Yeh vaada raha...It's a promise..RaSiya,Zorawar-Mannat SS - Page 7

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Posted: 12 months ago
#61

I like thrillers so even if its a romance story keep some suspense

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Posted: 12 months ago
#62

Romance is easy for me.But i am bad at thrillers. So i need to wait for ideas.



Originally posted by: MochaQueen

I like thrillers so even if its a romance story keep some suspense

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Posted: 12 months ago
#63

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Romance is easy for me.But i am bad at thrillers. So i need to wait for ideas.



What about a murder mystery? If you cant write that then romance will be fine too

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Posted: 12 months ago
#64

Murder mystery is also a thriller and i am bad at it though i write thrillers.Ideas do not come to me easily.so please give me time.when i get ideas i will surely write.anyways as you wish I will add twists.



Originally posted by: MochaQueen

What about a murder mystery? If you cant write that then romance will be fine too

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Posted: 12 months ago
#65

Yeh vaada raha...It's a promise.. Part 6

Siya went to Raghav's house.

Jaydeep and Anuraga came.

Anuraga:Siya...come beta...

Siya:Hi uncle...Hi aunty...Where is Raghav?

Jaydeep:These days you are always coming here to see Raghav.Why?

Anuraga looked at Jaydeep seriously.

Siya:I don't know why uncle.Raghav reminds me of my lover Raghavendra who got detached from me.They both have the same voice.So when I talk to Raghav,I feel that Raghavendra is with me.

Jaydeep and Anuraga became emotional.

Anuraga:Raghav is in his room.You can go there beta.

Siya:Thank you aunty.

Siya walked towards Raghav's room.

Anuraga told Jaydeep:I feel sad for Siya.She deserves to know the truth.

Jaydeep nodded sadly.

Raghav was sitting on his bed.

Raghav thought:Shall I tell Siya that I am her Raghavendra?But her alliance with Rudra...?

Siya ran towards Raghav:Raghav!

But she slipped and her head hit the door.Raghav was shocked.

Raghav:Siya!

He ran towards her.He saw her forehead bleeding.

Raghav:How careless you are!Why did you run like this?You could have walked slowly.Right?Even in college,you were like this.Hyperactive.

Siya was stunned.

Raghav took the first aid box and cleaned her wound.Then he bandaged it.

Siya remembered her past...




Flash back...

Siya ran towards Raghavedra in the college compound.A nail on the ground pricked her foot and it hurt her.

Raghavendra:What is this Siya?How can you be so childish?What was the need of running like a hyperactive child?

Siya:It is a small wound.Why are you getting angry?

Raghavendra:Small wound?It is bleeding.I can't bear a single scar on your body.

Siya became emotional.

Siya:I love how you show your care towards me.

They shared an emotional eye lock.

He carried her in his arms to the nursing room and got her foot bandaged.




Present....

Siya:Raghav,thank you.But how did you know that I was hyperactive in my college?

Raghav became dull.He lowered his eyelashes realizing the blunder he said unknowingly.

Raghav:Alakha had told me.

Siya:I guess Alakha has talked to you too much about me.You seem to know me very well just like Raghavendra knew me.

Raghav became dull.Siya looked at Raghav's eyes.She got reminded of Raghavedra's eyes.

Siya thought:Why Raghav is always reminding me of Raghavendra?




Siya met Rudra.

Siya:Rudra,I don't want to keep you in darkness.I love Raghavendra.So I can't marry you.

Rudra's eyes got filled up with tears.

Rudra:Raghavendra is no more.Still you love him?

Siya:Yes.I love him to the core.I will love till my last breath.

Rudra:You will live for a person who is not alive?

Siya remembered Raghav.

Siya:Raghavendra is alive in my heart.And Raghav keeps me feel that Raghavendra is alive in him.

Rudra is confused:What?

Siya:Yes Rudra.I feel Raghavendra's presence when I am with Raghav.

Rudra became upset.

Rudra thought:Maybe Siya has fallen in love again.Not with me,but with Raghav.

Rudra:It's okay Siya.May God help you to take the best decision.

Siya was silent.

Atul and Vedika overheard this with pain.

Vedika told Atul:Atul,Siya is spoiling her life living in Raghavendra's memories.As parents we should not let her ruin her own life.We should tell her the truth.

Atul nodded.




Siya was thinking of her moments with Raghav.She was becoming restless.

