MANEET FF SAAJAN | UPDATED PART 50 ~ Updating.... - Page 31

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Posted: 1 years ago

Good update happy to know maaneet opened up their thoughts on eachother and how Maan got to know things from his father how he were planning to trap Amit and the divorce was one of them...geet cannot come to conclusion of Maan's feelings she thinks it to be a sympathy..and explains him and maan turned the table towards her that how she fell for a man who was insane like him ..Maan was in pain to see his love deprived from every emotion.. waiting to read more dear thanks for the PM ❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Komal_soni1996

plz write a maaneet story with Political background 😍😍😍 one shot bhi chalega ..


like you read my mind...or viseversa....I have already write prologue of this concept story ready...going to post after mareez-e-ishq epilogue...smiley17 I mean..little same background story...smiley9

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Posted: 1 years ago

Good part

It's nice

Maan and his.dad plan everything

Hope maan geet ke sath alone me asa behave nhinkrt

He should try to give any signal to her

To geet aaj itni broken nhi hoti

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Posted: 1 years ago

Very emotional update. Maan hurt geet very much and now geet is not in a position to understand the truth. It might take time for Maan to rectify the mistakes he had done unintentionally. Waiting for next eagerly

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Posted: 1 years ago
Next part kab aayega 🤔😶
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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Komal_soni1996

Next part kab aayega 🤔😶


updating tomorrow or Sunday..smiley1

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Mg13


updating tomorrow or Sunday..smiley1

okie plzz try to update soon .. 😍😍
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Posted: 1 years ago




Part 39



It was late morning when Geet got up with heavy head...she looked around and found the room emptied...she remembered last night after her confrontation with Maan...he put her to the sleep, saying nothing but sweet words of assurance.

But now there was no sign of him...he left her? The thought brought painful ache in her stomach. She shrugged off the feeling and goes straight to the washroom for her morning duties and then walked out taking bath.

All the while his thoughts lingering in her mind...she got ready in lose shirt and shorts.



Walking up the dressing table, she checked herself in the mirror...her face looked fine now. There were no signs of any bruises or marks on her cheek. She remembered him applying antiseptic on her bruises not before he showered her face with gentle kisses.

Without her will, her face colored with blush...but she instantly shrugged that feeling away, getting control over mind again.

Forgot your decision, geet! You need to move on from him...go away from him... that is only better solution to end both our miseries

Till when you will keep holding onto this broken relation...he needs to be free from this burden..for his sudden feelings...she smiled mockingly at her own reflection, he couldn't love me..." He didn't on the first place...before it was only attraction and friendly feelings from his side when he was mentally imbalance.

And now also it couldn't be love, now also he is being possessive for her just because they are married.

But he need to understand that they couldn't continued with this broken marriage anymore...trust and pure love from both sides this marriage would not sustain.

He need to understand the gravity of it...he couldn't come suddenly to her with I love you!! He has been always taking her for granted...jab jee chaha paas bula liya aur jab jee bhar gaya...' she couldn't say out anything as her throat chocked with the thought of separation from him.

He needs to understand he couldn't get what he want always.. sometimes we need to lose the things which we love the most... everything couldn't happen as per our wish...

We need to sacrifice in the love and relations...I need him to understand this, the importance of our love, relationship and togetherness..if he get me now, he wouldn't understand the depth of our relationship nor my love...

If I walk out, he will surely understand and that will be test of his love.



Maan if you really love me, then you will pass this test for me...now it's your turn to chase after me love...if you do so, then finally I will believe that there is this man of my dreams also, who will be there for me in my thick and thins..in my happiness and sorrows...there is my man, who love me the way I am...love me, even more than me...

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Maan had woken up early with new hopes and vows...he had vowed to himself to get back his wife, her love and trust...he wanted one chance from her to make everything okay in their life.

He wanted to wipe away her all sorrows and gain back the lost smile on her face which will be of true happiness.

With those thoughts in his mind and determination to win her back, he looked at her. He found her in deep sleep, he checked her face and bruises...now it looked okay...he admired her for some time....caressing her forehead he kissed her head gently with promise of their togetherness and got down to her ready.

