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Posted: 1 years ago
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Naqaab(Mask) Part 1

I dedicate this SS to HeavenlyBliss who wants me to write a romantic thriller on Shaurya and Anokhi.

I dedicate this SS to Salley145 who suggested the movie 'Naqaab' to write on Shaurya and Anokhi.

This SS is inspired by the movie 'Naqaab'.

Thank you so much Sevenstreaks for the grand cover page.

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A sweet shop...

Anokhi was making sweets there.

She was the best sweet maker in the sweet shop.She enjoyed making sweets.

She put the sweets in a vessel and smiled.

Anokhi:The sweets and fresh and yummy.

After the sweet shop got closed,she was surprised to see a handsome man standing outside.

Anokhi:Yogi!

She ran towards him and embraced him.He was her lover Yogesh.

Anokhi:What a surprise!When did you return from London?

Yogesh:As soon as my project got over,I returned to you.Because I really missed you.

Anokhi:I also missed you Yogi.

Yogesh smiled:I have a surprise for you.

Anokhi:What surprise?

Yogesh:Wait and watch.

She smiled.




Yogesh took Anokhi to a five star hotel and had a grand dinner.

Anokhi:This is the best dinner in my life.It was my dream to go to a good restaurant like this.

Yogesh:I can do anything for you sweet heart.

She smiled.

Anokhi:You didn't tell me what the surprise is.

Yogesh:So ready for the surprise?

She nodded.

He took a ring from his pocket and asked her:Will you marry me?

She smiled and replied by making a heart with her fingers.

He smiled.

She extended her hand towards him and he adorned her finger with the ring.They both were very happy.




Anokhi went to the pub with her friends.

Anokhi:Today I am very happy.I am engaged to my love.

Her friend:You are very lucky Anokhi.We all work in a simple sweet shop.But only you got a rich man as the life partner.You can lead a luxurious life with Yogesh.

Anokhi:Yes...I am lucky to have Yogi in my life.

They smiled.

A young man went towards Anokhi and asked:I am without a partner to dance.I think you also do not have a specific partner to dance with.Shall we dance together?

Anokhi:Okay.We will dance together.

He smiled.

He held her hand to dance.Suddenly he saw her finger ring.

He:You are engaged?

Anokhi:Yes.

He:Hi...I am Shaurya.

Anokhi:I am Anokhi...

They smiled and started dancing together.


Ek Din… Ek Din Teri Raahon Mein
Baahoon Mein Panaahon Mein
Aungaa Kho Jaoonga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaoonga

Ek Din… Ek Din Teri Raahon Mein
Baahoon Mein Panaahon Mein
Aungaa Kho Jaoonga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaoonga
Yeh Dil Toh Na Keh Saka Yeh Baatein
Dil To Na Keh Saka
Yeh Dil Toh Na Keh Saka Yeh Baatein
Dil To Na Keh Saka

Tu Jaane Na Tu
Chaahat Meri Kitni Betaab Hai
Tu Jaane Na Tu
Chaahat Meri Kitni Betaab Hai
Ho Jo Barso Meri Palkon Mein Tha
Tu Wohi Khwaab Hai


Har Ghadi Har Ghadi Teri Yaadoon Mein
Vaadon Mein Iradon Mein
Aungaa KhoJaoonga
Ek Din Tera Ho Jaoonga
Yeh Dil To Na Keh Saka Yeh Baatein
Dil To Na Keh Saka


Their dance started becoming passionate and romantic.


Yeh Jhukti Nazar

Jaane Jigar Hosh Lejati Hai
Woh…Yeh Jhukti Nazar
Jaane Jigar Hosh Lejati Hai
Mein Kaise Kahon


Ek Ajnabi Dard Dejati Hai
Chupke Se Chupke Se Teri Neeedon Mein
Khwaabon Mein Khayalon Mein
Chaaunga Khojunga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaoonga
Yeh Dil Toh Na Keh Saka Yeh Baatein
Dil Toh Na Keh Saka(Naqaab).

They looked at each other with burning passion.

Suddenly Anokhi saw her finger ring and moved away from him with guilt.She ran away.Shaurya became emotional.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Anokhi and Yogesh scene was lovely. Ring scene was romantic. Didn't expect Shaurya's entry like this. Love the song. Surprising that within such a short time, I think she has feelings for Shaurya and is having guilt as she's engaged to Yogesh. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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I have watched this movie but now I dont remember the story....so cant wait to read ShaKhi versionsmiley42

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Very interesting & emotional update

Just amazing 🤩

Thanks for the PM ☺️

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 1 years ago
#5

Anokhi Yogi and Shaurya wow something different on ShaKhi smiley10

I really like their dancesmiley42and the song selection of their dance is upto the mark just perfectsmiley27

Thank you for the PM keep tagging me in your story smiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago
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This part reminds me of the movie with Bobby Deol and Akshay Khanna. That heroine is not so popular. In SAAKH, that inspector also loved Anokhi and Shourya got jealous of their closeness. The Yogesh-Anokhi dialogues and ring exchange scene was romantic. I was wondering where is Shourya and was surprised to see him as a masked man. The Saakhi dance sequence was romantic. Anokhi taking off her hand from Shourya was natural. I hope Anokhi doesn't cheat on Yogesh like that movie.

