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Originally posted by: Tanvi_vault

You write really good poems! I liked it a lot and your words are beautiful. Please share more, I’d love to read them

Thank you so much for your response 😊. Actually newbies are not allowed to comment more than 11 a day. So I decided to post 1 poem a day.

Originally posted by: shru_ti

Hey! I am back with a new verse. This time.. something romantic 💕.

Qusoor

Qusoor unka na tha,

Qusoor hamara na tha.

Daga Dene ko majboor,

Behaya ye jamaana na tha.

Gustaakhi to kambakht is dil ki thi,

Varna Tut ta yaha koi sitara na tha.

Rah me chah ka,

Yahi to parinaam tha.

Is dard-e-dil ka,

Intekaam bhi sare-aam tha.

Khwaaisho me tum apni raah tak bhul gaye,

Qasurwaar tum nahi,

Is muqaddar ko ishq,

Karna hi badnaam tha.

Qusoor unka na tha,

Qusoor hamara na tha.

Badnaam kar sake,

Itna damdaar ye jamaana na tha.

Gustaakhi to kambakht is ishq ki thi,

Vrna chhut jaaye adhura,

Itna kamjoor koi fasana na tha..

It's very good! You can write poems on TejNeil as well.

Originally posted by: Shirsha

It's very good! You can write poems on TejNeil as well.

Sure! Will try

Many people support religious dogmatism even today. They don't understand the negative aspects of religious dogmatism.

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Originally posted by: Shirsha

Were both Hindi and English poems allowed in that school competition? If you write any poem about trees or nature, you can share with me.

Hey dii..here is the poem -

Ek Ped, Ek Jeewan.

Jee rahe hai aaj hum jinki badolat,

Kyu unka shukr nhi manate h.

Aisho aaram ki Chahat me hum,

Jungalo ko jalate hai.

Kyu jangalo ko jalakar hum,

Pradushan failate hai.

Shudh pranvayu chiin,

Artificial oxygen pr nirbhar ho jaate hai.

Pradushan hum failate hai,

Vriksh hum katwate hai,

Fir saans lene ki samasya se rog grast hokar,

Duniya par ilzaam lagate hai.

Yu to pedo ke fal sabhi ko pasanda aate h,

Fir kyu unhe kaat kar hum paapi ban jaate hai.

Jee rahe hai aaj hum jinki badolat,

Kyu unka shukr nhi manate h.

Kyu nahi samajhte hum,

Pedo ke bina ye dhara nhi hai.

Kyu nahi samajhte hum,

Taru ke bina Jeevan nahi hai.

Fir bhi ped kaat kar,

Apna Jeevan hi daav par lagate hai.

Yu to paryavaran diwas manate hai,

Par ped kaat kar, manavta bhul jaate hai.

Chalo aaj pehla kadam hum hi badate hai,

Chalo aaj ek ped lagakar apni dhara ko bachate hai.

Chalo aaj sabko jagruk karate hai,

Pedo ko bachane ka Sankalp dilwate hai.

Jee rahe hai aaj hum jinki badolat,

Kyu unka shukr nhi manate h.

Originally posted by: shru_ti

Hey dii..here is the poem -

Ek Ped, Ek Jeewan.

Jee rahe hai aaj hum jinki badolat,

Kyu unka shukr nhi manate h.

Aisho aaram ki Chahat me hum,

Jungalo ko jalate hai.

Kyu jangalo ko jalakar hum,

Pradushan failate hai.

Shudh pranvayu chiin,

Artificial oxygen pr nirbhar ho jaate hai.

Pradushan hum failate hai,

Vriksh hum katwate hai,

Fir saans lene ki samasya se rog grast hokar,

Duniya par ilzaam lagate hai.

Yu to pedo ke fal sabhi ko pasanda aate h,

Fir kyu unhe kaat kar hum paapi ban jaate hai.

Jee rahe hai aaj hum jinki badolat,

Kyu unka shukr nhi manate h.

Kyu nahi samajhte hum,

Pedo ke bina ye dhara nhi hai.

Kyu nahi samajhte hum,

Taru ke bina Jeevan nahi hai.

Fir bhi ped kaat kar,

Apna Jeevan hi daav par lagate hai.

Yu to paryavaran diwas manate hai,

Par ped kaat kar, manavta bhul jaate hai.

Chalo aaj pehla kadam hum hi badate hai,

Chalo aaj ek ped lagakar apni dhara ko bachate hai.

Chalo aaj sabko jagruk karate hai,

Pedo ko bachane ka Sankalp dilwate hai.

Jee rahe hai aaj hum jinki badolat,

Kyu unka shukr nhi manate h.

It's a nice poem. I like the fact that you highlighted the importance of trees in the lives of human beings. If you ever write a poem describing the beauty of trees/flowers, or nature, let me know.

Originally posted by: Shirsha

It's a nice poem. I like the fact that you highlighted the importance of trees in the lives of human beings. If you ever write a poem describing the beauty of trees/flowers, or nature, let me know.

Thank you for your compliment 😊. Sure! Will let you know.

Originally posted by: Shirsha

It's very good! You can write poems on TejNeil as well.

Have you seen the Tejneil verse? I had posted it. Please let me know if anything is missing in their story which I should add.

Originally posted by: shru_ti

Have you seen the Tejneil verse? I had posted it. Please let me know if anything is missing in their story which I should add.

I know you wrote a poem on TejNeil and posted it on this forum. But I haven't yet read it. I'll definitely read that TejNeil poem and share my feedback.

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