Parallel Universe's Mr & Mrs Randhawa - PraShiv SS

Seher!!!! Seeing you here after like forever is a treat to the eyes. First of all, thank you so so so much for this beautiful dedication, I am actually speechless ☺️🤗

I have missed this! You write so so beautifully MashaAllah. Each moment is described so well, I could see everything happening before my eyes 😍

You have retained the core of their personalities in this piece and that is why it was perfect! ♥️


The little moments between them, the recreation of the dance, Prarthna’s bold and assertive side, Shivansh’s monologue, his hate and anger towards Raunak and him being drawn towards his Patni - everything was just PERFECT!!! 😍

Also, special mention to some of the things that I really really liked:

- Prarthna telling Shivansh he believes Raunak over her and that is why she had to go beg him.
- Shivansh asking Bua Maa and Sonalika to leave him alone, this was mentioned, not explained in detail but I loved it because this is what I wanted in yesterday’s scene; when he gets upset at Prarthna and tells her ‘uski shakal usse pagal kardeti hai’ and ‘usse baat karke aise lagta hai ke usko keere makore kaat rahe hain (what were the writers thinking at this point, afeem chaat liya tha kya 😉), he should have screamed at everyone to leave him alone, not Prarthna, because his frustration was understandable.
- Them talking about her (not) forgiving him.
- Shivansh apologising for using the word affair. Because honestly, I don’t know what the writers were thinking to give him those dialogues especially after he thinks it through and comes to the conclusion that she isn’t at fault.

I really really hope we get to see something like this.

P.S: I can’t wait to see how he reacts when he comes to know Prarthna had to literally beg Raunak.

P.P.S: Jaao tumhe maaf kiya 😉

Jokes apart, this was so beautiful Seher, I can’t express in words how much this means to me 🤗 ♥️

Welcome back to writing and posting on IF, and that too with PraShiv

This is beautiful. This is everything. ❤️😭

The way you have shown his thought process. The immediate regret, the doubt, how he thought her heart had been out of control and she had given in to impulses, then his restlessness and finally going out to find her.

His reaction to Prart holding Raunak's feet is exactly how I imagine things would have turned out if he had been there. He wouldn't have allowed her to beg in front of that Nikamma.

The car scene ❤️ It was meaningful, yet funny, and that's so, so prashiv coded. Shivansh asking if she was talking about a moth (I love how you have retained their qualities and this was excellent callback to their bandi moment).

Rain scene ❤️ It was so cute, so romantic, and the way Shivansh slowly remembered everything, his transition, and ultimately giving in and twirling her ❤️😍

Also, his comment about roses 😂 But then he thought he won't allow Raunak to hold that much power over their relationship and that's a serious move towards their relationship ❤️

I loved every word of this and I have zero doubt that I will continue to love whatever you will write. Thank you for writing for PraShiv, you are an amazing writer.

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Seher!!!! Seeing you here after like forever is a treat to the eyes. First of all, thank you so so so much for this beautiful dedication, I am actually speechless ☺️🤗

Saraaaaaa! Haha, you are welcome!

I have missed this! You write so so beautifully MashaAllah. Each moment is described so well, I could see everything happening before my eyes 😍

Aww, you are making me blush! Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!

You have retained the core of their personalities in this piece and that is why it was perfect! ♥️

Oh, that's such a relief! I paid extra attention to it because I wanted PraShiv to be PraShiv and not someone else.

The little moments between them, the recreation of the dance, Prarthna’s bold and assertive side, Shivansh’s monologue, his hate and anger towards Raunak and him being drawn towards his Patni - everything was just PERFECT!!! 😍

You really like it? I am glad!