She started dancing thinking of her moments with Raghavendra and Raghav.She was in a huge dilemma.

Taalaab mein yoon kankar phenko
Kitne hi toofan uthaade
Ik chalti phirti laash mein phir
Jeene ke armaan jagaade

Mil gayeen aaj do lehren kuch is tarah
Mil gayeen aaj do lehren kuch is tarah
Ab na saahil mile to koi gum nahin
Haath mein haath le yoon hi chalte rahen
Ab na manzil mile to koi gum nahin
Mil gayeen aaj do lehren kuch is tarah



Pyar ka ek pal itna anmol hai
Pyar bin saare jeevan ka kya mol hai
Pyar ka ek pal itna anmol hai
Pyar bin saare jeevan ka kya mol hai
Saari duniya mein jis pal ka charcha rahe
Saari duniya mein jis pal ka charcha rahe
Aisa ik pal mile to koi gum nahin
Mil gayeen aaj do lehren kuch is tarah
Ab na saahil mile to koi gum nahin
Mil gayeen aaj do lehren kuch is tarah

Jee rahe the isi aas pe hi sanam
Ek na ek din mil hi jaayenge hum
Jee rahe the isi aas pe hi sanam
Ek na ek din mil hi jaayenge hum
Mil gaye to mili ek nayee zindagi
Mil gaye to mili ek nayee zindagi
Maut ab kal mile to koi gum nahin
Mil gayeen aaj do lehren kuch is tarah
Ab na saahil mile to koi gum nahin
Mil gayeen aaj do lehren kuch is tarah
Mil gayeen mil gayeen
Mil gayeen mil gayeen
Mil gayeen mil gayeen.(Yeh vaada raha).


Atul and Vedika went near Siya.

Siya:Dad,you may be angry with me for cancelling my alliance with Rudra.Right?

Atul:No beta.I am not angry.I thought that your feelings for Raghavendra was just an infactuation.so you will forget him soon.But now I realized that you really love him deeply and that's why you broke up with Rudra.So I am not angry with you.

Siya was relieved.

Atul:But I am angry with myself for ruining my own daughter's happiness.

Siya got confused:What do you mean dad?

Atul was silent due to guilt.

Siya:You mean you did'nt agree for my marriage with Raghavendra?Leave it dad.But now my problem is Raghav.He is giving me sleepless nights.I don't know why he always reminds me of Raghavendra.When I hear his voice...when I look at his eyes..when I observe his gestures..talking style...he is just like Raghavendra.Only his face is different.I can't understand what kind of madness I have.

Atul and Vedika became upset.

Vedika:It is not madness Siya.Your love made you recognize Raghavendra.

Siya:What did you mean mom?

Atul:I hid a big truth from you beta.Raghavendra had not died.He is alive.I hid it from you because I did'nt want you both to unite.

Siya was shocked and shattered.
Siya:Dad...mom...you both betrayed me?

Atul:I am sorry Siya.Please forgive me.

Vedika:Please forgive me also Siya.

Siya's eyes were teary.

Siya:Tell me where Raghavendra is.Does Raghav have any connection with Raghavendra?

Atul:Yes.Raghav is Raghavendra.

Siya was shocked.

Siya:How is it possible?

Unexpectedly Alakha came inside.

Alakha:After the accident,Raghavendra's face got disfigured and he underwent plastic surgery.After that he got my late cousin Raghav's face.

Siya was shocked.Her tears were falling down.

Siya:Alakha,you are my best friend.Why did'nt you tell me the truth?

Alakha:Because I also thought that you moved on with Rudra.But now I know that there is no Rudra in your life,but only Raghavendra.

Siya:Poor Raghavendra.He suffered silently.

I want to see him.

Atul:You go to him beta.Your parents' blessing is with you.

Vedika:Go to your true love beta.

Siya smiled tearfully:Thank you mom dad.




Raghav was sitting near a lit candle.

Raghav:I really miss you Siya.How can I tell you the truth?

Siya entered his room.

Siya:Raghav!

Raghav wiped his wet eyes.

Raghav:Why are you here Siya?Your engagement is coming up.Right?

Siya was stunned hearing his response.

Siya:Stop it Raghav.You know that I have not agreed to marry Rudra.I can never marry anyone else as long as I love Raghavendra.

Raghav said with a sad expression:Yes.But you can't go against your parents.You may have to marry Rudra for them.

