir deserves this punishment, he should earn Tulsi's faith back. Tulsi k bikhre hue dil k tukde ko jodne ki koshish Mihir ko karni padegi.

Tumhari patni banke nhi aavungi, bahot gehrayi hai iss me.

Thanks for the wonderful writing.

thank you so much for appreciating my writing!! Really happy you’re liking it

Haven’t been able to read the other chapters. Will read them soon. Thanks for the updates

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Ch-2

Well the family gathering, the nervousness, happiness,relief so good to read.

Tulsi being Tulsi cannot tolerate a man treating woman badly. However, I would expect, Tulsi to teach lessons to Mithali, to respect Rithik and be hiz true life partner, instead of being a spoilt brat , ask her behave like a responsible mother.

Mihir's hesitant, guilt and sadness expressed so well in his every gesture, i can imagine this scene so easily, you nailed it. Mihir certainly has to learn and appreciate new Tulsi and her wish. He definitely is happy having her home, around his family, near his sight. Tulsi ka pyar jo kahi khogayi hai usse Mihir ko khud dhundni padegi, uss ehsas ko jitni padegi.

Tulsi choosing Baa's room and her silent conversation with Baa, and that dhanywad, so much purity and belongingness. Ultimate truth of life to be around your loved ones, and tulsi sleeping peacefully after ages, narrates the human emotions. You truly deserve lots of appreciations for this kind of writing. Kudos.

Hi again!!

Thank you! Glad the family scenes came out well!

Yes that was just tulsi being tulsi!! I have planned a lot of the story on Mitali but let’s see how much I can incorporate! My primary focus is the v v slow rebuilding of TuHir!

Mihir - I am also enjoying writing him this way! He has been too careless all the S2! The loss of tulsi has changed him completely! Yeah now he has the uphill task of making her fall in love with him all over again!! And not by showing his love but actually by hiding his lobe abs showing his respect instead!!

In S1, tulsi and baa shared the purest relationship so her choosing baas room was only natural.. her speaking to baa also feels natural!!

Thank you!! I feel lucky to have found readers like you all❤️

did you read chapter 3 yet?