MG FF - The Burnt - Chapter 24 - Pg 88 Nov 16 - Page 73

Hi Anu

how are you?

please update when you can

thank you

Dear readers,

I am typing intezaar, which is 2/3 done. I am getting stuck to bring out the last part. Also I am typing with snail speed due to my schedule so it is gonna take few days to complete.

In the meanwhile, I am planning to give an update here as I have a piece written for this one. If you all are available to read and in mood for this one, I can give an update here tonight.

Shubhasya Sheeghram

We will be waiting for the update 😃

Yes please give Burnt update

Waiting for the update

The Burnt - Chapter 12

Chapter 12 - Click to Read

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P.S: - Pretty late for me, will PM later.

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Originally posted by: tellyme

The Burnt - Chapter 12

Chapter 12 - Click to Read

Please like and comment. Thanks for your support and motivation

P.S: - Pretty late for me, will PM later.

Tagging all who commented.

Hi, nice chapter dear, geet and advay come to stay in khurana Manor on doctor's advice, but geet wanted advay to stay close to his dad, to get love of his family, she is happy after saw his excitement for stay in his dad's house, after reached there he asked for his dad, Maan in outhouse is very alone, he don't want to go in front of geet, to play with her health, he is feel very guilty, but is happy geet asked advay to call Maan as his dad, advay don't want to go away from Maan.

Beautiful work

Loved it

Dadima, Annie and Dev brought Geet and Advay back and Maan is in outhouse.

Geet just love Maan a lot in all this she is still craving for his love , even scared of his anger but still thinking about him.

Advay is so much excited to meet his dad , he has missed so many moments with him and even Maan is so much eager to fulfill his all demands.

Maan is in repentance, doesn’t want to go in front of Geet by just seeing her past reaction.

Loving how this story is progressing

Awesome update 👏

Understand geets confused state regarding maans changed behaviour ... U wrote it very well... How can see believe maan didn't showed his anger in this big thing ... N aslo scared if maan gets angry he will stanch advay from her ... Poor girl her past memories can't let believe in maan

Geet surprised with permission mention n dadi explain her what they n maan want ... Geet is still very kind n innocent she don't want to separate dad son or family from advay ...

Spl like the way u wrote geets inner mixed feelings ... She is feared as same time thrilled to be near maan ... Humans in love r like that only but her fear from past incidents can't let her move forward easily

Like dev n aniee stand for geet and what geet did for jenny being with her all time 😀 chetan still trying to digest geets identity as mrs msk 😄

Like everyone efforts for geet n advay welcome... Spl maan .... Innocent advay que. stir many feelings in geet

Love family time n talk .... Beautifully written 😍 other side maan setting him self alone in OH ... He knows his past deeds n how much he had hurt geet n he deserve this punishment but he has angel like geet in his life again n so advay came ther with his sweet calling DAD ... A blessing for maan

Love advay ... He is so sweet n cute ... Feels bad when u wrote... as he is with single parent he knows not to argue much n accept it n then maan asking who told he is his dad ... Ohh poor boy was so sad thinking it's not like that but maan accept it n such lovely moment created 🤗 like maan advay bonding 💗 maan pampered advay a lot n other side both maan n geet both thinking about their life

Thanks for awesome update 🤗 and note 😀

Understand story flow n it will take time for maaneet 🤗