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Hey everyone! I had nothing to do since this morning, and I was so bored out of my mind. On a whim, I decided to read one of my stories that I wrote years ago. However, I couldn't even grasp the direction I was trying to take with it. So, on a whim, I decided to rewrite the story.

What you can expect from this new version is the same plot but with a different direction. There will be more common sense and a slightly different writing style. But don't worry, I am still the same buimusi, just a little bit crazy!

This story was called fault in our Stars now it's called Forever Entwined

Part1

Arpita walked toward their table, looking troubled. “Yash, darling, you won’t believe who I just saw,” she said with a mix of disgust and worry, uncertain how Yash would react.


Yash frowned, putting down his phone as he looked up at her. “I saw her,” Arpita added cautiously, testing the waters.

“And I’m supposed to guess who you’re talking about from that brilliant statement of yours — ‘I saw her’?” Yash smirked.

“Smartass,” Arpita rolled her eyes. “I meant Aarti Rane,” she said, and Yash froze.

“Come on, let’s go say hi to Yash and Arpita,” Aman said to his wife as they approached Yash and Arpita. His wife whispered nervously, asking if he was sure, and Aman just nodded.

“Aman! What a pleasant surprise,” Arpita said nervously.

“Yes, me, Arpita — who else? Though I can’t say the same about you,” Aman replied sharply. Aarti and Yash stared at each other.

“Do you know each other?” Yash asked, looking between his wife and his best friend.

“Yes, they do,” Aarti said, glancing at Aman.

That’s when Yash really noticed her; he couldn’t help but be captivated by her beauty.

“Sadly, yes. I know your wife too well,” Aman said, still looking at Arpita, who avoided his gaze.

Aarti smiled weakly. “What the hell is she doing here? She doesn’t belong here,” Arpita whispered, glaring at Aarti.

Aman growled at Arpita. “This isn’t your restaurant, so she can go wherever she wants. And she’s with me,” he said firmly. Then he added, “She’s here because I want her here.”

Rolling his eyes, Aman muttered, “You always thought you were higher and better than everyone else. But honey, you’re no Miss Universe.”

Arpita's face flushed with embarrassment and anger as she glared back at Aman. Yash, sipping his lemon water, tried to stay calm. “So you and Aarti know each other?” he asked.

“Aaru is my girl best friend, while you’re my guy best friend. I know how possessive you can be about me,” Aman joked, and Yash playfully punched his shoulder, laughing.

“I see you’re still a drama queen. So Aarti is that ‘lost’ best friend of yours,” Yash smiled.

“Yes, and now she’s not only my best friend but my wife, too,” Aman said proudly.

Yash took another sip of his drink — and accidentally spilled it out.

“So you married her because she got pregnant?” Arpita smirked harshly.

“No. I married her because I love her, and she got pregnant on our honeymoon. I can’t wait to hold my daughter in my arms,” Aman said with a warm smile.

Arpita’s smirk faded into a frown, while Yash’s mouth hung open in shock.

---

"It's a boy," Aarti and Yash said in unison.

"What makes you so sure?" Aman asked.

"A mother just knows these things," Aarti replied confidently.

"And what about you, Yash?" Arpita glared at her husband.

"Look at her. Her nose is bigger than her eyes," Yash rolled his eyes. Aman stared at Yash, while Arpita smirked. Aarti gave Yash a sharp glare and then left.

"What the hell, man? Do you know how emotional pregnant women can get? Now I have to deal with an angry wife of mine instead of my sweet, caring one. You better talk to her and fix this—I don't want a grumpy Aarti tonight."

"I'll talk to her, Aman," Yash said.

"You better," Aman said. Yash went to the waiter, ordered something, and afterward went to look for Aarti.

He found her in the garden, angrily throwing tree leaves into the fountain.

"Hey," he said gently. Aarti glared at him.

"What do you want?" she snapped.

Yash couldn’t help but smile because she looked cute when she was mad.

"What is there to say?. You're smiling. What else is left? Just say it I have big boobs now."

---

Inside the restaurant:

"Why are you with someone like her?" Arpita glared at Aman.

"Because she’s not a cold-hearted murder like you," he hissed.

