Mayra FF: BHOOT BUNGALOW WEDS CORPORATE - Page 4

Part 7

Brilliant update.... excellently written

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Part 8

Wonderful update.... amazingly written

Part 9

Marvelous update... pleasantly written

Part 10

Fabulous update... grandly written

Flashbacks 1 - 4

Good updates.... outstandingly written

Epilogue

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great end

Maya is wearing cotton saree.you could have used Jennifer's traditional saree pics from saraswatichandra.thw grandmother is not even allowing maya to use a mixer nor letting the servants help maya.thats too much.l am surprised that maya felt that rudra is taking revenge by making her do household work and openly told him.I am surprised that grandmother knows that rudra is testing her.Rudra wants maya to know what she did to others.but was the grandmother making maya work because rudra asked her to do so?when maya said she fought antara said that she also fought quietly.what did she mean by that?field scene was nice.maya and village women scene was nice.Arjun observing maya and realising her changes was nice.mayra conversation at the end was nice.rudra saying that he won't be happy seeing suffering as he knows what it is was nice.nice pics.but in the last picture mayra have paint on their faces.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Maya is wearing cotton saree.you could have used Jennifer's traditional saree pics from saraswatichandra.thw grandmother is not even allowing maya to use a mixer nor letting the servants help maya.thats too much.l am surprised that maya felt that rudra is taking revenge by making her do household work and openly told him.I am surprised that grandmother knows that rudra is testing her.Rudra wants maya to know what she did to others.but was the grandmother making maya work because rudra asked her to do so?when maya said she fought antara said that she also fought quietly.what did she mean by that?field scene was nice.maya and village women scene was nice.Arjun observing maya and realising her changes was nice.mayra conversation at the end was nice.rudra saying that he won't be happy seeing suffering as he knows what it is was nice.nice pics.but in the last picture mayra have paint on their faces.

Rudra didn't tell his grandmother to make Maya do the housework in a traditional way. But the Roy family is old-fashioned. Rudra didn't intervene, as he knew his family's mentality and wanted her to understand why he left them.