He first went to mansion for his every thing was there in his room....after taking shower and getting dressed he walked down greeting anxious Dadi ma...who has been up early as well. With current tense situation, she couldn't get peaceful sleep even.

Good morning, Dadi ma.maan moved with fast pace, kissing her cheek.

Good morning bete, aap subah subah kaha ja rahe hai, she noticed him in casual clothing...so asked him.

To outhouse...

Geet ke paas? How is she, you talked to her?

I did...she has been in so much stress dadi ma, I can't pressurized her now...woh bahot hi upset hai Dadi ma.

Hona bhi chahiye bete, ...you think from her pov by putting yourself in her place....you will understand then how to convince her and bring her back to your life. Dadi said and Maan looked up at her in shock.

Aisa kya dekh rahe hai, him aapki dadi hai bete aur Aryan ne hume last night sab pata diya, Aryan though not in detail but told her about maneet having small fight because of Amit.

Though I don't know much but Aryan told me that you having argument with her because of Amit.

That guy gone out our life but not before creating problems in our life...

Jisse humne apna samjha tha woh toh humara dushman nikla, who backstab us, aur jis ladki ko humne galat samjhkar kosa tha...usi ne aaj Hume bahot badi musibat se bachaya...she saved us from this evil guy and in all this sacrificed herself...

Hearing her, he looked at his Dadi confused..dadi aap yeh kya kah rahe hai...

Ha bete, humne bhi unhe galat samjha tha, in beginning....when she came in this mansion by marrying you.

You know, how high headed and furious she was at the time of your marriage. Said dadi with chuckle reminding the day.



Maan became curious and he want to know further about their marriage day...he wanted to know about their first meeting and how she felt about him then... strangely there was no shame or low feeling right now in his mind...infact he was desperate to know about his wife..and ha marriage.

As Raj had blackmail her into this marriage...she clearly objected the idea...when she was ask to go to your room...she denied at first.

God...what was the attitude of that girl! She even denied to obey me when I sent her khandani saree and jewelries.

Madam sent me msg that she isn't some doll to do as per our wishes.

Aap ko sab kuch achse yaad hai dadi ma..." Maan said in amusement while sitting beside dadi on the couch.

Yes bete...in this span of time kab woh humare dil ke kareeb aa gaye bata hi nahi chala...she changed our perspective about her...unhone Hume yeh sikhaya ke , insan ke pahchan unke kapdo se yah taur tarike se na karo...nahi unhe outer look se...but unki pahchan uske dil se hoti hai..she did this by her kindness...her junoon to make you sane...

Her efforts were endearing and now I could see the fruits of it before my eyes. She said, while caressing her cheek.

Maan felt overwhelmed after hearing her, but Dadi ma in ab mein meine sab se jada use hurt Kiya...aur ab woh mujhse bahot upset hai Dadi ma..bata nahi uske dil mein kya chal raha hai ..woh mujhe maaf karegi bhi ya nahi...

Aise mat kahiye bete, hum jaante hai achche se unhe...woh sirf sakht hai but unka Dil bahot komal hai...and moreover she loves you...aur agar aap se pyar karne ka haq unhe hai toh aapse naaraz hone ka bhi hai..." As your wife she got all rights over you, ain't I true...

Yes dadi ma, you said right...she got all rights over me, only she..

Now don't waste your time, my child...go and check on her, she must have woken up..."

He nodded and started moving out but suddenly stop remembering something

Dadi ma, he turned around to face her, Annie..."

Aap unki chinta mat kijiye...she is sleeping right now , hum un dono maa beti ko sambhal lenge when both gets up. Till then you must go to geet and handle her.

Thank you Dadi ma, he came back to her and put quick kiss on her cheek before rushing out of mansion with new zeal.

He looked really happy like old days, kya baat hai maa. Rajveer commented walking near her having witnessing his son running out happily.

Dadi explained everything to him and he too felt happy seeing this changes in his son. He looked like college guy going to propose his crush.