Aman's bitter words reopened Arpita’s wounds, and tears welled in her eyes. Aman looked away, unable to see her tears.

"I'm going to look for my wife," he said, and Arpita silently followed him, intending to ask Yash to take her home.

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"My cute firecracker, I came to apologize. And yes, your boobs are round and full now, They are at it's peek " Yash said, unable to take his eyes off her breasts. " How nice of you to say. Thank you for stating the obvious Scindia " She scowled at him and he laughed.

She forgave him as he bribed her with their favorite treat—jalebis. But Aarti slapped Yash.

"Hey, what was that for?" he asked, placing his palm on his face.

"Oh, that was for bribing me. You should have just apologized," she said.

"Then give them back to me," he teased.

"No!" Aarti said, running away from Yash, who started chasing her. They giggled like old times, caught up in the moment.

Yash caught Aarti, and they stared at each other as if they were the last two humans on Earth—until their little bubble was popped by Aman, who cleared his throat.

He looked at Yash uneasily but smiled at Aarti, who called his name.

"Aman, look what Yashu got me," she said with a smile.

"Aaah, I see. Let's go home. It was good to see you, Yash," Aman said, wrapping his arm around Aarti’s shoulder.

"Likewise. Bye, Aarti. It was nice seeing you again. You should come home—Mom misses you, you know. " Yash said.

"Okay, tell her I’ll visit when I’m free. Bye Yash, Arpita," Aarti said, laughing at what Aman whispered in her ear.

" Amie you seem too quiet is everything ok. " a worried Aarti asked as she paid her full attention on Aman. " Yes am fine Aarti " Aman faked a smiled. " Spit it out Aman.'' Aarti frowned him. " I know you. You are definitely hiding something from me. '' Fine I will tell you because you won't let rest in piece. What's going on between you Arpita and Yash.

" Nothing you know Arpita is just a sour stray drenched forest kitten " Aarti looked everywhere but Aman. " Nothing. Really Aarti I thought we have pass that. Wait a minute. Yash is the father of your child. " Aman said.

" Yes he is the biological father but you are the only father our little Bean's would know. " Wow. '' he did know what he should say. " Arpita is your first love who choose wealth over you. '' she asked.

'' Yes but how did you know. " He asked. '' I gathered that mush. Arpita has this unique ability to bring the worse in people but we don't hate and love her the much you do. " She said still eating the jelabies Yash gave her.

" Aaru I will be going out of town for a month. " He changed the topic and Aarti pretend as if she didn't notice it. " Hmm okay so when are you leaving. '' she said.

'' Tomorrow at noon. " He replied. " So soon. What will I do without you. I will miss you. But do you really have to go. " she said sadly. " Yeah I have too and I will miss you too. I will be back before you know it. " he smiled. Aarti and Aman went to bed. Cuddling in each others arms. Talking about their future. Aman even confessed his love for Aarti and Aarti accepted his confession. They shared a sweet kiss.

Aarti watched Aman sleeping. '' I have to try harder to forget Yash and give my all to Aman and this relationship he has been nothing but good to me. When he return I will give myself to him thought Aàrti. '' Aarti thought.

Word Count: 1280

Started 23 April 2017

Rewrite 26 October 2025

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Posted: 5 hours ago
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Why is Arpita being so mean? She doesn't like Aarti, that's for sure.

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Posted: 4 hours ago
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These couples have criss crossed. Arpita and Aman were together. Yash and Aarti were together. Now they have changed partners.

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Posted: 4 hours ago
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Aman knows Yash is the father of the child and is OK with it. Does Yash know?

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Originally posted by: coderlady

Why is Arpita being so mean? She doesn't like Aarti, that's for sure.

she's just too bitter
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Originally posted by: coderlady

These couples have criss crossed. Arpita and Aman were together. Yash and Aarti were together. Now they have changed partners.

Yes Arpita and Aman were once an item, they share a bitter Sweet past. While Aarya were just friend's who got carried away in a heated moment.
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Posted: 4 hours ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Aman knows Yash is the father of the child and is OK with it. Does Yash know?

Yes Aman had guessed that Yash is the baby's father from the awkward atmosphere between Arpita and Aarya while Yash doesn't know is going to be a father.
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