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Posted: 13 days ago

Originally posted by: Krish58


thanks for your kind comment..I hope you enjoyed reading it.


next part will come up soon..

I have completed writing the whole story..  the rough draft is completed and finalizing it.Most probably part 5 & 6 is last for sure...


Waiting smiley31

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Posted: 10 days ago

this is so so niceee! Sahibas dialogues when she hits Akeer...it was soo beautiful sis....loved loved loved it!!! Theres so much life in your dialogues!

P.S I am eagerly waiting for Keerat-Sahiba milan. 

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Posted: 10 days ago

Originally posted by: Athz

this is so so niceee! Sahibas dialogues when she hits Akeer...it was soo beautiful sis....loved loved loved it!!! Theres so much life in your dialogues!

P.S I am eagerly waiting for Keerat-Sahiba milan. 


Thank you so much  for the kind comments.

I am happy that you liked it...


Dont worry milan is gonna happen soon then you think

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Posted: 10 days ago

A/n : This is the second last part of the fiction.

This particular part  and next one can be read also as a standalone part as its purely of keery family and sahiba family Milan. 

This part is something should have shown in show where rightful questions or reactions should have been shown.

I have tried my best to write this and next and last part .

hope you guys will like it.

Sorry for any typo error .

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Part 5/6


@Monga house,


Bani-(whispers) papa mujeh bahar khelna hai, par mummy ne bola hai ki thodi der baad jaau khelne, par dekho na kelu bhi aagaya hai, dekho woh bahar khada hai.


Garry was confused.He looked at the entrance ,but couldnt see any kid.


Garry-baby , yeh kelu kon hai?Mujeh toh nahi dikh raha Apka dost  hai?


Bani- kelu, papa !!!kelu waha ..woh dekho waha papa ..


Garry- kaha?  kidhar mujeh toh dikh nahi raha ..


Bani-areee,  papa woh dekho waha..waha woh rose flower ke paas baitha hai..


Garry looked carefully at the pointed direction and saw a black puppy was happily chewing off manveer's shoes after chewing off gurleen bua 's sandal .


He knew if some one from brar house , now saw this ,they would create a ruckus and a bigger one, especially manveer mami and gurleen mami.


Bani- Woh rooroo doggiee hai na uska chotta sa puppy hai uska naam kelu hai.Mein ne aur mummy ne uska naam kelu rakha hai , usko na ball se khelna pasand hai .Aur usko na aapke fav jim jam biscuits bahut pasand hai.


Garry- (whispers) achaaa...tabhi mein sochu ki yeh kelu itna golu molu kaise hai aur hamesha mujeh dekh ke khush kyu hojaata hai Jabhi mein apni fav biscuits kha raha hota hoon..(to bani) okay ,thik baby mein help karta hoon..mein jaise kahu ,waise hi chup chaap jaana thik hai aur kelu ko bhi saath lejanaa..

Bani- okay..


Bani kisses on Garry's cheek.


Bani-aap best ho.


Garry ruffles her hair.


Garry-aur aap iss world ke best baby ho...


Garry sees keerat and jasleen were serving prasad  


.Garry-(acts) (holds his stomach) ouch ouch..mera stomach!!!!


Keerat - kya hua garry!?thik toh ho ...


 Garry-kuch nahi , woh yeh orange khane ke baad turant pet dard start hogaya.ahhh ouch ouch..


Keerat-tum baitho mein dawai leke aati hoon.


Garry cues bani to leave. Keerat goes to get meds and on other hand bani leaves silently.

After sometime brars and other guests leaves.


@outside monga house,


Bani was playing with her  ball . However, while playing  rooroo  snatches the ball and runs off .Bani goes after her.

Bani- off ho .rooroo, stop ... rooroo stop..


She ran after rooroo. However, following rooroo she sees akeer. and his family. just at the entrance of neighborhood lane buying fruits..


Bani- akeer bhaiya...akeer bhaiya!!!(waving at akeer) akeer bhaiya...akeer bhaiya....


To grab akeer's attention bani throws the ball towards him.

Akeer sees the ball and gets happy..