Hope jaldi in dono ke beech ki duri khatam ho jaye aur dono ek ho jaye...Hume bas humare bachcho ki khushiya chahiye nothing else. Dadi said with heavy heart.

Maa, Annie ko hum kaise samjayshnge aur kya kahenge...

Wahi hum bhi soch rahe hai subah se..I think we should remain silent for a while... First let us talk with Maan...then we will decide what to do..how to make her understand. For now say her, Amit is out of country if she ask about him.

Rajveer agreed to her as he too thought it's appropriate to react as per situation demands.

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Maan walked in to see outhouse emptied. It was still early and geet chooses to do her work on own so there were no servants as well. Maan was amused seeing still no staff for household work. He was unaware about Geet's most of habits. He thought something and moved to kitchen to prepare breakfast for his wifey.



And that's how geet found him as soon as she descended the stairs. She was confused hearing noises coming from kitchen...

When she moved near it, she was startled seeing him preparing something.

What are you doing here? Her voice startled him and he burned his finger in the process.

Oh...damn...' he shrugged his hand turning towards her but her beautiful sight left him standing still. He was mesmerize seeing her fresh look...he has been habitual of seeing her in saree or office suit. Now he was left mesmerize seeing her in casuals.

But geet stood still like rock showing no emotions...but he could see her eyes on his hand and her hands fist tightly at side...she so wanted to run to him and scold him badly for his immaturity...when he don't know to care about himself then why does he standing in kitchen.

Her heart wished to run to him to tend his wound but mind warned her...she has no more rights over her, until he passed her test and gave her rights himself.

He was stunned seeing her reaction and realized the gravity of his deeds...what he had gone and done in his false ego and blind rage. His trance was broken when she walked near him.

Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...as far as I know It's time of your office...she asked coldly looking straight into his eyes.

Maan composed himself and got back to the task at his hand, ignoring his injured finger. I took leave for us..Aaj mein pura din tumhare sath bitana chahta hu...he confessed with his back to her busied in cooking.



Geet didn't like his casualness , he is showing as if nothing happened yesterday. Moreover his hand is injured then why the hell he is doing work instead of tending it.

Back off...let me do it, tum jaake bahar baitho. She finally said seeing his finger getting red.

But maan ignored her and continued doing his task.

Tumne suna nahi meine kya kaha...jao yaha se.

Kyon..this is my house, so kitchen is mine as well. .he raised his brow answering her. .while making plates getting the bf ready.

Geet was fed up with his behavior..he is behaving like some college guy having crush...just like her old Maan...that bring smile on her face.but it was quickly vanished from her face as soon as it was appeared.

But maan didn't miss it, he frowned seeing her getting back to shell again as she became silent again.

Both had bf in silence...geet didn't make fuss anymore..but she was unusually silent today. That irked Maan..how's it? He asked to start the conversation but she just uttered, good! Before getting silent again.

After bf, when she got up with plates, he helped her and stood staring at her as she washed the dishes. He admired her and getting to see this new side of his wifey.

After done she wiped her hands and was about to walk away. He grabbed her wrist stopping her.



Geet....he called out softly, walking behind her...she waited for him keeping mum. his hands moved further on her tummy caging her in his arms, he softly kissed her shoulder, pushing her shirt collar down.

That made her jerked out of his arms, what are you trying to do!?

Loving my wife...he said in teasing voice infuriating her further, look Maan...we need to talk. She said in serious voice looking everywhere than him, wasn't sure how to start the topic and how will he react.

To be continued....smiley27


Precap :- how will Geet tell now...even I am confused buddies...plz help the author with your suggestions....smiley44


I am updating my mg stories on YT channel with pictures and music if anyone interested plz let me know...I will share link ...in future pictures will be only few though in ff videos...

Check out my new story on Maneet, updated just prologue though...


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Edited by Mg13 - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago

Wonderful update. Geet is determined to make Maan realize his feelings for her. Maan is now all determined to woo geet but, Maan has to work hard to win her..

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Posted: 1 years ago

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maan get to know how he n geet get married n how was everyone think of her n changes with passing time with the efforts geet taking to cure maan

geet loves maan but she wants him to respect love n relations

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