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Posted: 1 years ago

Hi Dear

First of all, i'm sorry for missing your updates. I have not been active due to my trip.

Thank you for sending the PMs by the way

smiley31


I must say, I am absolutely fascinated by your stories

I have read all 3 parts together and I just love them. There is no other words that I can used describe it.


The way Arjun is acting after having realised his feelings for Riya is absolutely beautiful. It actually shows the depth of his feeling for Riya despite him not having confessed yet.

His caring nature, his soft side, his unspoken confession depicts a truly touching tale of love.

The way you have described Ariya's scene together shows that no matter what they will always be there for each other.


As for the team, I really like the friendship they share. Their care and worry for Riya shows that she is a lucky woman. What was funny though was how you showed their frustration towards Arjunsmiley36


Now I just want to know what will happen next seeing Shree is actually yelling at Arjun.


Thank you so much for such wonderful updates.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Will u update today ?

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Will u update today ?

No dear, I am out of town na

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Posted: 1 years ago

I couldn't comment before because real life came in between. But anyways....

I have read both updates in a go and the storyline is getting even more interesting.


Lol so Arjun gave himself as a present to an emotional Riya to make her happy again. Sometimes I feel even he doesn't know how whipped he actually is for his lady love. He was always bad at this romantic stuff. I mean he literally realized after almost losing her that he loves her. But meh.... Better late then never


It's actually quite a mystery why he lost both his wife and daughter and I'm also curious if his parents are gonna make an entry or not. Also if Sameer be a part of this. I have some theories too.

One: Roshni was a temperamental abusive partner and since Arjun is famous for losing himself completely after falling in love, I suspect he let it all happen until too late. So in the end he got a divorce and probably lost a custody case.

Two: Roshni was painted in grey character dilemma and you might bring her back for a showdown.

Three: Sameer might never be in this story or worse he'll be why Roshni left or something 😂

Four: You're going to give me another shock and I'll be reeling with the effects till next Wednesday.

....................... .

About the update, I loved how Arjun finally admitted to himself and is finally showing his emotions with right on his wife.

Both chapters were beautiful, not to mention the flashback because I never thought he'd decide to marry her on a whim and she'll go along with the plan in such a formal fashion😂


Oh so he has decided to bring Riya back home and while his team is working day and night he's spending all the time with his wife. Now one should always be scared of a wife's jealousy and a Best friends' wrath.

Shree better give him some SYS of his own for taking Riya like that without even telling them. I mean they were working so hard in hope of meeting her and imagine their surprise on finding her discharged when she should be under strict observation of doctors (Not Arjun). Not that I'm not loving this ❤️


Thank you so much for the PM

Waiting for more

Ps. I see rea life got in the way of Ariya land but that's okay. I understand how sometimes real life sucks especially when it comes to jobs because they love squeezing even the last drop of patience tear and sweat to get their way and writing needs all the focus and peace of mind to delve into the characters' emotions to be able to write them correctly.

Take your time but not so much❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

I couldn't comment before because real life came in between. But anyways....

I have read both updates in a go and the storyline is getting even more interesting.


Lol so Arjun gave himself as a present to an emotional Riya to make her happy again. Sometimes I feel even he doesn't know how whipped he actually is for his lady love. He was always bad at this romantic stuff. I mean he literally realized after almost losing her that he loves her. But meh.... Better late then never


It's actually quite a mystery why he lost both his wife and daughter and I'm also curious if his parents are gonna make an entry or not. Also if Sameer be a part of this. I have some theories too.

One: Roshni was a temperamental abusive partner and since Arjun is famous for losing himself completely after falling in love, I suspect he let it all happen until too late. So in the end he got a divorce and probably lost a custody case.

Two: Roshni was painted in grey character dilemma and you might bring her back for a showdown.

Three: Sameer might never be in this story or worse he'll be why Roshni left or something 😂

Four: You're going to give me another shock and I'll be reeling with the effects till next Wednesday.

....................... .

About the update, I loved how Arjun finally admitted to himself and is finally showing his emotions with right on his wife.

Both chapters were beautiful, not to mention the flashback because I never thought he'd decide to marry her on a whim and she'll go along with the plan in such a formal fashion😂


Oh so he has decided to bring Riya back home and while his team is working day and night he's spending all the time with his wife. Now one should always be scared of a wife's jealousy and a Best friends' wrath.