Siya:I have cancelled my alliance with Rudra.I am not committed to him.

Raghav smiled emotionally with relief:Really?

Siya:Yes.But why do you feel so happy to know that I broke up with Rudra?

Raghav was silent.

Siya:Why don't you open up atleast now Raghav?Just burst out your suppressed emotions.Your Siya is waiting for that.

Raghav became emotional.

Raghav:Because I love you Siya.

Siya became emotional.

Siya:But you know that I love only Raghavendra.So remove your love for me.

Raghav got irritated and burst out:How dare you tell me to wipe out my feelings for you.I can't.Because I am your one and only Raghavendra.Only my face has changed.My heart and feelings are the same.

Siya smiled emotionally.

Siya:I knew that you are my Raghavendra.You always reminded me of our past.Still I was confused because of your face.But my parents and Alakha revealed the truth to me.But why did'nt you tell me earlier that you are Raghavendra?

Raghav:Because I thought that you moved on with Rudra.

Siya:How could you think I can move on with someone else.Siya's heart beats only for Raghavendra.

Raghav became emotional:I am sorry Siya for hiding the truth from you.I love you and I am still alive only for you.

They smiled emotionally.

They came closer to each other romantically.

Raghav-Siya got married.

Jaydeep-Anuraga,Atul-Vedika,Alakha and Rudra were very happy.



Raghav-Siya had a romantic wedding night.

Raghav and Siya danced together at the wedding reception party.

Ishq meraa bandagi hai
Ishq meri zindagi hai
Aashiqon kaa arsh deraa
Aashiqon kaa farsh deraa
Aashiqon ke saaton jahaan
Ishq meraa bandagi hai
Aashiqon kaa arsh deraa
Aashiqon kaa harsh deraa
Aashiqon ke saaton jahaan
Ishq meraa bandagi hai


Yuun to jahaan me sabhi naam ke hain ye rishte
Jo ishq men duub jaayen wahio hain farishte
Yuun to jahaan me sabhi naam ke hain ye rishte
Jo ishq men duub jaayen wahio hain farishte
Ishq men hai wo khumaari
Jo na utare ummr saari
Din ba din ye hogi jawaan
Ishq meraa bandagi hai
Ishq merii zindagi hai




Dil jisamen shamaa jale ishq ki dil wahi hai
Maine to apane hi dil kii kahaani kahi hai
Dil jisamen shamaa jale ishq ki dil wahi hai
Maine to apane hi dil kii kahaani kahi hai
Dharm apanaa aashiqi hai
Karm apanaa aashiqi hai
Ishq hi hai meraa imaan
Ishq meraa bandagi hai
Ishq merii zindagi hai






La la la la la la la la la la la la
Aashiq wohi hai jo duuje ka gam jaane sahanaa
Tu is jahaan men kabhi na kisi se ye kahanaa
Ho aashiq wohi hai jo duuje ka gam jaane sahanaa
Tu is jahaan men kabhi na kisi se ye kahanaa
Ishq hai kyaa tu na jaane
Na sunaa tu ye fasaane
Kyuun kare ye jhuuthaa gumaan


Ishq meraa bandagi hai
Ishq merii zindagi hai
Aashiqon kaa arsh deraa
Aashiqon kaa farsh deraa
Ho aashiqon ke saaton jahaan
Ishq meraa bandagi hai
Ishq meri zindagi hai.

(Yeh vaada raha).




Rudra bumped into Alakha and Alakha was about to fall down.

Rudra held her by her shoulders.

Rudra:I am sorry.Are you alright?

Alakha:It's okay.I know that you did'nt do it purposefully.

He smiled.

Rudra:How are you so sure?

Alakha:Because you are very nice.That's why you supported Siya's decision to break the alliance for her love.Thank you for supporting my friend without keeping any personal grudge in your mind.

He smiled.

Suddenly he realized that his hands were on her shoulder.He took his hands off her.

Rudra:I am sorry.

Alakha:It's alright.

They smiled.




Raghav made Siya sit in front of the mirror.

He placed a necklace around her neck.

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Raghav:Now you see yourself in the mirror Siya.You look more beautiful.

Siya:I don't want to see my beauty in the mirror.I want to be beautiful just in your eyes.

They shared a romantic eye lock.




After some months....

Rudra and Alakha went to beautiful places by car and enjoyed.