Akeer- ball!?yeh toh bani ka ball hai!!!Mamma yeh dekho bani ka fav  ball.

 

Sahiba and twinkle looked confused .


Akeer-mamma yeh dekho  bani ka ball, mein uske ghar gaya tha na tab  uske  pass yahi ball tha.  Par woh yaha kya kar rahi. hai.   (looks here and there)  .Bani...bani..bani..


Diljeet-bani, ??? yaha kaha hai akeer ??


Akeer-papa ,bani  yahi hai...yeh dekho uska ball..


Akeer shows him the ball


Twinkle- (picking up fruits )yeh dusri ball hogi , aisi ball sabke paas hoti hai .


Akeer-nai bua  ,yeh bani ki ball hai,yeh dekho iss ball pe uska naam bhi likha hai...hum dono saath mein likha tha ' Bani ka fav ball..' yeh dekho


Akeer shows the  ball to twinkle and sahiba..


Sahiba- akeer , nai beta yeh dusri kisi aur ki hogi,jiska naam bani hoga..woh chotti bacchi yaha kaise aayegi..


Akeer- nai mamma , yeh bani ki hi ball hai..


Akeer looks here and there..


Akeer-bani....bani...


Bani-akeer bhaiya!!!Akeer bhaiya ..yaha...yaha ..akeer bhaiya 


Akeer saw bani waving at him ...


Akeer -dekha mein ne kaha tha na..mamma


Sahiba and others are surprised to see her.


Sahiba-yeh bani hai?


Diljeet-haan, sahibaji ,mein ne kaha tha bilkul guddiya jaise hai ..Par yeh yaha kya kar rahi aur uske mummy papa bhi nahi dikhaayi de rahe. hai?


Akeer-bani ...bani. kaisi hai tu....


Bani- mein thik hoon aap kaise ho..


Sahiba and others join akeer ...


akeer - mein bhi thik hoon . Bani yeh meri mumma hai, yeh bebe aur yeh bua hai.


Bani greets them 

Sahiba  gets down at bani's level. She felt happy , to see her, when she looked closely at bani, she had a lot of resemblance to keerat. For a moment , she thought , she was talking with keerat.


Sahiba-hi bani,  kaise ho? tum toh bahut hi cute aur pretty ho..


Bani-Thank you aunty, aur aap bhi bahut pretty ho.


Sahiba-aww thank you.Tumhare mummy papa kaha hai?


Bani-woh ghar mein hai.


Sahiba- aap yaha  kaha rehte ho?


Bani nods in. yes 


Akeer-par tum toh woh bade waale ghar mein rehti ho?


Bani-haan mein waha bhi rehti ,aur yaha bhi rehti hoon.Abhi meri bua ka school  test hai na ,toh bua mujeh khelne nahi deti ball se aur khelti hoon toh chilaate hain aur gussa hote hai.


Sahiba on hearing this felt bad who would shout at such a small kid for playing and that too such a sweet kid.


Biji-aree itni choti pyari bacchi pe kon chillate hai bhalla?


Diljeet-sahibaji, aap bani se baate kariye mein tab tak mithai leke aata hoon !


Sahiba-haan, thik hai tab tak hum log yaha wait karte hai ..


Bani-aunty, akeer bhaiya ne mujeh bataya ki aap hi achi drawing banate ho ..


Sahiba-acha??


Bani nods in a yes.


Bani-aap mere papa ko sikhaoge drawing? Unki drawing very bad hai Miss shanaya ne unki drawing ko  ek bhi star nahi diya.


Sahiba , twinkle  and biji laughs.


Sahiba-pakka sikhaungi . 


Akeer-patah hai , aaj mera birthday hai!! mein aaj 10 years ka hogaya .


Bani-(happily) Happy birthday akeer bhaiya .


Akeer- Thank you. 


Bani- Akeer bhaiya aapka birthday hai na , toh aapko chocolates khaani hai? ..mere paas bahut saari chocolates hai..kal papa mere liye bahut saari chocolates  .Lekin mein apni gems nahi doongi woh meri fav hai.


Akeer gets happy, he wanted to go, but then first asks sahiba for permission. Diljeet returns after purchasing sweets.