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Naqaab(Mask) Part 1

I dedicate this SS to HeavenlyBliss who wants me to write a romantic thriller on Shaurya and Anokhi.

I dedicate this SS to Salley145 who suggested the movie 'Naqaab' to write on Shaurya and Anokhi.

This SS is inspired by the movie 'Naqaab'.

Thank you so much Sevenstreaks for the grand cover page.

Image

A sweet shop...

Anokhi was making sweets there.

She was the best sweet maker in the sweet shop.She enjoyed making sweets.

She put the sweets in a vessel and smiled.

Anokhi:The sweets and fresh and yummy.

After the sweet shop got closed,she was surprised to see a handsome man standing outside.

Anokhi:Yogi!

She ran towards him and embraced him.He was her lover Yogesh.

Anokhi:What a surprise!When did you return from London?

Yogesh:As soon as my project got over,I returned to you.Because I really missed you.

Anokhi:I also missed you Yogi.

Yogesh smiled:I have a surprise for you.

Anokhi:What surprise?

Yogesh:Wait and watch.

She smiled.




Yogesh took Anokhi to a five star hotel and had a grand dinner.

Anokhi:This is the best dinner in my life.It was my dream to go to a good restaurant like this.

Yogesh:I can do anything for you sweet heart.

She smiled.

Anokhi:You didn't tell me what the surprise is.

Yogesh:So ready for the surprise?

She nodded.

He took a ring from his pocket and asked her:Will you marry me?

She smiled and replied by making a heart with her fingers.

He smiled.

She extended her hand towards him and he adorned her finger with the ring.They both were very happy.




Anokhi went to the pub with her friends.

Anokhi:Today I am very happy.I am engaged to my love.

Her friend:You are very lucky Anokhi.We all work in a simple sweet shop.But only you got a rich man as the life partner.You can lead a luxurious life with Yogesh.

Anokhi:Yes...I am lucky to have Yogi in my life.

They smiled.

A young man went towards Anokhi and asked:I am without a partner to dance.I think you also do not have a specific partner to dance with.Shall we dance together?

Anokhi:Okay.We will dance together.

He smiled.

He held her hand to dance.Suddenly he saw her finger ring.

He:You are engaged?

Anokhi:Yes.

He:Hi...I am Shaurya.

Anokhi:I am Anokhi...

They smiled and started dancing together.


Ek Din… Ek Din Teri Raahon Mein
Baahoon Mein Panaahon Mein
Aungaa Kho Jaoonga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaoonga

Ek Din… Ek Din Teri Raahon Mein
Baahoon Mein Panaahon Mein
Aungaa Kho Jaoonga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaoonga
Yeh Dil Toh Na Keh Saka Yeh Baatein
Dil To Na Keh Saka
Yeh Dil Toh Na Keh Saka Yeh Baatein
Dil To Na Keh Saka

Tu Jaane Na Tu
Chaahat Meri Kitni Betaab Hai
Tu Jaane Na Tu
Chaahat Meri Kitni Betaab Hai
Ho Jo Barso Meri Palkon Mein Tha
Tu Wohi Khwaab Hai


Har Ghadi Har Ghadi Teri Yaadoon Mein
Vaadon Mein Iradon Mein
Aungaa KhoJaoonga
Ek Din Tera Ho Jaoonga
Yeh Dil To Na Keh Saka Yeh Baatein
Dil To Na Keh Saka


Their dance started becoming passionate and romantic.


Yeh Jhukti Nazar

Jaane Jigar Hosh Lejati Hai
Woh…Yeh Jhukti Nazar
Jaane Jigar Hosh Lejati Hai
Mein Kaise Kahon


Ek Ajnabi Dard Dejati Hai
Chupke Se Chupke Se Teri Neeedon Mein
Khwaabon Mein Khayalon Mein
Chaaunga Khojunga

Ek Din Tera Ho Jaoonga
Yeh Dil Toh Na Keh Saka Yeh Baatein
Dil Toh Na Keh Saka(Naqaab).

They looked at each other with burning passion.

Suddenly Anokhi saw her finger ring and moved away from him with guilt.She ran away.Shaurya became emotional.

