My new story - Page 2

You guys write way better and have much better ideas than the so-called 'professional writers' of this show. Inko sharam aani chahiye yaar! Ek story bhi dhang se likh nahi paate.

Originally posted by: sumz_d

Best hai ki show this whole mess a nightmare of one of the characters.

Make it Pari's nightmare when she had found out the truth of Raju and Raju had requested her to hide it from Neetii.

Let Pari now wake up from this horrible horrible dream and make her walk to Neetii and tell her the truth about Raju.

Show logical storyline. Iske baad obviously Neeetii will get angry with Raju hate him leave the house with Pari.

Then Pari will samjhao Neetii that it's stupidity to break her marriage as her marriage with Raju was only naam ka and your marriage with Raju is actual marriage as she is preganant and think of RajNeetii baby.

Then Pari should divorce Raju get back her property from Raju and leave RajNeetii alone let them have their baby and happily ever after.

End of PariNeetii!

@Jazz yeh bhi idea dedo unko.

Bold- Haan jaise ki unhone mere ideas bohot maane hain! Jo Maine bola uska ulta kia hai inn writers ne. Maine bola 'make neeti hate sanju n make sanju impotent' kya hua? Neeti pregnant ho gai n sanju 3rd neeti ke bachhe ka baap banne wala hai

Originally posted by: Jazzkapur

ok. Aisa hone nahi wala coz itne saare episodes ho chuke Hain so it's impossible.

Bold- Haan jaise ki unhone mere ideas bohot maane hain! Jo Maine bola uska ulta kia hai inn writers ne. Maine bola 'make neeti hate sanju n make sanju impotent' kya hua? Neeti pregnant ho gai n sanju 3rd neeti ke bachhe ka baap banne wala hai

Exactly itna kuch bakwaas dikhaya hai ki it never felt real and all the characters acted very unrealistically.

Isisliye I suggested to make it a dream becoz in dream we see such kind or illogical and unrealistic stuff.

I promise you it will make more sense then whatever shit they have shown so far.