Akeer-mumma ,hum jaaye bani ke ghar please..please


Sahiba - nahi ,beta hame kahi aur jaana hai , aaj nahi beta kal .pakka jaayenge bani ke ghar.


Akeer- mumma please!!! I promise mein methi ki sabji khaaunga.. ... please mein jaaun (making puppy eyes)


Sahiba was in dilemma on one hand she wanted to meet her family as soon as possible and on other hand today she didnt wanted to make akeer sad.


Sahiba -(whispers) ab kya kare..? agar aur kahi gaye toh ghar nahi jaa paayenge .


Diljeet and sahiba looks at bani and akeer who were   making puppy eyes..


Akeer - please mumma...


Sahiba-acha thik hai par, 5 min se zyada nahi rukenge .hame kahi aur jaana bhi hai thik hai..Aur zidd nahi karoge tum.


Akeer-okay, promise.


Bani-okay,


Bani grabs akeer and drags with him.

Sahiba and everyone follows her .However, soon  she realizes  that where bani was taking them. She is surprised. She had a doubt in mind and wanted to confirm it. 

Sahiba stops bani  few blocks far from her house .


Sahiba- bani, beta aap yaha rehte ho?


Bani-haan..woh raha mera ghar..


Sahiba sees that bani pointed at monga house which was decorated.

Sahiba and diljeet are shocked .


Biji -kya hua beta itna chauk kyu rahe ho?


Diljeet-biji , yeh sahiba ji yaha rehti hai..jaha bani bata rahi hai....


Sahiba(to herself)- yeh kaise ho sakta hai?? Kya mummy papa aur keerat kahi aur rehne gaye hai? Par uss din toh kaha tha ki yeh monga house mein hi keerat rehti hai.


Sahiba- (cupping bani's face)beta , tera naam kya hai...?


Bani looked confused..


Bani- mera naam bani  hai.


Sahiba-(getting emotional) nai, mera matalb hai ki , Jaise Akeer bhaiya ka naam Akeer Panser hai ,waise aapka kya naam hai??


Bani-Mera naam hai , Bani Kaur Baweja.


Sahiba-(surprised and emotional) Baweja..kahi yeh ..(To bani) Beta tumhare mumma papa ka naam kya hai?


Bani- Mummy ka Keerat Kaur Baweja ,aur Papa ka Garry Baweja.


Sahiba's  eyes started to fill up with tears. She was surprised ,shocked and emotional .So were panesar's  except akeer and bani.

Bani and akeer were confused as to why they suddenly got emotional ..

Sahiba heard keerat's voice calling for bani ,followed by Garry's and Jasleen voice 


Bani -mummy bula rahi hai,  chalo.


They both ran inside the monga house.


It took few moments for sahiba to finally realize  what bani said. And the house  bani went into.


Sahiba was emotional . She remembered Garry's confession for having feelings for keerat. She couldn't believe ,her baby sister ,her keeru  whom she dotted on  so much  was now a mother. Her little keeru was married to Garry. The guy who changed for better and now they had their own little family.


Sahiba  entered monga house. 


Everything was still same nothing had changed. Sahiba thought she had gone back in time, memories of her maika ,flooded in her mind. For her, every step became heavier, as with every step ,a  memory from past would appear before her eyes .


Sahiba-(touching the door frame, then walls) (crying) kuch nahi badla yaha, sirf mein badal  gayi hoon.  Aisa lag raha ki waqt  ,yaha tehr gaya aur  mein hi aage nikal gayi..bahut door aagayi hoon mein  , kitna door yeh ab mujeh bhi nahi patah.


Sahiba  stopped   in the courtyard .Looking at her house at each and every corner of her house. After almost 9 years she was  going to see them again. So much had changed in this past years .

She could hear keery and bani talking in the main hall. Now, only a parda separated sahiba from keery ,bani and jasleen. She just stopped there , suddenly she couldn't had the courage to step in.


Bani-mummy, akeer bhaiya ko mein ek chocolate doon,jo papa kal laaye the ?


Keerat- haan ,kyu nahi,aur ek kyu ,aaj toh akeer bahut saari chocolates milegi..


