Ariya FF: Tera Mera Rishta Purana {Part 13, P. 14} - Page 14

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update

Love it

Continue soon

Aww, thank you! 🥰

So glad you loved it—more drama, feels, and chaos coming very soon. Stay tuned! 😉✨

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

I was just discussing with a friend on forum that Arjun needs to be brought a peg or two down from his self built pedestal.

I love how Riya doesn't stay to listen to his BS. And the line "You hide behind the story of your pain" was hands on the best way to describe that man. The makers decided, angsty cop with a dead wife ? Let's make sure the audience never forgets that. And let's make sure Arjun can get away with any lack of mannerism with the sole justification of his broken self and dead wife.

Shouted unnecessarily? Pain from dead wife. Too smart for the team? Painful past. Can't seem to utter two syllables of respect? Dead wife.

I liked how Choree are speculating from a far and not pressuring Riya to reconcile and "forgive" him because he's had a rough past.

Arjun better be on his knees shouting he loves her and would die without her and that he needs her to be whole and whatnot.

Riya should be like "get on your knees and translate your thoughts with words and not grunts and silence. And make sure a stupid two year old can understand what you mean. Because so help me if you said something like 'i pushed you away so Sik won't hurt you' or the martyrdom act or even just 'My dead heart or life needs your color'. I'll hit your with a bludger."

anyways update soon and thanks for tagging me.

Ps. I found you have 4 incomplete Ss. And by Gods, I stumbled on them only. I'm sure you have complete ones too. But I'll need these finished before jumping on them. So kindly share an upload schedule or something so I know what to wait for.

Hahaha 😂 I love this comment so much, it deserves a standing ovation.

You summed up Arjun Rawte™ perfectly — dead wife is not a universal lifetime excuse card, sir 😌 And yes, Riya walking away instead of swallowing his BS was very intentional. That line was written with full “called out and exposed” energy.

Choree staying spectators instead of moral police = growth we all deserve 🙌
As for Arjun getting on his knees and using actual words like a functional adult… noted, noted, strongly noted 👀🔥 No martyr monologues, no poetic grunts — only clear sentences or risk bludger violence.

Also 😭😭 I’m guilty about the incomplete SSs, I know. I’ll share an update plan soon — consider this my public accountability moment. Thank you for reading, ranting, dragging Arjun properly, and still wanting more 🖤✨

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

There should be one fic which is like

Arjun saying all kinda bs dur raho mujhse

Riya is like okay. No change in behaviour but no googly lovey eyes to him

Arjun confused

Riya comes with invitation card "guys meri engagement hai ana zaroor"

Arjun is 😲 😳 pikachu face. Brooding. Stewing in question

Riya is same smiling to others normal with him

Arjun is like after a long drama of jealousy jaw clenching - mat karo usse shadi Riya

Riya be like - why not? Handsome hai. Rich hai. Shadi ke bad iceland mein rahenge. 60000 sqft penthouse. 5 houses in world. 10 foreign vacation in a year. Parents bhi nhi hai for further drama. No sister as well. + Respectful hai. Scope for romance is A+++++

Arjun is like okay what else can I say 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Haha this comment sent me 😂💀

Arjun’s pikachu face + Riya’s A+++++ scope for romance had me SOLD.

Lowkey tempted to write this just to watch him suffer a little 🤭✨

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Update dedo iska kuch

Demand noted 😌 Update loading… please wait ☕📖

Part 13

The mission had been a success. Nitin Chauhan was in ETF’s custody, but the battle scars ran deeper than the ones seen on the surface.

As the team returned to headquarters, the usual buzz of post-operation reports filled the air. But one person remained unusually quiet—Riya.

***

Riya sat at her desk, dabbing antiseptic on her injured arm. The cut wasn’t deep, but it burned.

"Tumhe hamesha sab kuch akelay hi karna hota hai, hai na?"

She stiffened. Arjun.

He stood beside her, arms crossed, eyes fixed on her wound. There was frustration in his voice, but beneath it—concern.

She didn’t look up. "Main apna dhyaan rakh sakti hoon, ACP Rawte."

