new ff*one sided love*

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys..........

im startin a new ff.....its a really senti one.....its called one sided luv....

im giving u an intro of the charecters nd then will giv u a brief jist of the story.........hope ul lyk it........

charecters of the ff

ridhima gupta:a relly sweet girl studying in the tenth std.she has a very pretty face....is a bit healthy nd is crazy abt armaan malik.....she loves dancing....nd has a really soft heart..she really cares abt armaan...😊

muskaan chedda:she is a cute chubby girl....one year elder to ridhima ...her best friend as they stay in the same building.....ridhima nd muskaan are bff......😊

udit gupta:he is ridhimas elder brther..4 years elder.......cares alot fr her...knows tht she is madly in luv wid armaan.....is very smart....very possesive abt his sister.....😊

namrata malik:she is armaans sister nd is 4 years elder to him ....very sweet.....is udit guptas girlfriend...they have been going out since the 8 th std....

armaan malik:namratas brther....is hott ...smart...cute...caring luving....biggest flirt....many girls after him.....has many friends....nt so friendly wid ridhima bt takes udit as his brother....has dated many girls till now.....stays in the sme building as ridhimas nd is 1 year elder than ridz....😊

rahul grewal:armaans best friend....they r cool buddies...luv each others company ..is ridhimas family friend....nd he loves muskaan.....😊

ok guys these were the charecters...hope u like them....

intro:

ridhima is a sweet girl who loves armaan...her brother doesnt want her to go arond wid armaan bcoz he no tht he will break off wid her nd hurt her feelings...she dies to see him....armi nd ridz r in touch bt r nt great friends.....once in the 8th armaan had proposed to ridz bt then due to some circumstances they broke off.....after tht armaaan doesnt lyk her....bt ya he does care fr her.....now he has a girlfriend whom he is dating.....armaan knows tht ridhima has nt gt over him....hes trying to get himself out of her mind...bt dnt think thts possible ...................................lets c wat happens in the end.....

hey this is it.....tell me if ul want me to cont..

hope ul lyked it....plzcomment....

guys ul will hav to help me wid the ending...........😊😊

luy ya guys:urvi

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shalika thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice intro poor ridz
plzzzzzz continue soon'
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice intro
gud
👏
plz plz cont. soon
Edited by maliha_princess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice intro..plzzz continue
cn u plzz PM me ven u continue.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys im continuing now.....

ridhima sitting near the window of her room....
listening to her ipod nd her favourate song pehli nazar mein was playin....
it is raining out side ...ridhima wid her eyes closed....is in deep thought.....thinking only abt armaan.....she is jus remembering those old days when armaan nd ridz used to play together...nd the tym he proposed to her.....

FLASHBACK
A:hey ridhima wats up?
R:blushing nothin much.....
A:cn i ask u 1 quest.?
R:sure....
A:whose ur crush...?????????
R:shocked ...y is he askin me ???
ummmm ummmm no 1 yet bt soon i mite have a major crush on sunm 1.......... 😉
A:who will be tht lucky guy........?????? 😉
R:ohh forget it ya.....nd tell me who do u lyk.....??????
A:you
R:im serious...
A:so even i am....
i love u ri=dhima.....
R:stop kiddin around....
A:u stop takin much imp.....jus tel me ...u also lyk me na..
R:umm umm.....ya
blushing
A:caught her hand.....
cn i ask u out..........
R:it was the happiest day of her lyf.....
nd frm tht day they were together....
they were just in the 8th...omg
bt just after a few days while telling all this to muskaan on the phone....abt how they were together....udit heard it
U:armaan lyks u.....
R:bhaiya ....no no i was jus jokin
U:ridz tell me the truth
R:i dnt no abt him bt i lyk him...(tryin to hide it frm him....
U:then y were u tellin muskaan tht he asked u out.....
R:me ....no no no what rubbish
U:ridz u cnt hide this frm me....u no it.....
she just left the room nd went away....
U:sum thing is wrong.....i hav to tell this to namu(namrata malik)
he picks up his cell nd dials namu
N:hey sweety ....
U:baby ...u no wati heard ridzie talkin to muskaan nd tellin her tht armaan asked her out....
N:wat???u serious...thts gud na ....wen wel getmarried i willcum to ur house nd ridz will cum to mine....
hehe
U:heheh nt funny.....
N:chill ya ...il ask armaan.
nd she kept the phone