Bani-  aur mein bhi bahut saari chocolates khaaungi .lekin mein apni gems nahi doongi woh meri fav chocolate hai.


Jasleen- haan, kha lena par pehle yeh dhoodh finish karo..Warna strong kaise banogi..


Garry-akeer tumhare mummy, papa kaha hai..woh abhi tak nahi aaye.


Akeer- lagta hai , woh raasta bhul gaye honge, hum log itne fast dodh ke  yaha aaye hai na..mein leke aata hoon 


Sahiba saw akeer coming towards them. She was just silently crying letting her tears flow down.


Akeer-areee mamma, papa , bebe,bua aap sab yaha kyu khade ho,chalo na ander. Uncle ,aunty ,aur badi mom bula rahe hai...


Akeer takes sahiba's hand and leads her to the main hall .

Sahiba  entered the main hall and saw Keery were making sure bani completed the glass of milk and jasleen  was clicking their pictures.


Akeer-yeh dekho mamma, yeh hai  bani ke mamma ,papa aur badi mom. Aur uncle , aunty badi mom yeh hai meri mamma, bua aur biji.


All of them looks up  at sahiba same time. Keery and Jasleen were in shock.


Garry-(whispers)sahiba...bhabhi.


keerat  - di..


Jasleen-sahiba.


Keerat couldn't believe her eyes . She was in shock , her sister was finally back .She thought, it a  was dream. She stumbled backwards ,but garry safely  held her.


Keerat-(crying )sah..sahi..sahiba didi( to garry) (pointing towards sahiba) garry, wa..waha sahi..sahiba..sahiba didi.. sahiba didi hai na..mein sapna dekh rahi hoon.?


Garry-(crying)  keerat , sahiba bhabhi hi hai..woh ..hamare..saamne hi hai.


Bani-badi mom,  mummy  ro kyu rahe ..akeer ki mumma ko dekh ke , papa..papa ,aur aap bhi kyu ro rahe ho..


Jasleen- mummy na apne sister se mil rahi hai na issliye mummy papa ro rahe hai.


Sahiba  cried  like a baby and so does were keery and jasleen. All those years of  suppressed pain started to resurface.

Keerat  immediately hugged sahiba as  tightly  as she could and didnt let go in the fear that it might turn out to be a mere mirage. For her, her search was over, her sister was back.


Finally, keerat   let go away  all those years of unsheded tears of pain and separation. Though,  she never resented her sister for act as she knew their must be some strong valid reason for such step, but their was still  anger in her,  towards sahiba for not letting them know or contacting them in all this years. As ,she thought it  was completely wrong on sahiba's part  .


She was angry that her  parents  had to  suffer of pain and burden of helpless because of sahiba's act to not contact them or taking their help . Though her parents never said a word of it ,but it was visible in their eyes and behavior  till they breathed their last. 


Sahiba too hugged her tightly.


Both the Sisters found the solace in each others embrace. After a long time she was able to speak some words .All those years of anguish, and pain started to pour out.


Keerat-(crying) kaha chale gaye the di, aap bina bataye???  


"kya yeh ghar aapka nahi tha? mein aapki behen nahi hoon ??konse baat ki sazaa de rahe the aap hame???Kitna pareshaan the...hum sab di .... mein, mummy papa ,garry, mom, hum the na di phir kyu wapas nahi aaye ?"


" kyu wapas nahi aaye?? Mein ,ne na duniya se lad jaana tha aapke liye. mujh pe toh bharosa karti na di. kyu wapas nahi aaye? ! Hum pe bharosa nahi tha aapko? "


Breaking the hug Keerat  continued.......


" di, ek rishta toot gaya toh iska matalb yeh toh na ki dusre rishte bhi khatam hogaye the!!

Mein , garry  mom ,  mummy ,papa hum sab aapka saath dete....Hum ne konsi  galti ki thi di ??Ki aap ne itni badi sazaa di hame."