All the best for your story smiley20

Edited by Black_Hat - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thanks for the pm


Part 1

Lovely update... well written

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Posted: 1 years ago
#9

Part 1

Fabulous and Awesome Start

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Posted: 1 years ago
#10

Salley

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Thank you so much for the lovely comments friends.



Naqaab(Mask) Part 2

Shaurya was thinking of his dance with Anokhi and smiling.

Shaurya went to the sweet shop where Anokhi was working.

He went near Anokhi with a smirk and said:I want jalebi.

Anokhi was stunned to see him.

Anokhi:Why are you here?

Shaurya:I came here to buy sweets.If you think that I will reply then you are wrong.I enquired about you at the pub and came to know that you work here.So purposefully I came here.

Anokhi became dull.

Anokhi:But why did you come here?

Shaurya:As if you don't know.I came here to see you.

Anokhi:Why do you want to see me?

Shaurya:You are not going from my heart.My mind is full of you.I feel like seeing you always.That's why I came here.

Anokhi got worried.

Anokhi:Stop this nonsense.I am engaged.

Shaurya:But you are not married yet.

Anokhi:What do you mean?Are you saying that I should have affair with you just because I am not married ?

Shaurya:I didn't mean that.But can't you come with me just for a coffee?

Anokhi replied rudely:Sorry.I don't like coffee.You want jalebi.Right?Take jalebi and pay money in the counter.I have work.

She gave him the jalebi packet and walked away.Shaurya became dull.

Shaurya went out of the sweet shop disappointed after paying the cash.

His phone started ringing.He attended the call.

Shaurya:Hello Rajat...

Rajat:Did you meet Anokhi?

Shaurya:Yes.But she is not even interested to talk to me.So nothing could be done.

Rajat got angry:I don't want to hear any excuse.Do what I say.

Shaurya was dull:Yes.




Anokhi and Yogesh were having lunch together.

Yogesh was smiling seeing her eat food.

Yogesh:You know what I like about you?Though I am rich you prefer to lead a simple life style.You still work in an ordinary sweet shop as a sweet maker without leaving that job.Now also you are eating simple food.

Anokhi smiled.But suddenly she became dull remembering Shaurya coming after her.

Yogesh:Why did you become gloomy suddenly?

Anokhi was silent.

Yogesh:You are remembering about your past.Right?But don't think about your past.Your bitter past is over.Now you are living in your beautiful present with me.

Anokhi smiled emotionally.

Anokhi:I don't even like to think about my bitter past.You are my relief.

She held his hand and smiled at him.

He caressed her head and said:I will be always with you.



Shaurya started visiting Anokhi daily.Anokhi started ignoring him.When he kept visiting her for 3 weeks she broke her silence and asked him:Why are you coming here always?

Shaurya:To be your friend. I will keep visiting you until you accept my friendship request.

Anokhi was just staring at him.

Shaurya:Why are you staring at me?I just asked you to be my friend.Is it wrong?

Slowly Anokhi smiled.

Shaurya extended his towards her happily seeing her smile at him finally.

Shaurya:Friends?

Anokhi held his hand:Friends.

He smiled.

Shaurya:One minute.

Shaurya ran out and bought a flower bouquet.Then he went near Anokhi with it.

Anokhi:Why did you buy flowers suddenly?

Shaurya:You accepted my friendship.So my first gift to my friend.

Anokhi took the flowers from him cheerfully and said:That's so sweet of you.

Shaurya smiled.

Shaurya:To celebrate the beginning of our friendship shall we go for a dinner?

Anokhi:Yes.

He smiled.




Shaurya and Anokhi were having dinner together.

Anokhi:What do you do?I mean..your job...

Shaurya:I am a junior artiste in movies.But hopefully very soon I will get good roles in movies.

Anokhi smiled.

Shaurya:How did you get engaged to a rich mam like Yogesh?

Anokhi:Nobody can believe that Yogesh is marrying an ordinary sweet maker like me.Actually a few goons kidnapped me by forcefully taking me to their car.I screamed.Luckily Yogesh who was in the car nearby heard it and followed their car.He saved me from the goons who were trying to molest me and got them arrested.He took me to the hospital also.He really took care of me.I was grateful to him.Thus we became friends.He kept visiting me to check whether I was alright.His care for me turned into love and my gratitude towards him turned into love.Thus we decided to get married.Yogesh is really nice.Still sometimes I get haunted by the molestation incident I faced.But he comforts me.

Shaurya:He is great.But why are you working in that sweet shop when you are going to marry a rich man?

Anokhi:I prefer to earn for myself.Like everyone thinks,I am not marrying Yogesh for money.

Shaurya:Don't tell me that you are marrying Yogesh out of love.Because you cannot love anyone other than me.

Anokhi was stunned.


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