Also, special mention to some of the things that I really really liked:

- Prarthna telling Shivansh he believes Raunak over her and that is why she had to go beg him. As she should! Mr Randhawa made a huge mess.
- Shivansh asking Bua Maa and Sonalika to leave him alone, this was mentioned, not explained in detail but I loved it because this is what I wanted in yesterday’s scene; when he gets upset at Prarthna and tells her ‘uski shakal usse pagal kardeti hai’ and ‘usse baat karke aise lagta hai ke usko keere makore kaat rahe hain (what were the writers thinking at this point, afeem chaat liya tha kya 😉), he should have screamed at everyone to leave him alone, not Prarthna, because his frustration was understandable. We talked about that, didn't we? I still can't get over the keere makore one...
- Them talking about her (not) forgiving him. YES! Mr Randhawa wants to work to earn her forgiveness.
- Shivansh apologising for using the word affair. Because honestly, I don’t know what the writers were thinking to give him those dialogues especially after he thinks it through and comes to the conclusion that she isn’t at fault. YES! I mean, they could have used any word, but affair?

I really really hope we get to see something like this.

Ameen to that! I want that TOO!

P.S: I can’t wait to see how he reacts when he comes to know Prarthna had to literally beg Raunak.
Yes, that information should reach him. I want to see his reaction too.

P.P.S: Jaao tumhe maaf kiya 😉

Finally!

Jokes apart, this was so beautiful Seher, I can’t express in words how much this means to me 🤗 ♥️

I am so, so, so, glad that you liked it! I can't tell you how happy that makes me to know you enjoyed reading it...

My reply in blue ...

Originally posted by: monsoon_barsha

Welcome back to writing and posting on IF, and that too with PraShiv

Thank you!

This is beautiful. This is everything. ❤️😭

Really?

The way you have shown his thought process. The immediate regret, the doubt, how he thought her heart had been out of control and she had given in to impulses, then his restlessness and finally going out to find her.

I am glad you liked it!

His reaction to Prart holding Raunak's feet is exactly how I imagine things would have turned out if he had been there. He wouldn't have allowed her to beg in front of that Nikamma.

When that BTS video came out, I wanted Shivansh to find her, not Smita. He would have hated how vulnerable he had made her.

The car scene ❤️ It was meaningful, yet funny, and that's so, so prashiv coded. Shivansh asking if she was talking about a moth (I love how you have retained their qualities and this was excellent callback to their bandi moment).

Haha, I am so glad that you found it PraShiv coded. That's what I wanted the most while writing it.

Rain scene ❤️ It was so cute, so romantic, and the way Shivansh slowly remembered everything, his transition, and ultimately giving in and twirling her ❤️😍

Haha, I had fun writing and imagining it. I want a few more PraShiv rain scenes!

Also, his comment about roses 😂 But then he thought he won't allow Raunak to hold that much power over their relationship and that's a serious move towards their relationship ❤️

Damn the roses! I am glad you liked that!

I loved every word of this and I have zero doubt that I will continue to love whatever you will write. Thank you for writing for PraShiv, you are an amazing writer.

Thank you. That's so sweet of you. I really appreciate your kind words!

My reply in purple.

Amazing work so beautiful 😍

Loved every word 👏🏽♥️ this was missing on the show

Can’t wait for the second part 🫣☺️

Tag me please take care

Such a beautiful fic this one is! My absolute favourite part is right there at the end when she's tricking him into doing the Disney Princess twirl and he goes along with it because, patni paglu...

It was great to see Shivansh's pov in your fic too. The way he's explaining to her that she should do what her heart wants even if that might not be him, that she shouldn't stand for abuse from anyone even be it himself.... Prarthana on the show really needs to hear that, so it was beautiful to see it said here.

Keep it coming!

Amazing work

Originally posted by: Milalal27

Amazing work so beautiful 😍

Loved every word 👏🏽♥️ this was missing on the show

Can’t wait for the second part 🫣☺️

Tag me please take care

I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and such kind words!

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Such a beautiful fic this one is! My absolute favourite part is right there at the end when she's tricking him into doing the Disney Princess twirl and he goes along with it because, patni paglu...

It was great to see Shivansh's pov in your fic too. The way he's explaining to her that she should do what her heart wants even if that might not be him, that she shouldn't stand for abuse from anyone even be it himself.... Prarthana on the show really needs to hear that, so it was beautiful to see it said here.

Keep it coming!

Haha, that's my favorite part too. I really like imagining and writing about it!

I am glad you liked those things, and I agree, someone had to tell Prarthana that.

Oh, thank you for reading and for such a lovely comment!