The formal tone hit harder than the wound. Arjun clenched his jaw. "Haan, dekha maine."

She finally looked up, her eyes tired but sharp. "Agar aaj tum nahi hote toh bhi main apne aap ko bacha leti. Mujhe kisi ke sahare ki zaroorat nahi hai."

Arjun took a step closer, lowering his voice. "Aur tumhe kisne kaha ki tumhe mere sahare ki zaroorat hai, Riya?"

Their eyes locked, an unspoken war raging between them.

Shree and Chotu, who had just entered the room, stopped in their tracks, sensing the tension.

"Uh… woh main report submit karne aaya tha," Shree said awkwardly, holding up the file.

Riya was the first to break eye contact. She grabbed the file and flipped through it. "Good job, Shree. Kal subah tak detailed analysis chahiye."

Chotu exchanged a glance with Shree before muttering, "Ek din yeh dono ya toh ek doosre ka gala daba denge… ya phir…"

Shree sighed. "Dono situations equally dangerous hain, bro."

Arjun heard them, but his focus was still on Riya. There was something different about her now.

A distance. A wall that she had built around herself.

And for the first time… he wasn’t sure if he could break it.

***

Rathore stood across from Nitin Chauhan, his voice cold and firm. "Tumne Rakesh Khurana ke liye kitne saal kaam kiya?"

Nitin scoffed. "Sirf paise ka khel hai, ACP saab. Aap bhi jaante hain."

Riya, standing near the door, narrowed her eyes. "Paise ke liye kitni jaan le chuke ho, Nitin?"

Nitin smirked. "Aap bhi toh ACP Rawte ke saath game khel rahi hain, na?"

The room fell silent.

Riya’s grip on her file tightened. "Kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum?"

Nitin chuckled darkly. "Sachai bas itni hai, madam. Aap jaanti hain ki yeh aadmi sirf ek cheez kar sakta hai—chhod dena. Toh aap kyu khud ko barbaad kar rahi hain?"

Arjun, who had just entered the room, froze.

Riya’s face hardened. "Tumhe jo kehna hai, mujhe nahi, apni confession statement mein kehna chahiye, Nitin."

She turned on her heel and walked out.

Arjun watched her go. Something inside him twisted painfully.

***

It was late when Riya finally decided to leave ETF Headquarters. The streets were quiet, the night air heavy with an impending storm.

As she walked toward her car, she heard footsteps behind her. She already knew who it was.

"Ghar ja rahi ho?" Arjun’s voice was quieter than usual.

She nodded but didn’t stop walking.

Arjun exhaled. "Riya, hum baat kar sakte hain?"

She paused but didn’t turn. "Ab kya baaki reh gaya hai baat karne ko, Arjun?"

The exhaustion in her voice made his chest tighten.

"Bahut kuch."

Riya closed her eyes for a second before finally turning around. "Toh bolo."

The streetlight cast shadows on his face, highlighting the storm brewing in his eyes.

"Main jaanta hoon ki maine tumhe hurt kiya hai."

She let out a humorless laugh. "Sirf hurt? Tumne mujhe tod diya, Arjun."

His fists clenched. "Main wapas aaya hoon, Riya."

Her eyes burned with unshed tears. "Lekin main wapas jaa chuki hoon."

The wind howled around them, the storm threatening to break. But the real storm—the one between them—had already begun.

Wapas agaye to main kya karu

That nitin though lol teer nishane pe

Yaar itne chote update se kaise chalega

Originally posted by: SarafWasima

Aww, thank you so much! 🥰

Oh trust me, Arjun’s redemption meter is very much on—and he’s got some serious earning to do 😏

So glad you’re enjoying their moments. Stay tuned, the next part is on its way! 💖✨

Then I will be back to comment on the new part after a reread lol. 😊

Nice update

Love it

Cont soon

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Wapas agaye to main kya karu

That nitin though lol teer nishane pe

Xactly, as much as I like tashan on-screen..in real life i will never tolerate yo yo type

Clear yes or no ..i don't play games so i don't entertain also ..i am usually clear

Even casual friends I don't have 😂..at most acquaintance

Most friends have crossed couple of decades