Ariya FF Raaz - Page 7

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

No other major injury apart from crack on the molar

Finally after 4 sitting root canal is done

crack on the molar! not skin... come on.

and glad you are better now

Awesome update

Love it

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

Friggin Cheesy Butternut!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First of all Wow.... Simply WOW.

Typical start of a typical story/crime dramas. A man whistling around doing his daily job in/near a forest *cue normal morning music* and BAM. He sees a hand sticking outta mud or a whole body marked and bloody.

So far I was like meh.... What could go wrong? Jinxed it. The body had "curly hair and cargo pants". For some reason my mind screamed Shree but I thought nah. That can't be right because this is Arjun ff and Shree's ETF. But noooooooo and his surname was Mukherjee.

I was dreading what would come next. I prayed Riya better be his sister, not wife or something.

Then I read "uniform" "sharp" "bodybuilder". So Arjun is in police not ETF and he's an ACP but from his no-nonsense-sarcastic-ruthless-intimidating-cop era, pre ETF, post-Roshni. And there's Patil (Lol) and Chotu *chortles*.

I still have so much to write so tbc in next post or else It'll be difficult to read.

Tbc

C'mon Chotu, you should see that murder declaration coming from a long way anyway. Sarcastic-fact-stating Arjun with a straight face is always a treat. Tho it was ironic how Choti was examining Shree's body. I know they are strangers here but still. I couldn't help but think if it was another scenario, Chotu might've been a crying mess that big teddy. *Sighs* I won't be seeing Choree together. I was just accepting that and thinking maybe the rest would come later.

Coming back to where I left off. It was one shock after another when Mukharjee's were introduced. Samsha married and cousins of Shree, and Roshni as mother of Shree (I laughed so hard on this one). So there'll be no ETF. (Still processing this, read this part twice to let it sink completely).

Then came the drama. I loved how Arjun was all boss-like, sitting on a couch leisurely while the drama unfolded.

It seems something's indeed fishy as per the family's reaction on both Shree's missing and then his death. I feel they have a dirty family secret (cue the title of the ff) not really a discovery. But I really hope it has no gruesome relation to Riya.

Wait a minute.... As hilarious as it was to see Patil giving a rundown of how it's useless to complain about Arjun because he's adept enough to do the right thing. But Sik is dead?????? That means New Villain???? Darnnnn, this story sure packed a series of surprise attacks. I need a character sketch so badly for this one or this kitten will die from curiosity.

It seems Arjun has locked on the Mukharjees. They can't escape or lie when Arjun himself comes out to play interrogation.

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Update soon

Ps. Considering the punch this first chap packed. And your schedule being booked all over. I was thinking to wait till this story reach 10 chap at least or I'll never get any work done.

Pas. Also, I'm so excited how you bring Riya into this. I'm so wishing she's a femme fatale or alpha female instead of a victim. The devil surely deserves a devil Queen. 👑👑

crack on the molar! not skin... come on.

and glad you are better now

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There are yaar but not major.. Just heavy bruising.. No fractures

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

crack on the molar! not skin... come on.

and glad you are better now

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There are yaar but not major.. Just heavy bruising.. No fractures

that's good to hear!

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

Tbc

C'mon Chotu, you should see that murder declaration coming from a long way anyway. Sarcastic-fact-stating Arjun with a straight face is always a treat. Tho it was ironic how Choti was examining Shree's body. I know they are strangers here but still. I couldn't help but think if it was another scenario, Chotu might've been a crying mess that big teddy. *Sighs* I won't be seeing Choree together. I was just accepting that and thinking maybe the rest would come later.

Coming back to where I left off. It was one shock after another when Mukharjee's were introduced. Samsha married and cousins of Shree, and Roshni as mother of Shree (I laughed so hard on this one). So there'll be no ETF. (Still processing this, read this part twice to let it sink completely).

Then came the drama. I loved how Arjun was all boss-like, sitting on a couch leisurely while the drama unfolded.

It seems something's indeed fishy as per the family's reaction on both Shree's missing and then his death. I feel they have a dirty family secret (cue the title of the ff) not really a discovery. But I really hope it has no gruesome relation to Riya.

Wait a minute.... As hilarious as it was to see Patil giving a rundown of how it's useless to complain about Arjun because he's adept enough to do the right thing. But Sik is dead?????? That means New Villain???? Darnnnn, this story sure packed a series of surprise attacks. I need a character sketch so badly for this one or this kitten will die from curiosity.

It seems Arjun has locked on the Mukharjees. They can't escape or lie when Arjun himself comes out to play interrogation.

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Update soon

Ps. Considering the punch this first chap packed. And your schedule being booked all over. I was thinking to wait till this story reach 10 chap at least or I'll never get any work done.

Pas. Also, I'm so excited how you bring Riya into this. I'm so wishing she's a femme fatale or alpha female instead of a victim. The devil surely deserves a devil Queen. 👑👑

Yea there is no ETF in this one. In fact i think its the first time I've written a story without the ETF.

As for secret, well, maybe yes, maybe no. ;)

And while I am glad you had a laugh, it was Rohini not Roshni

Awesome chapter. Finally, Chandu ko pakad liya gaya....Good work by Arjun & Chotu.

Ariya scene was really commendable.......❤️❤️❤️ Bohot gently & achhe se Arjun ne grieving Riya ko sambhala & wapas ghar tak bhi choda...👌👌👌👌👌👌

Painting Studio & uss tak pohoch ne ka detailing mujhe bohot achha laga...Aur yeh bhi pata chal gaya Arjun ko ki woh Sameer ka hai aur waha khoon ke traces bhi mila hai jo mujhe lag raha hai ki shayed Shree ke hi hone ke zyada chances hai. Let's see, if Sameer is found guilty, or, not, or, if he is trying to save anyone else by making himself look like the prime suspect for the murder.

Tnx for the pm. Keep writing... ✍️

Woop this is good ariya connection starting Sameer ko implicate mat karna yaar I can't handle