"Kya aapke liye ,  ek saal ka rishta ina important hogaya ki aapne hamara apno ka rishta chod diya? 

bolo na di...(keerat wipes her tears) bolo na .Chup kyu hai aap?  Jawab chahiye mujeh..!!!   mera aur aapka toh janam se  rishta tha na , toh kya ek saal ke rishte ke saamne hum beheno ka  rishta  kamzor hogaya , di? "


 "Bachpan se  sab kuch saath saha hai,sab kuch saath kiiya hai, toh yeh bhi ,seh lete di, toh yeh bhi kar lete ..!! "


"Kya aapko hum itne kamzor lage ki aapko vishwas nahi tha ki hum aapke liye ,akeer keiye fight nahi kar paayenge?"


"Veer ke against ,puri family ke against gaye the mere liye , garry aur mom ko unka  haq dilaya, toh di hum bhi toh aapke liye stand lete na.Bum itne bhi kamzor nahi hai, jitna aap samjhte ho!"


"Didi ek baar ..ek baar bhi kya aapko hamari yaad nahi aayi. itne saalo mein?Aapko nahi patah kaise kaise khayal aate the hume ..!!!! Mummy ,papa ko kaise un muskil waqt mein sambhala hai ..vishwas dilaaya hai ki sahiba didi lautegi ...ek din.."


"Aap Angad veerji se naraaz the... par humse konsi narazgi thi di aapki?..Ek call kar liya hota di..ek call !!!"


 "Aap meri chodiye di, aapko  patah hai garry ko, mom ko kitne sunna pada hai, woh log pure family ke against hogaye the meri help karne ke liye, aapko dhoodhne ke liye."


"Yaha tak ki garry  2 saal tak usse ghar se bahar nikaal diya tha.Kyuki ussne faisla kar liya tha ki woh mera saath dega ,aapko dhoondhne mein, aur iss mein ussne bhi bahut maar khaagi hai angad  veerji se, par sab kuch ussne chup chaap sehen kiya kyu patah hai?"

" Kyu woh aapke liye khada tha .Aapke support mein khada tha.Woh do saal yaha rehta raha hai  aur chup chaap mummy papa ka gussa saha hai.Angad jiju aur veer ke upar jo bhi gussa  tha , mummy ,papa ne garry pe nikala hai taane maare  hai, bahut kuch bura bhala kaha hai usko ,lekin woh chup raha.Aapke liye, mere liye."


 "Garry ne mere liye fight ki hai, bani ke liye fight ki hai , toh aapke liye ,akeer le liye  bhi woh fight karta na di!!"


Garry-(whispers) keerat..


keerat-(wipes her tears) nahi garry bolne do mujeh! bolne do !please ! Di ko patah chalna chahiye ki   unke liye kuch log hai ,jinhe unki fikar hai, unki help ke liye tyaar hai .aur yeh bhi ki hum kamzor nahi..hum bhi unke liye stand le sakte hai aur  unhe samjhna hoga ki woh aise hi sab kuch chod ke nahi jaa sakti .


Keerat  cries more, So does sahiba. Sahiba  knew ,  whatever keerat said was right, and her anger was right too. Her parents, sister and baweja's , they too unknowingly suffered .


Keerat again hugs sahiba.


Keerat - bahut miss karti thi mein aapko. Ab mat jaana di, please mat jaana ,warna mein tutt jaaungi.Mere ab aur shakti nahi bachi ki mein aapko kaise..kaise... samjhaau ki hum hai aapke liye ,aur  hamesha rahenge ..aapke liye  ,kyuki hum aapki family hai ,paraye nahi hai, ki jab mann kiya wapas aagaye aur mann kiya humse door chale gaye. Hume bhi hurt hota hai di, parwaah hoti hai aapki.


(holds  sahiba's hands) Di, ab aap gaye na toh iss baar na zindgi bhar ke liye apse naraaz hojaaungi mein.


Sahiba in response just hugged keerat more  and cried . She knew they didnt deserved that behavior ,but she  had her own reasons to stay away from them .

They stayed their in each other embrace for long time.


Keerat-i am sorry ...sorry di..mein jaanti hoon koi wajah hogi ,aapne jo kiya uski wajah hogi,par yeh bhi galat tha ,ki aapne hum pe bharosa nahi kiya.


