The one where Piya refuses to believe Abhay | An Abhiya OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: InfinitySoul

okay. Thats confusing for me. Why is it depressing?😯😯 even tannu seems to have similar reaction but am not sure why

For me it’s because I can link the premise to an older OS of mine and that one has some depressing stuff in it imo

Originally posted by: simply.meghana

For me it’s because I can link the premise to an older OS of mine and that one has some depressing stuff in it imo

Piya not believing Abhay is a vampire

Abhay consoling her

Loved reading it. Keep writing

** I did not realise I posted this in AT..

Originally posted by: InfinitySoul

okay. Thats confusing for me. Why is it depressing?😯😯 even tannu seems to have similar reaction but am not sure why

I liked your interpretation of the scholarship student Piya, but the logic or the dialogue delivery method she used to negate somehow sounded more like Misha than Piya to me..I'm not saying Piya won't think of it, but she was known to believe even what noone else did..

You know the typical iTV heroine trope - "Tumhare aankhon mein sacchayi thi, mujhe pata chal gaya tumhari neeyat mein khot nahi..." or something..

Originally posted by: Thorn.Princess

I liked your interpretation of the scholarship student Piya, but the logic or the dialogue delivery method she used to negate somehow sounded more like Misha than Piya to me..I'm not saying Piya won't think of it, but she was known to believe even what noone else did..

You know the typical iTV heroine trope - "Tumhare aankhon mein sacchayi thi, mujhe pata chal gaya tumhari neeyat mein khot nahi..." or something..

and as for misha and her sounding similar in my head misha is more upfront more uncaring about these things. Like she wouldn't even bother to check about Abhay and his dramas in first place so she wont even be in this situation. But each to their own.

Originally posted by: InfinitySoul

I don't like the typical itv FLs. If anything i particularly dislike FLs in itv so yeah my version of Piya doesn't follow that trope in most of my stories.

I don't like that either. However, please consider that I've only read only 2-3 of your stories so far, and I've gotten used to the Piyaness in Piya, so show me some understanding as a new reader when I cannot connect to it a little bit

And in this version of piya well why she doesnt believe in abhay being a vampire is well i have tried to give that too

The logic is perfectly intact, no two ways on that. Any rational human would question a supernatural theory 10000x times before actually believing it, and I'm glad you put forward that view through the FL protagonist.

and as for misha and her sounding similar in my head misha is more upfront more uncaring about these things. Like she wouldn't even bother to check about Abhay and his dramas in first place so she wont even be in this situation. But each to their own.

Ah yes, that's true too, she would not have even listened to him, ulta she would give him an entire Ted Talk, after which he would legit facepalm and be like - "Jaane do. Main bacchon se baat nahi karta."

Originally posted by: Thorn.Princess

I don't like the typical itv FLs. If anything i particularly dislike FLs in itv so yeah my version of Piya doesn't follow that trope in most of my stories.

I don't like that either. However, please consider that I've only read only 2-3 of your stories so far, and I've gotten used to the Piyaness in Piya, so show me some understanding as a new reader when I cannot connect to it a little bit

And in this version of piya well why she doesnt believe in abhay being a vampire is well i have tried to give that too

The logic is perfectly intact, no two ways on that. Any rational human would question a supernatural theory 10000x times before actually believing it, and I'm glad you put forward that view through the FL protagonist.

and as for misha and her sounding similar in my head misha is more upfront more uncaring about these things. Like she wouldn't even bother to check about Abhay and his dramas in first place so she wont even be in this situation. But each to their own.

Ah yes, that's true too, she would not have even listened to him, ulta she would give him an entire Ted Talk, after which he would legit facepalm and be like - "Jaane do. Main bacchon se baat nahi karta."

yeah the idea mostly comes from well mahabharat. U know after duryodhan sees krishna do what he does during piece treat negotiation he cant fathom it and he would rather refuse to believe in it. And like u aptly said in a normal human will try to reject supernatural existence in real life if they ever saw something like this. So this is inspired from this behaviour.
For me its funny that first piya wnated to prove to him that he is not normal human and he is trying to keep her away and now the roles have reversed. Now she doesn want to believe because its too much and he is like what why wont u believe me

Exactly misha and abhay would actually make good friend duo because neither cares what other does so they r kind of free with each other. No expectation no bonds etc etc

Originally posted by: InfinitySoul

hey relax its perfectly fine. U r entitled to ur opinions just as much as i am to mine. I was just sharing my views on itv FLs and my version of it thats all.

But if I kinda agree with you coz it is your prerogative as a writer to determine how to shape your plot and characters, and you explained your perspective, why should I say I don't?

yeah the idea mostly comes from well mahabharat. U know after duryodhan sees krishna do what he does during piece treat negotiation he cant fathom it and he would rather refuse to believe in it. And like u aptly said in a normal human will try to reject supernatural existence in real life if they ever saw something like this. So this is inspired from this behaviour. For me its funny that first piya wanted to prove to him that he is not normal human and he is trying to keep her away and now the roles have reversed. Now she doesnt want to believe because its too much and he is like what why wont u believe me

They are playing Uno Reverse on each other

Exactly misha and abhay would actually make good friend duo because neither cares what other does so they r kind of free with each other. No expectation no bonds etc etc

Misha and Abhay together were a riot, matlab kuch bhi bolte the

Originally posted by: Thorn.Princess

hey relax its perfectly fine. U r entitled to ur opinions just as much as i am to mine. I was just sharing my views on itv FLs and my version of it thats all.

But if I kinda agree with you coz it is your prerogative as a writer to determine how to shape your plot and characters, and you explained your perspective, why should I say I don't?

yeah the idea mostly comes from well mahabharat. U know after duryodhan sees krishna do what he does during piece treat negotiation he cant fathom it and he would rather refuse to believe in it. And like u aptly said in a normal human will try to reject supernatural existence in real life if they ever saw something like this. So this is inspired from this behaviour. For me its funny that first piya wanted to prove to him that he is not normal human and he is trying to keep her away and now the roles have reversed. Now she doesnt want to believe because its too much and he is like what why wont u believe me

They are playing Uno Reverse on each other

Exactly misha and abhay would actually make good friend duo because neither cares what other does so they r kind of free with each other. No expectation no bonds etc etc

Misha and Abhay together were a riot, matlab kuch bhi bolte the

uno reverse the friendship breaking card

misha and abhay the riot couple. By the end mounth college is on fire, dehradun is in chaos

Originally posted by: InfinitySoul

uno reverse the friendship breaking card

misha and abhay the riot couple. By the end mounth college is on fire, dehradun is in chaos

Please write an OS of Abhay Misha and them failing (miserably)