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asmitamohanty

@asmitamohanty

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 1 years ago

#11

Ohh you have made them soo endearing with these funny but realistic dialogues.. revealing their chemistry and heightening their tension at the same time...lines that are looking playful and funny on the surface ...but revealing so much emotions underneath....they are soo true to their characters...

In such fun playful banter...in between the warmth,the pride of Aniruddh Bose for his Jhanak..emotions are beautifully incorporated.... that's so special..

And end when he closed off the blinds if his cabin...I could actually visualise it...

Amazingly written..... smiley27 ....

Edited by asmitamohanty - 1 years ago

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vira76

@vira76

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 1 years ago

#12

glad you liked it ! ❤️

yes i want to keep it light-hearted as much as possible. I was getting Leena kinda thoughts because of her influence on me 🤪 but i quickly brushed them under the rug

Originally posted by: MayaFruitbae
Some light moments ..
And I loved this one , its amazing as usual,.but for Maya 😝🥰

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vira76

@vira76

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 1 years ago

#13

i even like to read your reviews smiley42

you write so well Asmi...!

thank you ! ❤️

Originally posted by: asmitamohanty
Ohh you have made them soo endearing with these funny but realistic dialogues.. revealing their chemistry and heightening their tension at the same time...lines that are looking playful and funny on the surface ...but revealing so much emotions underneath....they are soo true to their characters...
In such fun playful banter...in between the warmth,the pride of Aniruddh Bose for his Jhanak..emotions are beautifully incorporated.... that's so special..
And end when he closed off the blinds if his cabin...I could actually visualise it...
Amazingly written.........

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vira76

@vira76

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 1 years ago

#14

ab wo to ......

Fortunately

mere hath me hai!

Evil Fingers Hehehe GIF

Originally posted by: Sampada_14
Only visit???😜😜😜

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Maya

@PurelyMaya

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 1 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: vira76
glad you liked it ! ❤️
yes i want to keep it light-hearted as much as possible. I was getting Leena kinda thoughts because of her influence on me 🤪 but i quickly brushed them under the rug

No no no

We need Leena free writing ....soft romance ,light moments ....🤝🏼🤝🏼