Garry pacified bani, as she got too emotional seeing her  mother cry. Even akeer got teary, he didnt understand what keerat aunty was saying and  why his mother and bani's parents were crying so much .

But he got emotional on seeing his mother cry like baby. It was the first time he saw his mother cry like that.


Akeer-(whispers) bebe, mein ne koi galti ki hai?



Bebe- nai beta 


Akeer-(whispers) (tears) toh mamma ro kyu rahi hai, ? mamma ko aise rote dekh mujeh  bhi rona aa raha hai..


Bebe-mamma na apne behen se yaani tumhari  keerat masi itne saalo baad mil rahi issliye ro rahi hai.


Akeer-keerat aunty meri masi hai ??


Bebe-haan..


Keerat heard bani crying, breaking the hug she takes bani in her arm. She pacified bani.


Keerat- (emotional) (wipes her and bani tears) shhhss mein hoon na..dekho mummy nahi ro rahi na...shsss ..mein hoon na..yaha.(Holding Garry's hand) didi, yeh meri aur garry ki beti hai , bani. 


Sahiba hugs bani .


Garry-(emotional)  aap..aap kaise ho sahiba bhabhi, kaha chale gaye the...



Sahiba-  mein..thik hoon...tum kaise ho...


Garry- (wipes his tears) mein thik hoon.Aaj  dekh ke bahut khushi  ho rahi hai bhabhi.Mein bata nahi sakta aapko aur akeer ko sahi salamt dekh ke bahut khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai.


Sahiba-Mujeh bhi bahut khushi ho rahi hai, Bahut miss kiya hai tum sab ko .


 Sahiba greets Jalseen and hugs her. Both cries.


Jasleen-(wiping sahiba tears)  kaha chali gayi thi tu..beta ..kaisi hai tu..Kitna yaad kiya hai..Tujeh sahi salamat dekh ke bahut khushi ho rahi hai.


Sahiba-Mein thik hoon bua, aap kaise ho aap sab ko bahut miss kiya hai...Aur aap toh bilkul bhi nahi badle...


Jasleen laughs. Sahiba then introduces  akeer and diljeet's family.


Sahiba- akeer yaha aao, Tum bani ko jaante ho ,par tum yeh jaante ho ab yeh tumhari behen hai..Aur  yeh keerat masi, Garry masa aur woh badi mom..

Akeer -mamma toh keerat masi sach meri masi hai ya  jhut waali masi hai?

All looked puzzled ...

Sahiba-matalb ??


Akeer and bani then re narrates the competition day incident and  what happened  in the staff room.

All laugh at the incident.


Sahiba-nai yeh sach mein tumhari masi hai...


Akeer-toh woh teacher sach bol rahi thi?


Sahiba-haan...


Akeer -toh sach mein bani meri chotti behen hai....


Bani-(excitedly) haan...akeer bhaiya ,aap badam khaya karo..


Bani hugs akeer bhaiya and akeer hugs her back.


Akeer- ab mein apne saare dosto se kahunga ki meri  chotti behen hai ..


keery and jasleen hugs akeer...


 Sahiba- Keerat maa papa  kaha hai?? mein akeer ko milwana  chahti hoon.  kaha hai woh  bahar gaye hai?..(looks at garry). Garry. woh kaha hai bolo na ..bahar gaye hai?


Garry - Sahiba..bhabhi woh..mummy...papa...woh..(looks at keerat and jasleen)


Sahiba -bolna keerat


Keerat - (tears) (pause)sahiba di mummy, papa ab nahi  rahe hai.


Sahiba-tu kya bol rahi hai?? mein kuch samjhi nahi, Jasleen bua, yeh keerat kya keh rahi hai


Jasleen- sahiba... keerat sahi keh rahi hai woh ab nahi rahe... 


Sahiba was in tears ..She looked at keerat. To wait and tell it was a joke , But keerat didnt.

Keerat takes sahiba to their parents room ,where the portrait of their parents  were  there..

Keerat and sahiba   entered their parents room followed by others.


Sahiba was shocked. She didnt wanted to believe it. She was not ready to  accept it. 

She lovingly  touches their portraits  and sits down in front them .


