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Posted: a day ago

11

Aha first attemot from maan to hold kn to geet his feqr of loosing her but what a pale attempt

But atleast he has started realising now he will loose her if he does nit do anything

But glad did not reply but i stead just cleared the room and set herself

And now hr is the one whonis starting conversations love it She is not ride bit will nit bend down

Slowly he is realising he is not the main person in her life she is hapoy with others and has other people who are important

Geet completely shocked when he said fiance to kabir and the talk after that good that geet told he bettwr realise sii of their importance soon before it is too late

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Posted: a day ago

Originally posted by: Pixiepixel11

Hello, I am sona…

Nice to meet you…💐Chetna right?

I am glad you liked the update & shared your detailed comments on the same.

Yes, he will learn to appreciate, value & respect her…

Hopefully soon… as a lot of time has passed.

Hi Sona

great to meet you

yes its Chetna....

pi

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Posted: a day ago

Chapter 12

well Maan was invited to Goa as a guest speaker

so a plus was optional

great that he thoughts of Geet's words

of cos he casually bought up the topic

Geet's casualness regarding this indeed shocked Maan

glad that he asked her

her question was reasonable

appreciate her response

she naturally wanted to know whether it was also cos of Kabir

pleased that Maan was direct with Geet

as expected she refused

she had valid reasons

now Maan assured her

however her question was justified

can understand that she protecting herself

she was correct

at least he knew she was right

liked that Maan thinks about Geet

loved that he defended Geet

good that they conversed via texts

not surprised that he wants more

but he created the distance

Geet was clearly honest with her parents

she is not ready to give up

ahh she does think about Maan

that discussion impacted on Maan

finally she told Geet his fears and shared his past

wonderful that he opened up to Geet

he just wants time to learn how to love her

Geet's fears were anticipated

he can only show his efforts

that's a start

hmm she gave him time to prove that she is not an afterthought

Gosh of he fails, she will walk away

he did understand that

their first hug.... a beginning...........


update soon

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Posted: 17 hours ago

awww....

finally something is sinking into his brain and he is willing to open up a bit...

he needed the trip and her truth and casualness for hmi to realise what will happen if he does not step up.....good for her

glad he finally opened up and told her of his fears....thought as much something must have happened for him to close himself up like that...

but she is also correct....shemight still walk away if things dont happen the way it will make her happy...she will not loose sleep and her self respect over him...

now its all in his court....

lets see what he does....what steps he taakes.....first simple conversations without any agenda will be a start...a warmth in the house....dont dictate....let her feel like its her house and she can do and make things like she wants....

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Posted: 15 hours ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

11

Aha first attemot from maan to hold kn to geet his feqr of loosing her but what a pale attempt

But atleast he has started realising now he will loose her if he does nit do anything

But glad did not reply but i stead just cleared the room and set herself

And now hr is the one whonis starting conversations love it She is not ride bit will nit bend down

Slowly he is realising he is not the main person in her life she is hapoy with others and has other people who are important

Geet completely shocked when he said fiance to kabir and the talk after that good that geet told he bettwr realise sii of their importance soon before it is too late

Thanks a lot for your detailed review on the chapter.

It always gives me a new perspective of the chapter.

I am really glad that you are taking out time & reviewing the chapters.

It means a lot.

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Posted: 15 hours ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 12

well Maan was invited to Goa as a guest speaker

so a plus was optional

great that he thoughts of Geet's words

of cos he casually bought up the topic

Geet's casualness regarding this indeed shocked Maan

glad that he asked her

her question was reasonable

appreciate her response

she naturally wanted to know whether it was also cos of Kabir

pleased that Maan was direct with Geet

as expected she refused

she had valid reasons

now Maan assured her

however her question was justified

can understand that she protecting herself

she was correct

at least he knew she was right

liked that Maan thinks about Geet

loved that he defended Geet

good that they conversed via texts

not surprised that he wants more

but he created the distance

Geet was clearly honest with her parents

she is not ready to give up

ahh she does think about Maan

that discussion impacted on Maan

finally she told Geet his fears and shared his past

wonderful that he opened up to Geet

he just wants time to learn how to love her

Geet's fears were anticipated

he can only show his efforts

that's a start

hmm she gave him time to prove that she is not an afterthought

Gosh of he fails, she will walk away

he did understand that

their first hug.... a beginning...........


update soon

Thanks a lot Chetna for your detailed review. It is always a pleasure to read your feedback on the chapters.

It means a lot.

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Posted: 15 hours ago

Originally posted by: Alamelu

awww....

finally something is sinking into his brain and he is willing to open up a bit...

he needed the trip and her truth and casualness for hmi to realise what will happen if he does not step up.....good for her

glad he finally opened up and told her of his fears....thought as much something must have happened for him to close himself up like that...

but she is also correct....shemight still walk away if things dont happen the way it will make her happy...she will not loose sleep and her self respect over him...

now its all in his court....

lets see what he does....what steps he taakes.....first simple conversations without any agenda will be a start...a warmth in the house....dont dictate....let her feel like its her house and she can do and make things like she wants....

Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts on the update.

Yes, finally the train is on the right track…

Hopefully 🤞 it will be on the right path…

Stay tuned for more updates…

Pixiepixel11 thumbnail
Posted: 15 hours ago

Originally posted by: MA1970

Interesting update. Maan finally decides that hr needs her emotinally. He confess his past as why he is like that snd asks her for time.

Thanks a lot for sharing your experience on the chapter.

It means a lot.

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Posted: 15 hours ago

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

chapter 3...Not sure what promise they keep talking about...and why did Geet go to Mumbai all alone? Why didnt he take her?

I hate the way he is treating her. I hope she has married him for revenge, that would be cool!

It would be interesting to see how he starts falling for her and she gives him the same pain he gave her.

Will read chapter 4 soon

Thanks a lot for your review…It is going take some time for a gradual change…

You will get frustrated… hopefully by the time you complete it. It will be worth reading.

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Posted: 12 hours ago

Hi Sona

how are you?

no update today?

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