Shree better give him some SYS of his own for taking Riya like that without even telling them. I mean they were working so hard in hope of meeting her and imagine their surprise on finding her discharged when she should be under strict observation of doctors (Not Arjun). Not that I'm not loving this ❤️


Thank you so much for the PM

Waiting for more

Ps. I see rea life got in the way of Ariya land but that's okay. I understand how sometimes real life sucks especially when it comes to jobs because they love squeezing even the last drop of patience tear and sweat to get their way and writing needs all the focus and peace of mind to delve into the characters' emotions to be able to write them correctly.

Take your time but not so much❤️❤️❤️


Sorry for intruding here unnecessarily. Since even my guesses regarding the background history of Arjun's first wife have also matched completely with all 4 of your theories, I just couldn't control myself commenting here. But, our beloved writer mam is a master in giving us heart-attacks frequently, & she'll be going to update after 14 long days. So, I think, except the 4th one, no theories of ours is going to work actually for any of her stories. Even though, this "expect the unexpected" motto of her stories has given me heart-attacks quite a lot of time, I can't help admiring her everytime as a writer for the same. For me, it’s like bearing the sweetest pain of love with smile.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Is the kid actually alive?

If anyone here has watched shutter Island, whatever happens with leos wife and kids.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Awesome..

Shree lagayega Arjun ki wat.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

Is the kid actually alive?

If anyone here has watched shutter Island, whatever happens with leos wife and kids.

there's definitely no shutter island heresmiley36

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: RiyaA123

I couldn't comment before because real life came in between. But anyways....

I have read both updates in a go and the storyline is getting even more interesting.


Lol so Arjun gave himself as a present to an emotional Riya to make her happy again. Sometimes I feel even he doesn't know how whipped he actually is for his lady love. He was always bad at this romantic stuff. I mean he literally realized after almost losing her that he loves her. But meh.... Better late then never


It's actually quite a mystery why he lost both his wife and daughter and I'm also curious if his parents are gonna make an entry or not. Also if Sameer be a part of this. I have some theories too.

One: Roshni was a temperamental abusive partner and since Arjun is famous for losing himself completely after falling in love, I suspect he let it all happen until too late. So in the end he got a divorce and probably lost a custody case.

Two: Roshni was painted in grey character dilemma and you might bring her back for a showdown.

Three: Sameer might never be in this story or worse he'll be why Roshni left or something 😂

Four: You're going to give me another shock and I'll be reeling with the effects till next Wednesday.

....................... .

About the update, I loved how Arjun finally admitted to himself and is finally showing his emotions with right on his wife.

Both chapters were beautiful, not to mention the flashback because I never thought he'd decide to marry her on a whim and she'll go along with the plan in such a formal fashion😂


Oh so he has decided to bring Riya back home and while his team is working day and night he's spending all the time with his wife. Now one should always be scared of a wife's jealousy and a Best friends' wrath.

Shree better give him some SYS of his own for taking Riya like that without even telling them. I mean they were working so hard in hope of meeting her and imagine their surprise on finding her discharged when she should be under strict observation of doctors (Not Arjun). Not that I'm not loving this ❤️


Thank you so much for the PM

Waiting for more

Ps. I see rea life got in the way of Ariya land but that's okay. I understand how sometimes real life sucks especially when it comes to jobs because they love squeezing even the last drop of patience tear and sweat to get their way and writing needs all the focus and peace of mind to delve into the characters' emotions to be able to write them correctly.

Take your time but not so much❤️❤️❤️


I like the theories

bloomie thumbnail
Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by: naaheean


Sorry for intruding here unnecessarily. Since even my guesses regarding the background history of Arjun's first wife have also matched completely with all 4 of your theories, I just couldn't control myself commenting here. But, our beloved writer mam is a master in giving us heart-attacks frequently, & she'll be going to update after 14 long days. So, I think, except the 4th one, no theories of ours is going to work actually for any of her stories. Even though, this "expect the unexpected" motto of her stories has given me heart-attacks quite a lot of time, I can't help admiring her everytime as a writer for the same. For me, it’s like bearing the sweetest pain of love with smile.

mujhe toh aisa lag raha hai jaise 2 hafton se nahi, 2 mahino se update nahi kiya maine

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