Keerat informed  her that due to old age related issue they both passed away 7 years back .


Sahiba-(crying) mumma, papa dekho mein  na  aagayi  hoon...i am sorry..sorry..Mein na bahut buri beti hoon...Bahut buri ....Jab aapko meri zyada zaroorat thi mein nahi thi...Bahut dukh diya hai mein aapko. Mein bahut swarthi hogayi thi..papa  mammma ,please wapas aajao na..please..dekho na mein ..aapki sahiba aagayi hoon.Dekho na mere saath kon aaya hai..(she calls akeer diljeet biji and twinkle)


Sahiba -yeh ...yeh aapka pota akeer , yeh aapke damad diljeetji..yeh biji aur twinkle..


Sahiba cried more..


Akeer-(emotional) papa ,  mumma kyu ro rahi hai?Jab se aaye hai tab se ro rahi hai .Aur woh  kon hai photo mein?


diljeet- (wipes his own  tears)beta , woh na aapke nani , nana hai , woh bhagwan ke ghar chale gaye hai na issliye mumma ro rahi hai. Unke aashirwaad lo.


Keerat-(whispers)garry,  tum sab ko leke niche jaao .Mein didi ke saath rukti hoon. 


Garry-  thik hai, aur kuch jaroorat ho toh mujeh bulaana le na.(to diljeet) diljeet ji , hum niche chalte hai ,baaki saari baate wahi karenge.Sajiba bhabhi ko hame thodi der ke liye akele chod dena chahiye..


Diljeet-haan...sahiba ji ko  thodi waqt yahi rehne dijiye, bahut saalo ka dard chuppa ke rakha hai unhone ..Aaj beh jaane dijiye unhe.


Jasleen and biji were preparing tea and snacks.


Diljeet and Garry looked over the kids who were busy in playing the board game. They were  happy to know that they were indeed brother and sister and didnt cared about what happened earlier the day.


Diljeet was emotional too today. He never knew what was parents love or how his parents looked. But he loved his biji and twinkle as his own and wouldn't want to loose them. He understood sahiba's pain and also of his sister in law's pain. 

Eventhough ,young she must have  gone through so much pain but handled  it without shedding a tear or any complains or resent towards life. He admired Keerat's  strength. She was even stronger than sahiba  and was lucky to  have a life partner like Garry who can go against family for his  wife and daughter.

If sahiba fought  and suppressed  her pain for akeer for  past 9 years. then so was her sister and her family . 

Later on, Garry and Jasleen asked about how they found sahiba  and why didnt sahiba contacted them in this past years. Diljeet tells them that it was better if sahiba herself tells it .

 It had been hour or two, 

Garry checks on sahiba and keerat. sahiba was resting  on keerat's lap.  Keerat was lost  in her thoughts. On Seeing him, she carefully places pillow  under sahiba's head  and leaves the room.


Outside the room.


Garry- tum thik ho keerat?


Keerat nods in a yes.


Garry-aur sahiba bhabhi?


Keerat- Haan , woh  bhi thik hai, Unhe bahut dukh pauncha hai, kabse yahi keh jaa rahi thi ki unhone sabko bahut dard diya hai.. Mein ne bahut samjhaya unhe,garry.


Garry- waqt ke saath saath sab thik hojaayega keerat.


Keerat-bacche thik hai? 


Garry- haan, woh niche kamre mein khel rahe hai.


Keerat- didi so rahi hai, toh mein niche jaake sab ke liye khaana bana deti hoon.


Garry- tum sahiba bhabhi ke saath raho, mein ne khaana order kar liya hai. 


Keerat- garry, kya diljeet ji ki family ko patah hai akeer ki sachai .


Garry- haan, unhe sab patah hai . 


Garry before leaving hugs keerat assuring her that he was their for her and now that everything would be fine. Keerat too hugs him back and thanks him for being their for her taking care for everything.


After another hour sahiba and keerat joins the rest of family downstair


Sahiba- mein jaanti hoon  bahut saare sawaal hai jinke mein saare jawab dena chahti hoon,par usse pehle mein akeer ka birthday celebrate karna chahti ,hoon yaha monga house mein sabke saath, mein  usse promise kiya tha ki  aaj uska  birthday celebrate karenge.