Rudra took a ring and stood before Alakha:When my marriage alliance broke,I was upset.But your friendship healed my heart and made me fall in love again.Will you marry me Alakha?

Alakha:I was betrayed by my ex-lover.So I was scared to fall in love again.But you made me fall in love again without my own knowledge and that's the beauty of our love.So let us get married Rudra.

He smiled and put the ring on her finger.

Alakha blushed and walked holding his hand.

Siya embraced Raghav from behind.

Raghav:What's the matter Siya?Today you are very romantic.

She smiled.

She held his hand and placed it on her belly.

Siya:We are pregnant my love.

Raghav was surprised:Really?

Siya nodded smiling.

Raghav embraced her in excitement.

He caressed her belly:Our baby!Daddy is waiting for you.

Siya was smiling.




After some months...

Siya is shown with a baby bump.

Raghav was feeding her jalebi.

Siya:You are pampering me too much.

Raghav:Hey!I am pampering my child also.

Siya smiled.

Siya:I am lucky to have a husband who takes care of me like a baby.

Raghav smiled and pecked her forehead.

Time passed....

Rudra-Alakha got married.




Raghav-Siya got blessed with a baby boy.

Raghav was carrying their baby Manish in his arms and singing a lullaby.

Siya:What is this?24 hours you are carrying the baby.I am getting ignored.

Raghav:Don't talk loudly.Our baby will get disturbed.

Siya said sarcastically:You are the one who is disturbing him with your boring lullaby.

Raghav:How could make fun of my lullaby?Our baby is enjoying it.

Siya:I said the truth.

Siya:You are a bad singer.

Raghav:I agree with you.But our Manish thinks that I am the best singer and that's enough for me.

Siya giggled.Slowly Raghav also started giggling.




Years passed.....

Manish ran towards Raghav with a sad face.

Raghav:What happened beta?

Manish:Papa,mumma is forcing me to study.

Raghav:How dare you Siya?

Siya:You are supporting him too much and spoiling him.He is so lazy to study.

Raghav:He is so small.Let him enjoy now Siya.There is whole life for him to study.

Siya:Then he will get zero for his exams.

Raghav cupped Manish's face in his hands and said:Don't worry beta.Your papa is with you.

He looked at Siya and said:Let him get zero.But he is our diamond.Right?

Siya smiled.

Raghav-Siya lived happily with their son Manish.

The end

Thank you very much for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scenes,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.


Edited by jasminerahul - 12 months ago
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Posted: 12 months ago
#66

Beautiful end to a wonderful journey ❤️

Just loved it dear

Alls well that ends well ❤️‍🩹

Keep writing ✍️

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Posted: 12 months ago
#67

i didnt expect this to end so soon

But I am glad they got married and you showed uss their life with their kid, and rudra also got his happy ending

I hope you make a season 2 of this story with their kids growing upsmiley9

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Posted: 12 months ago
#68

Thanks for the pm and update

Part 6

Splendid update.... terrifically written

amazing end

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Posted: 12 months ago
#69

Raghav had a slip of tongue. Loved the fb scene. Finally herdumb parents cared and decided to tell her the truth. Such a lovely edit of Siyadancing. At last she got to know the truth. Loved their reunion. Necklace scenewas romantic. I was wondering why Alakha doesn’t have any partner, glad she hasRudra, who was Alakha’s ex lover? RaSiya pregnancy phase is badly missed by me.Raghav taking care of Siya was lovely. Baby scene was so funny. Raghav Siya Manishscene was cute. Favorite scene was revelation scene. Favorite jodies are both theRaSiya. Favorite character is Siya as she fought for her love till the end. Perfectpics.

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Posted: 12 months ago
#70

Akakha's ex bf was Varun.He was shown in the first chapter with pics.


thanks a lot.



Originally posted by: salley145

Raghav had a slip of tongue. Loved the fb scene. Finally herdumb parents cared and decided to tell her the truth. Such a lovely edit of Siyadancing. At last she got to know the truth. Loved their reunion. Necklace scenewas romantic. I was wondering why Alakha doesn’t have any partner, glad she hasRudra, who was Alakha’s ex lover? RaSiya pregnancy phase is badly missed by me.Raghav taking care of Siya was lovely. Baby scene was so funny. Raghav Siya Manishscene was cute. Favorite scene was revelation scene. Favorite jodies are both theRaSiya. Favorite character is Siya as she fought for her love till the end. Perfectpics.

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