in armis house.....
A:talkin on the phone to ridhima...
A:honey il call u bk ...di is cumin...
N:ssup bro
A:hey di tell me ....wat do u want frm my room...
N:arrey arrey...y r u pushin me out of the room
A:arrey no im jus askin generally....
N:u asked ridz out?
A:shocked....i tld tht bit**nt to open hr mouth...
no no ur mad or wat?
N:dnt lie i no tht?
A:who spread these rumours....
N:my sweety tld me....
A:no o its all crap....its nt the truth
in his mind :she cnt even keep a secret.....god dnt think we shld go on lyk this fr long....
he called her up
R:saw his call nd started blushing ....she did nt no wat was in store fr her....she pikd up the call....hii
A:dam pissed off.....wat the hell?
R:wat happen baby.....
A:dare u call me baby....i hate ridhima..i hate u
R:tell me wat happend...
A:ask ur brother...
R:bt wat?
A:u tld him fuc***g everything abt us na
R:wat r u sayin....
A:i hate u yar...jus f*** of...
R:listen armaan.......arma,....
he just slammed the phone dwn....
*end of flashback*
getting tht thought in her mind only hurt her hear so much
muskaan came to her house nd entered the room....
M:ridzie..
ridhima ....ridhi ...ridz.....sweety....arrrey
bt ridhima was in deep thought nd she had her ear phones on.....
M:she took out her earphones.....
arrey ridz u cryin
R:wiping off her tears
no no
M:u cnt hide this frm me yar....jus tell me wat happened....
R:nthing ya
M:took her i pod frm her hand nd saw tht pehli nazar mein was playin.....
o god.....ridhima again....u promised me na u wnt thik abt armaan again....
R:muski i cnt get over him.....
M:jus go tell him na tht wat all happened was all false u never tld bhaiya abt it....
R:after 2 years....i dnt want to get tht topic out again...
mushkil sei toh hum abhi friends bane hai...phir woh bhi nahi hoga tohhh......
M:arrery u luv him na
R:mre then i luv my self.....
M:then jus chill..i no u no nd god nos tht ur luv is true.....let armaan just flaunt his gf around nd then im pritty sure he will cum bk to u.....
ok now forget um lets leave fr subway....
R:hugged muski nd said....if u wldnt be there i dnt no wat wld happen to me....i wld hav commited suicide till now...
wiping her tears.....she washed her face....gt ready nd went to subway......


hey guys truly tell me wether ul lyk it or no.....
il keep updating nd ul keep commenting.....
thnx guys luv ya
urvi 😊

Edited by dmgluver1610 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great FF!..Loved the concept!>👏👏

Continue soon😉

-Kanu❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago
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mindblowing............. 2222222222222222222222222222 gudd
update sooonnn 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey jus catchin up wiv ur ff
really sad lkin da story line poor ridz
really nce upte sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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at subway....
ridhima in her deep thought.......
M:ridhima wen u r wid me u r nt gonna think abt him....plzzzzzz
R:ok fyn....bt cnt get over him.......... 😭 😭 😭
M:cummon chuk it now....lets go placeour order....
R:ok
as they went to place their order sum other girl came nd sat there....
R:hey im srry bt we hav already taken this place...
girl:so wat.....go catch n other one....
M:hey excuse me u cnt do tht....
R:muski chup im talkin na
Girl:u bi***go occupy sm other place....
R:wat the hell im talkin to u so sweetly nd u....how dare u abuse me............
Girl:y not....u cnt stop me....
R:hey see there is no place now nd we took the place b4 so please cn we sit here....we wldnt mind if u join us...
girl:i do mind.....my boyfriend also has to sit here....
R:so there is one more place empty fr him na..........
Girl:we need sum privacy ok
M:chup.....jus get lost....
suddenly ridhima sees armaan cumin towards their table....
R:omg!!!how cum hes here muski...
M:who?
R:armaan...'
M:o god hes here
R:ha yaar ...lets leave i cnt look at himm....cnt face him yar........
M:as if uve dne sumthing....u wait here.....
suddenly ridhima sees the girl goin towards armaan nd hugging him....
R:she was shocked.....
A:sweety wat happened.
Girl:dekho na baby ye dono girls r nt letin me sit.....
A:wait lemme see
armaan goes frward nd sees muskaan...
A:areey muskaan....tum log yaha
hii!!!!
M:hii armaan....
Ridhima did nt even dare to look at him...
A:hii ridhima...
R:softly.....hi
girl:u no them
A:ya ya veryy well...she is udits sister....dis boy friend udit....
Girl:arrey ya ya u were tellin me tht ridhima is a realy sweet girl
G:arrey ridhima im srry....i dint no tht...
R:no no its ok
M:arrey armaan u dint even introduce us to her...
A:arrey ha ...shes farah....
F:hii guys...
A:ok now cn wejoin ul
M:hesitantly...ya ya y nt
R:she looked a bit upset seing armaan wid n other girl....
armaan sat near ridhima nd farh near muskaan....
they were chit chatting......
F:ok guys il jus go place n oder
A:ok cum quick
M:il jus go to the washroom nd cum.....
R:looked at muskaan....
M:il be back soon


AR alone
A:im srry ridhima bt i have moved on in lyf.....
R:did nt utter awrd....
A:u dnt mind na....me nd farah....
R:y wld i mind...
A:no i mean i thot u still lyk me...
R:i dont ....
A:dnt lie i no tht...bt dnt wrry il find a better guy than me fr u
R:in her mind.....who can be better than u armaan....


ohk guys im srry fr a really short part.....
will continue tomm.....
plz comment nd tell me frankly wether ul want me to cont.......


luv ya
urvi 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg
vry nice intro 👏
loved d parts
poor ridz 😭 😭
plz continue soon & do pm me

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