Jasleen- thik hai, jaisa tum chaho. Aur aaj toh double khushi ka mauka hai aaj toh akeer ka birthday bhi hai aur itne barso baad tum wapas aayi ho.Toh celebration hona hi chahe. 


Everyone freshens up and celebrate akeer's birthday . At night after Akeer and Bani slept in keerat's old room. Every one sat in the main hall  and were having tea.


Jasleen-sahiba , tum jab chaho tab sab kuch bata sakti ho.Tum par koi pressure nahi hai. Mein jaanti hoon biti hui baato ko dauhrana bahut hi muskil hai.


Sahiba-nahi jasleen bua, mein sab baat batana chahti hoon,apne dil se bhoj utharna  chahti hoon. Bas samjh nahi aa raha hai kaha se start  karu, bahut kuch hai kehne ko..


Keerat- hmm ..toh hum  baat shuru karte hai di, mere aur garry ke vyah se..


Keery tells how they got married ,about how their parents approved the  marriage and that  in brar  house  it was darji, bebe and jasleen  who agreed  for their marriage despite of disapprovals of certain family members. Keerat also tells  about  Brar's behavior towards her and their daughter bani  and how in a recent fight  garry stood up  for her and bani .


Sahiba-(takes keerat  hand) mein bahut khush hai .hoon ki teri kismat meri jaise nahi hai .Tujeh bahut acha pati aur dost mila. Jo tere liye aur bani ke liye khada ho . Teri care kare.Tujeh samjhe


Keerat- mein bahut khush di, Sach kahu agar garry aur mom nahi hote na toh mein kab ki tutt chuki hoti. Shayad mere mein koi strength nahi hoti ki mein kuch face karu


Sahiba-thank you garry.Mein aaj sahi maaino mein bahut khush yeh jaan ki tum keerat aur bani ka bahut khayal karte hai  aur shayad tumhe acha na lage , yej sunn ne  mein par mein khush ki tum angad jaise nahi ho. Aur kabhi banna bhi mat.


Garry- nahi bhabhi mujeh bura nahi laga, infact mom bhi yahi kehti hai ki woh khush hai ki mein angad jaise nahi hoon par yeah kya ,sahiba bhabhi thank you bolke paraya kar diya ..


Sahiba-nahi garry, paraya nahi kiya, par mein  sach mein dil se thank you keh rahi hoon. Aaj tumne meri baat  , mere vishwas ko  sach kar diya, Jab tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas hua tha na tab mein ne dekha tha tumhari aankho  mein , tumhe sach mein apne kiye par pastva tha aur  apni galtio ko sudhara hai aur ek ache son , husband , father ki responsibilities nibha rahe ho .Bina dare tum apne family ke liye ,sach ke liye khade rahe. 


Garry- yeh sab aapki wajah se possible hua ..aap thi toh mujeh  chance mila , apni galtio ko dekhne ka aur mauka mila  unhe sudharne ka aur aaj issi ki wajah se mujeh bahut hi pyari family mili hai . Toh aapko na thank you nahi bolna chahiye..Balki mujeh bolna chahiye .


Sahiba- kya brar house mein se kisiko patah hai   akeer ke baare mein.?


Jasleen-nahi, sirf mujeh garry aur keerat ko patah hai.


Garry narrates how  they  got to know about fake report 2 months back. 


Sahiba -jab uss din bus accident hua tha ,ussi din doctors ne medical camp meinuneh inform kiya tha ki mera miscarriage hua hi nahi..Aur yeh baat mein ne angad ko batane ki bahut koshish ki par ussne sunna tak nahi..infact mein aayi thi 9 saal pehle mein ek nahi do baar aayi yaha angad se milne usse batane ki  hamara baby ko kuch nahi hua .


Jasleen, keery are shocked but were not surprised. As they already assumed that  this situation as a possibility. Sahiba then narrates what happened exactly 9 years back.

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Phew !!! That is end of Part 5 


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Posted: 9 days ago

Omg finally the reunion, can't wait for next part